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PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 8:37 pm


Very nice Kyle! And you said you couldn't write fics. What blasphemy.

But I agree with Joe, it is very good o_O Nevermind the fact I wanna shove a clicky pen into Ajora's aorta.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 8:37 pm


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"Such a specific question! Fourty-two."


AAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA! XDD

Also, very good. ^_^

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:42 pm


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And as I said before, I hear your voice in Ajora, but yeah, not so much in Kyle XD


Maybe Kyle was truly meant to be evil. >__>
PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:09 pm


I wouldn't doubt it. O_O

w>;;

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 11:49 pm


Chapter 1: The Alpha of Omega

{Cue: End of the World}


"Yeah, so, this isn't Notre Dame," Kyle said, pointing out the obvious as they cautiously stepped out into what appeared to be a region devoid of life. Trees were without leaves, the ground was without grass, there was no sign of life... there were strange rock formations in random places, as if the ground had been forcefully heaved up or forced down.

The worst part, however, was the atmosphere of death. The aura of Darkness was palpable in this desolate region. Despite it being the middle of the day, there was no sunlight; instead, black clouds covered the sky, adding to the foreboding effect. Lightning seemed to strike from cloud to cloud above... however, instead of the pure white of normal lightning, it was a pale, sickly green.

In the distance, they could see what appeared to be a tower... at the top, a strange, shimmering light...

"Why did the train take us here...?" James muttered, his gun already drawn as they surveyed the area. He sniffed somewhat, attempting to use his enhanced senses to get more information... only to scowl. "Ugh, it reeks..."

"Of what?" Dawn asked, a small shiver running down her spine as thunder rumbled above them.

"Darkness," Sora answered for James, eyes narrowed. Rarely was a place so corrupted that it showed, but Sora was more than familiar with such places. The City That Never Was, the End of the World... to the Keyblader, it was like a vivid memory.

"I don't like this. Joe, check to see if Zell's discovered-"

"Don't bother," Noelle interrupted Kyle, coming down from the train last. She'd gone into the Engine Car the moment her eyes had seen this place through the windows. As her feet touched the earth, a cold jolt shot up her spine. "Train's out of commission. Not responding to anything..."

Noelle looked to Joe and Kyle with a serious glance. Kyle cursed under his breath as Joe said what pretty much everyone else was thinking- "Something powerful enough to pierce Merlin's protective enchantments."

Once again, thunder filled the sky above them, causing Dawn to shiver... but the thunder didn't stop. Instead, the rumbling seemed to grow louder... and closer. They looked up, each prepared for combat almost as soon as they drew breath. What they saw was no enemy, however... but the Red Rose, touching down just a few dozen meters away in the clearing.

As soon as they did, Kyle gave a quick wave to the people standing on the small balcony (John and Riku), both of whom simply jumped down as the others filed down the lowering stairs.

"You too, huh?" Sora asked, looking to Riku as he walked over, the Road to Dawn having been in his hand before he'd even jumped down.

"We were going to see the King of Sleeping Beauty's world," John spoke up as Riku nodded. "We knew something was wrong when the ship suddenly lurched in a different direction... do you know where we are?"

"No clue," James responded, watching as the others came over. He noticed some of them give a brief shiver- Kyla and Alan, most obviously.

"Something's so wrong here," Alan spoke up, looking toward the darkened sky. "The magic flows are intense, but completely desolate."

"It's the Darkness," Riku spoke up knowingly, his tone calm but his eyes showing a fierceness saved for only the toughest of battles. "It's ruined this place... no. It's taken over."

"Reminds me of the Realm of Darkness," Sora added, looking around. Despite his normal, boyish innocence, there was something about this place that brought out that small shred of wisdom he'd gained throughout his battles. "But even that place wasn't this..."

"Evil," Kyla said, to which pretty much everyone nodded. A silence seemed to take over them, each as uncomfortable as the other.

"Wait. Where's Kuja?" Kichi asked, his eyes immediately narrowing as he scanned through the ranks. Auron and Nanaki were out, standing on either side of the groups. Leon and Cloud had remained by the stairway, Leon talking to Beatrix at the top of the stairs.

"Vanished before we left," Joe said, a hint of venom under his breath as he remembered the circumstances before making an observation of his own. "Where's Seymour?"

"And Axel and Demyx, for that matter," Kyle muttered, noticing the absence of all three of them. Jon only shook his head, confirming their suspicions. Oddly, both Louis and Netunos had departed, though the opposite groups didn't really know of the other's Ivalician.

"Beatrix can't get the ship running again," Leon announced as he and Cloud strolled up, Leon's Gunblade at the ready, though Cloud's Buster Sword remained holstered. "Won't start. Told her to stick behind with Yuffie and Maggie-"

"What's wrong with Maggie?" Jenny asked, looking worried. She'd immediately tried listening for the Heartsong when she saw Maggie absent. "Her heart- it's... it's so chaotic."

"We don't know," Kyla said timidly, obviously very worried about her friend- the one she'd helped save from Diablos.

"Something's been hurting her, and... as we got closer to this place, it only got worse," Amy said, scratching her temple with the barrel of one of her pistols, causing Kyle to visibly cringe, though no one really made note of it. "Nothing I do works on her. White Magic's useless on it..."

"Well, s**t," Kyle hissed, looking up at the thunderclouds once again. The sickening-emerald lightning just kept flying through the sky, never touching the ground. Green was his favorite color, but this... something was wrong with it.

"Well," Alan said, clearing his throat, Jehuti under one arm. "What now?"
PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 12:03 am


MOAR ;n;

Great setting by the way, I like how you set the mood with the whole ominous feel.

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Amy said, scratching her temple with the barrel of one of her pistols, causing Kyle to visibly cringe, though no one really made note of it.

Best line. XD I choked on my water.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 10:51 am


Very good Kyle. I love both of the fics. I am not sure of which one more I like more. You should defiantly continue writing. I want to see where this goes.
PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 12:43 pm


Chapter 2: Entering Oblivion

{Cue : Sacred Moon}


"Are we there yet?"

"Kyle, you're up front, stop asking," Joe responded with an exasperated tone, as though he'd been forced to deal with a child. And honestly, with Kyle, it felt like it sometimes. It was nice to have someone optimistic around sometimes, but now was just not the time.

They'd been walking for what seemed like miles; then Joe had to remind himself it had been miles. They'd decided to head toward the tower; there wasn't really any other landmark in sight, even when looking from the top of the Red Rose. They'd been forced to land in the middle of some forsaken utopia.

For the Heartless, anyway, which every now and then the group had to deal with.

To make matters worse, the region seemed... alive. The earth beneath them was almost in a constant state of change, with giant rock outcroppings rising one moment, and massive sinkholes appearing the next, only growing more sporadic as they drew closer to the tower. The wind currents could never pick a direction, at first coming from the tower, and then going to the tower... as if it were breathing. The thunder above them even seemed to have a rhythmic pattern to it... a pattern almost unmistakably like that of a heartbeat.

Joe shook his head, as if attempting to physically drive the thoughts from his head. It was just paranoia. He was on edge, straining for some clue. He was positive this had something to do with the Replicas... his targets. It was almost like he could smell them in this place. He was so on guard, so tense, that he was beginning to mistake a dead land for a region that was actually one living thing.

... it isn't, right?

The group continued to travel silently, careful to dodge any sudden changes in the earth's formation. As they did, Joe was left to 'gnaw' on his grudge, so to speak. They'd been in the middle of fighting off a large Heartless swarm, defending Mama Odie as she attempted to fight off Dr. Facilier, the Shadowman. The two voodoo specialists were clashing like nothing they'd seen before, but they knew if the Heartless got past, Mama Odie would inevitably fall... so, it was up to them to defend her.

They'd been doing alright, to be honest... but then, one of the Shadowman's stray spells struck Zeba in the back, knocking her right out. Joe and Kyle had rushed over to help, though Kyle was moreso planning to 'help' by blasting the witch-doctor straight to hell. Joe managed to stop him, managed to get Kyle to guard his flank while Joe carried Zeba to a safer location.

Mere seconds after they'd turned their backs, hell was unleashed. Kuja, tired of the antics, unleashed his most devastating spell- Ultima- and not only eradicated the Heartless swarm, but knocked a good portion of their own friends out. Before anyone could say or do anything else, the arrogant Genome parted, saying only a few words...

"I've grown tired of you pathetic excuses for wastrels. Au revoir."

It had been so sudden, so... unprecedented. Joe's grip on his bo-staff tightened considerably as he tried to figure out. Why? Why had the b*****d done that?

"Joe, stop thinking about it... you can't dwell on that," Jenny spoke up, looking sideways at the Fairy Fighter with a look of concern. Of course, she would know; she could tell from his heartsong. "We were all hurt... but we have to focus on what's here, what's now, you know?"

Joe paused for a moment, sighed, and nodded, causing Jenny in turn to sigh. Everyone had so much pent-up hurt- even Kyle, who hid it all beneath his typical mask of humor. Even the other group seemed to feel betrayal, their heartsongs telling her all she needed to know.

Oh, monkey doodles...

The Time Mage fiddled with her flute as they walked farther down the beaten path. The dead trees had begun to look more monstrous, each more corrupted by the errant Darkness than the last. Every once in awhile, Jenny would spot a black-petaled passion flower, only for it to be blown away in the gasping winds. Thick bramble vines seemed to have spread like a wildfire in this portion of the forest, wrapping around anything and everything, including the small boulders that had been forced out of the ground.

However, as they drew nearer, something they all saw sent a shiver up her spine. Some of the rock formations and sink-holes were covered in the jagged violet crystal outcroppings, some of them as tall as three-story buildings. They radiated a sickening aura, which she, Kyla, and Alan all seemed to shiver to (though no one noticed, Amy's grip on her pistols tightened considerably). As they walked past some of these outcroppings, Jenny's curiosity took over and she glanced into the crystal...

Only to spot a vision of herself sneering back, her eyes a piercing yellow, tendrils of Darkness slowly over-coming her...

She turned away, closed her eyes tightly, and began to jog forward in order to catch up.

As Noelle watched her pass her up, heading back toward Joe and Kyle, the agromancer couldn't help but share her feeling of dread. Each tremor under their feet felt unholy to her, as if it was some abomination powering such quakes. She'd shared a glance or two with Kyle McKenna when they felt a tremor, and could tell he felt the same. The earth... the earth just wasn't right here. It felt as if it should be dead, forsaken, desolate, and yet... it moved.

Titan... it's her, isn't it?
I'm not so certain, human... the wretch didn't have this sort of power.

Sadly, she agreed. The earth wasn't just moving, it was very much alive... well, undead, anyway. If Elleon had managed to obtain such potent abilities, it wasn't without the aid of some serious Dark back-up. Maybe this was Xehanort's doing... or maybe, the land was just that corrupt. In a world of magic like Kingdom Hearts, it wasn't necessarily impossible. Perhaps the Darkness had so corrupted this place that it obtained a mind of its own... a life of its own, malicious and deadly.

Noelle looked toward her side at James, who hadn't really stopped scowling since they left. With Fenrir's senses, and a knack for the Darkness, the he couldn't help but smell it with every breath, taste it on his tongue...

He'd been hesitant to even agree to this plan. Heading toward the epicenter of this pseudo-miasma was anything but a pleasant idea in his mind. They hadn't really had much choice, though; they'd waited around by the train and ship for a little more than an hour as Zell and Beatrix both tried to understand what was wrong with their ships. They'd even gotten together to brainstorm, with Silver's help, to no avail. They weren't going anywhere unless it was on foot.

Even then, it had taken steady coercing by the brains of the groups- Kyle, Alan, Kichi- that heading toward the tower, despite the fact that it was obviously a trap of some sort, was their only option. Waiting there by the useless transports would solve nothing, and going in any other direction was less likely to turn up results- Kyle had jumped up from the very top of the Red Rose and saw nothing but the same corrupted region as far as his eyes could see (which, at that height, was quite a distance).

"I don't like this one bit..."

"Hai," Kyla muttered a short distance behind, looking up from her sketchbook every once in awhile to check the surroundings for any changes. She'd, of course, begun sketching everything the moment she'd left, capturing as many blasphemous details as she could in her works. This place was like nothing she'd ever seen before... except in her nightmares. It reminded her (almost too vividly) of what her Replica had unleashed on them back in Halloween Town.

Another shiver shot through her spine as the to-and-fro gust passed by them, gaining strength as the tower drew closer. She'd been paying especially good attention to the tower, with all its complexity and detail. It gave off an almost concentrated dose of whatever the land was giving off, and that was just from looking at it. The most worrying part of it all was the golden light at the top of the tower, shining through the darkness and the clouds.

It worried her because this light held no warmth. It held no hope, no joy. This light was so devoid of all the things she'd attached to the idea of Light that it seemed a sacrilegious abomination in comparison. If anything... that shimmering light was the source of this abyssal feeling. There was just something about it... she knew. Staring at it only seemed to unsettle her further. With every glance, she felt this strange desire. She had to see it. Had to reach it... had to take it-

No! I can't... It's not natural...

"What... is it?" Dani asked, her eyes locked on the strange brilliance that was the unholy Light. Her arms, though still holding her chakrams, were wrapped around her form, as if trying to keep herself warm.

"I don't know," Kyle said, a frown very distinctly placed on his face, though none could see it as he and Kichi walked ahead of everyone else.

"Hopefully, we won't have to stay long enough to find out," Sora chipped in, looking to Riku for any sign of wisdom. The two had been on either side of the group, as if to watch the flanks.

Finally, despite the Heartless, despite the fluctuating terrain, and despite the very essence of Darkness that seemed to sicken them, they reached the tower, massive double-doors in front of them exponentially taller than either of them. The tower itself, now that they were up close, seemed to rise up forever, without end.

"Here goes nothing," Jon muttered, walking forward with Kyle, each stepping toward a door. Around their height, on either door, was a decorated knocker, curiously shaped like a Heart with three tips coming out of the bottom, one pointing straight down and the other two pointing left and right, respectively.

They lifted the knockers simultaneously, and pulled them back down to strike the doors...

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 1:05 pm


KUJA!!! WHAT A- THREEHEADEDMONGOOSESTOPPER D<

Good work with the descriptions Kyle! And I liked the perspective changes, they were jarring at first but then I came to really like them X3
PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 1:33 pm


*Gives Kyle a thumbs up* Nice Kyle. I love how the story flows. Good Job. Keep the ball rolling. I want to see more.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 1:50 pm


I'm loving this a lot already. The descriptions give me a rela feel of the envoirment, the atmosphere is just sucking me in, and your grasp on everyones persona's is BANG on!
Obviously another person has been paying attention.
I really liked the part when you described the Unholy Light. Very exciting. Looking forward to the next chapter!^w^
PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 4:16 pm


So I saw that this thread had a new post and I immediately checked it, hoping for more of the story. Damn you Kyla. I brand you as destroyer of hopes and dreams crying

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 5:19 pm


O.O''''' WHAt did I do?!!
PostPosted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 10:00 pm


This is already sending shivers down my spine... in anticipation as well as fear. I look forward to seeing how this develops, keep working on it! Good job ^^

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 11:22 pm


Sorry I'm late to replying to this... but, I must say... this is amazing. Absolutely inspiring. Your descriptions, your vocabulary, the feel and tone you have in the words of each chapter instill the very essence of evil and fear. The second chapter specifically drips with paranoia and that unexplainable, inescapable, nightmarish terror that leaves you trebling after you wake up from a scary dream. I love it!

The music is perfectly fitting, and so far loyal to the KH soundtrack. I'm absolutely inspired and enthralled by this writing. Can't wait to see where you go with this! Huge thumbs up!
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