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Gaia Name:VashChibi-Chan
Character Name:Cin Drallig
Gender:Male
Age:22
Race:Human
Character Description:white grayish hair robe blue and grey a blue sash average build somewhat muscular 5'9 average height scar above left eye

Home Planet: Aldderan
Starting Planet: Corscant
Relations:Mother and father raised him on Aldderan a very diplomatic planet his father a high ranking diplomat his mother selling different clothes they made so came from a very respectable family Cin met a jedi named Mace Windu became the best of friends at Mace Windu talked to Cin about The Force and became very interested then Mace began to train him a quick learner he eventually went with Mace to corscant to begin traning to become a jedi his father was not pleased with his choice but his mother encouraged him in his decision so Cin went with Mace to Corscant the Capital of The Republic! Which soon became a powerful Jedi and is currently trying to become a member of the Jedi Council
Alignment:Rebelion
Occupation:Jedi
Skills:Saber skills, Piloting, Marksmith skills just incase

Weapons: Purple light saber given to him by his master,a blaster for backup
Ship: Republic Cruiser
Personal Belongings: Family pictures some child hood belongings his very first light saber used during his training to become a jedi

Roleplay Sample: In his early days Cin was a person who would always find trouble somehow Mace would ask him this Mace: Cin how do you get into all this trouble you see to be very good at finding it Cin: I don't know I guess it seems to find me.....

and the Cin wakes up daydreaming about his child hood looking out the window of Courscant looking at the many buildings and speeders and small cruisers wizz by there comes a knock at the door

*knock knock knock* Mace: Its me iam with Master Yoda can i come in? Cin: Yes do come in! what an unexpected surprise what brings you and Master Yoda here Mace: Well he is here let him tell you himself! Cin:Ok will do! Cin: Master Yoda its great to see you what brings you to my home? Yoda:Why thank you Cin it is good to see you Mace Windu has been telling me your becoming a very wise and noble young jedi yes mmm! Cin:Thank you Master Yoda it is an honor to be told that by you Master Yoda! Yoda:GOOD GOOD since you are so eager to know why iam here i will tell you i have a mission for you Cin and its going to take both you and Master Windu to complete it. Yoda:It seems that our spies have found out there is a underground faction of rogue jedi's i want you and Master Windu to investigate Yoda:I have a feeling a powerful sith is behind this! Cin: Really i thought they died out! Yoda:It apperas they have been in hiding *motions to Mace* Yoda: Master Windu! Mace: Yes Yoda? Yoda: I want you and Cin to go to the the Naboo system somewhere in the outer moons is where are spies picked up areas underground where they are located. Yoda: And Master Windu be careful i sense a powerful sith behind this Mace: Yes i will Master Yoda and i will take care of the situation! Yoda: Good i know that you and Cin will handle things. Yoda: Then the both of you must be off and May the force be with you! Both: Thank you Mater Yoda May the force be with you also!

iam new at this so i gave it my best!

This application is unacceptable for many reasons. it's been YEARS AND YEARS since the days of Luke Skywalker. Therefore you cannot possibly have been trained by Mace Windu. Nor could you have lived on alderaan. considering it was BLOWN UP.

In your roleplay you should try hitting the "enter button" butween lines of of dialog that way they stand out a bit better and aren't jumbled togethor.

You need to completely redo this application. It doesn't work.~~~Merissa

Gaia Name: Avitus
Character Name: Lord Eesric
Gender: Male
Age: 30
Race: Mandalorian
Character Description: He sometimes has been seen wearing the helmet of a Mandalorian warrior, when he is not wearing it you can see the cybernetic red eye that sits in his left socket. For the most part he wears the dark robes of a Sith and keeps his head under the hood, though the gleaming glow of the red cyborg eye is always seen unless under a helmet or concealled. On his wrist he wears Mandalorin gautlets... (the description sucks I know).

Home Planet: Mandalore
Starting Planet: Mandalore (if possible)
Relations: None
Character History Lord Eeseric was born Dack Zajic on the planet Mandalore and as the traditions of his people command was thought the ways of war, weapons, tactics, and fighting by his father. He excelled in these arts and was one of the more notable amoung the younglings of Mandalore. His father Jav Zajic was the leader of a very successful mercenary group who were often hired by both the republic and the imperials in the several crisis that have taken place throughout his childhood. Though those were the parties that purchased there services the most other parties also used the Manalorians Mercs to tip the scales in there favor in little less known goverment disputes. It was on these many missions that Dack refined his skills as a Mandalorian, it was also on these missions he would learn the truth of what the galaxy thought of his people.

At the age of 6 Dack, his father and the mercs made joined an Imperial batallion who were at the time trying to crush the rebelion against the intergalatic republic on the planet of Fangel, and though the matter was a small one the rebels who fought on Fangel fougth with a power unseen by anyone since the great Galatic Civil War. The expendable Mandalorians troops were sent in first and though they thrive for battle, this battle would not be theres and they died brutally. All but Dack were killed in glorious battle. Though the rebels sustained great loses of there own the Imperials decided it best to hammer the planet with Tie Bombers before sending in more troops. The Manadalorian losses though important for the victory in the end prooved to be over looked by all, and the glory and honor of battle was given to the Intergalatic Republic.

His young mind saw on that day what the people of the galaxy thought of Mandalore. They were just a people who could be bought, pushed around, controlled, and killed with out a second thought. They were cannon fodder, nothing important surly not for any power like the empire or the rebels. Dack hatred for all the galaxy grew in his heart that day, for what they did to his people and how they were treated. He promised to find away to avenge his people and to make Mandalore truly the power it needed to be once more.

For months Dack wandered the galaxy in his fathers modified Supa Fighter hoping the solution would be on the next world he traveled too. And with the guidance of the force or what he says was the forces guidance he found himself drifting within the Great Dust Clouds of the Galaxy. There his life finally took meaning as he found the secret star base of a long forgotten Sith Lord, Darth Samara. Senseing the potential and the anger he had inside of him she took him in as her apprentice, giving him the name Darth Esseric.

For several years he was thought how to harness his anger, how to use the dark side of the force and how to destroy his enemies. She sent him on many missions to test his skills in battle, many missions he cared not to do but did because he knew it would only make him a better Sith. Reaching the highest rank he could reach with Samara alive he took her life in an epic battle in which he lost his eye, but an eye was a small price to pay for Samara paid the price of her life for under estimating her pupil and thus the pupil became the master and dubbed himself Lord Eeseric.

Lord Eeseric returned to Mandalore and took control of the planet in the ritual way by challengeing the current ruler. Using his skills in both the dark side and combat he easily bested the ruler and took his spot. He then promised to all Mandalorians that he would etch out a new Mandalorian Empire for them, in the blood of those who stood in there way.

With limited options avaliable to them Lord Esseric led the Mandalorians into space, but not for combat for salvage. The Mandalorians traveled from galatic jump heap, to galatic junk heap salavageing old broken Imperial Ships from the junk piles and refitting them with more modern technology and creating a powerful fleet as they went. The crown jewel of this fleet was the Super Star Destroyer the fleet came across by accident in the deep uncharted regions of the outer rim, the Super Star Destroyer had been drifting in the cold dead silence of space for uncountable years. The fleet pain stakingly hauled the ship back to Mandalore on his order. There it was repaired, reoutfited, and revamped. The ship was named Alpha 02, after the designation for Mandalore The Resurrector.

The ship had many feats but the most amazing thing was that computer core was surprisingly intact so they decided to keep the ships files but to go through them and delete what was not needed for there cause. It was during this systematic purge that Lord Eeseric came across the technical read outs, and other data on a long lost weapon as old as the ship itself. The weapon was a world killer one of the many that the last great emporer of the Empire, Emporer Palpatine commisoned. It was called the Galaxy Gun and could utterly destroy worlds across the galaxy. This was what Lord Esseric needed to carve a new Mandalorian Empire.

Since that time Lord Eeseric and his fleet of Mandalorians have searched the galaxy, destroying all who stand there way. Searching for a weapon they know can cause the galaxy to tremble in there might.

Alignment: Mandalorians.
Occupation War Lord/Sith Lord
Skills: Repair, Fighting, Tactics.

Weapons: Manadlorian Gautlents. Red Light Saber.
Ship While the Super Star Destroy Alpha 02, is his home base. He often breaks away from the fleet and searches the galaxy in a much smaller ship he calls the "Sparrow" . This is the ship i'll be usin in the rp.
Personal Belongings: His Ship the Sparrow, Mandalorian armor and weapons, light saber.

Roleplay Sample"Surprised to see me? Long time no see eh?"he said with a grin

Checking his watch he smiled as he turned his attention slightly to the ball in time square it was getting ready to drop and the new year was about to begin. He took a deep breath and as the cool air filled his lungs the excitement crept into his voice.

"See unharmed, not one single hair, in fact Rayne and I have had a lot of fun we have haven't we Rayne darling?" He said now to the little girl.

"Uh huh."She said as she held onto Roxy's hand who still wasn�t saying anything.

" A lost for words huh" He grabbed onto the girls other hand and felt Roxy tug a bit at Rayne this only caused him to smile more, a terrible twisted grin as he looked out onto the people below the streets and slowly walked to the ledge of the building.

"Rayne stay here hun me and mother must have a talk" He walked slowly to the ledge leaving Rayne behind at the lawn chairs and stood at the edge. He looked to his side and Roxy was no where near. She wanted to grab Rayne and run he could tell but he also knew she was much smarter to try that, not with him anyways. She was saying something to Rayne when he spoke up.

"Rox, hun, darling, sweet heart. Come here, come stand by me, close to the ledge. No need to fear really, I'm not the one here who tosses people off of roofs" She stood straight up and stared at him he knew he had hit home now.

"Though you know what they say don't you?"
"What do they say?" she said softly curious about what he had to say what he knew, and how much of it he knew.

"It wasn't the fall that nearly killed Burnout, it was the impact."He grinned as he looked into her eyes he could see the confusion in them she was trying to relive the attack in her mind, trying to see how he knew. Then it washed away and she was in control of herself again, something he found very curious.

((I Know we aren't supposed to put our rank, and that you decide it so with that in mind dont think of my rank as what it is but merely a suggested one thanks.))


I modified this on page 3 where I posted it originally but it has been forgotten, so I reposted it here. I hope it will be approved now. Also the little ?� symbols were a side effect of the way I copied the rp sample sorry.

Sorry i don't think I had Modly powers on page 3 I didn't notice it. My fault. Your history was exceptionally written. Your roleplay sample was good too. Though I would tell you that you might want to highlight the dialog your character uses in another color, to make it stand out more. Just a suggestion. Take it as you will.

However there are some things that I can't allow. You won't be allowed to be a sith lord. So that will have to be changed. Though your character has some interesting story ideas. I will ask that you PM me so that we can discuss and we can see how we can work this so that your character can be as close to this as possibe and still fit in the roleplay. I will assign you a rank after we talk. So AFTER we talk, consider yourself Accepted!~~~~ Merissa

Gaia Name:Uggae
Character Name:Darth Frigus
Gender:male
Age:35
Race:human 30%, cyborg70%
Character Description: at a quick glance he appears to be wearing battle armor but a closer look will reveal that his arms split in half like grievous' and his lega are also modeled after grievous' legs with aposable claws also he wears a helmit much like boba fett's his chass and helmit are all white with blue trim and he can not survive out side of the armor for very long unlessits in a bacta tank.

Home Planet:hoth
Starting Planet:courscant
Relations:none
Character HistoryDarth Frigguss was born and rased on Hoth by his family of ice miners untill he was discovered by his sith master Darth Infernus. Darth Friggus was then traned in the dark side which he embraced whole heartedly he even went so far as to kill his family at his masters bidding, and he went a step farther slaughetering everyone in the settlement. Then when he was traveling back to his master's ship he ran into 4 jedi knights and even though he was an accomplished duleist he was no mach for the combined might of the jedis and soon feel arm less and leggless in the snow to there attacks. The jedi had left him for dead, but then his master recovered him and handed him over to a 'doctor' who placed him in his current body which has all the capibilitys of grievous and then some. After he recovered form the processes he discovered his master had been slayn in combat but had left Darth Friggus with the plans of a device called the force capasator, a device capible of gathering midi-clorins and infusing them into the body of the person it is attached to effectacly making a being of near infinate power. Unforutanatly the divice requires a large number of rare Kyber crystals and as such is almost unbuildible.

Alignment:the dark side
OccupationSith/ adventurer/ jedi hunter
Skills:force sentive, light saber weilder, mechanic, navigator, and pilot

Weapons: a collection of light sabers some built by him but most ganed from jedi hes slayn and force powers though he cant use lightning hes traned him self to stop the move ment of midi-clorinsand /or get the midi clorians to remove all moving matter in an area and effectively freze what ever its there
Shipa light fighter of his own design built by combining the best abilitys of the proto tie fighter and x-wing. it is a bout half the lingth of an x-wing with the x wing ability too open its wings it has a cocpit much like a tie fighter and the tips of the wings fold out verticaly like the proto tie fighter. It has eight guns, 4 on the tips of the wings and 4 around the cocpit these four have the ablity to unite and fire a single beam(kinda like the guns onm the clone drop ship only bigger) but when fired like this they need time to cool down. there are also to torpedo luanchers located on the underside of the ship. The ship has hyper drive capibilitys and a small cargo hold behind the cocpit
Personal Belongings: a portable holo projector/recoder built in to arm, light sabers, his ship, a fur lined cloak, a bacta tank in his ships cargo hold, and a medical/repar droid

Roleplay Sample

Darth friggus awoke in a bacta tank he couldn't feel his arms or legs his flesh felt as if it was on fire. He looked through tthe dingy glass of the leaky tank he was in and saw a dank and ill lit medical labrotary. He could barely make out a few forms which when he focused on them he reliesed that they were eather droid parts or body parts they were every where, on tables, swinging from hooks. It was quite a ghastly sceen indeed for which ever surfaceses werent covered in blood or rust had beakers and ill cared for medical tools piled on them a swell as these grizly remains.

Frigggus recalled the last thing he could remember. He was on hoth fighting those damed jedi barley maniging to keep pace with there attacks he remembered taking one of there arms from the shoulder, but after that it was a blurr then he remembered falling to the cold snow his arms and legs about him he must have passed out after that. Just then a large beast entered the room it approached the tank he was in. It leaned in close reveling that it was once most likely human or some other common race that had been modifyed by a mix of droid parts and the parts of other raceses it had no less than eight arms some droid some organic and its body was tall and lean though hunched and covered with a verity of skin grafts. Its face had a rebreather attached where the mouth should be and a toothy maw had been grafted on to its neck then it spoke.

beast:"Well well i see your awake you have nothing to fear for your master payed me quite handsomley to make shure you survived i am Doctor Man'geel and i will have you fixed in no time." a grin came over doctoe Man'geel's neck mouth and his fingers twiched in anticipation one of his arms reched over Friggus' head out of his view and opperated some unseen key pad Friggus then blacked out.

When darth friggus awoke he saw the world through new eyes he was in a helmit that much he could tell the helmit had a heads up display built in which quntified everything and identifyed obcects that could be used advantageously , the hud numerous other things too. he moved his new arms and legs and flet his new body he then rose to see doctor man'geel standing there holding a holochron

doctor:"this is for you im sorry to say but during the time it took me to re build you much has happened and your master has died leving you to foot the remander of the bill "the doctor tossed the holocron to Friggus and then Friggus spoke with a voice that seemed colder than th egrave and more terrible than an ice storm.

"this is bad news any way you look at it for you see i have no way to pay you but scince youve restored me your death will be quick "

Darth friggus rased his hand and force crushed the doctors rib cage. the doctor doubbled over in pain and then friggus force choked him pulling him off the ground and crushing the doctors throat, mouth and all. Then friggus cast the doctor aside as though he were a rag doll, and left.



Oh, HELL NO! I read this profile trying to be understanding. But I disliked this character in the extreme. So I consulted with the all powerful Sephi and we both had the same reaction.

You used very little creativity in this character. Not only did you make the typical combat oriented one dimensional character, you couldn't even come up with your OWN combat oriented one dimensional character. So you made a cheap knock off of a villian from most recent star wars movie, and gave him jedi powers, to make him even more bad a**. THEN you tried to say he was working to make a weapon that would make him invincible.

Following this trend, for your ship you combined the xwing and tie fighter, to come up with an uglie that was way better than either, which I find unacceptable.

And I know this is kinda like complaining that the breaks are squeaky after you wrap your car around a tree, but you cannot be called "Darth" anything until your rank progresses far enough.

Totally unacceptable~~~ Merissa

Gaia Name: shining tidus
Character Name: Hazar Star
Gender: male
Age: 23
Race: human
Character Description: he has black hair with red highlights, brown eyes, a scar on the side of the his right face, he has a good build, and he has the ability to make weapons in one day.
Home Planet: Datooine
Starting Planet: Dantooine
Relations: his foster dad which is a jedi master
Character History: as a child he was raised as a farm boy, his mother and father was killed by kath hounds, even though his father was a jedi outcast he could not fight off 20 kath hounds. he watched from far away as his mother and father were being bitten to death when he was just 5 years old. he was terrified that day of kath hounds and never went near one after seeing his mon and dad killed.
he was sold to and was made a slave since he could not make a living as he was only a child. a jedi saw him work day and day and couldnt let him work like this so he bought the kid and raised him as his own son. he would train him in the ways of a jedi but not let him wield a lightsaber. as he grew older he helped kids with out parents as best he could. he knew that his parents would be proud of him if they were still alive so he did good deeds around the planet. one day his foster dad gave his own lightsaber but he could only use it when he was eighteen.
he has never once disapointed his foster dad.

Alignment: republic
Occupation: jedi
Skills: piloting skills, healing, weapons building.

Weapons: a collection of blue and green lightsabers[some purple] that he has built with his foster dad, and two blaster pistols
Ship Your character's starship:a jedi starfighter equped with heavy armory
Personal Belongings: he has two battle droids, an astromech droid, a maintenence droid, and his moms neckalace with a family picture in it.

Roleplay Sample:


*takes a DEEP breath*
ok.... Let's start with your history.
the mandalorians are DEAD. There are no more in the present timeline. they died out YEARS and YEARS ago. And boba was one of only two or three people in the galaxy who had their armor. So you can NOT have rescued your dad from a mandalorian camp.

Your history and roleplay sample can't even be described by the word horrible. (note to the wise, you can't just JOIN some elite soldiers. you have to start out as a grunt and work your way up, in which case you wouldn't have time to train to be a jedi) Second you're NOT a Jedi General. (a.k.a bad obi-wan knock off) It's so far beyond that I'm not sure where to start. you used NO description, no literate form of roleplaying. To put it bluntly. REDO IT. ~~~~Merissa

Gaia Name: shining tidus
Character Name: Hazar Star
Gender: male
Age: 23
Race: human
Character Description: he has black hair with red highlights, brown eyes, a scar on the side of the his right face, he has a good build, and he has the ability to make weapons in one day.
Home Planet: Datooine
Starting Planet: Dantooine
Relations: his foster dad which is a jedi master
Character History: as a child he was raised as a farm boy, his mother and father was killed by kath hounds, even though his father was a jedi outcast he could not fight off 20 kath hounds. he watched from far away as his mother and father were being bitten to death when he was just 5 years old. he was terrified that day of kath hounds and never went near one after seeing his mon and dad killed.
he was sold to and was made a slave since he could not make a living as he was only a child. a jedi saw him work day and day and couldnt let him work like this so he bought the kid and raised him as his own son. he would train him in the ways of a jedi but not let him wield a lightsaber. as he grew older he helped kids with out parents as best he could. he knew that his parents would be proud of him if they were still alive so he did good deeds around the planet. one day his foster dad gave his own lightsaber but he could only use it when he was eighteen.
he has never once disapointed his foster dad.

Alignment: republic/light side
Occupation: jedi
Skills: piloting skills, healing, weapons building.

Weapons: a collection of blue and green lightsabers[some purple] that he has built with his foster dad, and two blaster pistols
Ship Your character's starship:a jedi starfighter equped with heavy armory
Personal Belongings: he has two battle droids, an astromech droid, a maintenence droid, and his moms neckalace with a family picture in it.

Roleplay Sample: that day i went hiking and thought to myself "maybe i shouldn't have come hiking i have a bad feeling." as i hiked back down i saw kath hounds attack the villagers and his dad defending the place. "i'm coming dad" as i yelled and slung my lightsaber out and attacked the kath hounds. "what took you so long" my dad said tirelessly protecting the villagers.

i told my dad "what are kath hounds doing here?" he replyed"dont know?" later that day we had slained about 28 kath hounds. but the villagers were hurt and some died from infection do to their cuts. many days later i asked myself " could i have saved more people if i never went hiking to find more lightsaber crystals?" my dad came in "son, dont worry about what happened out there." "you did your best to protect the village"

Wow. Letting you write an app is like eating a whole can of beans. The end result always stinks. Kudos for fixing the Mandalorian thing, but there are still a couple of problems. If your JSF was equipped with loads of weapons and/or armor, it would have severely restricted abilities, which is contrary to what the JSF was designed for. Also, rememebr that captialisation and punctuation are your friends 3nodding Have one last go ~ Sephi