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 Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 3:53 pm
BluewolfofMibu Rpc name: Zane Hajime Village: Suna Rank: Saanin Bloodline or Clan: Puppet petrification What you know about the clan: Basically I'm a human puppet. I suck against fire and ice. I do have three canons which is awesome. Rp Sample: Do I have to?
And...if you're a puppet...do you control yourself??? Or does someone else control you? This Bloodline always confused me. @_@
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:08 pm
lol, no basicaly i've reshaped my body to that similar to a puppet like a cyborg
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 4:58 pm
Rpc Name: Akura Shimaru
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Chuunin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Pure Chakra Manipulation (Head hopefully, though it does not matter to me.)
What you know about the clan/bl: This bloodline spawned in times before that of the great shinobi nations, or even that of the sage of six paths. Its strange abilities allow for one to toy and mold the purest style of chakra to their every whim. Creating weapons, tools, and even every day objects needed to complete a task. Using said chakra, one could also apply it to certain areas within their body. Increasing the physical strength and speed of the area with the chakra alone. With a special doujutsu associated with the bloodline, one gains the ability to sense life around them. With sentient life showing a blue hue, life that is living and yet without being sentient giving a green hue, and anything without life showing up as a gray shell.
The users of said kekkei genkai also maintain what can best be described as a perfect balance. They can always catch themselves out of a trip or a fall. The pure chakra has no elemental weakness, even when paired against itself. Also users can fight blind by bouncing their energy off of objects around them. I imagine this being much like a chakra style of echolocation.
Rp Sample:
The endless green seas glistened with mourning dew as they came to life with the slow crawl of the rising sun. Animals and insects alike all arose to drink from the shower of dripping leaves, cautious to the world around them. The forest quite literally became a center of constant motion. A deer gracefully darting through the trees as if they were not even existent. A mouse skittering though the fallen brush, its paws barely grazing the forest floor. Even a young songbird released its morning calls into the wide open blue skies. Just the way the wind whistled and danced though the branches gave way for the forest to open up, playing a soft song only nature could provide with its limitless wonders.
This place, this heaven sent sanctuary of shadows and light, was one of the most peaceful places known to man. It was mourning within the dew dripping forests of konoha.
Within this delicate symphony of forest sounds, a small group of traveling shinobi silently weaved their way though the darkened cloak of the treetops. Using a simple method of jumping from branch to branch in a blur of motion in order to travel. The shinobi, four in total, all wore the same forehead protector engraved with the symbol of Sunagakure. They donned foreign clothing, and they all seemed to be relatively lost in their surroundings. They were naturally not of this region, and the chance of encountering an enemy lingered with each step they took.
"Akura-sensei! How much farther to the border?" One of the younger shinobi called out, the lead shinobi stopped rather abruptly on a single branch as the others filled in around the branches surrounding him. "Well, we have about another two day's travel ahead of us. So no. Why do you ask?" The lead shinobi asked, smiling down at the child as he waited for an answer. "Well, I was getting tired and all. And we haven't set up camp ye-...."
The lead shinobi, otherwise known as Akura-sensei, had motioned for the child to silence herself. A grave look playing upon his soft face as he gazed though the shifting leaves. Quite suddenly, eyes snapping wide open out of shock, Akura released a power from deep within himself. "Junsuiton: Mujitsu no aru Hinansho (Sanctuary of Innocence)!" He exclaimed, a blast of chakra erupting from his body as it flew outwards with enough force to blow the branches and leaves from several of the nearby trees. The explosive wave of chakra, while it was strong, accepted Akura's fellow shinobi as if they were not even there. Simply blowing around them, and surrounding them in its protective grasp before continuing onward in a spherical shape, Akura placed exactly at the center with his eyes shut in concentration.
The wave, as it blasted outwards, encountered its true target. A billowing stream of flames that expanded toward Akura and the young shinobi. The flames enveloped the chakra, swallowing it completely as it continued onwards. Scorching the trees and forestry to nothing but charred wood and ash. The flames, continued to burn for quite a while before they finally settled. The once beautiful forest becoming nothing more than a mere ash covered memory.
When the dust finally settled, the sphere of chakra and its inhabitants had all landed gently upon the ground, the bottom half of the sphere sinking into the earth while the top formed a protective dome. The flames were ineffective toward anyone within the shield, as no one within the sphere of chakra even suffered a single scratch. In fact, a small patch of lush green grass still remained within the protective chakra. A physical testament to the shield's protective power. Yet, something had changed. Outside of the shield, stood three shinobi on three separate sides of the dome. Akura first noticed them as he was catching his breath.
The way the trio presented themselves was far from friendly. Two of them stood with a large human sized blade in hand, obviously men built for strength rather then smarts. They seemed almost beast like. Akura was half expecting them to begin baying and growling at the chakra shield at any moment. It was no surprise to him when they began beating upon the chakra with their fists. The last of the three, obviously the brains of the group, stood at a distance. His shoulders rose and fell at an accelerated rate, and the way his hands were positioned directly in front of him suggested that he was the one whom had lit the fire with some sort of jutsu.
"Hey! Who do you think you are!" One of the younger shinobi, a boy, called out. Flexing his left arm in a non-verbal threat. "You can't just go around attacking people out of the blue!" The boy would have continued to yell, if it wasn't for Akura, whom had began to shuffle around in his gear pouches, gathering the attention of everyone. He was soon producing a small scroll from within, which he passed of to one of the younger shinobi with a gentle smile. "You guys keep going, find somewhere you like and start to set up camp. I'll be with you soon. Just make sure to keep that scroll safe..." Rather than accepting the scroll, the children gazed at Akura with mixed expressions. "But what if you get hurt!" One of the children blurted in a worried tone while the second growled out of frustration. "Why do you always get to have all the fun!? I want to fight too!" Akura only chuckled slightly, the smile never fading from his lips. "Look at them. The smaller one is already out of breath from using a genin leveled jutsu. And the two larger ones barely have enough brain power combined to out think a rock. I think I'll be fine. Now go." The third child, that had yet to say anything, took the scroll in his hands with a slightly annoyed sigh. "The chance of winning a three on one fight is highly unlikely for a chuunin. Don't be a hero..." The child muttered in an uncaring tone, simply walking to the edge of the shield as he waited for it to drop.
"Don't underestimate me." Akura simply replied with a gentle chuckle, finally opening his eyes just as the top section of the chakra dome had began to fall away. As his eyes were calmly revealed to the world, one could notice something odd about them. They were inhuman looking, with a tan iris coated with black, swirl like markings, a diamond shaped pupil and a completely emotionless sheen. In fact, they seemed almost beast like when compared to the normal human eye. "When the shield completely vanishes, make a break for the gap between the two larger looking ones. Do not stop moving after that." Akura instructed, his voice blunt ant to the point. "But what if the-" One of the young shinobi began to say before Akura cut them off. "I do not allow my comrades to be harmed, that I promise."
Seconds ticked by as the shield fell. An eerie silence filling the air as the two parties waited with a silent anticipation for what would occur next. Finally, as the seconds neared a minute, the shield had fallen completely. In an explosion of motion, the young shinobi darted for the gap in between the two large swordsmen. "I really hope Akura-sensei knows what he is doing..." One of the young shinobi muttered in a rushed tone, his eyes affixed upon the growing threat of the larger men. "Of course he does, he said he wouldn't let us get hurt!" The female shinobi called out to her comrade, a sparkle of trust showing as she calmly watched the large brutes.
The two brutes, rather than standing idly by as their prey escaped, both rushed for the small group of genin. Their blades arcing for the children's small heads in unison as they both barreled at a break neck speed directly at them. They were only seconds away from making the trio of children spontaneously double in number when Akura finally acted.
"Merucury..." Akura's cold voice muttered, his slim body exploding into a burst of motion that made the Genin appear to come to a stand still. As he moved, Akura used the charred tree trunks to launch himself though the air. Upon his final jump, Akura landed directly in front of the first brute in a slight crouching position. The first of the two brutes barely had enough time to look down before Akura's rising kick connected with his chin. The man's head flew back with a sickening snap, the high speed kick sending the large beast of a shinobi flying back through the air. Twisting his body around, Akura released the long straps crossing his chest. The large extremely over sized shuriken dropping from his back into a free fall toward the earth beneath where it acted as a flying shield of sorts. The shuriken knocking away the second brute's blade as it pinned the heavy metal weapon to the earth. Akura falling from the sky only seconds later. His outstretched left leg was menacingly swirling with a high amount of chakra, a skill known to Akura as Hercurion. "Tsutenkyaku [Painful Sky Leg]" Akura yelled out, the leg swirling with chakra landing upon the large brutes shoulder. The force of the simple kick was transferred into the man's body, which normally would have been ineffective against a man of that size. But with the kick, came the powerful chakra. Which only enhanced Akura's kick to amazing levels. To put the power of the kick into simple terms, if the brute was a chisel resting against the ground, then Akura's kicking leg was much like dropping a boulder atop of the said chisel. The man's body was hammered down into the earth, the surrounding land breaking apart and crumbling inward around the brute. The shifting earth burying the man alive while at the same time sealing his grave.
To Akura, the kick had negative effects as well. With such power, came recoil. Akura's body was sent tumbling backwards across the disturbed earth. His kicking leg straining nearly to the snapping point. Crying out in pain, Akura rolled around upon the ground. Clutching his outstretched leg as repeated muttering of "I'm so stupid." Could be heard from him. The genin, finding the two attacking men out of action. And the third silently fleeing. Decided to stop around their fallen temporary-sensei. "You know, that was pretty cool!" One of the male shinobi exclaimed as he held out a hand to help Akura up. Akura smiled as he took the child's hand, pulling himself up as he used the boy as a brace. "You call it cool, I call it painful..." Akura glanced at the fleeing shinobi for a few moments before he shrugged, his eyes returning to their normal state. "But you know. I think I used to much cha-" Akrua began to say just before his head fell limp, soft snores coming from the shadowy veil of his hair.
"You idiot!" All three of the young genin exclaimed, laughing at Akura's reckless behavior as they carried him away. Forgetting about their before mentioned laziness as they continued on though the day.
Jutsu used
Hercurion- The user focuses chakra into their hands or legs to improve physical strength. This can be used in and out of combat. Punches and kicks will hurt more and deal more damage. Enhanced legs can allow user to jump higher and farther. The user can lift objects heavier than normal. A genin can lift a boulder of stone twice his size, while somebody at chunin is 4x, jonin 6x, anbu 8x, kage/sannin 10x their weight. Every post this technique is in use, it drains 10 chakra points from the user.
Merucury- By focusing chakra into their limbs, their reactions and overall speed become faster. This can lead to an easy win, as many users of this technique outmatch their opponents easily. Genin are two times faster, chunin 3x, jonin 4x, anbu can outrun a drag racer, and kage can outmatch a stealth jet in the air while he’s on the ground. This drains 10 points of chakra for each post of use.
Junsuiton: Mujitsu no aru Hinansho (Sanctuary of Innocence): The user forces a powerful wave of Pure Chakra out from their body. This blasts away any and all initial attacks Jonin rank and lower and extremely nullifies ANBU and up. Afterwards, the chakra stays in the form of a dome. No jutsu can be used to attack from within it. It takes a Jonin lv. Attack or higher to break it from the outside. It can be taken down by the user anytime. Costs 15 points of chakra for each post the dome is kept up after the initial blast.
(I hate the sample.....
...
Don't know why.
I just do....)
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:18 pm
Wow, just wow. That was pretty awesome, I really liked reading that, and on top of it, you seem to have a pretty darn good understanding of your bloodline
APPROVED!!! just send 1000g to blue to make it official
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:22 pm
heart I want to hold you high...
We were allowed to do more!?! I thought only two paragraphs!?!?! UGH!!! I could have added more!!!! *rants*
(You all will come to realize that Shira likes detail.... a lot... and tend to write... a lot...-.-)
...and steal your pain away. heart
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:25 pm
I always like for people to write more than the bare requirements, usually people that do write really great samples
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:26 pm
heart I want to hold you high...
-.-
Why didn't you write "2 paragraph's or more?" I could have totally wrote more gonk
...and steal your pain away. heart
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:28 pm
oh, i didn't actually write that but i'll edit it, if you want to add some more I'd be happy to read it
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:30 pm
heart I want to hold you high...
-.-
WOOOT!!! EDITING AS WE SPEAK!!! =3
...and steal your pain away. heart
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:32 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:12 pm
Rpc Name: Seleste Mitsalune
Village: Iwagakura
Rank: Chunnin
Bloodline or Clan applied for:
Crystal Element (Kurisutaru: Crystal)
What you know about the clan/bl: Everything! (just kidding) The Crystal Element bloodline allows for the user to turn anything into Crystal via the combination of lightning and earth. The crystal is very strong; being unbreakable by ninjutsu. The only weakness against this is taijutsu, or someone with a stronger rank.
Rp Sample:
It was cold. She saw her breath rise up around her like a misty halo. Her hair fell in her face, and she sighed, pushing it back. Why did she bother? It was just going to fall back into her face with in a minute. Her lips pursed as she looked around, her eyes gleaming in the moon light, her porcelain skin making her appear like a ghost in the nightly shadows.
Her feet resounded off the slightly deserted street. She passed by bars, drunk men who whistled at her, and boarded up buildings. All in all, it was obvious to see it was the slums. It wasn’t obvious to see this is where Seleste grew up. Her hair fell in her face again, and she reached up with a freezing finger, and pushed it out of her face again.
She didn’t know what compelled her to come. Maybe the thought that her prostitute mother? She had no idea. She sighed again, walking the familiar streets, her mind wandering back to the times she had played and fought on those streets. Her knuckles ached just thinking about it, and she cracked them unconsciously. Her eyes throbbed with a headache and her mind wandered back to the news that had started her memoirs. That Aeldevera guy seemed like hot news around Iwa. He had both his parent’s murdered when he was young. That’s how she remembered her parents.
She turned the corner to the alley way in where her mother had given birth to her, and moved to the back of the alley. She bent down and ran her finger over top of the dirt. She heard a loud scream and another holler, and looked up toward the back doors to the bar.
The drunks were fighting again. She sighed in utter irritation, behind the bar, before sitting up, listening to the bar fight. She shivered, running her hands up and down her biceps to create friction for the heat, when there was a loud crack, and Seleste saw stars burst out on front of her eyes. There was another loud crack, and she inhaled in the dirt of the ground. Ground...? How did her face get into the ground?
She looked up, and felt the heat rise to her face as she saw a drunk man stretched over her body, pinning her to the ground. He was comatose, and further inspection showed he had been literally thrown out of back door. She pushed the guy off of her, taking in a breath of the smell of alcohol in the process. "What do we have here," somebody said above her. She looked up, the blood running cold in her face as she saw three guys standing in front of her. "Seleste baby, haven't we told you we never wanted to see you again without your mommy with you," one of the guy's said, reaching down for her collar.
These guy’s looked tough, not the average thugs. She could tell they had been in their fair share of fights before. Probably some of the ones she had mimicked to learn how to fight. That was not good.
She jumped, running down the alley. Man, her luck sucked! Her feet pounded the hard frozen dirt. Her breath was ragged in her lungs, her muscles pumping. She turned the corner of another alley, pushing chakra into her feet. Wait, why was she running? She was a genin now! She didn't have to run. She spun on her heel, and her hands flying into hand seal, "Crystal Hexagon Disks," she said, throwing the crystal in her hand toward one of the men chasing her.
He brought out a kunai (oh great, they were ninja, just what she needed) and slashed at the crystal hexagon, which shattered and stabbed his arm. He screamed, falling to his knees. Before pushing up and grabbing her around the throat and slamming her into the ground. She saw stars again.
The kunai hung readily and poised above her head, before he plunged it down. Seleste closed her eyes, pulling her hands into another seal, " Crystal Release: Crystal Armor," she said, her breath getting short from the lack of air.
There was a crack and a shatter, before she opened her eyes and saw the kunai had shattered. She was protected by the crystal that covered her skin. She sighed in relief before the man picked her up and threw her into the wall. She slid down as his hands rapidly formed seals. She looked up in time to see a Katon jutsu aimed at her body. The shield over her cracked and shattered and she held her breath, feeling the burning flames lick her porcelain skin.
She charged forward, "Crystal Blades," she shouted, and before he knew what had happened, she had slashed downwards with the blades on her forearm and cut his chest. He fell, and she turned to the other men. Her eyes displayed a sense of fury.
She charged at the last two men, her hair flying in her face, and she spun kicked one of the guys, her crystal blade driving along the carotid. She fell, pushing her body up with her hands and flipped over the other guy.
She grabbed his blade that he had stuck in his pants and pointed it at the base of his spine. It was quiet, save for the sound of her and his harsh breathing. Everything was still, and she could tell something was wrong. She inclined her head to the side and saw the man was crying. Scoffing to herself slightly she swiped her feet out from underneath of him, and hit him in the face.
She looked at the three men, and reached into her back pocket, pulling out a flare. She lit it to alert somebody that they were here, and she herself faded into the shadows of the night.
~edited~ =3
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:13 pm
Lady...seriously...?
Oh and on a side note:
Martin Paid
Remorse Paid
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:16 pm
heart I want to hold you high...
Seriously what? *blinks*
...and steal your pain away. heart
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:17 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:18 pm
heart I want to hold you high...
I wanna know!!! gonk
...and steal your pain away. heart
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