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What's your favorite type of thing to write?
Poetry (Their short simple enough)
35%
 35%  [ 7 ]
Songs (I just got that beat ya know?)XD
15%
 15%  [ 3 ]
Short Stories
15%
 15%  [ 3 ]
Plays (Oh Romeo, oh quiet with the Shakespeare)
0%
 0%  [ 0 ]
Novels
15%
 15%  [ 3 ]
Other
20%
 20%  [ 4 ]
Total Votes : 20


Izu_Reia
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 8:24 am


Speaking of writting, Blood Stained Hands came from this series as well... sweatdrop
PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 8:28 am


Jinsei
I'm sorry. I'm a spelling Nazi. xd They just stood out, so I thought I'd mention them..


D-chan complains about that all the time. These one's are handwritten too, sometimes I get confused reading my own sentences. eek

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 8:35 am


Izunami
D-chan complains about that all the time. These one's are handwritten too, sometimes I get confused reading my own sentences. eek

I see. ^^;;

Side note, it's spelled "writing". 3nodding OK, now I'll stop. sweatdrop xd
PostPosted: Mon Aug 30, 2004 6:41 pm


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Spera Wavewind

PostPosted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 8:51 pm


Together, we are salt;
we ride the aqua waves.
We rest in crystalline sand.
We journey with ships
and ride on the backs of dolphins.
We sink to murkey depths
and whatch the whales dream.

We have scoured Atlantis,
you and I, in our oneness.
We know all it's secrets;
for we have traveled its lightless coridoors
we, together, as one.

For, without you,
I am negative;
not completely whole.
Seeking to replace what I've lost:
a missing piece of light
a missing piece of heart.

And you, you are so positive
you have love and light to spare!
enough light to fill my darkness,
you make me whole,
my dearest, Sodium.

So together, we'll ride the aqua waves,
travel through the ocean depths,
and in the end, we'll have given
life, light and love

Spice.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 24, 2004 2:14 pm


Nice Spera. It sounds really pretty. I don't know what i'd call that though. Feel free to post what ever you'd like here. ^_^

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Spera Wavewind

PostPosted: Sat Sep 25, 2004 7:11 pm


Labyrinth Standing Still

I’m looking down dense corridors of trees
where he beckons; laughing as the wind

whips me and the leaves
swirl. In this maze of red and gold

I look for winter to sooth summer’s burn.
Running to him, staff in hand, the trees

turn me ‘round and I am blinded
by this vibrant shell. Spinning,

spinning, but never moving, never noticing these
cyclone bars. I pray for silver and blue, a trace

of green life, But all hope escapes
while I keep running, finding nothing

as night’s ink descends and I with it.
Morning again, his laughter

greets me, though not his face.
With my staff in hand to break free the broken.

I seek him, who dances in the wood with scarlet
ribbon laughing in the wind’s embrace.

I’m looking down dense corridors of trees
In a red and gold cage I seek


to save the broken, But I am running
nowhere, only spinning in a maze

of red and gold, with dark tree corpses
and his laughter.

His Picture

I dust off the glass I used to kiss every night, But the space between phone calls
Is a chasm and a lonely wooden frame cannot claim my heart.
As the miles stretch us apart, I accidentally see your picture
And wonder if I care.

Birth of Birch

Her ice coats a dark wood, protecting the life held within.
Heat of a new soul rises forth, breaking the earths embrace.
The world cracks and plummets around the tender shoot.
The sun nourishes by melting the shards.

Spera Wavewind
The silver moon wanes

The silver moon wanes. Soft snow floats down to cover the moss, outside in the sheltered clearing. In the quiet cotton of winter she sits, cheek against her knees, an idle finger drawing love in dust. Cobwebs dance curtaining the window in life and death. The attic whistles; wind armed with cold fondles the house, a woodwind quartet of weathered beams, rusted nails, shutter slits and shifting age.
The silver moon wanes. She sits in silence, waiting for stars, waiting for light. She watches her hair brush across the dust of the room, brushing away the chilled age and memory, of a room, long ago left to wither. There were friends here once; where laughter and dreams have faded to hope.
The silver moon wanes. Liquid memories sing in the confines of her mind, whistle and dance, animadversit. Mind, heart, soul, breath, she turns to in the comfort of loneliness.
The silver moon wanes. Cold now prickles her skin under soft cotton. She hums softly during the bridge of twilight. The silver moon wanes. The snow hugs an old house. A girl rests her cheek against her knees, comforted by the wind playing with time, with age. The girl sits, in the dust of laughter and dream, with old cherry trunks and willow floors.
The silver moon wanes. She withers, dust settling in her skin, settling on her bones. The wind wraps snow, lovingly around the house, where she waits, endlessly for dawn. The wind pillows snow, gently against the window, concealing the curtains of life and death, where the silken webs feed and destroy.
The silver moon wanes.


Quoted poem added to this post by SirhX from Spera's Writings Thread.
PostPosted: Wed Jan 05, 2005 11:07 am


A bump to save this thread! 3nodding

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 05, 2005 5:32 pm


SirhX
A bump to save this thread! 3nodding


The thread must be saved! scream
PostPosted: Tue Jan 18, 2005 10:02 pm


I wrote this a few months ago, one night in an angsty mood. I'd appreciate any comments. It's really angsty, like almost everything I write. @_@ (I entered this in a poetry contest, and won a giftcard to Tower Records. sweatdrop )

Footsteps on the Water
The knife fell to the floor.
"Be careful," you would say.
Whispering, "I'm sorry,"
She put the knife away.

You should've seen the torture
That she endured every night.
The pain was written in her eyes
Tears blurred and marred her sight.

She missed you when you left.
Silence drowned out all laughter.
You left your footprints on her heart.
Yours forever after.

The knife, stained red -- it falls
Leaves spots upon the tile.
You should've seen the horror
That replaced her gentle smile.

By the sea, you find her grave,
New girlfriend by your side.
Dry-eyed, you drop a flower,
Stolen softly by the tide.

Some years later you find
A bracelet you had bought her.
You smile sadly, and you hear
Her footsteps on the water.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 19, 2005 4:16 am


eek That is great. I love it. So many emotions put together. It makes me think I'm a horrid writer. *sighs* But it is really really good. biggrin
PostPosted: Fri Jan 21, 2005 4:11 pm


Izu_Reia
eek That is great. I love it. So many emotions put together. It makes me think I'm a horrid writer. *sighs* But it is really really good. biggrin


Erm...thank you. It was an emotional time for me when I wrote this; I'm glad it showed through. sweatdrop

Nonsense, you're a talented writer, Reia-chan. You give me something to shoot for. heart

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 21, 2005 7:56 pm


Jinsei
Izu_Reia
eek That is great. I love it. So many emotions put together. It makes me think I'm a horrid writer. *sighs* But it is really really good. biggrin


Erm...thank you. It was an emotional time for me when I wrote this; I'm glad it showed through. sweatdrop

Nonsense, you're a talented writer, Reia-chan. You give me something to shoot for. heart


sweatdrop sweatdrop sweatdrop I'm in a creative writting class right now. If I write something worth posting I will. wink
PostPosted: Fri Jan 21, 2005 8:23 pm


Izu_Reia
sweatdrop sweatdrop sweatdrop I'm in a creative writting class right now. If I write something worth posting I will. wink

Please do. whee

There's a creative writing elective at my school, but I don't much care for the teacher. Otherwise I'd be in it. ._.

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 22, 2005 8:27 am


Jinsei
Izu_Reia
sweatdrop sweatdrop sweatdrop I'm in a creative writting class right now. If I write something worth posting I will. wink

Please do. whee

There's a creative writing elective at my school, but I don't much care for the teacher. Otherwise I'd be in it. ._.


I don't like the teacher, but I figured it'd be good for me to try it. sweatdrop
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