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 Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 4:53 am
Heart: Make your first bio longer and your good!
Azzurro: Approved!~
Akuma: Sorry, denied. You must make your bios a lot longer. Please fix it
Soul-E: Make your first bio longer and your alright!
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 6:07 am
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Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 5:56 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 5:59 am
Coati: Looks good, Approved!
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Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 10:52 pm
|I've edited the first bio~ Added more to it|
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Posted: Sat Mar 12, 2011 5:44 am
Heart: Good job, Approved!
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Posted: Sat Mar 12, 2011 1:58 pm
Under Construction!
Appearance:
_________PERSONAL INFO._________________________________________
Username:
Diablo en Musica 92
Character name:
Tomoya Akudo
Alias/Nickname:
Tomo, Akudo, or Aku
Birth Place
June 15th
Age:
16
Height:
5'4"
Weight:
145lbs
Sexual Interest:
Bisexual
Gender:
Male
Ethnicity:
Japanese & German
Markings/ Tattoos:
Cross Tattoo on Left Shoulder
Personality:
Tomoya is usually a very calm, shy, kind, and considerate individual that is willing to help others when ever he can. He tends to be dragged around by others, at times getting caught up in their mischief and in the end punishment. Tomoya also enjoys nature and music that he even plays the violin. But never less he enjoys getting to know others of nay back ground. In battle Tomoya seems to have a change in personality. He seems to be very serious, sadistic, arrogant, yet calm. He is also protective of his allies and friends and will not hesitate to take hits for them or kill to protect them if he has too.
Occupation:
Student & Musician
Aura Color & Shape:
Sea Green & the shape of it seems to resemble that of a Musical note (eighth note) that is found in music and played on instruments.
Likes:
Music
Nature
Sweets
Reading
Cooking
Studying
Friendship
Training
Quiet Places
Dislikes:
Sour Food
Loud Places
Witches
Demons
Fighting
Idiots
Excalibur
Arrogant People
__________BIO/ HISTORY_______________________________________
Bio/ History:
Biography Of Birth:
Biography Of Childhood:
Biography Of Teenager:
Biography Of Adult:
((If any))
__________RANK INFO.________________________________________
Race:
Meister
Current Partner:
((If applicable))
Current Rank:
Newbie
__________MEISTER INFO.________________________________________
Weapon Name and Appearance:
Abilities Description:
((If applicable))
Battle Style:
Stealth [ Speed ] & Defensive [ Defense ]
__________STATUS & ATTACK CHARTS_______________________________________ Quote: Status/ Skill Points:
25 || 25
Speed/Agility: 6
Strength/Endurance: 4
Reaction:4
Stamina: 5
Soul Power: 6
Quote: Attack Skills:
Attack Here
-(Info here)
Attack Here
-(Info here)
Attack Here
-(Info here)
Quote: Soul Based Skills:
Attack Here
-((START OFF WITH NONE!!!))
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Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 9:07 pm
Quote: Eww. I might redo the bio. But for now, its done. :]
[Edit] Gasp, Sorry @-@
I will next time D:  Username : Hero - K r o s
Character Name : Sorin Mài-Shí Kisaragi
Alias/Nickname : Sora | "Loki" | Shi
Appearance> > > Sorin, or as he refers to himself 'Loki', has dark brown hair. His hair is usually spiked up with a braid that is usually hidden under his large scarlet scarf. Along with his dark chestnut hair are his deep crimson eyes. Over his toned runner's body is usually his large scarlet scarf and his pinstripe coat. He has a thing for belts, just in case you wanted to know. Yes, his nails are painted a dark red (even though they're usually covered with black gloves). Hidden things worn by Sora are his orange beaded bracelet and moon necklace, both dear to him. Yeah, he wears glasses (even though he doesn't need them).Birth Place : ???, China
Age : Fifteen | 15
Height : 5'9"
Weight : 134
Sexual Interest : Female | Heterosexual
Gender : Male
Ethnicity : Chinese | Japanese | Italian
Markings/Tattoos : On the left side of his cheek is a small 'X' mark.
Occupation : Student
Aura Color : Upsdell Red
Personality > > > Loki isn't like the guy you pass by going to class that always seems to be there. Oh, and just 'cause he has red eyes doesn't make him a bad guy. He's that cool, yet mysterious, quiet guy in the corner that you know and admire. Heh, just kidding. Actually, Loki is pretty friendly to most people around him. Despite that cocky smirk thats usually on his face, he's pretty nice. But then again, he will act like any other guy. Likes
x x• 'X's and Pinstriped Things
x x• Candy
x x• Being Seen as 'cool'
x x• Bladed Weapons
x x• The Sky
x x• Nature
x x• Kendo ;D
x x• Large/Long Scarves and Belts
Dislikes
x x• Idiots
x x• Unreasoned Fighting
x x• Un-pinstriped clothing
x x•
»| Historical Information▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄  I - Birthx His father, Shin Kisaragi, had originated from Japan with Italian blood in him. Shin then moved to China, traveling on his own for research. This research was, actually, for Death City. Along the crossroads was Lei Mài-Shí, a young woman who worked in a dumpling shop. Shin entered the shop with great hunger, Lei serving him. As you'd expect, they fell in love. A year had passed after their meeting and Shin Kisaragi proposed. At August Twenty-First, 3:27AM, ???, China, Sorin Mài-Shí Kisaragi was born into the fine new world. He was born safely in an unknown town near the ends of the Yellow and Yangtze Rivers. His parents smiled, though their child was born in a small hut. II - Childhoodx Sorin's hometown was not very modern, nor was it rich in money. However, it was rich in agriculture. The soil was wondrous, the weather was never always-rainy nor always-sunny. This little village was peaceful from the impacts of modern day society. Sora always thought of this place to be boring, hoping to see the modern society. However, Sorin never thought his dream would actually come true. Sorin's hometown was never known for having wildfires, this was the first. 'Was it really a wildfire?' many thought. With their homes burned down, many headed east. Some headed south-west to the mountains.x At the age of nine, Sorin's small family arrived at China's coastal area. They bought tickets onto a ship to Japan. Shin held his excitement of going to his homeland. The ride wasn't too long. Japan then was like Japan today. Sorin was amazed by the new things he learned and saw. Once at Japan, the family stayed in Shin's housing area. Sorin was instantly enrolled to a nearby elementary school. He wore clothes that he had always wanted to wear. Though his eye color was different and he wasn't very fluent with japanese at the time, the son of Shin's friend was always there to help Sora out. III - Teen Yearsx While learning more about history at school, Sorin developed an interest in bladed weapons. He was enrolled in a kendo dojo with the help of his father. Soon his schools with a blade had quickly developed. His fathers' work, Shibusen Academy, acknowledged this and sent him an invitation at such a young age of thirteen. Sorin chose not to accept the invitation right away. He waited exactly two years before he accepted it. Within those two years, he had trained his skills with a blade. Not only did he 'train' he learned more about this 'Shibusen Academy' and what Meisters and Death Scythes were. Of course, just the simple basics.x [Insert Current Life]. IV - Adult Life[ It Takes Time... ]» | Rank Information▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄  Race
> > > Meister
Current Partner
> > > -- [Looking]
Current Rank
> > > Newbie» | Meister Information▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ Weapon Name and Description
> > > Name; ___DESC.___
Abilities
> > > Newbie
Battle Style
> > > I base my attacks off strength and speed.» | Stat and Attack Charts▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄▄ Quote: [ Attack Skills ]
Total 25
Speed/Agility - 6
Strength/Endurance - 7
Reaction - 4
Stamina - 5
Soul Power - 3
Quote: [ Soul Based Skills ] Attack Here
-((START OFF WITH NONE!!!))
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Posted: Fri Mar 18, 2011 9:34 pm
HERO - Approved - It seems okay, but next time please stay with the format we leave it in ^^ although it looks much nicer xD
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 12:34 am
Appearance:
Normal:
Witch Form:
In his witch form he wears a cloak with a large collar covering most of his face and his witch hat as a simple design but with three rooster tail feathers stiched to it.
_________PERSONAL INFO._________________________________________
Username:
Zarud Helviiryn
Character name:
Zarud Helviiryn
Alias/Nickname:
The Evening Rooster
Birth Place
London, England
Age:
42 (looks 18 )
Height:
5' 10"
Weight:
124 lbs
Sexual Interest:
Heterosexual
Gender:
Male
Ethnicity:
English
Markings/ Tattoos:
A rooster mark on each palm.
Personality:
Extremly lazy and easily bored. He also thinks that perfection is useless since a perfect world would be dull.
Occupation:
Witch
Aura Color:
Orange
Likes:
Sleeping
Night
Inactivity
Dislikes:
Hard work
Sun light
Perfection
__________BIO/ HISTORY_______________________________________
Bio/ History:
Biography Of Birth:
At Zarud birth he was tested by several witches to see if he possesed any magical talent. Despite being the child of a powerfull witch he showed no promise and was mostly ignored by everyone including his mother.
Biography Of Childhood:
When he reached the age of eight things changed for him. Rooster marks appeared on his palms and it was discovered that he did have a lot of magical potential but it could only be released through the marks. His mother was pleased but still didn't love him like a mother should. Zarud held a grudge against her for that and the first chance he got killed her with one of his egg bombs. It turned out to be a good move as the other witches had found out that she was supplying the meisters with information on their activities. He was adopted soon after by anther of the witches and taught to harness his destructive powers.
Biography Of Teenager:
Zarud had gone through training for a long time, but since he was very lazy it went slowly. Eventually he got his witch hat and was allowed to go about his own business and attend Witch Masts. He also recieved the title "Evening Rooster" in conjunction with his animal affinity and his preference to night time. During the meetings he found that a lot of the witches had dual identities in order to blend in. Zarud decided to do the same by covering himself up as a witch and creating the Soul Mimic Pot to draw attention away from him. It had proven very successfull against several meisters who came hunting for his soul and each of them left disappointed.
Biography Of Adult:
As he aged he kept his physical body at 18, not because it threw people off guard, but because he didn't want grey hair. Despite his current age he still has alot to learn and is only a low level witch. Though during his training he did take a shine to Spacial Magics and has been working on a way to use it with his rooster marks. For the moment there has been little success but given time he intends to perfect it.
__________RANK INFO.________________________________________
Race:
Witch
Current Partner:
None
Current Rank:
Newbie
__________MAGIC INFO.________________________________________
Magic Description:
All Zarud's spell require the use of his Rooster Marks in order to work. After the spell they have been used for is deactiveted or done the marks disappear, except for the marks on his palms. These marks are created when Zarud touches something.
Animal Form:
None
Battle Style:
Defense, Supportive
__________STATUS & ATTACK CHARTS_______________________________________ Quote: Status/ Skill Points:
25 (You start out with 25 points and can divide them amongst your skills however you choose.)
Speed/Agility: 6
Strength/Endurance: 3
Reaction: 7
Stamina: 2
Magic: 7
Quote: Known Magic Skills:
Egg Bomb (Rooster chicken rooster chicken)
- Forming an egg with an orange aura on any one rooster mark, the egg will explode within a proximity of 1m.
Soul Protect
- A common witch ability to mask the users soul from meisters.
Rooster Tails (rooster rooster chicken rooster)
- This spell creates a large rooster tail on any rooster mark Zarud chooses. These tails act as a shield and are effective against most attacks.
Quote: Concoctions:
Soul Mimic Pot
- The liquid inside the Soul Mimic Pot is designed to copy the soul wavelength of the first person to touch it. Although this has no offensive means it is very good as a distraction. One touched by someone else though the liquid becomes useless water.
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 1:06 pm
Appearance: 
_________PERSONAL INFO._________________________________________
Username: Kitiara_Fox
Character name: Kitiara Midoshi
Alias/Nickname: Kit (hates being called kit or kitty)
Birth Place London
Age: 16
Height: 5’6
Weight: 120
Sexual Interest: males, straight
Gender: female
Ethnicity: british
Markings/ Tattoos: has a crescent moon birthmark on her arm.
Personality: Kitiara is a sweet, gentle hearted, and well rounded girl and is only exclusive to showing these sides to her closest friends, children or animals. However, outside of these bonds, she is not adverse to showing a terrible temper, being stubborn, and can sometimes be a smart a**.
She is very passionate about certain topics and is often high spirited. But she'll grill you flat if you mess with her.
Occupation : Student
Aura Color : Soft silvery-blue
Likes : ღ Drawing
ღ Painting
ღ Ceramics and all other forms of art.
reading (fiction books, manga, poems, some romance and paranormal romance)
ღ Watching T.V. (anime, cartoons)
ღ Riding her horse
ღ Being outside around nature
ღ Sparing
playing her guitar
playing Games (computer, hand held, ect)
ღ Being around her pets, friends, and family
ღSwimming
ღClimbing trees
ღSinging
ღ Theatre
ღ Taking in animals and helping them
ღCute boys ღ
ღChildren
ღfull moons , rain and snow
ღ hotsprings
ღ beaches
ღwalking alone in a calm area
ღParks(swings)
ღPlaying tricks (mischief )
❤Pocky (chocolate and almond crush)
❤YanYan (chocolate only)
❤Botan Rice Candy
❤ Pomegranate
❤Apple and most fruit
❤Spicy Food
❤Peppers
❤Chocolate and most sweets
❤Wine
❤Green Tea
❤Juice
❤Latte and cappuccino
❤Soda-Pepsi and root beer
❤Tea
❤Hot Cocoa
Dislikes: ✗Arrogant males and people in general
✗Bullies
✗Those who hurt children or animals
✗Those who harm nature or environment
✗Nonfiction or history books
✗Math
✗School
✗People messing with her friends or family
✗Hair being messed with
✗People telling her how a book or anime or manga ends
✗Being interrupted while reading, drawing or any of her other hobbies
✗Seeing an animal hurt
✗Cooking
✗Spiders
✘Saki
✘Broccoli
✘Brussel sprouts
✘black licorice
✘plain rice
✘certain spices on food (pizza spice in Chinese food)
✘Pink peppercorn in chocolate
✘Egg Drop soup
✘all shrimp but butterfly shrimp
__________BIO/ HISTORY_______________________________________
Bio/ History:
Biography Of Birth: Her parents were a British painter who moonlighted as a musician, while her father was a professor. On one of his many travels he stopped in at a café and heard her singing, being amazed with her voice. He asked her out and the two connected. Eventually the two married and settled down in London. A few years had passed and the two were blessed with their first child. It was a little boy, not long after the two were blessed with the second child. They named her Kitiara and her older brother Darian.
Biography Of Childhood: As soon as she learnt to walk and talk, her parents began schooling her and her brother. She was taught how to play various instruments and in singing. She was taught how to read and write by her father, though she found history rather boring. Little did she know her father had been a meister before retiring. When she got older some strange men came over and asked for her father’s help. The strange man didn’t like when her father denied their request, and got her first glimpse of a man turning into a blade. After things calmed down her father explained things to her, telling her all about the hidden world. He didn’t want her to get into it, wanting to protect her. She secretly did more research and found the stories amazing.
Biography Of Teenager: When Kitiara hit the teen years a lot changed, her brother left for college and she worked long hours at her parents shop. All this time her father kept her out of the world he grew up in, but it didn’t last when his baby started showing signs. At first he was afraid she may be a weapon, him having a brother that was one. Her parents finally had to give in and admit she had a gift. They contacted the academy and flew out to meet him. After the interview and tour of the school, her parents bid their goodbyes and left their baby to her future journey. She was super excited about moving to the school but soon realized how scary being alone was. Her first couple days were hard due to the fact she had no idea what to do and came in late.
Biography Of Adult:
((If any))
__________RANK INFO.________________________________________
Race:
((Meister))
Current Partner:
Current Rank:
((Newbie))
__________MEISTER INFO.________________________________________
Weapon Name and Appearance:
Abilities Description:
((If applicable))
Battle Style:
((Strength, Speed, Defense, Supportive, ETC. CHOOSE TWO))
__________STATUS & ATTACK CHARTS_______________________________________ Quote: Status/ Skill Points:
25 (You start out with 25 points and can divide them amongst your skills however you choose.)
Speed/Agility: (How fast can you move and react.) 7
Strength/Endurance: (How much damage you can inflict and take.) 4
Reaction : (How well you react to your attack/ Magic and others attacks & magic) 6
Stamina: (How long it takes for you to get tired.) 4
Soul Power: (This will increase the power of you Soul based attacks, including Soul Resonate and Soul Wavelength) 4
Quote: Attack Skills:
Attack Here
-(Info here)
Attack Here
-(Info here)
Attack Here
-(Info here)
Quote: Soul Based Skills:
Attack Here
-((START OFF WITH NONE!!!))
i dont have a partner yet so i wasnt sure if i was supposd to fill the rest out or not.
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 1:45 pm
Zarud - Denied - Needs MUCH more History and remove one Magic skill, you start off with three.
Kitiara - Pending - Not finished, put stats together and Battle styles, although you don't have a weapon we must understand what kind of fighter your character will be once they get a weapon.
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Posted: Fri Apr 08, 2011 2:00 pm
Okay I editted what you said. Though I'm not sure how to lengthen the Birth section... neutral
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