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 Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 3:02 pm
(Cain's Ship)
Feeling like a complete fool to be manipulated so easily, Barak silently seated himself behind the two Jedi and watched Mon Calamari drift away. Carefully selecting his words in his head as he always did, he took a few long moments to answer the older Jedi's question.
"I don't want power... not in the self-righteous sense..." He chewed his bottom lip as images he had long banished from his mind arose, causing his throat to tighten. Swallowing hard, he fought to keep from choking and spoke again. "I just want to be able to prevent... what happened to me... from happening to anyone else..."
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Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 3:26 pm
(Yavin, Rath's Ship)
As the ship descended the beauty and Forests of Yavin became visible, rich detail of different color greens and browns cascaded against one another, landing on the designated pad, Rath motioned for Arden to follow. "Yes, Arden the force is what you feel. It is essentially part of you in a sense." Rath spoke entering a large temple built of stone, the temple looked ancient, as moss and other plant life grew upon it, attempting to swallow the foriegn mass and disguise it as it's own. Reaching a corridor, two beautiful ladies approached Rath and Arden.One much younger than the other approached first. "Oh Rath? Didnt expect you here so soon! This must be Arden, it's a pleasure to meet you! I am Page, and this is my master Grace." Page ended, while Grace gave a bow to both, entering the conversation with a warm smile and a serious tone. "Mustafar awaits for our meeting, you two are the first to arrive." Grace ended noticing Rath's concerned look, . "Did Arcadius...?" Rath asked knowing the answer. "No contact from him yet, he spoke to me while on your ship, he said to commence the meeting without him." Grace spoke apologetic, sadness welled in her, sharing the same feelings of confusion and loss without Arcadius. Turning the four walked to a large entrance, inside sat a holoprojector with rings of stone carved from the temple to act as seats, sitting down Rath turned to Arden. "Mind sitting next to me?" Rath asked softly wishing the company of someone other than Grace or Page, as the other two sat opposite of Rath.
(I am posting reposnses to all of you. This is the end of the chapter so please do not respond the chapter results will be posted early tonight or early tommorow morning and the rp will recommence then. Thanks everyone for participating!)
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 9:06 am
(Kales Ship, Yavin)
Slowly descending through Yavins atmosphere,Kaleejected himself from the pilot seat, allowing the ship to land on predetermined destination programs. Beads of sweat ran down Kale's forehead with anticipation, his desire to know if Des was alright blocked out all thought, his hands began to tremble, looking down Kale frowned. Looking over to see if Keto had seen...
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 10:17 am
(Kale's Ship)
Keto didn't see. He was busy watching the landscape growing as they descneded, "Amazing..." he muttered to himself, looking back at his master, "it's a beautiful planet..."
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 3:49 pm
(Yavin, Outside Kale's Ship)
After the ship had landed, both Kale and Keto exited, the pilot immeaditly shot straight up to the atmosphere after seeing the two exit. Moving toward the large stone entrance Kale turned to Keto. "We are entering a meeting hall, all present are the only ones that remain, we are talking with the Dark Jedi and the Sith as well, ne mindful of what you say and only speak if spooken to." Kale spoke very serious, attempting to make Keto full aware of the situation that is unfolding. Ending with a pat on the shoulder and a wave Kale and Keto both entered the Meeting hall, where the others awaited for Cain and Seth. Postioning themselves next to Rath and Arden Kale and Rath introduce one anothers apprentices.
(Yavin, Cain's Ship)
Descending through the dense atmosphere, the atmosphere inside the ship was identical to that of outside emotionally, mixed feelings of confusion, fear, and happiness stirred through Cain. "Will this be my chance to sieze the Jedi Order and finally lead the great army?" A question that had been brooding in his mind since the news. Snapped back to reality, the ship lurched and shook touching the ground. "All Clear, Master!" Seth proclaimed exiting from the pilot seat and initiating the bay door to open. After exiting the ship Seth ordered two droids to clean the outside hull, aparently some brush and trees had stained the surface, a annoyance Seth did not like. Entering the meeting hall the three sat down next to Grace and Page.
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 4:09 pm
Both the Jedi and Dark Jedi, though several thousand miles away. Sat awaiting the meeting that til this time had not occured in over a millenia. Both sides plaqued by wonder and fear of the times to come, some felt a dark shadow fall over them and wash away any happiness that remained. Others relished in it, utilizing the fear for power and began to plot thier own paths of dominance. Awaiting thier council in which the sides would decide what actions must be taken, Five beings begin to plan out the destruction of all Force users, initiating a Propechy that will inevitably destroy the entire galaxy. (Sorry it took so long guys, 3 more people to critique! The 4th chapter, I will begin to critique more stricter as by then you guys should get the hang of it, Sorry if you guys are bored once past chapter 3 things will pick up i promise, I have to lay down the groundwork first!) Chapter Summary Gene Spectros... Posts=3pts! Yet again perfect! Best Rper this chapter, well done! RP=3pts! Indepth and deep, Character's well built with persistance. Battle=3pts! Battle droids were affected by Force Push! No other battles commenced. Force Learn=1pt! Understood Lesson of Force Push! Perfect score!!= Congratulations You have advanced to Padawan Level 5! You have unlocked, Force Throw and Force Flash! You Have Unlocked Force Fear! Arden Gylcrow... Posts=3pts! Great posts! Well thought out, and length is perfect! RP=3pts! Highly indepth history, Creating relationship with Rath, good job! Battle=3pts! (Automatic Default due to storyline, No battles in this Chapter) Force Learn= Learned of basics of Force! Perfect Score!!= Congratulations!! You advance to Padawan Level 5! You have unlocked, Force Throw and Force Light! You Have unlocked Force Persuasion! Ryu Kaseki...Posts=3pts! Nice posts! Make sure you post Destination in posts a couple did not have them. RP=3pts! Great detail in the thinking and explanation of character Battle=3pts! (Automatic Default due to storyline, No battles in this Chapter) Force Learn= Accepted Training Congratulations! Perfect Score!!= Congratulations!! You advance to Padawan Level 3! You have unlocked, Force Whisper and Force Push You Have unlocked Force Slow! Barak Wudorin...Posts=3pts! Followed all rules, length excellent, literacty also excellent. RP=3pts! Character well built, Very Detailed, Very well adapted to story! Battle=3pts! (Automatic Default due to storyline, No battles in this Chapter) Force Learn=1pt! Accepted apprenticeship! Perfect score!!= Congratulations You have advanced to Padawan Level 3! You have unlocked, Force Whisper and Force Push! You Have Unlocked Force See! Keto Eros...Posts=3pts! Followed Rules, Attempt to make posts a bit longer, add some detail in enviroment and what your character is thinking or doing. RP=3pts! Very interactive, pays attention to current situation! Battle=3pts! (Automatic Default due to storyline, No battles in this Chapter) Force Learn= Accepted Training Congratulations! Perfect Score!!= Congratulations!! You advance to Padawan Level 3! You have unlocked, Force Whisper and Force Push You Have unlocked Force See!
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 7:27 pm
(Yavin, Meeting Hall)
Keto nervously shuffled his robes, pulling them closer to him, "Such times as these are dangerous. The Force has already made up its mind on who will survive, it is simply our hope that we are the survivors. fifty fifty isn't exactly fair, but it's not unfair either..." Keto wasn't talking loud enough for anyone to hear him but Kale, but Keto wasn't directing what he was saying at any one person, he was just talking. As he spoke, he imagined a better time. a time when you can go out and fly to any planet, do anything, meet anybody. The is what Keto wanted. He sought freedom of a degree that no person could give. He wanted peace.
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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 1:31 pm
((Sorry third chapter intro is taking so long, I expected more PC's playing by now, its thrown a kink in the story, i sould have three more participants up and ready tommorow, if not ill just edit the story a bit and start without them. Thanks again! Armageddon.))
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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 2:21 pm
(Mustafar, Heading to Center Hall)
Ryu noticed that Gene was sort of ignoring him, this didn't really bother really all too much, but he thought to himself still walking behind Malice and his Master Feare...While walking closely behind sort of falling behind abit lost in thoughts that randomely popped into Ryu's head one by one
*Hmmm I wonder...Why am i suffering from these dreams i keep having...It always seems to be the same sort of dreams too....Hurt...pain....anger...Revenge...What do they all mean? If i had only had a clue to what they mean, maybe i'd have a better understanding of why i keep having them....But...Why?....Why!?*
Ryu kept asking himself the same qeustions in his head trying to see if there was anything, anything at all that could be noticeable or out of place in certain areas where Ryu would find them...but nothing came to Ryu's mind when he was going through them and trying to pick at every piece of sentence he asked himself
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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 3:14 pm
Armageddon ((Sorry third chapter intro is taking so long, I expected more PC's playing by now, its thrown a kink in the story, i sould have three more participants up and ready tommorow, if not ill just edit the story a bit and start without them. Thanks again! Armageddon.)) ((no prob! 3nodding ))
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Posted: Wed Apr 18, 2007 6:20 pm
Marguerite Blakeney Armageddon ((Sorry third chapter intro is taking so long, I expected more PC's playing by now, its thrown a kink in the story, i sould have three more participants up and ready tommorow, if not ill just edit the story a bit and start without them. Thanks again! Armageddon.)) ((no prob! 3nodding )) ((Well Hurry it up! *sarcasm* but really...just kidding...or am I? but no, really...))
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 3:50 pm
The projectors hummed to life. Thier eradescent light blue glow, tinted the atmosphere before it. The faces staring into the hologram were portrayed to the others. The first meeting of the Force users in over a millenia, was about to begin. Across the galaxy, Arcadius's whereabouts were unknown, the Jedi anxiously waited for his arrival while thier enemies prayed for his demise. The only sure thing, was the growing wave of fear that shrouded the galaxy in shadows of uncertainity and despair.
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 5:43 pm
((halleluia!!! we have progress! you were killing me there, armageddon! sweatdrop ))
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 8:59 am
Authors Note: This will be the first of many 'all-play' sequences, everyone can hear everyone else, (Unless whispered, in which they would see you doing it..) therefore, the destination rule is not used in this chapter (unless specified) Instead the person talking must put thier name in Parenthsis. prior to posting. (Instead of destination, your rp name) Also descriptions of the enviroment and your surroundings, are also pointless to post. (Jedi are in a stone, dense, cold chamber. Dark jedi are in a durasteel room, cold, with recycled air thats stale) No need to build on that anymore than neccessary. Instead i want descriptive posts of your charcaters feelings, and what they are doing. (fiddling hands, looking around, shuffling feet, those things.) Thanks Armageddon.
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 10:07 am
((Uh..arm...you thanked yourself...))
((We all know I was kidding))
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