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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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 Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 2:07 am
Both pass... Avelon keep improving ^_^
Proto we don't really care about the occasional grammar/spelling mistake. I mean Kenk does it too. xD
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 2:08 am
dam it .... omg im getting bored of this academy thing...
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 3:03 am
You passed. neutral
edit: Just don't do the lost love thing though, it's kinda corny. =P
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Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2006 8:28 pm
He jumps up on the platform. "I'm done." He puts the rope on his neck. He then flips the switch and the platform falls from under him. He hangs there quietly swaying in the wind.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 8:35 am
Creepy... o_o That needed more description. To the effect of your 'lost love' one. But that one passed...
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Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 5:45 am
kouri-chan_xx Creepy... o_o That needed more description. To the effect of your 'lost love' one. But that one passed... Are you serious...hahahaha.. i wasnt rping..i was just venting anger..but if i pass then yes i was rping...
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Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 10:06 pm
*Wonders what the point of providing an rp sample in the application to guild was* Oh well, I didn't really see anything amongst the rest of this forum I needed to post in other than here so here's my sample.
Sample
Anguna Mumyou, a young boy with ashen white hair and skin with red eyes, was reclining on top of a tree branch looking up into the sky through the branches of the tree, with one of his legs dangling off the side of the branch. A leaf slowly floated down from the tree and fell on his headband, "Guess it's time for me to go meet that employer," he sighed as he slowly straightened up, the leaf falling off his headband, "It was such a nice day too." With a slight poof Anguna vanished and reappeared on the ground below, "Time to go blow some stuff up," he said to himself while a wide smirk crossed his face.
End Sample
I do have one question about roleplaying here. Are one-liners acceptable if you're having a conversation with someone where long monologues really aren't necessary or a lot of action isn't necessary?
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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 12:16 pm
Cool.. So all I have to do is write a sample no prob! Okay! Here I go!
My charaters name is Kogi (Something).
Sample
A door suddenly burst open and he comes walking in. "Okay then... So where am I?" He looks around and notices nobodies even there "What the..." He says and walks further in. Then suddenly the door slams shut behind him. He quickly turns back to the door and starts pounding on it "It won't open..." a voice from within the building says. A shiver runs down his back and he knew that there was something wrong here.
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Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 4:21 pm
My charcters name is Hiro Kiator
Hiro had dropped to his knees after hours of training, He had been up since dawn. He had just finished his Taijutsu exercise and was exhausted. Hiro looked up as he flung his hair back swing the bead's of sweat that glistened in the falling sun. Hiro rolled over and took one of his gloves off. "Not again. That is the fourth pair this week. I cant keep ripping my gloves. Sensai is going to kill me." Hiro rose slowly as he took of his gloves. He looked to the horizon as he wipped the sweat from his brow. "One more week before the exams. This time I will be ready."
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Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 8:21 pm
ShinseiDrayga *Wonders what the point of providing an rp sample in the application to guild was* Oh well, I didn't really see anything amongst the rest of this forum I needed to post in other than here so here's my sample. SampleAnguna Mumyou, a young boy with ashen white hair and skin with red eyes, was reclining on top of a tree branch looking up into the sky through the branches of the tree, with one of his legs dangling off the side of the branch. A leaf slowly floated down from the tree and fell on his headband, "Guess it's time for me to go meet that employer," he sighed as he slowly straightened up, the leaf falling off his headband, "It was such a nice day too." With a slight poof Anguna vanished and reappeared on the ground below, "Time to go blow some stuff up," he said to himself while a wide smirk crossed his face. End SampleI do have one question about roleplaying here. Are one-liners acceptable if you're having a conversation with someone where long monologues really aren't necessary or a lot of action isn't necessary?
Pass. ^-^
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Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 8:22 pm
kogi_10 Cool.. So all I have to do is write a sample no prob! Okay! Here I go! My charaters name is Kogi (Something). SampleA door suddenly burst open and he comes walking in. "Okay then... So where am I?" He looks around and notices nobodies even there "What the..." He says and walks further in. Then suddenly the door slams shut behind him. He quickly turns back to the door and starts pounding on it "It won't open..." a voice from within the building says. A shiver runs down his back and he knew that there was something wrong here.
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Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 8:25 pm
Nightzblade My charcters name is Hiro Kiator Hiro had dropped to his knees after hours of training, He had been up since dawn. He had just finished his Taijutsu exercise and was exhausted. Hiro looked up as he flung his hair back swing the bead's of sweat that glistened in the falling sun. Hiro rolled over and took one of his gloves off. "Not again. That is the fourth pair this week. I cant keep ripping my gloves. Sensai is going to kill me." Hiro rose slowly as he took of his gloves. He looked to the horizon as he wipped the sweat from his brow. "One more week before the exams. This time I will be ready."
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Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 8:37 pm
ivory_vamp Nightzblade My charcters name is Hiro Kiator Hiro had dropped to his knees after hours of training, He had been up since dawn. He had just finished his Taijutsu exercise and was exhausted. Hiro looked up as he flung his hair back swing the bead's of sweat that glistened in the falling sun. Hiro rolled over and took one of his gloves off. "Not again. That is the fourth pair this week. I cant keep ripping my gloves. Sensai is going to kill me." Hiro rose slowly as he took of his gloves. He looked to the horizon as he wipped the sweat from his brow. "One more week before the exams. This time I will be ready." This might sound like a dumb question but what do you mean by beginning sentence variations? ninja
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Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 9:08 pm
((Are we allowed to attempt a pass in advance? I'd still like to hang around the Academy a bit and get a feel for this d20 system but.. was just wondering.))
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Posted: Tue Oct 24, 2006 6:43 am
Nightzblade ivory_vamp Nightzblade My charcters name is Hiro Kiator Hiro had dropped to his knees after hours of training, He had been up since dawn. He had just finished his Taijutsu exercise and was exhausted. Hiro looked up as he flung his hair back swing the bead's of sweat that glistened in the falling sun. Hiro rolled over and took one of his gloves off. "Not again. That is the fourth pair this week. I cant keep ripping my gloves. Sensai is going to kill me." Hiro rose slowly as he took of his gloves. He looked to the horizon as he wipped the sweat from his brow. "One more week before the exams. This time I will be ready." This might sound like a dumb question but what do you mean by beginning sentence variations? ninja
[Pretend I'm a crazily obsessed grammar teacher that speaks overly passaionately about words. >_> Well, you don't really need to pretend.]
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