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 Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 11:18 am
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 11:29 am
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 11:51 am
 I don't really have much to critisize about your avatar. I can compliment it though!
=]
The color combination is done quite well, very evenly distributed throughout the whole avatar. Normally those items don't go very well together unless you can match the whole avatar up, but you have managed to do that as I can see.
Overall, 7.5/10
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 11:57 am
thanks very much ^^ i'm never ususally this colourful xD mind if I come back with another I'd like your opinion on?
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 12:16 pm
Nope, I do not mind at all. That is what I have this thread for!
Lol
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 12:25 pm
ok, so, there's my current one... and this:  it's not a dream avi, but one I had recently that people seemed to like. The Long Drag would be in my hand, though...TekTek doesn't do that, unfortunately D: please and thank you <3
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 12:39 pm
Alright, well for this one, I would get rid of the Demonic Halo.
I love putting the halo with my horns as well, but when I do, they are usually the shorter ones, but for this avi, the short horns wouldn't look as good, therefore, maybe loose the halo...you could use it as a tail instead if you want to keep it on your avatar.
Next, I would say find a different accessory for the neck. The amulet has a touch of green in it, and even though it is small, it's still green, which doesn't go with the outfit at all. Try something black instead....maybe the Nitemare Collar? I am not positive how that would look though, so search for something that you would like.
I see that there is a little brown under the Pimpin` hat...must be the pilot goggles/hat. I really wouldn't really consider putting brown in the avatar, but since the vest it a dark red/crimson color, it"s not much of a problem and doesn't mess the avatar up in any way~
Aside from that, it looks pretty good.
Overall, 6/10
Now for your current avatar.
Again, not much to say. I believe you have a Dark Star on your avatar's head....was wondering for a while what that was, and it's ok....but it could do without.
In my opinion, I don't like it when horns touch halo, but like I said before, tha avatar wouldn't look right if the horns were shorter.
Overall, 6.8/10
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 12:42 pm
oooooh, you really go into detail xD i like that 3nodding
thanks very much =D
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 5:14 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 5:14 pm
Rate mine?
I'm not really done mine quite yet, though. I still have a bunch of stuff to buy. D;
You can be as blunt as you like; I know it's not the greatest. :3
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 5:17 pm
@ Aris`
To start off, your color coordination it pretty off. The hearts in the back don't match with anything because the shades are pink. I see a tad of pink from the slits in the pants, and the fringes on the dress are also hinted with pink, but those don't stand out, so the shades look quite random. The were tail and feet aren’t necessary...they look strange with the other items.
You have some white here and there, with the hat, dress, and musical note...but they aren’t items that should be used on the same avatar.
The wings are out of place...it's the only blue you see and distracts. As for the chain, since it is in the tail form, I wonder why you have two tails on your avatar?...unless you want it to look like something else instead.
I personally am not a person to mix pants, especially biker pants, with a tutu, but that's just my taste.
As for the slit of brown on the hat...I really can't tell what that is....is it the arrow head thing? Either way, there shouldn't be any brown, to clashy.
The Pandy Pack is also an unnecessary item; the black just stands out too much.
Ovarall, 2.6/10
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 5:18 pm
Sure thing. I'm not in a rush.
cool
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 9:44 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2007 10:50 pm
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 1:53 pm
@ Greta Von Gash
Ok, well I will start out by saying that your colors are matched pretty well...but I have a few questions about the goggles hanging around your avatar's neck. What are they there for? They don't really match anything.
Also, I can't really see what, but the white thing behind your Coco, it's too random.
I see there is some brown on the upper part of your avatar. A tattoo? It's out of place. If it is a tattoo, I suggest replacing it with a black or red one instead.
The bead bracelets, they are too bright of a red color and don't match the red already on your avatar. It would be nicer if they were darker, but alas, Gaia has no such item, at least, not to my knowledge.
I like the Demonic Anklets, but having one up top and also one on bottom makes it look repetitive. I would just go with one or the other.
Lastly, just in my opinion, I think her skin tone is a bit too pale. It distorts the whole avatar. Maybe a shade or two darker, but not too dark.
Overall, 4.4/10
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