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PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2010 10:06 pm


Wow there is so much information on SoiFon lacking here ^
PostPosted: Fri Dec 24, 2010 11:04 am


what more is necessary......

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 24, 2010 1:04 pm


Appearance, there may be a few who have not seen the show, describer her face, her appearance, and the usual setting she brings about when she enters a room.

There is MUCH more history on her than you mentioned in the profile, I never said to include every detail, but just a breif synposis.

Try to include pictures, describe the zanpakuto spirit, is it a simple hornet just flying around her?

From what I recall in the show, her zanapkuto spirit appears to be a pixie with brown hair dressed in armor that is colored like a hornet, her right arm (I think) is covered with a huge stinger similiar to Soi Fons shikai

Describe how Soi Fon's shikai looks like. A name tells us nothing.

In bankai abilities you have a few spelling errors

"Shots" should be "Shoots"
"Crates" should be "Creates"

Soi Fon doesnt only do Shunko, from what I understand she can do other forms of Kido

Soi Fon defeinitely has Hoho. Hoho is Shunpo is it not? (correct me if I am wrong please) Soi FOn has one of the best advantages in Shunpo than any other captain known. She is extremely fast, almost as fast as Yourichi.

I like your "Other Information" though, you pointed out a very interesting factor that Soi Fon has.


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A key thing about RP is details, story settings, make the person feel what your character is feeling. If you lack detail then it is not worth posting, I'm not saying to emphasize on minor details like

"Soi Fon walked down the empty, barren hallway. The hallway was red with wooden borders with a oak floor, a dim light casting her shadow as she walked. Her foot slowly lifted off the ground as it unsettled some dust that had been there before. Gradually lifting her foot to take the next step, she blinked, her eyes opening and closing, as she placed it on the ground once again."

Okay thats too much detail ^

But something that just describes the mood of the scene is perfect. I know this is just a profile, but when we need to look up info on a character, we need details. We shouldn't have to refer to Wikipedia to get informaiton on her.
PostPosted: Fri Dec 24, 2010 1:15 pm


@Raine
...You never said anything about not referring to Bleach Wiki. xd
I'll be in towns if ya wanna join me. 3nodding

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 25, 2010 10:47 am


Heres what i can up with for SoiFon
Username: SGT Nicol Bolas
Character Name: Soi Fong
Race: Shinigami
Age: 100
Birthday (optional): February 11
Height: 4ft 9
Weight (optional): 84 pounds
Eyes: silver
Hair: Blue
Unusual Features:
Blood Type (optional): unknown
Affiliation: Division
Squad: 2nd company
Rank: Captain
Relatives (optional): her Son: Soi Fong, and Kenpachi Zaraki former boyfriend
Appearance: Looks exactly like she does in the show.
History: She is the captain of the 2nd company. Also the leader of the punishment force and stealth squad.
Zanpakuto Name: Suzumebachi
Sealed State: Sword across her lower back.
Zanpakuto Spirit: hornet
Release: "Sting all Enemies to Death"
Shikai: Nigeki Kessatsu
Shikai Abilities: strikes you two times in one spot you die.
Bankai (optional): Jakuhō Raikōben
Bankai Abilities: Shoots it and it Creates a big explosion destroying what ever it is shot at.
Kido: Shunko
Hoho: none
Other Information: in battle she is very quick and agile. She strikes when you least expect it. The atmosphere she brings to a room is when she enters everyone gets silent for a minute and they start talking again.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 25, 2010 12:10 pm


That's a good try SGT Nicol! =)
If I were you and was gonna roleplay Soi Fon, it'd look something like this..

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Username: SGT Nicol Bolas

Character Name: Soi Fong

Race: Shinigami

Age: 196 (estimated)

Birthday (optional): February 11

Height: 4ft 11in

Weight (optional): 84 pounds

Eyes: Midnight Blue

Hair: Jet-black

Unusual Features:

Blood Type (optional): Unknown

Affiliation: Division

Squad: 2nd Division

Rank: Captain

Relatives (optional): Kenpachi Zaraki (former boyfriend), Zaraki Fong (son)

Appearance: User Image

History: Soi Fong was born under the name Shaolin Fong, and categorized as a 9th Generation member of the Fong family, the youngest of six siblings. She joined the Executive Militia of the Onmitsukidō, being a family tradition; upon entering, she dropped the name Shaolin and inherited the codename her grandmother used, Soi Fong. Years later, after all her siblings died, she was put under the teachings of Yoruichi Shihōin, who disappeared after many antics involving Kisuke Urahara. She later trained to become the Captain of the Second Division, Commander of the Onmitsukidō, and the Corp Commander of the Executive Militia.
Zanpakuto Name: Suzumebachi
Sealed State: User Image
Zanpakuto Spirit: Suzumebachi
Release: "Sting all Enemies to Death, Suzumebachi!"
Shikai: User Image
Shikai Abilities: As its first step, Suì-Fēng stabs her enemy with Suzumebachi’s blade. Not only leaving a rather deep wound, the attack leaves a butterfly-shaped stamp on the victim’s body. Spreading from the center of the wound, known as Hōmonka, this stamp becomes the target of Suì-Fēng’s second attack. If struck in this same spot that was hit the first time, the person will inevitably die and thus illustrate "Death in Two Steps." When the ability takes effect, a larger crest quickly spreads out from the two smaller ones, completely destroying the victim's body. This ability is caused by a venom that Suzumebachi secretes. When it enters the target's body, it spreads throughout their body in a matter of minutes, if not seconds, destroying it without a trace. The effect of the poison takes slightly longer to work for those who have enhanced spiritual power.
Bankai (optional): Jakuhō Raikōben
Bankai Appearance: User Image
Bankai Abilities: Being a ranged weapon of the artillery sort, Jakuhō Raikōben has the ability to launch the missile attached to its base. To do so, Suì-Fēng must first raise and aim the huge missile, using the slits present in her face guard to be able to see while doing so. Once targeted, small fins extend from numerous points along the missile, before it is fired. It then tracks its target for a precision strike. After a successful hit, the missile creates a powerful and massive explosion. Soi Fong is capable of firing more than one missile at the same level of power. This attack has a normal limit of firing no more than one missile every three days; doing so more often taxes her noticeably.

Kido: Shunko

Hoho: None

Other Information: In battle, Si Fong is very quick and agile; she strikes when you least expect it. The atmosphere she brings to a room is when she enters, everyone gets silent for a minute and they start talking again afterwards.


This is just an example of a profile. The pictures of the zanpakuto, shikai, bankai, and Soi Fong help add depth and understanding to roleplaying a canon character, such as Soi Fong. I hope this helps somewhat. 3nodding  

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 25, 2010 3:18 pm


Bleach Wiki is still part of Wikipedia lol

You still haven't mentioned the Shunpo, but the profile Hime put up was a LOT better, detailed, more information, was perfect, that is how a profile should look like.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 25, 2010 6:50 pm


Username: OriSTELLOhime

Character Name:

Yūganahana "Arisawa" Kasumiōji

Race:
Shinigami

Age:
25 (appears 12)

Birthday (optional):
April 26th

Height:
4ft. 8in.

Weight (optional):
83 lbs.

Eyes:
Red with a hint of pink

Hair:
Blonde, extends to her feet, but is wrapped up in a loop

Unusual Features:
Two red vine tattoos on her left shoulder and mid-back

Blood Type (optional):
O negative

Affiliation:
Loner, soon to be Division

Squad:
7

Rank:
Captain

Relatives (optional):
Rurichiyo Kasumiōji (mother), no known father

Appearance:
User Image

Personality:
Yūganahana is a very calm, respectful person, but only shows respect to those of the Four Noble Families. In battle, her mood is very cold and cruel, always attempting to find the most painful and emotionless ways to torture her opponents; strangers have nicknamed her "Demon Child" because of this when observing her in street fights.

History:
Human Life:
Yūganahana Kasumiōji was abandoned as a child in the human world by her mother Rurichiyo at the age of four months, due to the hardships of being cared for. Back then the mother left her lying in a dark alley behind Karakura High School. A high school female student with spiky black hair found her one day on her away home from Tai Kwon Do training, and took her in, training her for years with the help of a copper-haired woman, giving her the nickname "Arisawa" for being such a brave child to do many dangerous stunts on her own. However, Yūganahana died at the age of six after a shooting at the local market, in which her caretaker was unable to protect her.
80th Sector of the Rukon District
She was sent to Soul Society and force to abide on her own in the 80th Sector of the Rukon District, considering how poor she was and couldn't even afford a simple hut; life was very rough, having to struggle for food and shelter on her own, changing location every few days, from hiding a back alley to taking temporary custody in someone else's hut. The girl one day ran into a rampaging, unowned zanpakuto spirit, who claimed to be assassinating every Noble Family member she could find. Yūganahana tried to stop her, and was drastically bruised and battered as a result. On the verge of death, a shinigami with copper-orange hair helped her out, saving her life and putting an end to the zanpakuto; she then took the human to Soul Society with her.
The Seireitei
((yet to be edited))

Zanpakuto Name:
Sakurahime

Sealed State:
User Image

Zanpakuto Spirit:
User Image

Release:

"Replenish thy beautiful grace, Sakurahime."

Shikai:
User Image

Shikai Abilities:

Wind of Frozen Flowers-
An icy wind softly flows from the blade of the zanpakuto, then picks up speed and becomes colder, inducing possible frostbite and a strong aroma of cherry blossoms. When concentrated into a very light aura, it explodes into a wide screen of smoke, enabling a swift getaway or sneak attack if necessary.
Decoy Pressure-
This enables the use of creating a false trace of reiatsu or spiritual pressure.
Scatter-
Yūganahana can move around at high speeds, creating previous silhouettes of herself, giving the image there're multiple clones of her. In reality, they're previous flash traces, but look solid and real enough to be tangible.

Bankai (optional):
Kuro Sakurahime (Radiant Cherry Blossom Princess)

Bankai Abilities:
Imagery-
Yūganahana can morph herself into the structure of other people, not monsters or other creatures, while still keeping her voice and her own powers; she does not have the power to duplicate the abilities of another opponent.
Nine Wind Prison Barrier-
This is a technique that disables whoever is caught in the attack; it generates nine vertical rods that can twine with each other like vines, locking in place the limbs of any person or creature. The attack is rendered useless after five minutes, because it will dissolve in a whirl of mini cyclones.

Kido:
All learned, minus number 99, Great Seal. These spells are preferred rather than fighting with her blade, which would only be used for defense, and, on occasions, offense.

Hoho:
None, can't use shunpo

Other Information: Yūganahana is a vegetarian and can't stand to be around those who are eating meat at the time; she can easily fight with her fists and feet in hand-to-hand combat.
 

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 25, 2010 6:53 pm


Denied :/

XD jk APPROVED IT IS SEXY biggrin This what I am talking about! Now that is a profile
PostPosted: Sat Dec 25, 2010 6:58 pm


Aw thank you! One last Christmas hug before my computer logs me off!!! blaugh *mega-glomps* heart

*looks over at Rangiku, who's walking drunk with a crooked santa hat and a skimpy santa-suit* stare Somebody got high off eggnog. xd

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PostPosted: Sat Dec 25, 2010 7:30 pm


Thanks! *hugs back*

Now... Rangiku.... wink

*Raine Jumps on top of Rangiku and the sound of rustling and muffled noises can be heard* heart heart heart heart heart
PostPosted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 3:40 pm


Hime, If you are around, I'm about to post the kid character and I talked about. Let me know if you are around by responding to this.

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 5:37 pm


i couldnt figure out how to put pics in the posting. crying
PostPosted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 5:59 pm


That's easy Nicol! See the gray bar above the emotes that say IMG or IMGleft? Click on that, then type in the image address or "copy shortcut". Sadly it only works with photobucket

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 6:25 pm


Username: Wire_Colossus
Character Name: Kenny “The God Child”
Race: half Shinigami, half quincy
Age: 5
Birthday (optional): unknown
Height: 3ft nothing
Weight (optional): 35 pounds.
Eyes: a beautiful blue
Hair: short and scraggly orange hair the same color as Ichigo Kurosaki’s hair
Unusual Features: his speed. Despite his size and age, he somehow has the spirit energy and the control to have mastered the highest level of shunpo and to have surpassed it.
Blood Type (optional): unknown
Affiliation: Division
Squad: unknown
Rank: unknown
Relatives (optional): his mom and dad are both dead sadly.
Appearance: A little boy smaller that Yachiru wearing a shinigami uniform, but carrying a little wooden 2by4 carved pirate sword.
Personality: silly and kind. Fun loving and adventurous. Needs a hero, someone to look up to and believe in.
History: Don’t ask. You’d cry for days if I told you. But I will tell you this. His mother made every captain in the seireitei, including the head captain, the god parents of her son before she died. However no one was informed of this until after she died, when a letter bearing the news was suddenly sent to all the offices of all the captains and head captains. This is why Everyone who has known him and knows of the letters, calls him “The God Child” when he not in their presence.
Zanpakuto Name: Ritoru Sogeki
Sealed State: a pirate sword that looks like it was carved from a 2by4 board.
Zanpakuto Spirit: a samurai warrior in full armor with a sniper rifle .
Release: Let’s go! Ritoru Sogeki
Shikai: a small and simple little bow, with a quiver that never empties of arrows unless Keeny runs out of spirit energy.
Shikai Abilities: fires several kinds of arrows, a few favorites being boxing glove tipped arrows, suction cup tipped arrows, pie tipped arrows, band-aid tipped arrows, and water balloon tipped arrows. Each type of arrow has a power entirely it’s own, usually symbolized by the object at it’s tip. Because of Kenny’s youth his zanapkuto’s powers are not set in stone, and will likely evolve and change for the better when he gets old enough.
Bankai (optional): None
Bankai Abilities: None
Kido: none
Hoho: maxed out
Other Information: In battle this kid can be extremely dangerous, and not because of his zanpakuto. He moves so fast that no one, not even the fastest of the captains can catch him. Set a trap for him he makes it backfire, try and catch him and he makes you look like a fool. The only way to catch him, is when he stops and something keeps his attention long enough for you to catch him. But be warned, he can be really hyper if you give him too much sugar by accident. A little bit is ok, but too much and he'll run you ragged just being hyper.
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