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 Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:25 pm
Pelvic: so can we do 3 stanzas wit 18 lines?
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:26 pm
Cr4zySqirrel Pelvic: so can we do 3 stanzas wit 18 lines?
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:27 pm
Helium Voice Cr4zySqirrel Pelvic: so can we do 3 stanzas wit 18 lines? so we cant do stanzas?
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:27 pm
Helium Voice Cr4zySqirrel Pelvic: so can we do 3 stanzas wit 18 lines? under the rules it says 6-24 stanzas.
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:27 pm
i sent mine but i thought a stanza was 2 lines or more.
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:28 pm
I don't think a lot of people like this contest..
i'm going to give it a shot though ^^...
OK... A couple things, Pelvic Thrust Fairy: Is it about sex AND Pie? Ooorrr is it about sexually explicit PIE?
and i just saw the thing about the stanzas soo.. i'll go ahead and leave that out. XD
I edited my post.. it got screwed up somehow... ^^;
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:30 pm
. M i d n i g h t . Dance with me below crystal knives... Oh and does it have to rhyme exactly? Or can I use something like Pie and Mine. Since they sound similar.
If not I can just change it ninja ...We'll dance in fear of our own lives.  Pelvic Thrust me. . [harder]. .. and . . Moan for me. ..
Comment me
Mmm, now. . that I'm getting all these pie poems. . I'd have to say no.
They don't have to be EXACTLY a-a, b-b, c-c
But make that the main rhyme scheme PLEASE.
Thrusts: 13,547
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:30 pm
Dance with me below crystal knives... Woah I like this contest xD Tons of fun thinking up rhymes ;D...We'll dance in fear of our own lives.
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:30 pm
I don't think a lot of people have a clue as to how to write a poem.
ninja
Think edgar allen poe people.
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:33 pm
 When you are miserable,I sent mine ;D yay Know that I'm just fine.
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:35 pm
Dance with me below crystal knives... ok got it. Although mine doesn't really have anything to do with pie xD
Anyways just finished the rough draft. Now to go over and tweak it. ninja ...We'll dance in fear of our own lives.
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:35 pm
Oh man! I AM SO DOING THIS! xDDD
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:36 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:36 pm
StfuToastStix I don't think a lot of people have a clue as to how to write a poem.
ninja
Think edgar allen poe people.
I have a book of his poems/stories upstairs. I don't think sexy death pie would be appealing, though.
WHAT AM I SAYING? Sexy death pie! That's like the greatest pie evar!
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 1:36 pm
When you are miserable,
You have to email it
Know that I'm just fine.
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