Lady Sierra
It's all hand done and with a mouse so It's a little agrivating... The biggest flaw in the piccy I think is her back/waist is too curvy and her arms are a little off....
If anyone has constructive critisism I'd appreciate it from those who truly know best- teh fellow whores
whee heart I have a tablet, but I actually prefer the mouse when coloring because I use photoshop. I also prefer inking by hand because I feel I have more control that way... sketchcing and some coloring is great with the tablet, and it's fun to have for oC sessions with other people... the mouse
does take time getting used to (so do tablets, tablets do
not make digital drawing easier), but I've read that a lot of artists prefer using their mouse. o.o My only problem with using the mouse is that my wrist hurts after a while.
For your last picture, the problems you have are with anatomy. There are lots of sites that can help you with that. Some of the things I can pick out right off are... a little below her breasts (in her current pose) her ribs shoud be jutting out a bit and I think her belly button should be that far right.
sweatdrop Her back actually doesn't seem to bad to me and everything else seems okay. Eheh, I've been working on anatomy myself for a while... and
here is some handy reading. Stick figures
do help. And it never hurt anyone to look at models once in a while to get an idea of what it should look like... or you can go and look at yourself in the mirror.
whee Oh, and I didn't noticed before, but on your third picture it should be "tasu
kete" not "tasu
kite"... "tasukete" means "help"... and "tasukite" as far as I know has no meaning. *checks her electronic dictionary* Nope, it doesn't.
sweatdrop Uhm.. hope at least some of that you find helpful.
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