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 Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:37 am
celeste.une.demo ((-teeth grinding loudly- Please excuse this, Star...
If I remember correctly, this is supposed to be a LITERATE role-play, or at least semi-lit. Do any of you other than Star and Matt know what that means?!! It would seem not. QUOTATION MARKS AROUND YOUR DIALOGUE. Or, more simply, DO NOT PUT:
Teacher said...what are you doing here? I said: I'm waiting for my class to start Teacher said: what class are you in?
It MEANS:
An unfamiliar teacher approached her where she was standing in front of the door.
"What are you doing in this hallway?" she demanded.
"I have a class here in five minutes," Jenny replied, pointing towards the door as she said so.
Surprised, the teacher asked, a touch incredulously, "What class are you in?"
Also...
CAPITALIZATION
PUNCTUATIONSPELLINGIf anyone needs an example for the last three, PM me, and perhaps I'll be nice enough to give you one.
Forgive me if that was out-of-line, Star, but illiteracy in a literate role-play bugs me to NO end.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:37 am
((OK... ill try that and u see if my grammars better))
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:39 am
ratsgalore ((OK... ill try that and u see if my grammars better))
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:39 am
((OverLordStephishness. Have you made a character yet??))
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:41 am
ratsgalore ((OverLordStephishness. Have you made a character yet??))
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:42 am
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:43 am
Okay* God, doesn't take much to add 2 letters to the word.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:45 am
((Okay then, okay. It didn't say that there were any spelling errors))
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:53 am
((That's because it's a common slang version that's been used since probably at least the 1950's.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:54 am
Username:OverLordStephishness
Name: Honyuh (Pronouced as spelled) Hackua
Looks:
Usual Clothing (School Clothing with her own look to it.):
Outlook on world: All through middle school she was told she wasn't good enough, so now she doesn't care what others think of her, and just does what she feels is right.
Religion: Christian (Always wears a cross Necklase(sp?) that is in the picture)
Acts: Kind, but if you pick a fight with her, she will be a b***h. Cares about others, even her enimies(sp?) if they are hurt or need help.
Past: Grew up with your tipical family, has a sister that is 4 years older that she is constantly calling.
Room: Need's to be placed.
Age:17
Crushes:Not Yet.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:56 am
((Okay, now I'm bored can we get back to the RP now??))
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 7:58 am
((Nice picture. Got to go now bye guys))
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 8:08 am
celeste.une.demo Character Name – Alvena Phineas
Username – celeste.une.demo
Age - 17
Bio(short, please.) – Alvena comes from a rich, ancient British family. In Olde times, those of her family were often called elves because of the seemingly hereditary beauty and grace.
Personality(couple of words, thanks!) – Elegant, sophisticated, romantic, but still kinda fun and with a strong thirst for knowledge
Dorm #2
Crush(es) – none as of yet
Appearance(a picture would be nice, thanks..) – I couldn’t find a picture, but I’ll post one as soon as I can:
5’7”, long black hair, green eyes, pale-ish.((I hope this is okay?))  This the kind of picture you were looking for?
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 8:12 am
((Okay, I'm gonna start over since my first post was ignored...
RP with me, OverLordStephishness?))
Alvena stood outside the third floor History classroom, a book bag across her shoulders, waiting for the teacher to arrive...Or anyone, really.
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Posted: Fri Aug 24, 2007 8:15 am
OverLordStephishness celeste.une.demo Character Name – Alvena Phineas
Username – celeste.une.demo
Age - 17
Bio(short, please.) – Alvena comes from a rich, ancient British family. In Olde times, those of her family were often called elves because of the seemingly hereditary beauty and grace.
Personality(couple of words, thanks!) – Elegant, sophisticated, romantic, but still kinda fun and with a strong thirst for knowledge
Dorm #2
Crush(es) – none as of yet
Appearance(a picture would be nice, thanks..) – I couldn’t find a picture, but I’ll post one as soon as I can:
5’7”, long black hair, green eyes, pale-ish.((I hope this is okay?)) ((Oh, my god, yea. Just not so...preppy...slightly flatter, thinner hair, up in a bun if possible. No ribbon, emerald green dress, without ruffles. And, of course, green eyes. Other than that(I know, lots of modifications), it's perfect.))
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