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 Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:22 pm
"um..sure...what page and line?"*she asked, flipping through her script*
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:26 pm
"Try page 407, 'Dungeon.' You read the part of Margaret, and Lyserg can read Faust, and, um...Ren? Ren can read Mephistophiles."
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:28 pm
*she laughed. ren as mephisto*"ok..i'll start.."(*sigh* i dont have that page...i have 305 pages before it ends, but i think i know what ur talking about.does it start with faust saying a long-forgotten sense of horror makes me tremble?)
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:32 pm
"Interesting translation... but, yes, something like that..."
Lyserg read, "A long unwonted shudder grips,
Mankind's entire grief grips me.
She's here, behind this wall that drips,
And all her crime was a fond fantasy.
You hesitate to go in?
You dread to see her again?
On! Your wavering waves on death's decree."
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:35 pm
(ok, urs is different from mine, but it still means the same, so i'll type what i have and i appologize what these say...heh)
*she reads*"it was mother, the whore! who put me to death,and father, poor knave! the one who did eat me. the bones that remained, little sister then laid in a cool,quiet place;i'm changed into a little bird and fly away to the forest!"
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:37 pm
The corner's of Lyserg's mouth turned downwards slightly. He cleared his throat and read on:
"She does not dream how her lover at the door
Hears the clanking chains and the rustling straw."
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:40 pm
"o woe! they've come! death is so bitter!"*she read on*
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:41 pm
"Still! Still! I come to set you free!" said Lyserg.
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:49 pm
"if you are human, pity me in my distress!"
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:50 pm
"You'll awaken the guards. Speak quietly." said Lyserg, starting to get into the script.
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:57 pm
*netsubo was already lost in character*"headsman,who's given you the right to treat me thus? it's only midnight and you've come to take me. is not tomorrow morning soon enough? im still so young, so young,and yet i am to die already! i once was pretty,that was my undoing. i had a lover, now he's far away,they've torn my bridal wreath, its flowers all lie scattered. do not take hold of me so brutally! spare me! what harm have i done you dont let me plead in vain, you know i've never seen you in my life!"
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 8:58 pm
"After such grief, can I live any more?" Lyserg asked, his eyes earnest.
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:04 pm
(um, do i really have to type it all? sweatdrop lolz...srry..attention span is going bye bye along with my thinking power)
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:05 pm
((lol, it's OK!))
"One loving you lies at your feet
To end your bondage. Listen, sweet!"
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Posted: Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:08 pm
(srry!!! lolz)
"o let us kneel and ask the saints to aid us! look, beneth these stones, under this sill,hellfire is seething. in terrible ander hear Satan himself raising an uproar!"
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