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 Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 12:22 pm
Character: Sypher Senju
Technique Name: Strangling Clouds
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu/Bloodline
Element: Water/Earth
Description: Sypher creates a thick mist using the water in surrounding areas that requires a continuous string of hand signs. The mist is so thick it can hold small, light things like leaves and sticks but Sypher fills it with seeds. The seeds are vine seeds and begin growing the minute they enter the mist. The vines are very light colored, weigh almost nothing, blend into the mist and are deceptively strong. They drape themselves over anyone in the mist and hang everywhere, seemingly harmless. When Sypher stops signing and the mist starts to dissipate, the vines react badly and start tightening. They slowly fall all over the ground and the people in the mist, strangling them. Once the mist is completely gone, the vines die.
The mist lasts 4 posts.
The vines last 3 posts.
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Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 9:43 pm
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 10:02 am
Character: Sypher Senju
Technique Name: Draining Vines
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu/Bloodline
Element: (Water, Earth)
Description: Sypher attacks with a hard spray of water that is filled with seeds. The seeds are small and slid easily under any exposed skin where they immediately take root. The seeds begin to expand, making the skin bulge and burst as they grow larger. They also extend vines that are so thin they can weave though blood vessels without harming them. These vines expel a digestive fluid that allows them to break down skin and bone and then absorb them. The opponent is left a blob of blood and organs if Sypher doesn't cancel the attack and if the opponent doesn't make it to the hospital in time.
Attack lasts 5 posts
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:01 pm
Mmmmungh. It's a bit too strong. x _ x
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:10 pm
Shinsua Mmmmungh. It's a bit too strong. x _ x
What should I do then? Change the rank? If you avoid the spray, it doesn't hurt you...and the seeds can be removed at the hospital or by a med shinobi...should I add that?
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:13 pm
Mmm... you should make apparent what the spray is like. How wide is it? Is it a spray like a mist, or a jet stream? Maybe you should have it be like, "If pressured contact with the spray is sustained for a small amount of time (2 posts), the seeds within will sink into the target's skin." or something like that. . _ .
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:19 pm
_CioccolatoRaggaza_
Character: Sypher Senju
Technique Name: Draining Vines
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu/Bloodline
Element: (Water, Earth)
Description: Sypher attacks with a hard jet of water, 3-4feet wide and uncontrolled, that is filled with seeds. The seeds are small and the pressure of the jet forces under the skin where they immediately take root. The seeds begin to expand, making the skin bulge and burst as they grow larger, feeding on the body's body fluids. They also extend vines that are so thin they can weave though blood vessels without harming them. These vines expel a digestive fluid that allows them to break down skin and bone and then absorb them. The opponent is left a blob of blood and organs if Sypher doesn't cancel the attack and if the opponent doesn't make it to the hospital in time. The attack can also be cancelled by a medical shinobi who extracts and heals the wounds.
Attack lasts 5 posts
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:24 pm
Mmm... make sure you note that it obviously has to be exposed skin to immediately work, and it's good to go. ; w ;
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2011 7:30 am
_CioccolatoRaggaza_
Character: Sypher Senju
Technique Name: Draining Vines
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu/Bloodline
Element: (Water, Earth)
Description: Sypher attacks with a hard spray of water that is filled with seeds. The seeds are small and slid easily under any exposed skin where they immediately take root. The seeds begin to expand, making the skin bulge and burst as they grow larger. They also extend vines that are so thin they can weave though blood vessels without harming them. These vines expel a digestive fluid that allows them to break down skin and bone and then absorb them. The opponent is left a blob of blood and organs if Sypher doesn't cancel the attack and if the opponent doesn't make it to the hospital in time.
Attack lasts 5 posts
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Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2011 7:04 pm
Character: Takeo Satoshi.
Technique Name: Maruton: Smoke Release: Blowhard's Blues
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: After a string of handseals, and a lit cigarette in his mouth, Takeo takes a deep, deep drag and blows a truly heinous amount of smoke in the direction of, well, whatever Takeo wants smoked. Although it lacks substance, it does carry the lethality of the Noushi plant. [ For dimension and range purposes, the technique, when used, is shaped like the Goukakyuu no Jutsu [ Great Fireball Technique ], and an effective range of ten meters. Lingers for two posts. Can be dispersed by B-ranked Fuuton Jutsu ]
Character: Takeo Satoshi.
Technique Name: Maruton: Smoke Release: Smoked and Dropped
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: His own variation of the Hidden Mist Jutsu, Takeo fills the immediate area with his killer smoke, forcing those without the special immunity [I.E. Everyone other than Takeo] To flee or kill him faster than they can submit to the lethal toxins. Again, lacks substance, but the true killer is the poison. [ For range purposes, the max range is forty meters. Lasts for ten posts. Dispersed by A-ranked Fuuton Jutsu ]
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 2:45 pm
Anon: Aproved of Your first technique. The second one I'm not so sure about. Till how many posts of exposure do you have until you meet the noose?
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 3:15 pm
Eight. Five if you're not medical. Seven if you are, and eight makes you deader than dead.
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Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 9:24 pm
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 9:56 am
Gah! Sorry for being late.
Approved.
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