Gaius Harper
From what I've read, you have a very good and interesting character here! I like the fact that he's a nice guy but that he only does it for his own ego and thus deals with a kind of guilt. Interesting background too!
The phobias about spiders and electric outlets seemed rather random... I don't know if they were explained in his more lengthy history? But that's just my opinion.
Also, I want to compliment you on your hard work to try and write well when I know english isn't your first language! Keep at it, you're improving!
mrgreen I'm Quiting the Phobia About Electric Object Because is Simply Stupid and Random xD
But the Phobia about Spider have a reasonable reason, Chile Have one of the Most poisonius Spider in the World,
The Chilean Recluse, Seriusly, One Bite of this Spider cause a rapidly
grangenous effect in the Bited Zone, Also if is not Treated rapidly with the Anti-Venom, The person affected Passed Away.
I think that is a good response :3
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