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 Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 6:57 pm
" I understand.....the detectives main unit raised hell when i applied to be a captain......" she looked at him " I'll treat you with more respect...I have been quite snotty myslef" she was calming down "but i must ask you not to pity me.....I might get very frustrated sometimes but trust me pity will only make it worse...."
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 7:04 pm
Scott snorted. "Pity you? You made me jump of a roof." He calmly went back to staring out the window, and in every bit of red that flashed by, be it a poster or a stop light, he was certain he saw scarlet eyes. After a minute of this he closed his eyes. He was a dead man.
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 7:13 pm
( okay i think I'm finally gonna kill you off..if you want to keep scott on longer feel free to)
" What...what is that?" rozenfeild peered at the road ahead of her..
" Is that a woman in the midle of the road?" she slowled the car down and stared in wonder at the woman in red standing in the road. "W...who is she?" she looked to Scott. " Do you know her?"
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Posted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 7:28 pm
Scott tried to feel frightened, or resigned, or sad, but he could only seem to feel the extreme wonder that Rose's presence always inspired. "Not really," he murmured, his eyes riveted on the slender figure in front of them.
Briar Rose smiled a slight, secret smile that made her eyes shine as she seemed to glide up to the driver's side window. "Hello, Captain. I've been looking forward to meeting you for some time. What is that phrase you use? Oh yes," The perfect smile broadened. "Could I ask for a moment of your time?"
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 7:24 am
lizkotoisloco Rayven of Mirkwood Lindea smiled as she heard Cindie talk over the phone because when she left she bugged the phone so she could hear the converstation. She hopped back onto her motorcycle and headed off to meet with a Ms. Muffet. She went to a place called The Tuffet. She stepped off her bike and knocked on the door. Lindea thought in her mind... Operation X i'll ask about that. " Yes?" a timid ms.muffet peered through her door and stared Lindea up and down. " H..how.m....may I help..y..you?" Lindea looked at the timid woman. "Hello madam, I hate to bother you but I need to ask you some questions. May I come inside?" She didn't smile but held back a frown because she had to remember how to be kind to the suspects. She had already made up her mind of who done it but she needed the facts.
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 4:31 pm
Elesariin Scott tried to feel frightened, or resigned, or sad, but he could only seem to feel the extreme wonder that Rose's presence always inspired. "Not really," he murmured, his eyes riveted on the slender figure in front of them.
Brier Rose smiled a slight, secret smile that made her eyes shine as she seemed to glide up to the driver's side window. "Hello, Captain. I've been looking forward to meeting you for some time. What is that phrase you use? Oh yes," The perfect smile broadened. "Could I ask for a moment of your time?"
Rozenfeild looked at Rose. " Yes you may....." she was terrified but she looked at Rose with a calm face " What is it you wish to do in the time i've so graciously granted you?"
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 4:58 pm
Briar Rose laughed softly, and the sound was musical to the point where it almost didn't sound like laugher. Some of what she'd heard about the girl was apparently true; not many people could look her in the eye and keep even the appearance of calm.
"Why, I'd like to help you with your investigation, of course. I've actually already tried to help," her eyes flicked briefly and disinterestedly to Scott, then easily caught Rozenfield's again, "But fortunately or unfortunately, fate intervened. It seems I will have to take a more direct approach.
"I have three things to tell you; first, another detective arrived at the psychic shop, and was greeted by Madame Sonja, but by the time your Detective House got there, the shop was closed up and neither were there. Relevant?" She smiled. "Perhaps not. Second, after reading the note pinned to the door, Detective House took off to Ms. Muffet's which, as you may or may not know- then again, being the clever girl you are, you probably do know- could be a very dangerous thing to do. And third..." She trailed off, looking thoughtfully at Rozenfield.
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 5:09 pm
Rozenfeilds eyes were a bit aggitated but she remained calm. " What was that you said Im sorry there was a bird..off in the distance I just couldn't look away........." she gripped the steering wheel tighter.
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 5:34 pm
Briar Rose seemed to come to a decision, and continued as though Rozenfield hadn't spoken. "And third," she said, her voice calm, "I'm afraid that I'm going to need you to work quickly, which is something of a problem. You see," she said, smiling at some private joke, "You won't exactly be able to remember my request. Anything I want you to remember cannot have anything whatsoever to do with me."
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 5:43 pm
" Well then I'll assure you i'll work my quickest and forget this little ecounter........" she et go of the steering wheel and looked at brier bleakly.
" Why'd you want me to solve this case so quickly......"
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 5:46 pm
Rayven of Mirkwood lizkotoisloco Rayven of Mirkwood Lindea smiled as she heard Cindie talk over the phone because when she left she bugged the phone so she could hear the converstation. She hopped back onto her motorcycle and headed off to meet with a Ms. Muffet. She went to a place called The Tuffet. She stepped off her bike and knocked on the door. Lindea thought in her mind... Operation X i'll ask about that. " Yes?" a timid ms.muffet peered through her door and stared Lindea up and down. " H..how.m....may I help..y..you?" Lindea looked at the timid woman. "Hello madam, I hate to bother you but I need to ask you some questions. May I come inside?" She didn't smile but held back a frown because she had to remember how to be kind to the suspects. She had already made up her mind of who done it but she needed the facts. " y..yes you may.."s he closed the door and the long 'clink' of several locks was heard. The door swung open and the small Ms.muffet waltzed slowly into her tea room. " Please take a set......have s..some tea if you wish..."
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 6:04 pm
Briar Rose's smile widened. "You wouldn't remember if I told you. Didn't I just say that? You will not remember my request." She delicately brought a strand of impossibly long, silver hair forward, and began playing with it absently. "Although I do appreciate your willingness to hurry. Fortunately for both of us, you'll remember the other two things I told you, as I carefully left out any mention of myself. You won't be able to recall who told you, but," she shrugged her slim shoulders. "That cannot be helped. Good luck, Captain. It was a pleasure to meet you." A black car pulled up beside them, and Briar Rose calmly got in, slamming the door behind her. Within seconds, the car had disappeared around a corner.
Scott blinked, snapping out of it somewhat. "She didn't-" At that exact second, the glass on the passenger side window shattered, and Scott slumped forward, blood seeping through his shirt.
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 6:37 pm
" W..what the!??!?!?!? SCOTT!?!?!?" she pulled the lifeless man twoards her. She gripped her hand on his chest trying to stop the bleeding she could. She grabbed her phone and called another medical squad. The seven small men worked again furiously on Scott in the middle of the road. She watched them impatiently trying to stay calm.
(( are you gonna let scott die or not?))
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 6:41 pm
Kisa Muffet sat on a tuffet.(sorry had to say that) Her hand was shaking as she held out a cup of tea to Lindea.
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Posted: Wed Oct 10, 2007 6:51 pm
Lindea took the tea cup and put two cubes of sugar in her cup and smiled softly which was rare. "Thank you. Can you tell me about Jack?" She asked.
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