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NPC APP.
Now edited for the ones that can't be bothered to read my posts

Gaian Name: The almighty maniac neutral
Character Name: Spirit of the converted
Character Age: As old as the jedi order
Character Alignment: The force

The Rest of this App is for those who wish to make a detailed character.

Height: (Basic height) 1.90 metres, approx.
Weight: (Basic weight) weightless, he is a spirit
Eye Colour: (Eye colour of character) ----
Hair Colour: (Hair colour of character) ---
Race: Force spirit
Skin Complexion:----
Relations: Related to all jedi and sith that passed away and saw the truth
Home Planet: Korriban
Stationary Planet: Korriban
Marks/Tattoo's/Etc.: -----
Character Description: He is a spirit of force, the only thing in the galaxy that has no force energy inside of him, but is visible
(add. info: to be seen, something needs to posses a bit of force spirit. Some force powers make people invisible by sending that energy to another place. Like you need life energy to live)
This spirit is a combination of the remains of several dead jedi that saw the truth about the jedi.
A "converted" dead jedi cannot contact the living anymore, so noone knew the truth... the only way living people could be contacted was trough this spirit, that has now dissapeared... but might return in the future.
Character History: He has always been were he is, but was never seen by someone worthy enough to see him.
Character Class: Force spirit
Skills-
Advantages: Persuasion, intelligence, wisdom
Disadvantages: Droid skill and piloting, won't need those
Inventory-

Ranged Weapon One: --------
Ranged Weapon Two: -----------
Melee Weapon One: ---------
Melee Weapon Two: -----------
Mines/Grenade:-----------
Ship: ------------
Droids: -------------
General Inventory: -------------


Role-Play Example! This Is a MUST!:

Cloacked black dude walks out of his house and says...: "I like icecream"

That is the most....er......s**t application ever xd ~ Sephi

You are Aware that this is OOC Knoledge and carnt be used IC?
I mean I would never acept this as even an NPC! ~ DeM

So are all the apps neutral they are for reference, remember?
And since you don't know what I'm going to use it for, keep your comments to yourself, ok?

Non - Force User App

Gaian Name: VoLt189
Character Name: Chalkabukk
Character Age: 235
Character Alignment: Sith

Height: 11'2"
Weight: 789
Eye Colour: Black
Hair Colour: Black and brown
Race: Wookie
Skin Complexion: Furry
Relations: None
Home Planet: Kashyyk
Stationary Planet: Ord Mantel
Marks/Tattoo's/Etc.: None
Character Description: Chalkabukk looks like an everyday wookie would with black and brown fur. He has two gernade belts, one starting from his left shoulder, down his back, and up the front of his body, and the other starting from his right shoulder, down his back, and up the front of his body. He also has a belt that carries plenty of clips for his heavy repeater blaster rifle.
Character History: Exiled from his home world for being envolved with Sith treachery and murdering his own father, Chalkabukk roamed the galaxy from planet to planet on shuttle after shuttle searching for his true calling in life. Running low of credits, he began taking up small bounties in each planet he would visit just to survive. Soon, killing people was like a second nature to him and with the extra credits he would earn, he'd upgrade his heavy blaster rifle just to get more kills to earn more credits.

As time went on, he soon had the title of a bounty hunter and his name was familiar all throughout the galaxy. Though now he has completely turned his back on his own race, the scares of his past have been forever burned into his memorie...
Character Class: Bounty hunter
Skills-
Advantages:
-Strength
-Repair
-Demolition
Disadvantages:
-Stealth
-Computer

Inventory-
Ranged Weapon One: A modified Heavy Repeater Blaster Rifle
Ranged Weapon Two: A modified Heavy Repeater Blaster Rifle
Melee Weapon One: None
Melee Weapon Two: None
Mines/Grenade: Five gernades
Ship: None
Droids: None
General Inventory: Gernade belts


Role-Play Example


Xiao says: Get the RP example and you look good to go.
You forgot to show that its a double handed weapon, like I said if its double handed then put the same thing in both slots. ~ DeM

Character Information-
Gaian Name: Ryoshen
Character Name: Aven Carwes
Character Age: 16
Character Alignment:neutral

The Rest of this App is for those who wish to make a detailed character.

Height: 5' 8"
Weight: 150
Eye Colour: Bright Blue
Hair Colour: Brown
Race: Human
Skin Complexion: Lightly Tan
Relations: None
Home Planet: Naboo
Stationary Planet: Dantoonie
Marks/Tattoo's/Etc.:Scar on his right forearm
Character Description: Easily manipulated. He believes that what ever his master says its true. Eager to gain the rank of Knight he rushes into most situations.
Character History: A son of a handmaiden to the Queen of Naboo. He was found by a jedi knight. He was later taken to Dantoonie. A few years went by and his master was killed by an unknown killer strong in the force.
Character Class: Jedi Sentinal
Jedi/Sith Level razz adawan
Skills-
Advantages: Piloting, Droids, Languages
Disadvantages: computer skills and Demolitions
Inventory- Padawan Robes

Lightsaber Type/Colour: Single bladed/ Silver
Ranged Weapon One:
Ranged Weapon Two:
Melee Weapon One:
Melee Weapon Two:
Mines/Grenade:
Ship:
Droids: Utility Droid (V3 F3)
General Inventory:


Role-Play Example! This Is a MUST!:

"Aven, Come in the rain storm is about to come." Aven's mother yelled out into the courtyard. Aven was playing with some gungan. He looked up at her and smiled as he waved goodbye to the others in the court yard. He reached his mother and huged her. "Mom." Aven looked up into the sky and sighed. "One day i shall leave Naboo and become more then just a simple servent for a noble." After he finished eating he went to bed and had a vision of a Twi'lek Male in what appeared to be Jedi Robes engaged in battle with another Jedi. He stood there and watched the twi'lek get cut down by the dark jedi. "MASTER!" Aven awoke screaming. He looked outside and felt a sickening feeling in his stomach. "What is happening to me?"

Months gone by as he continued to have the strange dream. Aven finally told his mother of the Twi'lek and found himself drawn to some strange feelings of what to come. he then began to isolate himself from his friends and even his mother. Then later that year he heard a knock at the door and his mother telling someone that he was in his room. "Mom who's there?" Then a Man walked into his room with a hooded robe on. Aven felt that he knew him. "Your the Twi'lek that i keep having dreams about." The Twi'lek then removed his hood and smiled. "You seemed to be strong in the force. I shall take you to the council and see if you are able to become Jedi." He looked at his mother and hugged her tightly. "Mother." He grabbed his belongings and left with the Twi'lek for the council.

Carnt really se anything wroung with this. But youll have to wait for Maniac/Sephi-Chan to Choose your Jedi rank. ~ DeM

Gaia Name: peiko

Character Name: Chibi

Character Age: 18

THE NEXT FIELDS ARE FOR PEOPLE WHO WANT TO GIVE A DETAILED DESCRIPTION. YOU CAN ALSO GIVE A QUICK CHARACTER DESCRIPTION INSTEAD OF FILLING IN ALL FIELDS

Height: 1 meter
Weight:80 lbs
Eye Colour: brown
Hair Colour: fur color Grey with black spots
Race: Ewoks
Skin Complextion: none
Relations: Doesnt know if she has any
Home Planet: Endor's
Stationary Planet: Tatooine
Marks/Tattoo's/Etc.: There is a large black spot on back of head shaped like a moon
Character Description/history: Wallks around makeing herself as tall as she can wairs a purple head cloth over head like all ewok's wair keeps her weapons attached to a small belt around her middle
History:
When I was eleven I left with some humans that had visited my planet. I wanted to explore, and now I am stuck on the planet of Tatooine.
My parents I left behind on my home planet they where only one of many that cared for me as a young ewok. In our large village all the ewoks where responsable for the young not just the parents. I learned from one of my older clan brothers how to fight like a warrior all though females where not fighters. I helped gather food with the village elders and made weapons with my many fathers. This is all in the past now I am stuck on a world where there are none of my kind and I have to be strong to survive

Skills and applications

advantage: Languages, Strenght, Persuasion
Disadvantage: Intelligence, Computer skill

Inventory
-The archives shall be used with this later. For now, refer to post 3 in this topic. Later, links to archives will be there

Weapon(s): (A weapon the character started with, no sabers unless jedi padawan+ MAX 2 weapons.)
Weapon 1:Spear
Weapon 2: Knife


Note: if you are a force user, your weapons will be different. In that case, the weapons filled in at the jedi application count, not these.

Ship: (Ship if any) none
Personal Belongings: hang glider

Jedi Information (fill in, even if not jedi)

Dark Side/Light Side (preferrance): Light
Sith/Jedi/neutral: neutral
Class: warrior
Saber: [Y/N]no
Sword: [Y/N] no



RP sample

"Chibi wants to go on star crusher" Chibi looks up at the big ship and pointed at it she had rembered Wicket talking about one crashing on their planet long ago. "ride?" she questions she was useing the language the human had used that she remberd another human say was french. When the human man shook his head no her little round ears flattened. "No ride for Chibi?" she frowned. "hey like a told yah kid I dont play around when my ships involved and I never give kids rides."

Chibi kicked at the sand at her feet kid she was all but humans where funny that way calling anything small kid. If he didnt stop calling her that she might show him how much a kid she realy was. Her hand tuched the belt that was hidden under her large head cloth the belt held her small knife. Maybe she would cut off one of his fingers. She regreted that she didnt have her spear with her this day she had left it back in the small hut that she had built for herself on this odd planet.

Hey hey! An Ewok. That should be interesting to see in RP. App seems good. Have fun! ~ Sephi

Force User App

Character Information-
Gaian Name: drgnladyblue
Character Name: Ryshel Kitana
Character Age: 20
Character Alignment: Jedi
Height: 5'7
Weight: 125 lbs
Eye Colour: blue
Hair Colour: reddish-brown
Race: human
Skin Complexion: fair
Relations: none that are really noteworthy
Home Planet: Correllia
Stationary Planet: Tatooine (until i move to Korriban once i have a Master)
Marks/Tattoo's/Etc.: none
Character Description: kind, courageous, and always stands up for her friends, family, and what she believes in. believes there is good in everyone, no matter what, and this can be a shortcoming at times.
Character History: once a normal young woman on Correllia, unaware of her extraordinary power in the Force, a run-in with and old, reborn enemy and a hero's son has thrust her into battle to save her close friend from darkness.
Character Class: Jedi
Jedi/Sith Level: Padawan (Guardian)
Skills- strong, natural aptitude for using the Force, especially at hiding her presence and shielding her mind, can wield a lightsaber with great skill, her kindness and love for those around her softens hearts and persuades others to believe her and want to help
Advantages: intelligence, computer skill, and stealth
Disadvantages: speed, droid skill
Inventory-
Lightsaber Type/Colour: blue, single-bladed
Range Weapon: simple blaster
Melee Weapon: small, intricately designed boot dagger
Mines/Grenades: none
Ship: a small, unclassified, one-person fighter designed by herself, called the Blue Dragon
Droids: none
General Inventory: some personal belongings too dear to leave behind, including a necklace her friend gave to her and a teddy bear her uncle gave her before she was born, among other things.


Role-Play Example! This Is a MUST!:
*note* this is an actual exerpt from the novel i'm writing, and it takes place before i and my friends leave Earth. *note*

Erin sat bolt upright in the dim illumination from the street lamps that was coming in through the windows. She looked for her clock, realized she wasn't in her own bed, and was quite startled until she finally remembered she was still at David's house. The digital clock on his DVD player read 3:21 a.m., and Erin groaned, rubbed her eyes, and yawned. She was still shaking from the dream that had just woken her up, and she was sweating, even though David had his air conditioner set at a cool 75 degrees.
She almost felt silly; the dream hadn't really been that scary. In fact, it wasn't scary at all until just before she woke up. There had been ghostly, mere wispy shadows of people in long, earth-tone robes and hoods, but they didn't bother her, and they sounded friendly. Most were walking around, but a group not far ahead of her was sitting and conversing with one another, and she was almost certain that she recognized at least a few of them from somewhere. She stepped forward with the intent of trying to get a closer look at them, but just as she did so, a darker, more solid figure all dressed in black with its hood up blocked her path. It said something in another language and in a tone that sent chills down her spine, and started to walk toward her with its arm outstretched. It reached its black, leather-gloved hand toward her forehead, but then she woke up, feeling as if she had barely escaped losing her mind to some unknown source.
The robed figures had seemed to resemble the Jedi from George Lucas' Star Wars films, of which Erin was a huge fan. She didn't believe that any of it could exist, but she always wondered what it would be like if the Force were real and could be commanded by Force-sensitive people in her own reality. Not that they truly needed it; as far as the people of Earth knew, they were quite alone in the vast universe, with no proof leading them to believe otherwise. Yet she still wished she "had the Force," for it could help her learn discipline and control which she had always struggled with. Her temper, which she inherited from her father, sometimes got her into trouble, and she didn't always know when to shut her mouth and just let things go.
Erin also wondered what her dream tonight could have meant. According to other Star Wars fanatics who researched and hypothesized deep into Jedi myth and folklore, a Jedi's dream seldom meant anything anyway, and the same was believed in real life by most people. Sometimes, dreams seemed to make sense or truly were meaningful, like in the Bible when Joseph interpreted the Pharaoh's dream. But overall, dreams were believed to merely be the brain's way of organizing and making sense of electrical impulses during sleep.
The clock now read 3:45, and Erin yawned again, more settled now, but also more curious. She lay back down; reaching for the blanket David had left her. She smiled because she knew it hadn't been there before, and it made her feel loved that he had thought to do so. As much as David always said he was "evil" and not that smart, she didn�t believe any of it. He had always been kind to her, and it never ceased to amaze her how much he really knew.
All throughout high school, David had taken classes below College Preparatory level and still received low grades. Erin and the rest of their group of friends were quite nervous and concerned whether he would graduate with them, let alone be able to go to college and get a high-paying job that he also enjoyed doing. Their fears were quelled, however, during their final year of high school, when he kicked his own butt into gear and did what no other student from Stockdale had ever done before. Not only did his grades improve that year, but he made up for the credits he had lost through poor grades over the past three years, "breaking records" according to their counselor. He had been able to walk across the stage at graduation with the rest of them after all.
Erin could feel her eyes becoming heavy, and she felt slightly uneasy about whether she wanted to fall asleep again or not. Even though she was still curious about the familiar-looking figures, she didn't want to see that black-robed thing again. Yawning, she realized she couldn't stay awake for much longer anyway, so she took a deep breath and assured herself that it was merely a dream, and she probably wouldn't see it again. A few minutes later, she was once again sound asleep on the couch; dreamless and content this time.

Xiao Says: Several things. First of all, 'earth' doesn't exist in Lucas' galaxy... sorry. >_> I'm afriad that kind of biffs up the application. In this Guild, we RP inside the galaxy, not out-then-in as Mary Sues.

I'm not sure what the whole thing on advantages and disadvantages is, but those are going to need some tweaking.

And "Erin" is THE BEST name on the planet. Kudos for you! *hands out cookies*

What Xiao said ^^ Pretty good though, apart from those things ~ Sephi

ok, i fixed some stuff, but am i ok with my roleplay entry or do i need to change it?

What you fixed looks good, and you don't need to worry about changing your example. We only ask for an example so we know we're accepting someone who knows how to spell.

However, there's still the thing about your advantages and disadvantages: Three advantages and two disadvantages-- all from the marked list. I'll include that here:

Get that done, and I believe you're good to go (DE can correct me if I'm wrong) If you're going for "Jedi", then you're going to have to wait for the Jedi mods to rank you. :3

ahhhh i see what you mean now. *fixed* ^_^

People are probably gonna hate me for this, but I'm gonna put you in as a Padawan for now, but if you are active enough you'll be promoted to Knight ^^ ~ Sephi

PS: What class did you want to be? Guardian, Sentinal or Consular? I couldn't see it when I was reading though ^^ ~ Sephi

yeah, i can understand Padawan for now (i haven't posted in here yet because i've been really busy this past week, just after i joined sweatdrop ) and i forgot to post that i wanted to be a Guardian.

Non - Force User App

Character Information-
Gaian Name: Chang999
Character Name: Nausica Falanx
Character Age: 40
Character Alignment: Imperial Citizen
Height: 6 ft. 2 in.
Weight: 180 pounds
Eye Colour: violet
Hair Colour: None
Race: Falleen
Skin Complexion: pale green
Stationary Planet: Kuat
Marks/Tattoo's/Etc.: none
Character Description: A normal colored Falleen, with a very smooth skin completion. Normally wears robes which are sometimes mistaken for jedi robes.
Character History: He was born on the planet Falleen into noble blood. And as is customary took a journey around the galaxy. After he was done touring the galaxy he never went back to his home world. Instead of going back to his home world he joined the Empire of Hand?s navy. In the navy he became a Special Forces lieutenant. After doing that for several years he began to hear much of the jedi?s strife and wanted to help. He then set off for Fondor to put his past political expertise to good use in the Intergalactic Senate
Character Class: Soldier/Politician
Skills-
Advantages: speed, languages, stealth
Disadvantages: strength and persuade
Inventory-
Ranged Weapon One: blaster rifle
Ranged Weapon Two: standard pistol
Melee Weapon One: cortosis weave sword
Melee Weapon Two: boot concealed knife
Mines/Grenade: 2 thermal detinators, 2 frag grenades, 1 concussion grenade ( I know you didn?t list it, but I hope its okay.)
Ship: Light starfighter
Droids: Modifid T3-4M utility droid
General Inventory: Small Med-Kit

jedi affiliation
Dark Side/Light Side (preferrance): light
Sith/Jedi/neutral confused ??
Class: Consular confused ??
Annihilator/humiliator/deathknight (sith): ???
Saber: [Y/N] (A Light Saber to use or not?) no
>Type Of Saber: ???
>Colours: (Colour of the Saber) N/A

Role-Play Example! This Is a MUST!:

As is customary on Falleen Nausica left his home planet to go to others and learn the "superiority" of the Falleen people. After seeing the strife in other parts of the universe he decided not to go back to Falleen. He then became an Imperial citizen.
He joined the Imperial Navy as an officer and soon thereafter volunteered for the Naval Special Forces. After staying several years he was moved by the Jedi's struggle for peace he then left the Imperials to help the Jedi.


Commenting on your role-play...

I hate script-style.

Focus on using quotation marks ("") instead of what you're doing.
okay no script-style

Force User App

Gaian Name: *Points above av*
Character Name: Winna Catar
Character Age: 21
Character Alignment: Sith

The Rest of this App is for those who wish to make a detailed character.

Height: 161
Eye Colour: Brown
Hair Colour: Black
Race: Human
Skin Complexion: White
Relations: Single
Home Planet: Onderon
Stationary Planet: Korriban
Marks/Tattoo's/Etc.: Long scar on right arm
Character Description: Althought she is a Sith, she cries often and cares of her friends.
Character History: She saies that she doesn't know anything about it, but actually she don't want to talk about it.
Character Class: Daethknight
Jedi/Sith Level: Dark Jedi Knight
Advantages: Speed, Languages, Computer skill
Disadvantages: Droid skill, Will
Lightsaber Type/Colour: Single-bladed, Red
Ranged Weapon One: None
Ranged Weapon Two: None
Melee Weapon One: Double-bladed vibrosword
Melee Weapon Two: *Points above*
Mines/Grenade: 2 plasma grenades, 1 ion grenade, 1 thermal detonator.
Ship: None
Droids: None

Role-Play Example! This Is a MUST!: "I will scout the area. It is very small."

"Okay. I will come with you. It can be dangerous out there."

*Sighs* "I guess you will come anyways."

*Laughs* "You are right.

"Let's go then!"

*Walks away, Winna close behind him*

"W-Wait... Did you hear that?"

*A Hssiss walks from behind the corner*

"Watch out!" *Draws her lighsaber and attacks the Hssiss*

"Winna!" *Draws two vibroswords and jumps into the fight*

"That's it, I think." *Hssiss lies dead on the ground*

"Winna.. I don't think this place is so nice. Let's head back to the ship."

"Are you crazy? If Taccara is here, I must find her!"

*Takes Winna's hand* "Please. We will find her tomorrow morning."

*Sighs and looks into the distance. Two Cannocs walk on the shore, that is visible from the little path in the woods* "You promise?"

"I do." *Hugs Winna*

"Oh... She might already be dead..."

"If she is, you could have done nothing to stop it. It isn't your fault." *Starts walking back to the ship*

Sorry, I'm REALLY bad at english, so don't care about the mistakes. XD

I think you'd have to start as an initiate, not knight (tho that's up to xiao)
rest looks good. And I understand your english, so it should be fine. ^^
Rest looks good :3

OK, that's allright! Thanks god you understand my english, I still study it in school...