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 Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 11:28 pm
Hey little dude ^_^ Sorry it took so long, but I finally started writing The Sea of Clouds. It's going to suck for awhile and the first two chapters are probably full of suck (I wrote it around 1 in the morning, my inspiration tends to blossom but my ability usually goes into hiding at that time) but hey, it's better than nothing. I figured you'd be interested in reading it or at least browsing the photobombs I upload onto my personal blog I Has a Pen. Feel free to bug the crap out of me or Angel to keep writing more. http://ssoguild.wordpress.com/
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Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2012 4:56 pm
Bren Lyndale Hey little dude ^_^ Sorry it took so long, but I finally started writing The Sea of Clouds. It's going to suck for awhile and the first two chapters are probably full of suck (I wrote it around 1 in the morning, my inspiration tends to blossom but my ability usually goes into hiding at that time) but hey, it's better than nothing. I figured you'd be interested in reading it or at least browsing the photobombs I upload onto my personal blog I Has a Pen. Feel free to bug the crap out of me or Angel to keep writing more. http://ssoguild.wordpress.com/ I'm replying before reading this XD But do you know that Silas is a Sanskrit word? And you have Bren, whose name is English. SomI guess this is a case of Bob and Aerith.
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Posted: Sat Jun 23, 2012 5:26 pm
Moon at Dawn Bren Lyndale Hey little dude ^_^ Sorry it took so long, but I finally started writing The Sea of Clouds. It's going to suck for awhile and the first two chapters are probably full of suck (I wrote it around 1 in the morning, my inspiration tends to blossom but my ability usually goes into hiding at that time) but hey, it's better than nothing. I figured you'd be interested in reading it or at least browsing the photobombs I upload onto my personal blog I Has a Pen. Feel free to bug the crap out of me or Angel to keep writing more. http://ssoguild.wordpress.com/ I'm replying before reading this XD But do you know that Silas is a Sanskrit word? And you have Bren, whose name is English. SomI guess this is a case of Bob and Aerith. Did you know that I didn't know that, and nor do I care much? heart But thank you. Edit: I'm rereading it and I feel like barfing. It's terrible. I KNEW WRITING IT AT ONE IN THE MORNING WAS A BAD IDEA!
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2012 2:47 am
Bren Lyndale Moon at Dawn Bren Lyndale Hey little dude ^_^ Sorry it took so long, but I finally started writing The Sea of Clouds. It's going to suck for awhile and the first two chapters are probably full of suck (I wrote it around 1 in the morning, my inspiration tends to blossom but my ability usually goes into hiding at that time) but hey, it's better than nothing. I figured you'd be interested in reading it or at least browsing the photobombs I upload onto my personal blog I Has a Pen. Feel free to bug the crap out of me or Angel to keep writing more. http://ssoguild.wordpress.com/ I'm replying before reading this XD But do you know that Silas is a Sanskrit word? And you have Bren, whose name is English. SomI guess this is a case of Bob and Aerith. Did you know that I didn't know that, and nor do I care much? heart But thank you. Edit: I'm rereading it and I feel like barfing. It's terribleI KNEW WRITING IT AT ONE IN THE MORNING WAS A BAD IDEA! Hey, it's not that bad. emotion_yatta But then again it's the author's choice if they think a particular part is bad. But you should don't do too much editing or else you'll be like Roald Dahl (he's good but the point is he only written only a few books)
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2012 3:26 pm
I love his work o_e I'm going to edit once I've got all of it written, going to start on chapter 3 today or tomorrow.
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Posted: Sun Jun 24, 2012 7:04 pm
Bren Lyndale I love his work o_e I'm going to edit once I've got all of it written, going to start on chapter 3 today or tomorrow. Heh. I also like his books, but he's the only slow worker I can remember from the top of my head. You might want to consider merging the chapters, because I once saw a book with over hundreds of chapters with only half a page for each. Trust me, it would get really hard to navigate when you write more, and plotholes are annoying that way.
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2012 11:34 am
Moon at Dawn Bren Lyndale I love his work o_e I'm going to edit once I've got all of it written, going to start on chapter 3 today or tomorrow. Heh. I also like his books, but he's the only slow worker I can remember from the top of my head. You might want to consider merging the chapters, because I once saw a book with over hundreds of chapters with only half a page for each. Trust me, it would get really hard to navigate when you write more, and plotholes are annoying that way. Believe me, I will, just not right now. One normally does that when they're done not when they're still writing. Yeah, I normally read books with 80+ chapters that are about 4-7 pages long, but the difference is that they switch character viewpoints a lot and have many subplots around the main plot. I'm definitely not that good of a writer yet. Right now there's only 3 real characters in my story, 4 if you count Kareen but I doubt I'll ever use her. Plus after (spoiler) happens we won't be seeing much of Elesia. (Actually you probably already know what Spoiler is, since you're the one that knows the most about my story out of everybody and you're probably my most attentive and interested reader)
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2012 9:10 pm
Moon at Dawn Bren Lyndale Hey little dude ^_^ Sorry it took so long, but I finally started writing The Sea of Clouds. It's going to suck for awhile and the first two chapters are probably full of suck (I wrote it around 1 in the morning, my inspiration tends to blossom but my ability usually goes into hiding at that time) but hey, it's better than nothing. I figured you'd be interested in reading it or at least browsing the photobombs I upload onto my personal blog I Has a Pen. Feel free to bug the crap out of me or Angel to keep writing more. http://ssoguild.wordpress.com/ I'm replying before reading this XD But do you know that Silas is a Sanskrit word? And you have Bren, whose name is English. SomI guess this is a case of Bob and Aerith.
 I DON'T CARE IF MY NAME IS A SANSKRIT WORD I EFFING LOVE IT.
By the way, now you get to harass me instead of my mule and Angel.
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2012 10:26 pm
Captain Silas Manner Moon at Dawn Bren Lyndale Hey little dude ^_^ Sorry it took so long, but I finally started writing The Sea of Clouds. It's going to suck for awhile and the first two chapters are probably full of suck (I wrote it around 1 in the morning, my inspiration tends to blossom but my ability usually goes into hiding at that time) but hey, it's better than nothing. I figured you'd be interested in reading it or at least browsing the photobombs I upload onto my personal blog I Has a Pen. Feel free to bug the crap out of me or Angel to keep writing more. http://ssoguild.wordpress.com/ I'm replying before reading this XD But do you know that Silas is a Sanskrit word? And you have Bren, whose name is English. SomI guess this is a case of Bob and Aerith. I DON'T CARE IF MY NAME IS A SANSKRIT WORD I EFFING LOVE IT.
By the way, now you get to harass me instead of my mule and Angel.
BUT HOW!?! gonk Did the admins got it back for you or did you just recovered it via other means?
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2012 11:42 pm
I pulled a ninja out of my a** and sold it to the government.
But nah, no staffers were involved.
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2012 11:45 pm
But yeah, I'm back mainly because I was able to get help for my depression and suicidal tendencies. My therapist is actually very nice and I started a workout routine with my friend Juli, and things are getting generally better. I haven't cut in a long time since my release from the hospital and I have found reasons to live, basically.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2012 12:23 am
Captain Silas Manner But yeah, I'm back mainly because I was able to get help for my depression and suicidal tendencies. My therapist is actually very nice and I started a workout routine with my friend Juli, and things are getting generally better. I haven't cut in a long time since my release from the hospital and I have found reasons to live, basically. This. This is good to hear. <3
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2012 7:10 pm
--Beckys Nightmare-- Captain Silas Manner But yeah, I'm back mainly because I was able to get help for my depression and suicidal tendencies. My therapist is actually very nice and I started a workout routine with my friend Juli, and things are getting generally better. I haven't cut in a long time since my release from the hospital and I have found reasons to live, basically. This. This is good to hear. <3
You know what else is good to hear? The Youtube song on my profile.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2012 7:22 pm
Captain Silas Manner You know what else is good to hear? The Youtube song on my profile. *le listens* FFFFF, that is good to hear. emotion_dowant
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2012 7:27 pm
--Beckys Nightmare-- Captain Silas Manner You know what else is good to hear? The Youtube song on my profile. *le listens* FFFFF, that is good to hear. emotion_dowant
Please feel free to accept my Fiend Request at your utmost convenient leisure.
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