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The Shadow of Deathfire15
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 Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 12:10 pm
"ok lead the way"deathfire said with a smile
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 12:20 pm
A very pale blush apeared on her cheeks as she walked deeper into the forest. She pointed at the small pond. "That's where the mermaids and the gnomes live." Rayne continued to walk down the forest pointing things out until she reached her home, A large Hollowed tree. She pointed towards it. "This is my home."
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The Shadow of Deathfire15
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 12:30 pm
"it very beautiful just like you"deathfire said to her
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 1:04 pm
Her face turned a dark red. "Th-Thank you.", she stuttered out. Her ears twitched slightly. Her eyes widened. "Something's wrong.", she said and she ran into the hollow tree. Rayne's eyes clouded with tears at what she saw.
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 1:33 pm
Tian, being utterly ignored in this whole situation, wandered off. And I thought the cashier was a bit looney, but these people! They don't even acknowledge me!
Going back to her previous destination, the park, she found 'her' bench with a person already sitting in it.
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 2:03 pm
deathfire come up behind Rayne and saw what was wrong and put his hand on her shoulder trying to stop her crying"is anything stolen"deathfire said to her
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The Shadow of Deathfire15
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 2:05 pm
Rayne collapsed over a person's body who was in a pool of blood. Tears flooding out of her eyes. It was her mother. "They-They t-t-took her.", Rayne stuttered out as she cryed harder over her mother's body. Her father was dead right when she was born.
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 2:44 pm
"do you want to go back to the time she was killed"deathfire said kneeling beside her
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The Shadow of Deathfire15
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 2:45 pm
((I'm bored out of my wits, can someone please reply?))
Kyoko is sitting on the top of a hill looking out at a beautiful sunset. Her swordstaff was neatly latched on her back. She stood up and picked one of the roses. The thorns p***k her finger and blood runs down the long stem. She picks off the thorns and puts it behind her ear and walks twords her small cabbin.
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 3:14 pm
Rayne sat up and looked sadly at Deathfire. "No. I don't want to see how it happened.", she said smiling sadly at him. "Thank you though."
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The Shadow of Deathfire15
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 3:45 pm
"well then there no need to stay in this form"deathfire said turning to his human form"should we bury her"he said putting his hand on her shoulder
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 4:28 pm
updates i have made a second character so that the people who don't have someone to talk to will have some to talk to ok ______________________________________________ shadow was walkingthough the park when he bump into Kyoko"sorry i wasn't watching where i was going"he said helping her up
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 4:36 pm
Rayne was meditating in a feild of flowers. A strange smell wrafted under her nose. 'It's that smell that comes from human cars', she thought. Her eyes open and she sees smoke coming from a part of the feild. Someone runs around her with a stick of fire on the flowers. "THIS IS HOW WE FEEL ABOUT YOUR FOREST !!!!!!!!!", a person yells over the flames. Rayne tries to find a way out but the fire. She screams as the flames come closer to her.
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 5:03 pm
the flame stoped moving then deathfire appeared beside rayne"did you miss me"deathfire said in his time controler form then he looked at the fire"looks like i come at the right time"deathfire said reaching his hand out to her
((shadow is my second character just so you know))
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Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2007 5:34 pm
Rayne takes hold of his hand a frightened look remained on her face. "Thank you. Thank you so much.", she said. As he pulled her out of the fire as time was frozen. She kisses him on the cheek as a sign of thanks.
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