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 Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 5:47 pm
Defenestrate Windows 1emon The primary reason for this post is to prevent the banning of me since I tend to just lurk ^^
I am also interested in what the pair of you think of my current avatar, if it's not too much trouble  The blues really don't match all that well. There is very poor balance of the skin tone. You should have a little sliver shoing on the stomach and remove the stockings. Also there should be more black. The seal slippers have black on it. Yeah and pick one shade of blue. Can't stress that enough. I would suggest taking off the stockings and putting on dark blue socks and the halo is kinda... ugly Very cute and fluffy though :]
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 5:51 pm
EntourageLights Teehee ! Anyways, this is a temporary avatar. Right now I'm just hoarding with my gold. So this is what I'll use for now while my gold is in storage lol Well the greens are kinda off and it is really silver top heavy. I also want you to add more of the skin tone. But there are a whole lot more that you really need to fix. But as you said this is a temp avatar. So I don't really want to waste my time on this. No offense but you aren't going to dump gold into it or buy items that I suggest. I mean basically too silver heavy. The greens don't match and your skin tone is bothering me.
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 5:53 pm
Defenestrate Windows EntourageLights Teehee ! Anyways, this is a temporary avatar. Right now I'm just hoarding with my gold. So this is what I'll use for now while my gold is in storage lol Well the greens are kinda off and it is really silver top heavy. I also want you to add more of the skin tone. But there are a whole lot more that you really need to fix. But as you said this is a temp avatar. So I don't really want to waste my time on this. No offense but you aren't going to dump gold into it or buy items that I suggest. I mean basically too silver heavy. The greens don't match and your skin tone is bothering me. I don't like it all. it's not appealing to the eyes...
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 6:06 pm
This is the best one you have put in this far matching wise. It needs three things you need to fix. Show more skin. I hate when avatars show skin only on the face. Next lose the purse. Then finally I would lose the mythical and try gold sparkles. and try the platypus eye thingy.
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 6:10 pm
Defenestrate Windows This is the best one you have put in this far matching wise. It needs three things you need to fix. Show more skin. I hate when avatars show skin only on the face. Next lose the purse. Then finally I would lose the mythical and try gold sparkles. and try the platypus eye thingy. I <3 it. The skirt bugs me but thats just personal preference.
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 6:31 pm
will you rate this one plz?
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 6:59 pm
Can I have a rate for this one? It's brand new. biggrin
I made sure to leave bits of skin for Mr. Windows.
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 8:58 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 7:07 am
pig_girl will you rate this one plz? You have two different shades of red. I would try and fix that <3. Also the white on the hat you have matches none of the other whites mainly because of the shading. This avatar is also a little to simple. I mean it does ok at matching but eh. It could do a whole lot better.
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 9:48 am
Defenestrate Windows pig_girl will you rate this one plz? You have two different shades of red. I would try and fix that <3. Also the white on the hat you have matches none of the other whites mainly because of the shading. This avatar is also a little to simple. I mean it does ok at matching but eh. It could do a whole lot better. It's cute. I like how the shirt and skirt fit together.
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 11:08 am
Bottle Can I have a rate for this one? It's brand new. biggrin I made sure to leave bits of skin for Mr. Windows. Well thank you. Just a few issues here. There is white in the eyes. And it shows up no where else. The oranges aren't all the same shade and it is noticeable. I mean the hair pin and the bracelet match but the other oranges are lighter oranges. Also the phoenix circlet doesn't match the other oranges at all and has a hint of red in it which is very blaring for me.
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 11:25 am
The golds really don't match. Nor do the brown items. I do see that you tried to match the skin tone. But that isn't enough. Next you need black on the bottom. Remove the shadow spirit, I know it adds black to the bottom. It has a purple white eye. Which means you should remove the zorro mask. This avatar, to me, has very poor flow.
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 10:39 pm
Defenestrate Windows Bottle Can I have a rate for this one? It's brand new. biggrin I made sure to leave bits of skin for Mr. Windows. Well thank you. Just a few issues here. There is white in the eyes. And it shows up no where else. The oranges aren't all the same shade and it is noticeable. I mean the hair pin and the bracelet match but the other oranges are lighter oranges. Also the phoenix circlet doesn't match the other oranges at all and has a hint of red in it which is very blaring for me. Thank you. 3nodding The phoenix circlet is killing me too. I just can't figure out how to bring orange to the bottom without it. >.< Though I love orange, I obviously never-ever work with it, haha.
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 3:23 pm
Bottle Defenestrate Windows Bottle Can I have a rate for this one? It's brand new. biggrin I made sure to leave bits of skin for Mr. Windows. Well thank you. Just a few issues here. There is white in the eyes. And it shows up no where else. The oranges aren't all the same shade and it is noticeable. I mean the hair pin and the bracelet match but the other oranges are lighter oranges. Also the phoenix circlet doesn't match the other oranges at all and has a hint of red in it which is very blaring for me. Thank you. 3nodding The phoenix circlet is killing me too. I just can't figure out how to bring orange to the bottom without it. >.< Though I love orange, I obviously never-ever work with it, haha. It is ok. I still wanna have sexy pixel babies with you.
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 6:32 pm
A rating from both of you please heart
also, I'm not really concirned with the exact shade matching, I just get close enough and thats good enough for me.
I'm more concirned with the color balance, and can both of you help me with feet clutter... I fail at it...
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