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chancellor cherryclaw Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 8:31 pm
Niel glared at Jared and got up in his face. "gwrando ar i fyny. Id 'yn eich cynghori i gam i ffwrdd oddi wrth iddi neu y byddwch yn llusgo chi i fyny i'r wyneb a gril chi."
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Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 10:43 pm
Jared laughed. "Human hm? I don't speak spanish. Sorry" He smirked and grabbed Neomi in a death grip and kissed her cheek. "Come on baby.." He whispered in her ear. She glared at him. "Get your hands off me!" She screamed. She kicked him, but he just laughed. Tears streamed down her cheeks, but they wouldn't notice. After all, they were underwater.
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chancellor cherryclaw Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 11:23 pm
Niel had moved behind Jared while he was preoccupied with Neomi and put Jared in a sleeper hold. "I'm welsh, moron."
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Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 7:21 am
(My character wasn't that close to yours (because I headed off to the right, near Jared) so I'm not sure y you got me, unless you thought my charecter drifted down close to you...anyway it's fine just continue)
Valencia's hair swirled in the current as Neomi Held on tightly to her.
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Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 3:14 pm
*whoopses* xd
Neomi let go of Valencia quickly, and couldn't breath. When Jared let her go, she gasped and fell to the floor. Jared growled and flipped him on the side, punching him in the face. Neomi screamed, "No!" And jumped on Jared's back. He laughed and whispered, "You think you can beat me? I've gotten tough, little girl, since you met me." He sneered and threw her off like a pesky fly. He turned back to Valencia, picked her up and threw her on his back, and dissapeared. He put her in his cave, turned off the lamp, and swam away quickly, but not before putting a demon potion in her, while she was out. He laughed.
Neomi sighed and picked her friend up and hoped he was still alive.
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Posted: Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:47 pm
What happend? uhgg..... my head....where am I? where?
Valencia sat up and looked around seeing nothing but darkness. She laid back across the rocks she was resting on and ponderer where she was and how she got there before drifting back out of consiousness.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 4:19 pm
Jared swam back to Valencia and whispered, taking her and smoothing her, "Your fine...Your with me. Your in water..It's fine..." He smiled at her and squeezed her hand.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 4:52 pm
Niel looked at Neomi apologetically. "I'm really sorry." he said before swimming back up to shore.
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chancellor cherryclaw Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 5:07 pm
dolofonos daimonas Niel looked at Neomi apologetically. "I'm really sorry." he said before swimming back up to shore. She sighed and swam back up with him, shaking her head. "It's fine. Thank you for trying." She smiled and watched him, giving him a kiss on the cheek. She gently floated back down, glad she had done it. She happily swam around, in love. Just then she remembered Valencia and quickly went to that spot. She found it empty and panicked.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 5:12 pm
Once Neomi left, Niel started to punish himself for his failure. "I can breathe underwater, but it's impossible for me to be as fast as that guy underwater. I really doubt I could lead him up to land."
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chancellor cherryclaw Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 5:16 pm
Jared was on the shallow end of the water, looking in the trash cans for ropes. He frowned and walked up on land, since he was human. Frustrated, he paced around, trying to come up with a plan to kill Valencia and Triton.
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 12:04 pm
" Why do I feel this way? Why is my hand cold? Where am I? Who was talking to me earlier? Too many d**n questions and not enough answers.
Valencia noticed she was alone again but not quite where she was earlier. Her skin was clammy and cold. Why? It was still to dark to see anything and she was too weak to move so she sat and waited for her capturer to return.
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 3:35 pm
Jared dived in the water and returned to the cave, smiling. "Hello, my love. How are you?" He asked. "My name is Jack Towns.." He lied smoothly, looking at her and smiling. "You feel that way because I gave you a new drink. It is nothing harmful" He lied again, watching her lie there. "I am here to save you." He continued, a glint in his eye. "You are the most beautiful thing.." He whispered. But he only said that because he was a player. He liked a lot of girls. Valencia, Neomi...Others he had killed. Neomi and Valencia were next, and they didn't even know it.
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 3:58 pm
Niel heard a splash nearby when Jared dove in and ran over towards the noise. He saw Jared swimming down, enraged by what had happened earlier, Niel dove down after and followed Jared to his cave, where Niel observed what was happening from the shadows.
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chancellor cherryclaw Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 4:48 pm
( i love the way you write Jared's character... I wish he were real)
"Hmmm, Jack Towns?" Valencia wasn't sure about this new person, she sensed he wasen't who he said he was but was deeply touched by his stunning looks.
" Where am I, and what new drink." Valencia remembered the weird feeling and the pit of her stomach and the clammy skin. She sat up and flipped her hair behind her. Valencia waited a few seconds before adding, "I know your name isn't Jack Towns, its Jared but I'm not quite sure about the rest of you...only ur name."
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