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 Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:09 pm
"Gretchen! Gretchen!" Lyserg cried. A dumb jock in the audience sniggered meanly. ((I've got this thing against jocks. Maybe you can tell? talk2hand ))
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:16 pm
(its ok, they're horrible everywhere lolz)
"that was my lover's voice. where is he? i heard him calling. i am free! no one can stop me. i want to rush and throw my arms about his neck, i want to lie upon his brest! there at the door he called out :Gretchen! in the howling and clatter of hell,the angry jeering of devils, i could tell the sound of that dear, sweet voice."
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:18 pm
"It is I," Lyserg said. He thought that it was a rather understated response to Margaret's speech, but oh well.
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 9:36 am
it's you! o say so once again! it's he,it's he! where are my torments now-the fearful prison and the dreadful chains? it's you! you've come to rescue me,and i am saved! there is the street again where i first saw you, the happy garden where,with martha, i'm awaiting you.."
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 12:06 pm
Lyserg figured that this scene was mostly for Margaret to show her stuff. "Come on! Come on!"
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 4:34 pm
Shizuka just watched shyly from the auditorium door. She wanted to be up there trying out. She wanted to perform too. But she knew very well that drama was no place for a mute. The cold reality she had to face...
"Shizuka-chan, what's up? Why did you stop? We have to get over to study hall before... oh..." Miyako blushed when she saw them on stage. Hot and talented. That passed soon enough, she was too busy dodging her new friends glare to really pay attention to the tryouts.
"Alright, alright. I stopped looking. Let's just get to study hall now."
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 4:37 pm
"Shizuka?" Faust called. He'd caught sight of her. "Hey, there are a lot of roles, and you're very expressive. Helen of Troy doesn't actually have any lines..."
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 4:44 pm
Shizuka's attitude perked up. There could actually be a role for her?! She had a chance even though she couldn't speak?! Helen of Troy was in this play and not just that R rated movie way back a few years ago?! Her eyes, full of curiosity and enthusiasm, fell to Miyako.
"Ooooooohhhhh noooo. I am not trying out. My talent here is zero. But I can watch you." she suggested. Shizuka just shrugged her shoulders and rushed into the auditorium.
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 5:00 pm
"Yes, you're perfect," Faust decided, smiling at her. A blond, dumb-looking cheerleader who had obviously really wanted the part shot Faust a murderous look and stormed out of the room. "Your eyes have the perfect soul for the part," Faust explained.
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 5:03 pm
"But she didn't even try out and..." Shizuka clamped Miyako's mouth shut, not enough to hurt her friend, but enough to get her point across.
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Posted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 8:36 pm
"I think that Shizuka is perfect," Faust said. He didn't say that it was because she couldn't speak. "I put together this arrangement of the play to mix the best aspects of Goethe and Marlowe's plays, actually."
"You put this together?" Lyserg asked incredulously.
"Nein. Marlowe and Goethe did. But I arranged them."
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Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 5:27 am
*netsubo sighed*"so you DID have something to do with this play...but are we done reading yet?"*she was getting too into the part now*
(srry!! i got grounded!! i wont be on as much! T.T and for some reason my e button isnt working that well >.>)
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Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 6:05 am
(( crying Oh, no! Is it Mephistophiles' fault that you're grounded? He's really, really sorry...))
"Yes... that's fine... I want to see you both back for callbacks, all right?" Faust glanced at his watch. "Lunch starts now... so I'll see you kids after school, OK?"
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Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 8:50 am
*netsubo sighed and got off the stage*"well that was fun..."
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Posted: Tue Sep 18, 2007 9:00 am
"Yeah, it was... funny how Faust has practically already given away three parts. Not that I think I'll get cast as Faust... I'd prefer a smaller role. Imagine what it must feel like to choose a kid to play your ancestor."
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