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 Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:08 pm
miroku902 Bone: Its nice to hear your opinion But Il be doing the approving xd Pawn: Yes I am. I'm not taking your job man. Just sayin' so you can decide easier. Either way, that one spartan genjutsu won't really stop people from fighting back as strong as they can in truth.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:09 pm
Hurdy: He is a Mod. This isnt his Job though.
Pawn: Yes, Its very nice to and gives a little scaredom within a battle but one question you cant do this multiply times in a battle or what?
Bone: cool
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:10 pm
well.... if it's yours... are they good... dot dot dot?
Bone: eh? well it might make them fight less as strong?
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:11 pm
miroku902 Hurdy: He is a Mod. This isnt his Job though. Pawn: Yes, Its very nice to and gives a little scaredom within a battle but one question you cant do this multiply times in a battle or what? Bone: cool hmm i hadnt thought of that.... its not a trump card. but its uses a fair amount of chakra. (52 cards to poof outta nowhere it something pretty spectaular haha) so id say it needs a cooldown time of 6 posts before its usable again. so its not a continuous skill, but it can be used several times depending on how long the fight goes. a max of 4 times before the user is at his limit. (genin) 8 time (jounin) 10 times (kage or equal level)
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:12 pm
I agree mostly with bone but some of your Jutsu's need work so If you could work on them a little better and if you could not make em' a little powerful i'd be great.
Bone: Yeah, Thanks I was J/p but I like it when people help. Makes it easier like you said. ^^
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:14 pm
pawntakesknight miroku902 Hurdy: He is a Mod. This isnt his Job though. Pawn: Yes, Its very nice to and gives a little scaredom within a battle but one question you cant do this multiply times in a battle or what? Bone: cool hmm i hadnt thought of that.... its not a trump card. but its uses a fair amount of chakra. (52 cards to poof outta nowhere it something pretty spectaular haha) so id say it needs a cooldown time of 6 posts before its usable again. so its not a continuous skill, but it can be used several times depending on how long the fight goes. a max of 4 times before the user is at his limit. (genin) 8 time (jounin) 10 times (kage or equal level) I like it. I i guess chunnin is 6? lol Bone what do you think?
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:17 pm
miroku902 I agree mostly with bone but some of your Jutsu's need work so If you could work on them a little better and if you could not make em' a little powerful i'd be great. Bone: Yeah, Thanks I was J/p but I like it when people help. Makes it easier like you said. ^^ which ones?
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:18 pm
miroku902 pawntakesknight miroku902 Hurdy: He is a Mod. This isnt his Job though. Pawn: Yes, Its very nice to and gives a little scaredom within a battle but one question you cant do this multiply times in a battle or what? Bone: cool hmm i hadnt thought of that.... its not a trump card. but its uses a fair amount of chakra. (52 cards to poof outta nowhere it something pretty spectaular haha) so id say it needs a cooldown time of 6 posts before its usable again. so its not a continuous skill, but it can be used several times depending on how long the fight goes. a max of 4 times before the user is at his limit. (genin) 8 time (jounin) 10 times (kage or equal level) I like it. I i guess chunnin is 6? lol Bone what do you think? Interesting to say between the least and most. lol. Anyways, I'm not sure what to say. It can either mess the opponent once, or screw the user over... Your decision Yari Bikou. lol
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:25 pm
Hm. Okay Il leave it to drago ^-^.
Hurdy : All eek
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:30 pm
* = My comments/edits if you do not approve, give more specific details than all of them...
Armor of sparta- In a puff of smoke, the greatest armor in all of sparta is worn by Hurdy, it has incredible defense, yet extremely light wieght
* I see no problem with this...
Hell's soldiers- When the opponent looks into Hurdy's eye, they will be caught in a genjutsu, they will see The great spartan warriors cut down hundreds of enemies even though they are mortally wounded, which will give the opponent extreme fear of Hurdy and all spartans
* this is a relativly weak genjutsu, all it gives is fear, no impobilization or anything.
Death's call- When Hurdy yells his triumphant war call, an extremely fast burst of chakara infused wind will shoot out to the opponent.
* like a blast of air, people have that all the time
Fearless Warrior- The spartans are raised to fear nothing and embrace death, this lesson had given Hurdy the protection from all but a few Genjutsu. (Uchia and very strong made ups, also the hundini clan, the ones with the real genjutsu)
*This is pretty good, since You can normally dispel weak genjutsu with the realise any ways.
Cape of sparta- The spartans wear red cape into battle, and when Hurdy focuses his chakara to it, it folds to make wings so that Hurdy can fly in battle.
*wow flying, that is hard to edit
Arrows of sparta- Hurdy's hand glows red and fires off a barage of 30 arrows at his opponent.
*just like the kunai shadow clone but smaller, and arrows. Don't see a problem
Decendant of Hercules- It is known that spartans are said to be decendants of Hercules himself, in this fact, Hurdy gains a very temparary time period once a battle, where he has the strength of a god.
* This I can understand, so I will edit it to 1 post? is that better?
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:33 pm
Darkness Falls-This jutsu allows the user to cover an area from his point and on to be all Darkness even though their can be light it isnt seen much but you can guide you way threw.
(( Like Hidden Mist ))
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 7:00 pm
so, miroku, can you be more specific?
I gave examples under the jutsu, tell me what must be changed.
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XXX-[C]hidori[K]night-XXX
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 9:08 pm
Power From hell
The user places his hand upon the ground and fire from hell shoots up 10 times aiming at the opponent, the fire that shoots up is 10 feet by 10 feet.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:07 pm
pawntakesknight my made up technique: Joker's Wild- Element: none Type: Ninjutsu- Hand to Hand Description: The user runs through a series of hand signs and transforms into 52 face down cards on the floor. The user is hidden among the cards. Oppenent MUST roll a 10 sided die on their next post. Even numbers mean the oppnent picked up the right card, revealing the user and canceling the attack, and leaving the user open for 1 attack. odd numbers mean the opponent picked the wrong card and the user appears, and the opponent is struck with a smoke bomb. leaving them open for 1 attack. (or two for flinching haha) I wanted a ninjutsu with a complete chance and make the battle a little more fun and a little luck orriented. (If approved, this will be my new made up jutsu.) *CleareD* also cleared And Miroku's Post above
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 6:30 am
noir_kama All the World is a Stage- A unique ninjutsu that turns the whole surrounding area into a huge stage complete with a small audience and musicians off to the side. Once activated this technique quadruples the size of all present puppets including the enemies if they have any. The new stage setting is at the control of the user, buried within the stage are many traps and other things associated with the stage. From falling sandbags, to heavy velvet curtains, to trap doors, to pulley systems for flying; almost everything a true artist needs can be found on this landscape if they know where to look. The stage is for some unknown reason fire-proof. can I get this approved? ninja
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