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 Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2011 7:13 am
DGwar SorceressJacklyn DGwar SorceressJacklyn DGwar SorceressJacklyn Please calm down. It's too early to get upset... If the other two are just voices, why not connect them to a piece of armor or tech? Then that leaves you with the one summon with its own energy pool. Honestly, it's just the energy pool that's doing you in here. The general rule is only one summon if it has its own energy. I understand that the other two pretty much do nothing, which is why I suggested making them all parts of the same AI program. Which would bypass your energy pool problem.
Because I wanted them as three entities. There's a reason I tied them into my talent. I'll more than happily take the energy off of Jakk so I have to pay the 25 energy cost or so to use his only skill. However, making them one individual doesn't fit.
Also, I wrote the rules. It says might be limited to one summon. I had wrote it like that for a reason. Cases like this where one summon is THE summon and the other two are diddly and squat.
Sorry I'm a little worked up, I'm just really tired of being under the microscope. Especially when I can see no reason for some of the regulations.
If you look at it, they take up machine slots, and summon slots, and only two of them do anything. The third is a voice in my head that interfaces with my base, second one is a talking battery.
I'll remove Jakk's energy pool if it will make the difference, or lower it to 25 or 50 or 100. I really am not concerned with his energy pool, his design was merely to fill a void that I didn't want Kaela to have to fill.
Zex is nothing more than a glorified computer program, he shouldn't matter at all.
Please, I know who wrote the rules. It's why I said general. Remove Jakk's pool and have all three take from Kaela's pool and I think we can be approved here. Zex has no skills, and I can have Jakk use Kaela's pool. I'll edit it accordingly. Just a reminder, your gradient skills (E-SSS) can only be used up to rank. Otherwise, I would say you're approved.
That's generally implied, but if you want I'll add that in to each one.
You don't have to add it in but I just said it to make sure it was clear to you.
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2011 7:56 am
I just realized I never gave any of them speed/str stats.
I was thinking 0 str 12 speed for Kaela
0/3 for Jakk
0/1 for Zex
Does that work?
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2011 8:03 am
NOEL
* Just to clarify, this isn't a summon (it has to be physically present to be used, it can't be called or whatever), but I wouldn't really call it a pet either, as it's not... peaceful. It simply... is. It has to be tamed, though, and its energy pool is straight out of Raphael's. Any skill it uses cost him instead of it.
RPC NAME: RAPHAEL GILETTI
RPC RANK: MASTER
TYPE OF CREATURE: THINGY MAJIG
CREATURE RANK: S [STATS: 8/10]
CREATURE WEAKNESSES:
- Due to being purely offensive, Noel is rather easy to kill and is only really good for very well-planned assaults. Her body is relatively easy to pierce, save for her neck and her ribs (as well as her tail) and she has no defensive abilities.
- Noel is extremely wild and dangerous. If Raphael is passed out or anything of the sort, she will attack not only the enemy, but the allies as well. She won't attack Raphael, though. Their relationship is much like a berzerker and his/her tamer.
- Skills used by Noel cost an extra 50 energy, though this doesn't apply after the initial skill usage.
CREATURE SKILLS:
-- REAVER'S SWEEP (B) -- A simple attack, Noel will swipe her tail at the foe. However, the blades on the tail will begin to ripple as this attack happens, increasing her cutting capability by a fair amount.
-- OBEDIENCE (A PER POST) -- If Raphael becomes out of commission or simply does not want to fight, Noel can wield Roxanne and fight in his stead, though it is very energy consumptive and doesn't change her combat capabilities very much. She usually fights much like an animal, biting or making quick claw-sweeps, so she's not as good as a master swordsman or anything with a blade. Roxanne is a little different under her use, however. For example, it can be used in conjunction with her other skills. Skills such as Reaver's Sweep can actually be used ON Roxanne, making it ripple and strike quickly, thus making Noel a viable opponent with the blade.
-- WHIRLWIND (S) -- An attack that needs to be prepared for one post, Noel will begin to twist her legs, though instead of simply breaking, they will begin to build up energy for the next move. After this preparation post, where she may do nothing, Noel will immediately enter an extremely deadly state for the next two posts where her entire body goes berserk and flies around the entire field, the blades all around her slicing everything up in mere seconds. However, it's double - edged; allies of Raphael, even Raphael himself, are in extreme danger when this move is active.
RP SAMPLE: (I wanna see your opinion of it first surprised )
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2011 9:39 am
DGwar
I just realized I never gave any of them speed/str stats.
I was thinking 0 str 12 speed for Kaela
0/3 for Jakk
0/1 for Zex
Does that work?
Make Kaela's speed 10 and it's golden
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Posted: Thu Sep 01, 2011 2:14 pm
SorceressJacklyn Make Kaela's speed 10 and it's golden
Deal.
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Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 8:35 pm
Incubus Shane NOEL
* Just to clarify, this isn't a summon (it has to be physically present to be used, it can't be called or whatever), but I wouldn't really call it a pet either, as it's not... peaceful. It simply... is. It has to be tamed, though, and its energy pool is straight out of Raphael's. Any skill it uses cost him instead of it.
RPC NAME: RAPHAEL GILETTI
RPC RANK: MASTER
TYPE OF CREATURE: THINGY MAJIG
CREATURE RANK: S [STATS: 8/10]
CREATURE WEAKNESSES:
- Due to being purely offensive, Noel is rather easy to kill and is only really good for very well-planned assaults. Her body is relatively easy to pierce, save for her neck and her ribs (as well as her tail) and she has no defensive abilities.
- Noel is extremely wild and dangerous. If Raphael is passed out or anything of the sort, she will attack not only the enemy, but the allies as well. She won't attack Raphael, though. Their relationship is much like a berzerker and his/her tamer.
- Skills used by Noel cost an extra 50 energy, though this doesn't apply after the initial skill usage.
CREATURE SKILLS:
-- REAVER'S SWEEP (B) -- A simple attack, Noel will swipe her tail at the foe. However, the blades on the tail will begin to ripple as this attack happens, increasing her cutting capability by a fair amount.
-- OBEDIENCE (A PER POST) -- If Raphael becomes out of commission or simply does not want to fight, Noel can wield Roxanne and fight in his stead, though it is very energy consumptive and doesn't change her combat capabilities very much. She usually fights much like an animal, biting or making quick claw-sweeps, so she's not as good as a master swordsman or anything with a blade. Roxanne is a little different under her use, however. For example, it can be used in conjunction with her other skills. Skills such as Reaver's Sweep can actually be used ON Roxanne, making it ripple and strike quickly, thus making Noel a viable opponent with the blade.
-- WHIRLWIND (S) -- An attack that needs to be prepared for one post, Noel will begin to twist her legs, though instead of simply breaking, they will begin to build up energy for the next move. After this preparation post, where she may do nothing, Noel will immediately enter an extremely deadly state for the next two posts where her entire body goes berserk and flies around the entire field, the blades all around her slicing everything up in mere seconds. However, it's double - edged; allies of Raphael, even Raphael himself, are in extreme danger when this move is active.
RP SAMPLE: (I wanna see your opinion of it first surprised )
Sample please
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Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 8:39 pm
Wulf, get out of my customs thread please.
You no longer are in charge here.
@Shane, I almost want to say you need a talent for this unless you have a way of explaining this so it isn't a talent. Or providing a weakness to your character while it's out.
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Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 8:51 pm
DGwar
Wulf, get out of my customs thread please.
You no longer are in charge here.
@Shane, I almost want to say you need a talent for this unless you have a way of explaining this so it isn't a talent. Or providing a weakness to your character while it's out.
I could instead transfer it over to Lucien... he still has an open talent slot xD
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Posted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 8:54 pm
Incubus Shane DGwar
Wulf, get out of my customs thread please.
You no longer are in charge here.
@Shane, I almost want to say you need a talent for this unless you have a way of explaining this so it isn't a talent. Or providing a weakness to your character while it's out.
I could instead transfer it over to Lucien... he still has an open talent slot xD If you want to rework it for him, then quote me when you're ready.
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Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 7:16 am
Hey, you're in charge here now? Mind taking a look at my custom later? No rush though, I've waited this long I can wait a bit longer. It's just that I literally need this custom to start with my character.
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Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 7:40 am
Kato, repost it so I don't have to go searching for it.
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Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2011 8:26 am
FullbusterOrleans FullbusterOrleans  RPC Name: Vulcan Fullbuster Rpc Rank: Student (Keep in mind that my character is a Crow. And this will be the animal bound to him.) Type of Pet/Summon: Dragon. (This is the creature I am bonded to.) Summon/Pet Rank: Maximus' rank changes as Vulcan's does. It will go up ranks and gain new abilities and such as it goes along. Summon Skills: Size shift: Energy consumption depends on size addition subtraction, and can only shift to sizes his rank or below. Only skills of the size for the rank he is and below can be used. Meaning he can be at the A-rank size, and use the B-rank skills. The sizes for each rank, E-rank Height: One foot (when on all fours and neck arched/down lower) 3 foot six inches when on his hind legs, (And neck arched) Speed/strength: 10/3 Weight: 54 lbs (Due to the build of his body, and the weight of scales. despite its seemingly lack of strength at the lower ranks.) Wingspan: 6 feet Basic Description: In this form he is mainly speed reliant, and looks more like a young dragon. He has large wings, a bladed tail, and short horns. Capable of breathing flames with E-rank strength. This is a passive skill. D-rank Height: Two feet tall. (On all fours.) Four foot six inches when standing (Neck still arched, and on hind legs) Speed/Strength: 9/5 Weight: 75 lbs Wingspan: 8 feet Basic Description: In this form he has taken a leap forward in growth, doubling in size, and gaining a strength matching that of a basic humans while maintaining a decent speed. In this form his horns are larger, and his tails have grown also. The bladed spike on the end of his tail is now the size of a dagger rather than a small knife, and it is sharper. Spikes begin to emerge along his spine. Capable of breathing D-rank flames these flames are passive. C-rank Height: 4 foot (On all fours) 7 foot 6 inches (when standing on hind legs, and neck arched) Speed/strength: 7/7 Weight 123 lbs Wingspan: 12 feet Basic Description: At this rank he is able to carry one person. But only one. And it slows his speed by one. But that's not all he gains, at this point he is in the 'Teenage' stage of his growth. His spikes are larger, his flames stronger. His tails blade is now the size of a short sword (Now c-rank and passive, though this is as far as the passive firebreathing skills reach the rest will cost energy). B-rank Height: 8 feet (On all fours) 12 feet 11 inches (When standing on his hind legs) Speed/Strength: 5/10 Weight: 556 lbs Wingspan: 24 feet Basic Description: His size has doubled, he is even stronger than before, and his scales are getting even more durable. His tails blade is now a fairly wide blade and as long as a long sword. It is now developing a curve to it. A-rank Height: 16 feet (On all fours) 25 feet (standing on his hind legs) Speed/Strength: 4/14 Weight: 1125 lbs Wingspan: around 42 feet Basic Description: Once again his size has doubled. His scales harder, but they also weigh more slowing him down. But that matters not for his size and strength can make up for the lack of speed. The tail blade is about the size of a large curved great sword, He is a very menacing beast at this point. S-rank Height: 32 feet. (Nearly 50 feet tall when on his hind quarters.) Speed/Strength: 4/18 Weight: 2250 lbs Wingspan: Nearly 84 feet. Basic Description: At this point, the pact between him and Vulcan is becoming clear. As he exceeds the size of even the largest natural dragons. His strength goes nearly unmatched, yet he loses no more speed. His scales are rather durable, and his tail is now twice the size of any great sword. He is quite possibly at this point the most formidable dragon in all of Rykros. But it doesn't stop here. SS-rank Height: 64 feet. (nearly 100 feet when standing on his hind legs.) Speed/Strength: 1/20 Weight: 10,000 lbs. (This is an estimate. His true weight in this form is unmeasured.) Wingspan: 168 feet. Basic Description: At this stage he loses the ability to fly, he weighs far too much due to the muscle and scales he has built up, but that doesn't mean he can't cause unnaturally powerful gusts of wind with his powerful wings. Or use them to jump higher than most. His tail blade? You can just assume you don't want to get hit by this massive blade. When he breaths fire it would clearly cover most of the land before him. This is a truly monstrous form, imagine what it would be like for this beast to roar at you. twisted SSS-rank Height: 5 foot eleven inches. Speed/Strength: 11/11 Weight: 256 lbs Wingspan: 12 feet. Basic Description: In this form he takes the form of a humanoid, with wings and a tail. But don't be mislead, his strength is greater than that of any draconian and his speed in this form makes him nearly unmatchable in air combat. He is incapable of any fire breath attacks in this form. His skin is as durable as steel. And his claws, and talons (which appear, and disappear passively) can tear a hole in titanium with ease. Note: This form can be used passively outside of combat. But in battle it costs 200 energy each post. (Size does play a role in the skills below, and he is limited to those skills in the rank of the size he has taken and the ones below that.) E-rank: Flight Description: Maximus simply takes flight, and can maintain it as long as he likes. C-rank: Tail thrust Description: Maximus lashes out with his blade tail at speeds that double his normal moving speed. This allows for deflection of things and jabbing enemies that are nearby. B-rank: Pyro stream Description: Maximus releases a jet of flame from his mouth that reaches up to twenty foot in a blast the size of his mouth. Materials below the rank of this skill will easily be melted away. A-rank: Flame claws Maximus slashes with his claws and flames erupt from them and arch out in the direction he slashes. They can burn through materials this rank and below with ease. -Ten posts must pass before this skill can be used again. E-SS-rank: Roar of Maximus. Description: Maximus's normal roar may be terrifying, he SSS-rank: Kamekaze dive Description: Maximus flies straight up in the air as high as he can manage, and covers himself in flame (This doesn't harm him) then he flips in the air and plummets toward the ground the flames turn white as they burn at extreme temperatures and he crashes down onto the area, causing a 120 foot blast in all directions, anything within this area under this strength will be turned to ash. Except for Maximus of course. But Vulcan ((My rpc)) couldn't be anywhere near otherwise he too would be killed. Has his own energy pool. Because this will be Vulcan's one and only summon/pet. Ever. Because he is bound to it. Rp Sample: I don't really think this should be required for this... I described fairly well, or so I think? :/ I can, and will change a lot of things
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Posted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:47 pm
RPC Name:Rachel Alucard Rpc Rank:Student Type of Pet/Summon:Demon Weapon(Black Blood Manifestation) Summon/Pet Rank:C Rank Summon Speed/Strength:[7/6] Ciel[Bloody Vector's Human Manifested Form]  Bloody Vector, when not used in battle, changes itself into that of Rachel's younger brother, Ciel, they both have a mutualistic relationship and when Rachel is in danger, Ciel can defend her and himself, he cannot use the black blood techniques unless in weapon form BUT he can form his limbs into that of the arrow tip of bloody vector, allowing himself to attack and defend while in battle with Rachel when and if hes needed. Out of battle, only those with the black blood can see Ciel, since he was manifested from Rachel's black blood, but in battle, that effect ends and Ciel can be seen by everyone.He cannot speak but he can indeed see and hear, he is mute yet his other senses are well enhanced. Rp Sample:(I'll post my rp sample once I see what changes I need to make on it)
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Posted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 5:27 am
This is a really complex summon. Does this mean that in E form he can only use whatever is part of the E form,and in D form he can only use whatever is part of the D form? ETC? I see almost nothing wrong with this aside from an E rank summon being on par with a regular person for the most part. If you can give me a really good sample I'll be able to judge it better. If it helps I can even give you a post to respond to if you want to make it more realistic.
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Posted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 5:42 am
DGwar This is a really complex summon. Does this mean that in E form he can only use whatever is part of the E form,and in D form he can only use whatever is part of the D form? ETC? I see almost nothing wrong with this aside from an E rank summon being on par with a regular person for the most part. If you can give me a really good sample I'll be able to judge it better. If it helps I can even give you a post to respond to if you want to make it more realistic. That would be great if you could give me something to respond to, then I would be able to explain Ciel better
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