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 Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 5:55 pm
Absynthe Angel >.> its real complicated.... haha! So's mine, trust me. The area the main character is in is just barely the beginning (wootness).
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:03 pm
very well...
The story revolves around this main character named Rinn. He is a stupid jewel theif in a small town and he is obsessed with chiclets...His best friend Minx is a mastermind lock picker since he was 4 years old and is also a jewel theif. Together they own the worlds largest pawn shop in Salem, MO. Shortly into the story, they steal a ruby the size of a softball and then some damn evil spirits start ******** with their minds. Rinn slowly starts to go insane and homicidal and Minx dies in a motorcycle accident on his way to the graveyard to visit his dead brother. Later on, Rinn finds a way to activate the ruby in an old tomb and the door leads to another realm. Entering the realm, Rinn realizes he is actually bi and is now in a lost tribe that once lived in his realm. There he meets a 19 year old boy named Xez and they become friends, eventually Xez escalates the relationship to bf... stare the rest is confidential
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:08 pm
Absynthe Angel very well... The story revolves around this main character named Rinn. He is a stupid jewel theif in a small town and he is obsessed with chiclets...His best friend Minx is a mastermind lock picker since he was 4 years old and is also a jewel theif. Together they own the worlds largest pawn shop in Salem, MO. Shortly into the story, they steal a ruby the size of a softball and then some damn evil spirits start ******** with their minds. Rinn slowly starts to go insane and homicidal and Minx dies in a motorcycle accident on his way to the graveyard to visit his dead brother. Later on, Rinn finds a way to activate the ruby in an old tomb and the door leads to another realm. Entering the realm, Rinn realizes he is actually bi and is now in a lost tribe that once lived in his realm. There he meets a 19 year old boy named Xez and they become friends, eventually Xez escalates the relationship to bf... stare the rest is confidential Fun. 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:10 pm
Nanashi Etsuko Absynthe Angel very well... The story revolves around this main character named Rinn. He is a stupid jewel theif in a small town and he is obsessed with chiclets...His best friend Minx is a mastermind lock picker since he was 4 years old and is also a jewel theif. Together they own the worlds largest pawn shop in Salem, MO. Shortly into the story, they steal a ruby the size of a softball and then some damn evil spirits start ******** with their minds. Rinn slowly starts to go insane and homicidal and Minx dies in a motorcycle accident on his way to the graveyard to visit his dead brother. Later on, Rinn finds a way to activate the ruby in an old tomb and the door leads to another realm. Entering the realm, Rinn realizes he is actually bi and is now in a lost tribe that once lived in his realm. There he meets a 19 year old boy named Xez and they become friends, eventually Xez escalates the relationship to bf... stare the rest is confidential Fun. 3nodding like i said, complicated...especially considering the only way for Rinn to get back is an Onyx counterpart to the ruby found somewhere in that realm, which is later destroyed by Xez cause he is a selfish little 19 year old b*****d who wants to keep Rinn there forever...
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:15 pm
Absynthe Angel like i said, complicated...especially considering the only way for Rinn to get back is an Onyx counterpart to the ruby found somewhere in that realm, which is later destroyed by Xez cause he is a selfish little 19 year old b*****d who wants to keep Rinn there forever... Huzzah for drama! My favorite of genres.
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:20 pm
Nanashi Etsuko Absynthe Angel like i said, complicated...especially considering the only way for Rinn to get back is an Onyx counterpart to the ruby found somewhere in that realm, which is later destroyed by Xez cause he is a selfish little 19 year old b*****d who wants to keep Rinn there forever... Huzzah for drama! My favorite of genres. *nod-nod* what better than murder, mystery, fantasy, love, betrayal, then another murder...(i won't say who gets killed)
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:22 pm
Absynthe Angel Nanashi Etsuko Absynthe Angel like i said, complicated...especially considering the only way for Rinn to get back is an Onyx counterpart to the ruby found somewhere in that realm, which is later destroyed by Xez cause he is a selfish little 19 year old b*****d who wants to keep Rinn there forever... Huzzah for drama! My favorite of genres. *nod-nod* what better than murder, mystery, fantasy, love, betrayal, then another murder...(i won't say who gets killed) Making me suffer? gonk Ah well, I guess I'll have to wait and read it. Mine has warfare, kidnapping, religion (that goes against someon else's veiws), and discrimination. Mwuaha.
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:25 pm
Nanashi Etsuko Absynthe Angel Nanashi Etsuko Absynthe Angel like i said, complicated...especially considering the only way for Rinn to get back is an Onyx counterpart to the ruby found somewhere in that realm, which is later destroyed by Xez cause he is a selfish little 19 year old b*****d who wants to keep Rinn there forever... Huzzah for drama! My favorite of genres. *nod-nod* what better than murder, mystery, fantasy, love, betrayal, then another murder...(i won't say who gets killed) Making me suffer? gonk Ah well, I guess I'll have to wait and read it. Mine has warfare, kidnapping, religion (that goes against someon else's veiws), and discrimination. Mwuaha. good combo, i dont like to press to hard into religion in my stories, just a dumbass angel that got kicked out of heaven helping Rinn figure out how and where to activate the ruby...then he disappears too xd
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:28 pm
Absynthe Angel eek good combo, i dont like to press to hard into religion in my stories, just a dumbass angel that got kicked out of heaven helping Rinn figure out how and where to activate the ruby...then he disappears too xd Hee. Well, the dancer girl (who's name, and everyone else's for the matter, I cannot yet think of) if from a very religious, polytheistic religion. The main character has no religion, as she has felt betrayed by it. Clash, boom, burn, bah. Mwuaha.
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:29 pm
Nanashi Etsuko Absynthe Angel eek good combo, i dont like to press to hard into religion in my stories, just a dumbass angel that got kicked out of heaven helping Rinn figure out how and where to activate the ruby...then he disappears too xd Hee. Well, the dancer girl (who's name, and everyone else's for the matter, I cannot yet think of) if from a very religious, polytheistic religion. The main character has no religion, as she has felt betrayed by it. Clash, boom, burn, bah. Mwuaha. then you need to get some names in there gonk that'll be a good story!
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:33 pm
Absynthe Angel Nanashi Etsuko Absynthe Angel eek good combo, i dont like to press to hard into religion in my stories, just a dumbass angel that got kicked out of heaven helping Rinn figure out how and where to activate the ruby...then he disappears too xd Hee. Well, the dancer girl (who's name, and everyone else's for the matter, I cannot yet think of) if from a very religious, polytheistic religion. The main character has no religion, as she has felt betrayed by it. Clash, boom, burn, bah. Mwuaha. then you need to get some names in there gonk that'll be a good story! Heee, thank you. I'll look some up when I get the chance. I'm not sure of what type of name I should use, though. I don't much care for making up my own names, as that seems rather silly. So, if I am to use real names, of what culture should they be of? I'm leaning more toward Arabic names, but I'm not completely sure yet.
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:35 pm
Nanashi Etsuko Absynthe Angel Nanashi Etsuko Absynthe Angel eek good combo, i dont like to press to hard into religion in my stories, just a dumbass angel that got kicked out of heaven helping Rinn figure out how and where to activate the ruby...then he disappears too xd Hee. Well, the dancer girl (who's name, and everyone else's for the matter, I cannot yet think of) if from a very religious, polytheistic religion. The main character has no religion, as she has felt betrayed by it. Clash, boom, burn, bah. Mwuaha. then you need to get some names in there gonk that'll be a good story! Heee, thank you. I'll look some up when I get the chance. I'm not sure of what type of name I should use, though. I don't much care for making up my own names, as that seems rather silly. So, if I am to use real names, of what culture should they be of? I'm leaning more toward Arabic names, but I'm not completely sure yet. why not make it a mix, some english, a few japanese, maybe a few arabic, some french maybe... 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:39 pm
Absynthe Angel why not make it a mix, some english, a few japanese, maybe a few arabic, some french maybe... 3nodding *Thinks of my French name that my French teacher gave me* Chantal. whee Okie dokie. I think I'll surf the net tonight for names. I generally look for the meaning of the name rather than the name itself, it's interesting to see their meanings. 3nodding Thank you.
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:41 pm
Nanashi Etsuko Absynthe Angel why not make it a mix, some english, a few japanese, maybe a few arabic, some french maybe... 3nodding *Thinks of my French name that my French teacher gave me* Chantal. whee Okie dokie. I think I'll surf the net tonight for names. I generally look for the meaning of the name rather than the name itself, it's interesting to see their meanings. 3nodding Thank you. *nod-nod* i make all mine. Rinn, Minx, Absynthe Angel, Xez, Moirik Ceslein, Hitori Daisuke, Nali, and my favorite, Bolivar Gautamei!
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2004 6:44 pm
Absynthe Angel Nanashi Etsuko Absynthe Angel why not make it a mix, some english, a few japanese, maybe a few arabic, some french maybe... 3nodding *Thinks of my French name that my French teacher gave me* Chantal. whee Okie dokie. I think I'll surf the net tonight for names. I generally look for the meaning of the name rather than the name itself, it's interesting to see their meanings. 3nodding Thank you. *nod-nod* i make all mine. Rinn, Minx, Absynthe Angel, Xez, Moirik Ceslein, Hitori Daisuke, Nali, and my favorite, Bolivar Gautamei! Definatly interesting names. I'm going to see if I could pull off my nickname somewhere in the story; Bez. *shrugs* Perhaps.
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