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 Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 7:30 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Pint-sized weirdo is approved. emotion_awesome Hurr hurr hurr emotion_dowant
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 9:38 pm
Dantes_river ｐｒｅｓｅｎｔｓ. . . 
DAMYEN REED
ｄｅｐａｒｔｍｅｎｔ: MUSIC
Student
“ I'll slap you so f*cking hard it'll feel like you kissed a f*cking freight train... ”⋆ ⋆ ⋆ＴＨＥ ＲＥＳＯＮＡＮＣＥ ＳＫＩＥＳ ＦＩＬＥＳ⋆ ⋆ ⋆ ｃｌａｓｓｉｆｉｅｄ ❥ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅ: Real Wild Child or The Animal ❥ａｇｅ: 17 ❥ｇｅｎｄｅｒ: Male ❥ｈｅｉｇｈｔ ａｎｄ ｗｅｉｇｈｔ: 179 cm/69-70 kg. ❥ｂｌｏｏｄ ｔｙｐｅ: O Positive ❥ｓｅｘｕａｌ ｏｒｉｅｎｔａｔｉｏｎ: Bi-curious? ❥ｓｔａｔｕｓ: Single ❥ｂｉｒｔｈｄａｙ: 4th of November ❥ｚｏｄｉａｃ ｓｉｇｎ : Scorpio ❥ａｐｐｅａｒａｎｃｅ: During weekdays, Damyen school uniform is a mess. He's got a habit of just fingerbrushing his dark brown hair so it's never neat. His pants are usually just big enough that he's comfortable and has growing room albeit he has holes in some of them on either the left or right knee and he has no intention of getting them fixed since they haven't gotten any bigger. His shirts are usually untucked and unbuttoned with a tanktop under it and he doesn't intend to tuck it in let alone button up his shirt. In his words, “they're uncomfortable”. His shoes are just plain white sneakers that are usually kind of faded although sometimes they look new. He considers one pair of sneakers as "everyday wear" while the others are "dress-up day".
On weekends, Damyen is usually wearing casual outfits based on the season. His shirts consist of sarcastic t-shirts, t-shirts with videogames and band names on it or a tanktop covered by a simple black jean or black leather jacket. He sometimes wears a brown t-shirt and a camouflage jacket as well. He wears his father's dogtags as his way of honoring him and makes his own accessories - leather straps with metal studs or spikes, metal rings, chokers, etc. - when he's not working or going to school. His pants usually consist of worn out jeans that may or may not have a hole in one or both of the knees, shorts that sometimes have a safety pin holding the zipper area closed 'cause he's not planning on wasting his time removing and adding a new zipper on it or a pair of camouflage cargo pants/shorts. His shoes are usually either a pair of black combat boots, black steel-toed boots with an inch of nine different kinds of metal in the soles or his worn out white sneakers. Sometimes he just refuses to wear shoes altogether. He sometimes dressed up like a ninja to scare his friends in which he usually succeeded, but not always.
(( Note: Not all of his clothes have holes in them or a safety pin holding the zipper closed. Sometimes they are completely fine. ))
Damyen has dark brown hair that is usually too messy to tell if it reaches his shoulders or not, deep green eyes with black kohl around his eyes and a natural soft tan on a well-toned body that makes people question if he spends a lot of time outside or simply gets a spray tan. It's completely natural though due to his mother having come from Egypt. He also tends to excercise a lot.
While he looks messy on the outside, he's really quite organized on the inside.❥ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌｉｔｙ: Damyen is a rather playful, mischievous and rather childish teenager on most occasions. He enjoys playing pranks on other people, making jokes that most people might not get and just having fun. He feels like everyday should be spent like it's your first and last day.
He can also be very coldhearted although his day has to start out badly in order for people to see this side of him. If this side is out, be prepared for a fight to break loose or someone to start crying due to the fact that most people don't take sarcasm very well and he's quite sarcastic and/or blunt about things when he's in this kind of mood.
His rebellious nature is mostly against his step-parents who want him to focus on something other than being a musician or a mechanic. He likes what his parents taught him and what they had as their occupation. Considering how well his father was when he was alive, he would rather take on his father's occupation than do what his step-parents do; psychiatry. He's not overly rebellious about everything though.
It's usually much easier to tell how he's feeling based on the music he's listening to let alone playing. If it's something like Five Finger Death Punch or Disturbed, he's in a bad mood. If it's something like Familiar Taste of Poison by Halestorm, Savage Garden or The Civil Wars, he's most likely in a mood swing that means he can be nice or he could just not care. Music is the easiest way to tell his feelings of the day. All you have to do is listen to the words.❥ｃｈａｒａｃｔｅｒ ｆｌａｗｓ: ✖ Childish - Damyen likes goofing off on most occasions, always looking at the bright side of things out loud although he might be thinking negatively, but this can get him into a lot of trouble.
✖ Sadomasochist - Damyen enjoys pain maybe a little too much... When someone, or even himself, gets hurt in some manner, he laughs.
✖ Organization - Damyen has a habit of organizing some things and if something gets thrown out of order from one of those things, he can get mad. His organization only goes so far though. He could care less about his appearance altogether, but has a method to doing things like keeping certain tools together, certain files together, how he washes dishes and alphabetizing books. That is as far as it reaches though. While he looks messy on the outside, he's really quite organized on the inside.
✖ Temper - When Damyen gets mad, it's better to let him rant and rave about it than to interrupt him. If he doesn't rant and rave but instead just starts playing his guitar, leave him be!
✖ Fights - Damyen won't start a fight, but he sure as Hell will finish 'em... Or at least attempt to finish them... He just has a habit of showing no mercy and not caring if you're a male or female, young or old should you swing at him first.
✖ Claustrophobia - Damyen's highly claustrophobic. If he starts feeling clustered, he'll start to panic and you do not want to meet a cornered animal. ❥ａｂｉｌｉｔｙ: ~ ❥ｔａｌｅｎｔｓ: ✔ Singing - Damyen is pretty good singer, but it's only to certain types of music. He sounds kind of like a mash-up of Five Finger Death Punch's lead singer and Damian McGinty when he actually tries. He usually does this in private on most occasions, but is willing to sing in front of others if he's in a good enough mood. He doesn't like to brag though...
✔ Instruments - The guitar and the flute are the main instruments Damyen's learned to play although he's better with the guitar than the flute. Since he grew up in small town in the middle of nowhere, he had to find something to do and so he found music. If he hears it, he can play it although it might take quite a few tries before he gets all the right notes.
✔ Mechanics/Technology - Damyen's dad was an army mechanic and something of a technology geek and he wanted to be close to his dad so why not learn the mechanics of things? He was like a child prodigy and his father enjoyed every minute with him in their garage. (I consider them as similar topics.) ❥ｂｉｏ: Damyen Reed, as his step-parents have legally changed his name into, loves his secrets. His parents met in Egypt and were married six months later due to his mother being pregnant with him. After getting married, his father returned to the United States with his wife who became a legalized citizen. When he was born, however, his parents argued over whether he would have the name of Damyen or Anwar. They eventually settled on it being Damyen Anwar Barkov and thus he entered the world.
By the time he was two, they moved back overseas due to his father being sent back and his mother wanting to see her family again in which him and his mother spent most of their time with his mother's family in a small village. When she noticed they kept extending her husband's time away from the U.S, she started up a couple of small schools; one archery while the other was dance.
As he grew up, his mother taught him most of the things he knew and started putting black kohl around his eyes so the other children would stop teasing him for having a foreigner's blood in his veins. When his dad visited, the two tried figuring out something to do to spend more time together but his father didn't know if he could bring the boy on the military base with him. Then came the orders of returning to America and so the trio went back, Damyen asking his dad to teach him the things he did for a living as they were on the plane. His dad then said he would and thus started their bond.
By the time Damyen turn eleven, however, his father was sent back overseas for what was supposed to only be a month at the maximum. This ended in tragedy, his father and several other soldiers getting shot as their convoy passed a small town. His mother was given the proper treatment of her husband being killed overseas and yet Damyen took his father's dogtags. A few months later, as the school year was ending, Damyen came home to find his mother had overdosed on multiple medications. This landed him in an orphanage for about a year before being adopted out to the Jeevas family who tried to earn his love through inanimate objects and some attention here and there.
He spent the next five years collecting knives, guitars, technological devices and working with mechanical engineering while also continuing his studies in the Jeevas' basement. He'd made it his own personal bedroom and fortunately enough, there was a master bathroom on that floor. Nowadays he gets in trouble by acting like he does while his step-parents want him to be something other than a mechanic or a musician. He's wanting to learn riverdancing and is still keeping his education going. Music has kept him happy throughout all of his life and he intends to keep it in his life alongside the skills he learned from both of his blood parents. ❥ｌｉｋｅｓ:
✔ Nature/Animals
✔ Art - This includes the musical art, doodles, paintings, sculptures, theatrical art and even literature. (I consider stories and poetry an art.)
✔ Sweets
✔ Mechanics
✔ Knives
✔ Cooking
✔ Some Organization
✔ Mysteries
✔ Technology/Videogames
❥ｄｉｓｌｉｋｅｓ:
✖ Bad Music - Ja Rule and those other irritating people like Usher...
✖ Bossy People
✖ Book Vandals
✖ Being Teased
✖ Sheet Music... Why does music love him yet sheet music does not?!
✖ Fuddy-Duddies... You guys are no fun at all!
✖ Cages/Small Spaces/Crowds
✖ Bad Tea
✖ Talking About Family Or How He Feels ❥ｅｘｔｒａ ｉｎｆｏｒｍａｔｉｏｎ: - Damyen's got an addiction to knives thanks to his dad. Would you like to see his pocketknife collection?
- Damyen has an obsession with technology, mechanical engineering, videogames, anything involved in music and lying through his teeth. Good luck trying to find him in the labyrinth he calls a room...
- Damyen'll either break down into tears, just become really quiet, ignore the question completely or hit you if you ask about what his family is like...
- Damyen acted/acts kind of like a puppy at times since he wanted a dog, but couldn't have one thanks to his allergies, and his birth parents just found it adorable. When they moved back overseas due to his father being sent back and his mother wanting to see her family again, his grandfather told his mother that it wasn't natural that he acted like an animal, but she shrugged it off by calling it a phase. She thought it was adorable and would let him behave like such unless it came down to being in public or eating. It is known that children have wild imaginations and tend to go through phases where they pretend to be animals or fantasy creatures at times. He's mostly outgrown such childish behavior, but it's still somewhat there although it's extremely rare to see.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2012 11:17 pm
Hi there Dantes ^^ Before I approve your character, I need to help you with your profile.. Going through it one by one.. First, about his personality.. I was a bit confused about him having an Obsessive compulsive disorder and yet the way he dressed is kind of ragged (messy).. All I know that people who have OCD are very vain among themselves, since they were called as "Organized and neat freak" people.. If you want him to be like a "punk" then you can have the OCD deleted, or if you want to retain the said disorder, I suggest him to be like a neat freak guy well that alters the entire profile ^^ About his temper and fight, just like from the other guild, we are not allowing autohits and any kinds of godmod, if you want him to pick up a fight, then the council will have to keep an eye on him and have him in a detention.. ^^ Just heads up! Second, Talents, Uhm.. Though we limit it to three.. Which means, we need to specify on his skills.. Damyen is overtalented. He's good most in the instruments, I suggest that you need to pick one ^^ Not all people are good when it comes to multiple musical instruments.. And that requires a lot of practice.. Honestly ^^.. So yeah, pick one instrument which he's good at.. Playing instruments and Dancing are categorize as separate talents.. So if you want Damyen to be good at dancing I suggest you omit either the Archery thingy or the mechanics thingy.. "Archery/Hunting - Damyen's mother owns an archery school so she tried teaching him how to do it when he was about eight or nine. She figured the hunting was a bonus. It seemed to come naturally to him and thus became his hobby." Uh.. Archery in schools are used for sports.. It's like you have to be good in archery to gain medals and fame for the school not as part of hunting.. Unless Damyen is living in a primitive world that requires archery to earn a living like food.. Third, Sheet music is not part of a flaw.. Unless he played by ear.. And that will also conflict about him playing more instruments.. I find it difficult.. Fourth, About his likes and ability.. Uh.. I think isn't it too overwhelmed? He likes everything, to the fact he's a rebellious type.. And the ability is not required yet during the submission of the profiles, if you read the rules at the Abilities and Spells.. Damyen can have his skill once he entered Spell casting class.. Animal Instinct Ability is not found in the Abilities and Spells list ^^ Fifth, About the ninja mode, may I know the reason why he needs to do that? is it some sort of a power? like transforming? 'coz most of the time, sneaky moves are often use as godmodding..
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2012 1:04 am
I was and still am working on the kinks, Angel. I'm still deliberating on all of his details altogether, but I've gone into a little more detail about some things and removed some things while editing others to make it clearer. While some things are obvious to me, it might not be so for others. Sorry for not putting up the note on me still editing him. I shouldve done it, but I keep getting called away to do things in real life. -bows- Please forgive me.
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2012 1:13 am
Dantes_river I was and still am working on the kinks, Angel. I'm still deliberating on all of his details altogether, but I've gone into a little more detail about some things and removed some things while editing others to make it clearer. While some things are obvious to me, it might not be so for others. Sorry for not putting up the note on me still editing him. I shouldve done it, but I keep getting called away to do things in real life. -bows- Please forgive me. it's alright ^^
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2012 1:24 am
Phaea ｐｒｅｓｅｎｔｓ. . . 
Zevran Antiva
ｄｅｐａｒｔｍｅｎｔ: Astronomy
Student
"What can I say? Walking into danger is my thing."⋆ ⋆ ⋆ＴＨＥ ＲＥＳＯＮＡＮＣＥ ＳＫＩＥＳ ＦＩＬＥＳ⋆ ⋆ ⋆ ｃｌａｓｓｉｆｉｅｄ ❥ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅ: Zev ❥ａｇｅ: 17 ❥ｇｅｎｄｅｒ: Male ❥ｈｅｉｇｈｔ ａｎｄ ｗｅｉｇｈｔ: 6'3"; 140 lbs ❥ｂｌｏｏｄ ｔｙｐｅ: A ❥ｓｅｘｕａｌ ｏｒｉｅｎｔａｔｉｏｎ: Straight ❥ｓｔａｔｕｓ: Single ❥ｂｉｒｔｈｄａｙ: October 31 ❥ｚｏｄｉａｃ ｓｉｇｎ : Scorpio ❥ａｐｐｅａｒａｎｃｅ: Zevran is tall with dark blonde hair that almost looks brown sometimes, his bangs usually cover his right eye while his eyes are a greyish brown. He has a slight muscular build (nothing too serious) he keeps hidden with baggy clothes most of the time. His usual clothing is black all the time, but since he has to wear a uniform, he adds a black hoodie underneath the jacket. If he's in a not too cheery mood, he wears normal colored clothing. ❥ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌｉｔｙ: Zevran is one of the most optomistic people you would ever meet. He likes to stay on the bright side of things instead of dwelling on anything dark, even though it happens from time to time. Just because he's optomistic doesn't mean he has no pessimism. He tends to be happy-joyful since he likes being around people. If he talked, he would probably be seen as bubbly, but he doesn't, and because of his clothing style, he looks more goth than a cheerful person. He keeps a smile on his face most of the time to make himself look less threatening.
Many people think he is mute because of a medical issue, but it turns out he just doesn't really care for talking. He'll only do it when he feels like it.
Zev is always seen as a good listener with his friends (if he has any) and he trys to give advice (sometimes). He likes to encourage others to do the right thing, and he doesn't mind getting in a fight or two to protect his friends. ❥ｃｈａｒａｃｔｅｒ ｆｌａｗｓ: ✖Aimless - Now that Zev's back in school, he doesn't really have a path to follow. You might see him in a tree every now and then emotion_awesome
✖Dubious - Zev isn't sure whether he should go to school or go back to treasure hunting.
✖Disturbed - Since his small bout of amnesia, Zev has bad dreams sometimes of eyes staring at him, and he feels like somebody is following him sometimes.
✖Dyslexic - Zev can't read very well, since the words he sees are always jumbled up or backwards. He doesn't really know that he has it since he's skipped school for awhile
✖Fanaticism - Zev likes to stay really, really, really, really optimistic all the time. Warning: It might rub off on people. ❥ａｂｉｌｉｔｙ: (ONLY 1 SKILL AND PLEASE ELABORATE) ❥ｔａｌｅｎｔｓ:
Fiddle - Zevran picked up the art of fiddling one day while his parents were away. It's about the only musical talent he has, and he enjoys playing it while people are dancing.
Navigating - Need help going somewhere? Ask Zevran! He's skilled with directions no matter where you need to go, whether it is around the school or inside an ancient temple
Rock Climbing - A skill Zevran learned since he could walk. He likes to use it for climbing walls to get out of school though, or just to sit on rooftops when he doesn't feel like using the stairs. In other words, it's almost like Parkour ❥ｂｉｏ: Zevran had the luck to have parents who loved going on adventures, and not the normal ones. His parents are notorious treasure hunters, very similar to that of Indiana Jones. From the day he was born his parents took him everywhere, from jungles to caverns, from ruins to underwater cities. Kids around his age envied the trips he would take, simply because they wanted to miss as much school as he did. They only know the half of it.
Ever since he could remember, Zevran has always been on a trip somewhere and skipped school just for these trips. His parents believed he could learn more on the "road" (air, boat, etc.) instead of just sitting at a desk for hours in a building. And so he learned very useful skills that helped him with treasure hunting.
His life changed drastically when he was 15. During an excursion based on a tip, Zevran and his parents travelled to South America to search a newly uncovered, underground Mayan tomb. It was several hours after they went down there that Zevran came back out. Alone. They found a burial room of sorts and when he opened a coffin of sorts, he blacked out. That was the last thing he remembered after leaving the tomb.
Several searches were conducted into the tomb, but his parents were never found. After that, Zevran started to get strange dreams, ones he could never remember after waking up.
After a couple years of his own treasure hunting - and searching for his parents - Zevran was forced to enroll at Resonance Skies Academy. ❥ｌｉｋｅｓ:
✔ Caves
✔ Adventures
✔ Shiny items (he's like a crow)
✔ Running
✔ Kitties~<3
❥ｄｉｓｌｉｋｅｓ:
✖ Snakes
✖ Falling
✖ Reading
✖ Feeling trapped
✖ Cannibals ❥ｅｘｔｒａ ｉｎｆｏｒｍａｔｉｏｎ:
~ Zevran was forced to leave behind his beloved pet cat with his parents. His name? Ser Pounce-A-Lot, and he adores him to death. Don't really know where he came up with the name though....
~ Zev's muteness isn't exactly medical. He can talk, he just doesn't feel like it. To him, actions speak louder than words, so he might randomly hug someone as a thank you emotion_awesome
~ Zev usually talks only when he feels like it, but if he knows someone very well, he'll talk up a storm.
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2012 3:20 am
Adding one thing to Yukiharu's personality also her flaws...Which is her being a bit pervy. emotion_awesome
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Posted: Sat Aug 25, 2012 6:04 pm
Craft_Knight Adding one thing to Yukiharu's personality also her flaws...Which is her being a bit pervy. emotion_awesome alright emotion_dowant
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2012 4:23 am
M i n i R e d S t a r s ｐｒｅｓｅｎｔｓ. . . 
Lucy Blake
ｄｅｐａｒｔｍｅｎｔ: Astronomy
STUDENT
"Glass can show the very core of your soul"⋆ ⋆ ⋆ＴＨＥ ＲＥＳＯＮＡＮＣＥ ＳＫＩＥＳ ＦＩＬＥＳ⋆ ⋆ ⋆ ｃｌａｓｓｉｆｉｅｄ ❥ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅ: Luce ❥ａｇｅ: 16 ❥ｇｅｎｄｅｒ: Female ❥ｈｅｉｇｈｔ ａｎｄ ｗｅｉｇｈｔ: 168cm/ 57kg ❥ｂｌｏｏｄ ｔｙｐｅ: AB + ❥ｓｅｘｕａｌ ｏｒｉｅｎｔａｔｉｏｎ: straight ❥ｓｔａｔｕｓ: single ❥ｂｉｒｔｈｄａｙ: February 28 ❥ｚｏｄｉａｃ ｓｉｇｎ : Pisces ❥ａｐｐｅａｒａｎｃｅ:
The picture says it all. ❥ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌｉｔｙ:
Whilst Lucy is a very kind person when you know her, upon seeing her, she is rather dark, and dreary. She never appears to be happy, or cheerful. To make this girl laugh, or even smile, is nearly impossible. Lucy fears that if she develops an attachment, it will fall through her hands. Because the closest people to her were taken from her.
On the outside, Lucy seems almost emotionless, she can be very friendly, but rarely speaks. She feels that she is alone, and that no one can help her ❥ｃｈａｒａｃｔｅｒ ｆｌａｗｓ: ✖Bloodlust - When she witnesses an event which reminds her of her parents, she begins to feel bloodlust, which builds up over time
✖ Fear of love: She is scared to be in love, as she thinks that whoever that loves her will die
✖ Sacrifice: She is willing to sacrifice herself to save others
✖ Withdrawn - Lucy tends to withdraw herself because she fears people will hurt her
✖ Temptation - Is very much tempted by blood ❥ａｂｉｌｉｔｙ:
Glass Manipulation ❥ｔａｌｅｎｔｓ:
Drawing - Lucy was taught from a very young age to draw, and it has become her main hobby, and she is very good at it.
Speaks fluent German and English
Manipulating glass ❥ｂｉｏ:
Lucy was a soft and happy child. Her parents were always there with her to help her grow up. Whenever she was in trouble, her parents would rush to her aid. One day Lucy was the victim of an attempted kidnapping.
Two men rushed into her room where she was drawing and grabbed her. By the time they had gotten outside her parents had came backing from shopping. They immediately attempted to get Lucy back.
For what seemed like hours they fought, passers by started to watch in fear. Suddenly the two men grabbed both parents and pushed their heads through a glass window. The glass shattered immediately, puncturing their skulls and sending Lucy into a panic.
Her rage continued to build, her mind desperately trying to cope with the loss of the 2 most important people in her life. Her 10 year old body shook with the feeling of boiling blood, seeking an escape. All the kidnappers could do was stand in fear, as they knew that something had gone horribly wrong.
All the could be described as next was an event of action, revenge and hate. As all her childhood memories with her parents flashed before her eyes, whilst she didn't notice the shards of glass in front of her beginning to shudder, just as she did.
Suddenly the glass shattered, as did she inside. Her mind readjusted, allowed hidden abilities to become known. Her tears stopped and her body stood still as the wind played with her hair.
The glass flew towards the kidnappers, soon all that was left was bloodied corpses filled with glass. She smiled in relief that her parents had been avenged, whilst a tear of blood has began to fall down her soft cheek. That was the last time she smiled.
Upon that day, she has practiced glass manipulation, and wound up at the academy.
❥ｌｉｋｅｓ:
✔ Drawing
✔ Piano
✔ Glass
✔ Victorian style dresses
✔ Blood
❥ｄｉｓｌｉｋｅｓ:
✖ Blood
✖ Vomit
✖ Broken glass
✖ Forget-me-nots
✖ Attachments ❥ｅｘｔｒａ ｉｎｆｏｒｍａｔｉｏｎ:
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2012 10:46 am
Red. I love ya girl so I'm going to try to be blunt but nice. Go back and re-read the rules and abilities. =) Because you missed some pretty critical things. Like how your character doesn't start with an ability and how you can only use spells on the list. (Glass manipulation isn't. Spells are much, much more specific) You need to remove her ability from her ability and talent sections and wait until spell casting class starts to choose an element that fits her personality. You won't be able to get your first spell until you meet the requirements. So, again--re read everything carefully. You'll also need to rework her biography since it relies heavily on her hidden abilities. (Note...all abilities are spells that have to be intentionally activated. There is no hidden, uncontrollable ability or accidental magic.) Also, I will be honest; her personality makes no sense. D= She's really nice, and kind and self sacrificing and friendly. But she's also emotionless? And afraid (how can she be afraid and friendly if she's emotionless??) and she apparently likes blood and killing people or something? It just...is all convoluted and contradictory. You can't have a character who has all the personality traits. Their personality has to at least make sense. I don't think you can call someone kind if they like hurting people. o.O; Also, her flaws. Fear of love and self sacrifice are not flaws at all. MOST people are afraid (to some degree) of falling in love. Love is a risk. It's natural for it to be frightening. Especially because her fear of love isn't because she might be hurt but because she thinks the other person will be so it's very noble. And self sacrifice is also very noble. Noble traits are not flaws. On top of that, the bloodlust and being tempted by blood are more or less the same thing (and will only work if you alter her personality so she's not this super kind, sweet, self sacrificing girl who is also a psycho.). So in the end, she has two flaws--wanting to hurt people (bloodlust) and being withdrawn. Anyway, just edit her and quote me. ^_^
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 5:12 am
Phew, finally finished the editing. Hope this is better now ^^ M i n i R e d S t a r s ｐｒｅｓｅｎｔｓ. . .
Lucy Blake
ｄｅｐａｒｔｍｅｎｔ: Astronomy
STUDENT
"Live everyday like it's your last" ⋆ ⋆ ⋆ＴＨＥ ＲＥＳＯＮＡＮＣＥ ＳＫＩＥＳ ＦＩＬＥＳ⋆ ⋆ ⋆ ｃｌａｓｓｉｆｉｅｄ ❥ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅ: Luce ❥ａｇｅ: 16 ❥ｇｅｎｄｅｒ: Female ❥ｈｅｉｇｈｔ ａｎｄ ｗｅｉｇｈｔ: 168cm/ 57kg ❥ｂｌｏｏｄ ｔｙｐｅ: AB + ❥ｓｅｘｕａｌ ｏｒｉｅｎｔａｔｉｏｎ: straight ❥ｓｔａｔｕｓ: single ❥ｂｉｒｔｈｄａｙ: February 28 ❥ｚｏｄｉａｃ ｓｉｇｎ : Pisces ❥ａｐｐｅａｒａｎｃｅ: The picture says it all. ❥ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌｉｔｙ:
On the outside, Lucy seems to show no emotion at all. She keeps her emotions locked within her, and doesn't not show them to anyone. She is not a hateful person, but she is not loving person either. She is afraid of loving, as she fears the ones she loves will be taken away from her.
She does not care about how someone views her, and she can be incredibly blunt at the best of times. ❥ｃｈａｒａｃｔｅｒ ｆｌａｗｓ: ✖Humourless - Lucy has no sense of humour at all
✖ Judgemental - Even if Lucy knowns nothing about a person, she has an idea of how she thinks of them
✖ Paranoid - Lucy feels paranoid over everything basicly
✖ Withdrawn - Lucy tends to withdraw herself from the crowd because she believes that if she becomes close to someone, they will leave
✖ Blunt - There is no filter between Lucy's mouth and brain ❥ａｂｉｌｉｔｙ:
~ ❥ｔａｌｅｎｔｓ:
Drawing - Lucy was taught from a very young age to draw, and it has become her main hobby, and she is very good at it.
Speaks fluent German and English
Astronomy ❥ｂｉｏ:
Lucy was a soft and happy child. Her parents were always there with her to help her grow up. Whenever she was in trouble, her parents would rush to her aid. One day Lucy was the victim of an attempted kidnapping.
Two men rushed into her room where she was drawing and grabbed her. By the time they had gotten outside her parents had came backing from shopping. They immediately attempted to get Lucy back.
For what seemed like hours they fought, passers by started to watch in fear. Suddenly the two men grabbed both parents and pushed their heads through a glass window. The glass shattered immediately, puncturing their skulls and sending Lucy into a panic.
After witnessing the horrid sight of the death of her beloved parents, she changed. (( You can say it is like "Break the Cutie.. TvTrope )) After the death of her parents, Lucy was sent to live with her aunty. Life with her aunty was hard, to say the least. Her aunty was the only family Lucy had left, but unfortunately, her aunty was far from normal. Her aunty had issues with finance, and had an alcohol problem.
Whilst living with her aunt, Lucy spent her time locked in her own room, drawing. Due to the vast amount of spare time Lucy had, she became a very good artist. She also took an interest in Astronomy, and spent a lot of time doing that. And eventually, she wound up at the academy. ❥ｌｉｋｅｓ:
✔ Drawing
✔ Raspberry cordial
✔ Black tea
✔ Deep purple tulips
✔ Victorian style dresses
❥ｄｉｓｌｉｋｅｓ:
✖ Blood
✖ Vomit
✖ Broken glass
✖ Forget-me-nots
✖Alcohol ❥ｅｘｔｒａ :
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Posted: Mon Aug 27, 2012 12:40 pm
Red: 1. Please take the time to actually describe her. We have an appearance section for a reason and I'd like you to fill it out. This keeps people from being tempted to completely change their character's appearance when they get sick of a picture. Does she have black eyes? Or are they dark blue? Is her hair supposed to be black? Is she supposed to look like a 10 year old or is that just the picture? Please consider these things and utilize all the sections we've given in the profile. If we wanted to only rely on pictures, we wouldn't also have an appearance section. 2. Please don't rely on tropes to describe your character's personality or bio--not everyone is familiar with "Breaking the cutie" as a trope and they shouldn't have to look it up to understand your character. Once you fix those things I will be able to approve her.
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 12:06 am
Hope this is better ^^ M i n i R e d S t a r s ｐｒｅｓｅｎｔｓ. . .
Lucy Blake
ｄｅｐａｒｔｍｅｎｔ: Astronomy
STUDENT
"Live everyday like it's your last" ⋆ ⋆ ⋆ＴＨＥ ＲＥＳＯＮＡＮＣＥ ＳＫＩＥＳ ＦＩＬＥＳ⋆ ⋆ ⋆ ｃｌａｓｓｉｆｉｅｄ ❥ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅ: Luce ❥ａｇｅ: 16 ❥ｇｅｎｄｅｒ: Female ❥ｈｅｉｇｈｔ ａｎｄ ｗｅｉｇｈｔ: 168cm/ 57kg ❥ｂｌｏｏｄ ｔｙｐｅ: AB + ❥ｓｅｘｕａｌ ｏｒｉｅｎｔａｔｉｏｎ: straight ❥ｓｔａｔｕｓ: single ❥ｂｉｒｔｈｄａｙ: February 28 ❥ｚｏｄｉａｃ ｓｉｇｎ : Pisces ❥ａｐｐｅａｒａｎｃｅ:
Lucy has really dark brown eyes that appear black. Her hair is a dark brown colour also, but appears brown. She has rather pale skin. She has a small frame, but she is not skin and bone. Her hair is up to her collar bones, but is very, very rarely out. (It is how seen in picture) In the picture, she is her actual age. She is always seen in victorian style dresses that are knee length, fringed socks and black loafers.
Lucy does not have any piercings. The only jewellery she wears is a black pendant in the shape of a drop around her neck that sits in the middle of her chest. ❥ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌｉｔｙ:
On the outside, Lucy seems to show no emotion at all. She keeps her emotions locked within her, and doesn't not show them to anyone. She is not a hateful person, but she is not loving person either. She is afraid of loving, as she fears the ones she loves will be taken away from her.
She does not care about how someone views her, and she can be incredibly blunt at the best of times. ❥ｃｈａｒａｃｔｅｒ ｆｌａｗｓ: ✖Humourless - Lucy has no sense of humour at all
✖ Judgemental - Even if Lucy knowns nothing about a person, she has an idea of how she thinks of them
✖ Paranoid - Lucy feels paranoid over everything basicly
✖ Withdrawn - Lucy tends to withdraw herself from the crowd because she believes that if she becomes close to someone, they will leave
✖ Blunt - There is no filter between Lucy's mouth and brain ❥ａｂｉｌｉｔｙ:
~ ❥ｔａｌｅｎｔｓ:
Drawing - Lucy was taught from a very young age to draw, and it has become her main hobby, and she is very good at it.
Speaks fluent German and English
Astronomy ❥ｂｉｏ:
Lucy was a soft and happy child. Her parents were always there with her to help her grow up. Whenever she was in trouble, her parents would rush to her aid. One day Lucy was the victim of an attempted kidnapping.
Two men rushed into her room where she was drawing and grabbed her. By the time they had gotten outside her parents had came backing from shopping. They immediately attempted to get Lucy back.
For what seemed like hours they fought, passers by started to watch in fear. Suddenly the two men grabbed both parents and pushed their heads through a glass window. The glass shattered immediately, puncturing their skulls and sending Lucy into a panic.
After witnessing the horrid sight of the death of her beloved parents, she changed, she was no longer the happy child she once was. After the death of her parents, Lucy was sent to live with her aunty. Life with her aunty was hard, to say the least. Her aunty was the only family Lucy had left, but unfortunately, her aunty was far from normal. Her aunty had issues with finance, and had an alcohol problem.
Whilst living with her aunt, Lucy spent her time locked in her own room, drawing. Due to the vast amount of spare time Lucy had, she became a very good artist. She also took an interest in Astronomy, and spent a lot of time doing that. And eventually, she wound up at the academy. ❥ｌｉｋｅｓ:
✔ Drawing
✔ Raspberry cordial
✔ Black tea
✔ Deep purple tulips
✔ Victorian style dresses
❥ｄｉｓｌｉｋｅｓ:
✖ Blood
✖ Vomit
✖ Broken glass
✖ Forget-me-nots
✖Alcohol ❥ｅｘｔｒａ ｉｎｆｏｒｍａｔｉｏｎ:
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 11:15 pm
Huong Le ｐｒｅｓｅｎｔｓ. . . 
Isador Bulcorb
ｄｅｐａｒｔｍｅｎｔ: Astronomy
Student
"What’s so hard to understand about life? Even an idiot like me can see that all you need to do is live."⋆ ⋆ ⋆ＴＨＥ ＲＥＳＯＮＡＮＣＥ ＳＫＩＥＳ ＦＩＬＥＳ⋆ ⋆ ⋆ ｃｌａｓｓｉｆｉｅｄ ❥ｎｉｃｋｎａｍｅ: Izzy
❥ａｇｅ: 14
❥ｇｅｎｄｅｒ:Female
❥ｈｅｉｇｈｔ ａｎｄ ｗｅｉｇｈｔ: 165cm/ 63kg
❥ｂｌｏｏｄ ｔｙｐｅ: O
❥ｓｅｘｕａｌ ｏｒｉｅｎｔａｔｉｏｎ: Likes girls.
❥ｓｔａｔｕｓ: Single
❥ｂｉｒｔｈｄａｙ: December 10th
❥ｚｏｄｉａｃ ｓｉｇｎ : Sagittarius
❥ａｐｐｅａｒａｎｃｅ: Standing at a rather short 5’5”, Izzy has a rather gawky build. That’s okay though since that means his elbows are as sharp as daggers. Since Izzy has the “boring” colorings of brown hair and eyes, he enjoys dressing himself in rainbow barf rather colorfully. Even with the school uniform, he will still try to add a splash of color even if it might not follow the dress code. Also, he wears a bandaid over his nose to not only look cool, but he also does it as a subtle way to cover up his crooked nose.
❥ｐｅｒｓｏｎａｌｉｔｙ: Izzy is an unfiltered ball of.... Izzy. He speaks his mind and can come off as rather rude, but then again, he is rude. He has a short fuse, which can lead to hopeless arguments. After all, he tends to not make sense, and it’s tough for him to see anything past that. It should also be mentioned that Izzy’s logic is impossible to understand, so don’t ever try to make sense of what he might talk about. Because of his openness, he is not bashful at all. In fact, the things he blurts out are bound to make anyone facepalm. He also has a big ego, and everything will wind up feeding it even more.
❥ｃｈａｒａｃｔｅｒ ｆｌａｗｓ:
✖Rebellious.
✖ Arrogant.
✖ Brash.
✖ Reckless.
✖ Blunt.
✖ Hot-headed.
✖ Lewd.
✖Not too bright.
✖ No shame.
✖ Overly competitive
❥ａｂｉｌｉｔｙ:(ONLY 1 SKILL AND PLEASE ELABORATE)
❥ｔａｌｅｎｔｓ:
- His... “creative” mind can lead to horrible interesting ideas and plans.
- Sports. He’s pretty good at being an active ball of energy when it comes to this.
- Catching. When stuff gets thrown at him, his first instinct is to catch it. If not with his hands, then it’ll be his face
❥ｂｉｏ: Being the only child in his family, Izzy had it rough. His parents were practically dictators in his life and raised him with an iron fist. Sure, his parents wanted what was best for him, but yeesh, when could kids ever see that? Izzy was definitely not an exception here. He practically lived under a rock with all the sheltering and isolating his parents did. He was homeschooled for a majority of his life, so that meant no friends. Hurray. Even other family members couldn’t help with that since his parents conveniently cut ties with them. Yippee. Izzy’s life revolved around academics since he apparently had to “focus all his attentions” to his studies. Not that it even did anything to begin with. He never understood it.
As if Izzy could honestly live that kind of life. He needed freedom, and that freedom came whenever he snuck out of the house to explore the world. Not literally of course. Soon enough, he managed to discover his love for sports when he started to hang out with his bros aka friends that he made by accident. This charade went on for quite some time until Izzy finally got sick of the pretending.
He came up with the best solution ever. That was to run away from home and never look back! In other words, he was being a coward for not standing up to his parents, but he’d never admit that.This eventually led to him enrolling himself into Resonance Skies Academy. ❥ｌｉｋｅｓ:
✔ Curves
✔ Girls
✔ Sports
✔ Junk food
✔ Victory
❥ｄｉｓｌｉｋｅｓ:
✖ Parents
✖ Learning
✖ Work
✖ Using his brain
✖ Vegetables ❥ｅｘｔｒａ ｉｎｆｏｒｍａｔｉｏｎ:
- He has a horrible sense in fashion.
- He registered under a fake name.
- Someone broke his nose in the past.
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2012 11:20 pm
approved. emotion_awesome You already know who Izzy's roommate is so...profile forum and all that jazz. emotion_awesome
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