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Yasashii Gin Hime Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:45 pm
Here is the first line to my 14 line poem called Blind Sight. I hope you like it. whee
Everything could be a fallacy
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:47 pm
We could be blind as to never see
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Yasashii Gin Hime Vice Captain
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Yasashii Gin Hime Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:48 pm
The world as we know it could be fake
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:49 pm
Expanding before us in a bottomless lake.
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Yasashii Gin Hime Vice Captain
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Yasashii Gin Hime Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:50 pm
Life could be a complex mirage
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:51 pm
Life darkness we could never dodge
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Yasashii Gin Hime Vice Captain
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Yasashii Gin Hime Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:52 pm
What if insanity was the only way out?
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:53 pm
Would you accept it as the only route?
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Yasashii Gin Hime Vice Captain
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Yasashii Gin Hime Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:54 pm
Even though I'd like to think not
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:55 pm
This blindness is a battle better not fought.
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Yasashii Gin Hime Vice Captain
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Yasashii Gin Hime Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:56 pm
Whether it's past, future, present, or now
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:57 pm
The apocalyptic dark hovers like a magic vow
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Yasashii Gin Hime Vice Captain
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Yasashii Gin Hime Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 5:59 pm
So how do we live without our sight?
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 6:01 pm
The only way is to stumble through endless night...
The end! 4laugh Does anyone like it?
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Yasashii Gin Hime Vice Captain
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Yasashii Gin Hime Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 6:02 pm
I've taken up the whole 6th page with my poem. Should I feel bad about it?
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