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 Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2006 6:19 pm
Betman Whoever I missed needs to PM me...Because, yeah, you know, i'm including culties. I know I need to fit Koosei in there somehow too. cool I was supposed to PM you? do you want ideas for how to include me or something?
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Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2006 6:25 pm
Zen Rider That was a great chapter Betman, I think I'm gonna stop reading until there all posted so I don't have to be so impatient. (lied) I'm already doing that for all the cult stories (except Seaphron's, Masamune's, Zen Rider's, Betman's, and Sherriff's of course) (oh and everyone else I missed)
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Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2006 6:36 pm
mh... spy eh? Perhaps me? Or someone else...
probably someone else, but Im hoping its the guy with five pets 3nodding blaugh
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Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2006 6:44 pm
A great story, just got better cool .
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Posted: Thu Oct 26, 2006 9:55 pm
Naw, Koosei, you don't have to. You were the first to comment, methinks, so I'll have to include you somehow. heart
Other people that I haven't said anything about though...>_>
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Posted: Fri Oct 27, 2006 4:32 am
Great chapters Betman! Well written and everything! I like how you put them all up at once!
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2006 7:02 pm
oh. well, okay then. biggrin if it doesn't screw up your plans though, I'd like to be a Zora. if it doesn't put any kinks in what you've got planned.
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2006 7:19 pm
Wow that was a good reading Betman, I wasn't expecting that little mix up with the cult members in the last chapter, really enjoyable. Keep up the fine work my friend.
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Posted: Sat Oct 28, 2006 7:27 pm
I just reread the whole thing from beginning to end right now and it truly is a great story! i can't wait to see what happens next wwhen you post again!
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 10:29 pm
Sorry Koosei, I couldn't make you a Zora, but you're right there in the middle of it. n_n
CHAPTER 8, FOOLZ. I NEED CRITICISM, COMMENTS, EVERYTHING.
By the way, this whole story is made up right off of the top of my head. I've made every story I've ever written that way, and I plan on doing it for the rest of my life. I only have basics on what's going to happen next.
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Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 11:56 pm
I failed you koosei!!!! crying
Anyhow, nice update betman, but I didn't quite get the Forsaken part. Was he an informant, a peer, or an enemy?
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 4:26 am
Nice update Betman, I enjoyed it immensely.
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 8:25 am
I've only read a few sentences of Chapter One, but wow! It's great!
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 11:11 am
eek eek! crying I dun wanna die!
awesome though! I wonder what Forsaken's game is though?
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Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 12:07 pm
The comedy and suspence is perfect. Great chapter!
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