TehTwi
Anyway, I skimmed through your RP and would divide it roughly into 2 "scenarios", one for the first day and one for the second, and would like to see either one more long scenario or two shorter ones like the first two. Don't feel restricted to just hunting patrols, perhaps one RP will mainly focus on one character confiding in another friend that they think they're in love, or maybe the two decide to show battle techniques to an apprentice whose mentor needs a day off. RP of them just hanging out counts, it doesn't have to be all about romance :3 Hopefully that helps you, good job so far and keep it up!
I was thinking maybe I should do a self-RP for Fleetwing to develop whether or not she wants kits? Because I think she's not quite sure right now.))
