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 Posted: Mon May 12, 2008 7:08 pm
Okay heart
See? I told you you guys have the same personalities. ^^
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 5:17 pm
TBH: I found the ending somewhat strange seeing as that she didn't have heart in it as she really enjoyed the sex this time with David. I think she still feels weighed down with responsibilities and many things that normal women can do that she cannot. But this time I gotta say....that was awesome... o.o
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 5:46 pm
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:04 pm
Yay!
-is now all curious-like about Nina-
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:34 pm
I'm addicted to this story. heart
I don't like to think myself as a perv, but maybe there is that part inside of me that is....
I really think the characters are interesting and realistic, much more alive than the characters in published novels I've been reading lately.
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:41 pm
tbh I think theres a little bit of perv in all of us and really now is it all that bad? its nature and I think kirb's has been wanting realism in her characters as noted in her poetry. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:48 pm
Realism in my poetry? No, that isn't oxymoronic AT ALL. rolleyes
I'm sooooosoglad everyone likes it. heart it makes my heart feel all tingly. In a good way.
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 8:57 pm
It's possible for poems to be realistic? Hehe.
I don't like it.
I LOVE it.
duh...
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 3:54 pm
Give us more or Des and I are going to eat Gall.
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 7:36 pm
Go for it.
But I'll put more up 'cause i love you and I love that you love my story heart
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 9:08 pm
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 9:22 pm
I love it... she wants him bad she knows it too but shes too confused of what to do. Shes as confused as he was when he didn't know how to have sex. She teaches him sex; he teaches her love... I LOVE IT!!! So simple yet, mindboggingly brilliant!!!
PS: more.....NOWZ!!!!
must.....find out..... her lover.....
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 9:38 pm
wow... it seems strange to me... that the most sure of men can be the weakest at times of great need. .....He was scared but then Janine would be scared for many years later.... I can think alot of things now... but saying them is harder... That particular man was really pathetic.....
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 9:42 pm
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Posted: Thu May 15, 2008 9:43 pm
Well if thats what being human means then Ill be an elf
or something different.
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