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 Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:39 am
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2010 10:06 am
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2010 4:59 pm
Character: Alucai Hatake
Technique Name: Eclipse of Amaterasu
Rank: B
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: Fire
Description: As the user gets to be best friends with chakra manipulation of the blade a final attack can be performed. The user will focus the rest of their chakra into one single blast that can shake even the earth. The user will have their chakra into the blade and as the blade starts to glow with black fire the user either slashes vertically at the ground or jumps up and slashes down to hit the ground. The users blade must touch the ground! After the blade has touched the ground a wave of black fire will erupt from the blade and spread out five feet maximum and five feet high. The black fire will burn for three posts after the techniqe has been launched. After the technique the user is very exhausted and has two posts to retreat or face passing out.
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2010 5:08 pm
Black fire, or Blaze Release, is restricted for the Uchiha only. ^ ^;
Sorries...
Aside that, that's a bit strong for a B ranked technique.
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2010 5:15 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 8:31 pm
Character: Noel St. Pierre
Technique Name: Dohasuten (Fury)
Rank: S+ ( 260 CP) + 15 Posts of halved physical abilities. ( Physical Traits and benefits are knocked down 2 full Ranks.
Type: Ninjutsu~ Kinjutsu
Element: Highly condensed chakra and Nature.
Description: The St.Pierre's weren't feared as a truly threat until they stumbled upon something great. Or rather, something dangerous and detrimental to the establishment of the 5 Great Nations. Usually, a family of rebels trying to establish their own village wouldn't get half the recognition despite if the Shinobi were skilled; for most people that make such threats usually are nothing but bloated hot air and are dispatched easily. But that all changed when the St.Pierre's created a Kinjutsu through their strongest Ninjutsu-ist within the family line, that brought about the Kage's warrant to assassinate the famliy.
Dohasuten was a Kinjutsu developed by the St.Pierre's during their time in the mountains of the Lighting Country. During years of seclusion from the other world and thievery of scrolls, booklets, and raiding of documents from multiple villages the St.Pierre's created Dohasuten. The jutsu is about as dangerous and detrimental to the body as is with Konoha's Eight Gate's while the Ninjutsu-ist took the aspect of gathering the power of nature from Sage's of Summoning to create the technique that has the capability to destroy an entire village in one sweep.
How does Dohasuten even work?
Like any technique of this magnitude, you must be a specialist in the way of Ninjutsu. Only the strongest Ninjutsu-ist of the St.Pierre family could even think about decently having the technique underneath their belt of skills. Similar to the fabled jutsu like Limelight ,but in this sense it is with one person, who has undergone training as harsh as learning Senjutsu to utilize this technique on their own.
Upon meeting the requirements of being a Ninjutsu-ist and having done the training ( Will Post Below ), they will employ the harsh jutsu upon the Village. As well, as them signing a blood oath. One of the St. Pierre's had noticed that some of those that were learning the jutsu were a little shady and may distribute the knowledge of this powerful technique to the other nations. So, to defeat treachery within their own ranks, the St. Pierre's made all those that were learning the jutsu to sign a contract in their blood and chakra. Similar to that of a Summoning Contract, except as their blood and chakra get poured onto the paper, the contract will place a seal on the user. Which is one reason why they called the obtainer of this jutsu 'Hosts'. The seal will signify that they will only reveal the secrets of this jutsu to those of the St.Pierre Bloodline. And, that if they should reveal any morsel of this jutsu to another person, they shall be stripped of their lives. In where the seal will break and consume the victim in a horrid death. Where their blood will forced out from every crevice of their bodies... And, as most would guess... or rather hope. The St.Pierre's secret technique has been held secret ever since that rule has been applied.
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*) It takes 10 Posts to deploy the jutsu. Every 2 posts the weather of the village will turn harsher... giving a warning to the citizen's that something isn't right:
-) 1st Two Posts: After remaining stationary for two posts, the Host of the technique will start to glow white. During this time, they must keep their hands continuously moving in the flow of the jutsu. Also the Host must stay stationary during the entire technique as they gather energy. The skies around the village will start to accelerate in an unusual rate.
-) 2nd Two Posts: The Host will glow a brighter white until the clothing he/she may be wearing will look purely white. This is from the fusion of chakra and nature's energy being obtained and morphed at a rapid rate while simultaneously being bottled up in an unstable ball. The clouds will continue the unusual pattern of speed whilst the wind around the village will pick up. If one is experienced enough and rather notices in time, the wind will actually be pushing away from where the Host is. Making a natural defense for the Host at this point an time. No, the wind won't be so strong that it can knock away Shinobi from attacking, but it will be strong enough that regularly thrown projectiles will lose any to all acceleration by the time it reaches the Host.
-) 3rd Two Posts: As the wind increases, making projectile weapons even more futile, the white light will start to slowly encase the Host of the jutsu as well as it starting to increase in size. Meaning that the power has become so unstable, that it can no longer be contained with the user and is starting to reach out into the environment. To an onlooker, a large beam of white light will be reaching up into the skies from where the host is standing.
-) 4th Two Posts: The wind at this time is quite violent. Shinobi that are two ranks underneath the user will be blown back at this level of the technique. Shinobi one rank will be able to get close but the force of the winds will reduce any Taijutsu attack by a half rank. Simply because of the force of energy and raw power being released from the user. Not only that, there will be an energy dome starting to form around the host. Producing highly condensed chakra as a form of a protective barrier for the host an attacker, if they manage to get through the wind, can penetrate the barrier. But at the cost of taking raw chakra damage to their bodies will be the penalty for attempting to attack the user at this level of the jutsu.
- 5th and final Two Posts: This is were the jutsu finally eradicates the village. When the user has retained enough of nature's energy, they will release all of what they have stored in one powerful blast. To protect the user from being damaged, and his/her comrades, the St.Pierre's utilized the chakra barrier that was utilized earlier as an offensive-defensive barrier to purely defensive barrier.to protect those within from the purification of the jutsu. (( About five feet from the user will be the total area of the barrier.))
Basically the jutsu is like an bomb. Once at this stage, raw chakra and the true power of nature will be released upon the village. Destroying anything and consuming every thing within the area.
Training
Now like any jutsu... it takes training to do this technique. But, like the Sage's in where the St.Pierre's stole the idea from, the training is quite strenuous.
*) 10 Posts for training in the knowledge and control of Nature Energy.
*) 10 Posts for Chakra Control
*) 15 Posts for handling and controlling the magnitude of this magnificent jutsu.
*) 5 Posts for learning the long hand-seals that it takes to produce this jutsu.
Rules
-) The user must be completely stationary when performing this jutsu. They may move their upper body or duck, but the feet must be planted and the hand-seals cannot be broken or the jutsu is automatically canceled.
-) If the jutsu is canceled, the chakra is stripped from the user, as well as the user being unable to utilize the jutsu for TWO FULL DAYS.
-) Even if the justu is cast, the consequences of utilizing this massive technique will still apply. The inability of utilizing the technique for TWO FULL DAYS.
-) During those days, your chakra will be halved. [ For example, if you have 200 Chakra Points, you will only have 100 Chakra Points until the TWO DAYS have passed.
-) You must be a St.Pierre. Either by marriage or through blood. Teaching the jutsu to anyone else, as stated above, will cause you the penalty instant death.
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:10 pm
Character: Akio Satetsu
Technique Name: Molten Iron.
Rank: S
Type: Bloodline - Passive
Element: Iron + Raiton + Heat.
Description:Using his raiton element, Akio can heat his iron close to the melting point [2700 Fahrenheir] and still maipulate it, giving his iron sand some deadly uniqueness. Unlike a normal raiton technique, his iron is heated and conducting electricity. Akio isn't strictly immune to this heat, either.
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:33 pm
[ Panter ]
Please repost when it's all finished.
[ Donut ]
1.) A technique / method like that shouldn't be passive. It has to use chakra if you're heating it up using Katon, or whatever.
2.) That last line. Are you attempting to say Aiko is immune to this heat... or that he's immune to this heat along with most other heats?
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:36 pm
Anonymous_Alcoholic
Character: Akio Satetsu
Technique Name: Molten Iron.
Rank: S
Type: Bloodline - Ninjutsu
Element: Iron + Raiton + Heat.
Description:Using his raiton element, Akio can heat his iron close to the melting point [2700 Fahrenheir] and still maipulate it, giving his iron sand some deadly uniqueness. Unlike a normal raiton technique, his iron is heated and conducting electricity. Akio isn't immune to this heat, either. Sorry, quoted my last one. Meant to add Ninjutsu. And he isn't immune to this heat at all. Maybe after a while of having it he might be, bu not right off the bat. Slow power development, if you will.
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Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 11:03 pm
Okie dokies... all good.
Just... remember; genin nor chuunin can learn S ranked jutsu. > _ >
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Posted: Thu Dec 02, 2010 9:10 pm
Character: Noel St. Pierre
Technique Name: Dohasuten (Fury)
Rank: S+ ( 260 CP) + 15 Posts of halved physical abilities. ( Physical Traits and benefits are knocked down 2 full Ranks.
Type: Ninjutsu~ Kinjutsu
Element: Highly condensed chakra and Nature.
Description: The St.Pierre's weren't feared as a truly threat until they stumbled upon something great. Or rather, something dangerous and detrimental to the establishment of the 5 Great Nations. Usually, a family of rebels trying to establish their own village wouldn't get half the recognition despite if the Shinobi were skilled; for most people that make such threats usually are nothing but bloated hot air and are dispatched easily. But that all changed when the St.Pierre's created a Kinjutsu through their strongest Ninjutsu-ist within the family line, that brought about the Kage's warrant to assassinate the famliy.
Dohasuten was a Kinjutsu developed by the St.Pierre's during their time in the mountains of the Lighting Country. During years of seclusion from the other world and thievery of scrolls, booklets, and raiding of documents from multiple villages the St.Pierre's created Dohasuten. The jutsu is about as dangerous and detrimental to the body as is with Konoha's Eight Gate's while the Ninjutsu-ist took the aspect of gathering the power of nature from Sage's of Summoning to create the technique that has the capability to destroy an entire village in one sweep.
How does Dohasuten even work?
Like any technique of this magnitude, you must be a specialist in the way of Ninjutsu. Only the strongest Ninjutsu-ist of the St.Pierre family could even think about decently having the technique underneath their belt of skills. Similar to the fabled jutsu like Limelight ,but in this sense it is with one person, who has undergone training as harsh as learning Senjutsu to utilize this technique on their own.
Upon meeting the requirements of being a Ninjutsu-ist and having done the training ( Will Post Below ), they will employ the harsh jutsu upon the Village. As well, as them signing a blood oath. One of the St. Pierre's had noticed that some of those that were learning the jutsu were a little shady and may distribute the knowledge of this powerful technique to the other nations. So, to defeat treachery within their own ranks, the St. Pierre's made all those that were learning the jutsu to sign a contract in their blood and chakra. Similar to that of a Summoning Contract, except as their blood and chakra get poured onto the paper, the contract will place a seal on the user. Which is one reason why they called the obtainer of this jutsu 'Hosts'. The seal will signify that they will only reveal the secrets of this jutsu to those of the St.Pierre Bloodline. And, that if they should reveal any morsel of this jutsu to another person, they shall be stripped of their lives. In where the seal will break and consume the victim in a horrid death. Where their blood will forced out from every crevice of their bodies... And, as most would guess... or rather hope. The St.Pierre's secret technique has been held secret ever since that rule has been applied.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`
*) It takes 10 Posts to deploy the jutsu. Every 2 posts the weather of the village will turn harsher... giving a warning to the citizen's that something isn't right:
-) 1st Two Posts: After remaining stationary for two posts, the Host of the technique will start to glow white. During this time, they must keep their hands continuously moving in the flow of the jutsu. Also the Host must stay stationary during the entire technique as they gather energy. The skies around the village will start to accelerate in an unusual rate.
-) 2nd Two Posts: The Host will glow a brighter white until the clothing he/she may be wearing will look purely white. This is from the fusion of chakra and nature's energy being obtained and morphed at a rapid rate while simultaneously being bottled up in an unstable ball. The clouds will continue the unusual pattern of speed whilst the wind around the village will pick up. If one is experienced enough and rather notices in time, the wind will actually be pushing away from where the Host is. Making a natural defense for the Host at this point an time. No, the wind won't be so strong that it can knock away Shinobi from attacking, but it will be strong enough that regularly thrown projectiles will lose any to all acceleration by the time it reaches the Host.
-) 3rd Two Posts: As the wind increases, making projectile weapons even more futile, the white light will start to slowly encase the Host of the jutsu as well as it starting to increase in size. Meaning that the power has become so unstable, that it can no longer be contained with the user and is starting to reach out into the environment. To an onlooker, a large beam of white light will be reaching up into the skies from where the host is standing.
-) 4th Two Posts: The wind at this time is quite violent. Shinobi that are two ranks underneath the user will be blown back at this level of the technique. Shinobi one rank will be able to get close but the force of the winds will reduce any Taijutsu attack by a half rank. Simply because of the force of energy and raw power being released from the user. Not only that, there will be an energy dome starting to form around the host. Producing highly condensed chakra as a form of a protective barrier for the host an attacker, if they manage to get through the wind, can penetrate the barrier. But at the cost of taking raw chakra damage to their bodies will be the penalty for attempting to attack the user at this level of the jutsu.
- 5th and final Two Posts: This is were the jutsu finally eradicates the village. When the user has retained enough of nature's energy, they will release all of what they have stored in one powerful blast. To protect the user from being damaged, and his/her comrades, the St.Pierre's utilized the chakra barrier that was utilized earlier as an offensive-defensive barrier to purely defensive barrier.to protect those within from the purification of the jutsu. (( About five feet from the user will be the total area of the barrier.))
Basically the jutsu is like an bomb. Once at this stage, raw chakra and the true power of nature will be released upon the village. Destroying anything and consuming every thing within the area.
Training
Now like any jutsu... it takes training to do this technique. But, like the Sage's in where the St.Pierre's stole the idea from, the training is quite strenuous.
*) 10 Posts for training in the knowledge and control of Nature Energy.
*) 10 Posts for Chakra Control
*) 15 Posts for handling and controlling the magnitude of this magnificent jutsu.
*) 5 Posts for learning the long hand-seals that it takes to produce this jutsu.
Rules
-) The user must be completely stationary when performing this jutsu. They may move their upper body or duck, but the feet must be planted and the hand-seals cannot be broken or the jutsu is automatically canceled.
-) If the jutsu is canceled, the chakra is stripped from the user, as well as the user being unable to utilize the jutsu for TWO FULL DAYS.
-) Even if the justu is cast, the consequences of utilizing this massive technique will still apply. The inability of utilizing the technique for TWO FULL DAYS.
-) During those days, your chakra will be halved. [ For example, if you have 200 Chakra Points, you will only have 100 Chakra Points until the TWO DAYS have passed.
-) You must be a St.Pierre. Either by marriage or through blood. Teaching the jutsu to anyone else, as stated above, will cause you the penalty instant death.
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 8:32 am
Just have it be S rank. No reason for it to be S+. P:
Approved.
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 4:17 pm
Character: Mi Young Roo
Technique Name: Itami no Ame [ Painful Rains]
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Description: Mi resorts to this attack in order to keep her opponents at a distance from her when she is weakened. Using her medical skills, Mi keeps a container of water on her at all times, one mixed with a very acidic solution. Using her Suiton abilities she calls upon that water and dispatches dozen of orbs of water around her and her opponent. The orbs of water are dangerous for if anyone touches them they will be burned severely. They can be hit directly and dispersed but physical contact is suicide. It can burn through anything given enough time. Wood is easiest whereas steel is a little more difficult to break down. Mi can control the shape her orbs will take but for each transformation other than that of the basic spherical mass it is summoned into she wastes [10 more chakra points]
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Posted: Sat Dec 04, 2010 6:00 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 05, 2010 12:17 pm
Qastor Sugino Sakada
Character: Howaido Hatake
Technique Name: Hiten Mitsurugi-Ryu: Kuzuryusen (Nine Headed Dragon Flash)
Rank: A
Type: Bukijutsu
Description: Attack learned before the most powerful succession technique. Strikes with the sword nine times on the 9 vital points, head, right leg, left leg, right arm, left arm, between the legs, the chest, right shoulder, and left shoulder, making this move virtually impossible to block. The attack uses chakra to enhance the users speed and slow down the opponents movements in the eyes of the user. Using chakra the user strikes the 9 vital targets at the same time, a move near impossible to defend if caught off guard, for the wrong move and the opponent could not only be disabled but also die.[Literally blinding fast, can only be properly dodged by using a visual dojutsu such as Byakuagn or Sharingan, unless the user has eye wear that can detect similar to a dojutsu. Note that: Dojutsu Implants and Goggles Simulating Dojutsu will take more strain from the user to dodge and will have a much higher rate of miscalculation from true dojutsu.]
Character: Howaido Hatake
Technique Name: Hiten Mitsurugi-Ryu: Kogarashi Tsumuji Arashi
Rank: A
Type: Bukijutsu
Description: First, the user starts off turning around after parrying an attack and does one hit from either side, then jumps up using chakra and hits again, then uses the turning momentum to go into a spin utilizing their chakra to create a slicing tornado of movement to finish slicing; the spin goes vertically, not horizontally.
Character: Howaido Hatake
Technique Name: Hiten Mitsurugi-Ryu: Ryutsuishosen (Dragon Hammer Rising Slash)
Rank: B
Type: Bukijutsu
Description: Combo of Ryutsuisen and Ryushosen. Performed when the opponent is coming down from above, Ryutsuisen is used first, jumping up in the high in the air using chakra to bypass the oppinent at a blinding speed and then striking down hard from above. Then Ryushosen, using chakra to strengthen the leg muscles the user rises up from the ground where they landed in front of the already slashed opponent, using all his force in an uppercut, hitting vital points; causing double damage.
Character: Howaido Hatake
Technique Name: Hiten Mitsurugi-Ryu: Ryukansen Arashi (Wind Dragon Rising Slash Storm)
Rank: B
Type: Bukijutsu
Description: Lunges toward the enemy with chakra on the feet to increase speed and chakra on the arms to increase momentum with weight. The momentum is then used to form a tornado like, blinding fast, spinning slash attack that hits from the side of the opponent getting around their guard.
Character: Howaido Hatake
Technique Name: Hiten Mitsurugi-Ryu: Soryusen (Paired Dragon Flash)
Rank: B
Type: Bukijutsu
Description: Paired attack with sword and sheath. the user slashes from the right with his sword and from the opponents blind spot with his sheath usually connecting with a weakness like between the eyes or behind the neck to produce a loss of consciousness. If the sword is blocked, the sheath comes in and hits enemy.
Character: Howaido Hatake
Technique Name: Shihara Dori
Rank: C
Type: Bukijutsu
Description: Defensive technique in which user grabs the enemies sword in their own sheath and counters with their sword. The user will first attack the user with a fake swipe that is diverted or cause the opponent to strike at the user. They will then use their own sheath as a trap and capture the opponents blade in it by sheathing it in the users sheath, this will leave a wide opening in the opponents defenses.
Described further. XD Do I pass Shin-san?
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