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 Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 10:48 am
(Everyone is so dead set on killing one another. I guess I should have been aggressive like you guys, I'm not use to posting in an offensive and aggressive manner. Next time, I'll know what to do and what to expect, you can all count on that.)
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 11:05 am
Kaoru Nagisa appeared, clinging to the walls of the cells with chakra.
he was wondering why there was so much racket here and found out his answer, the three tailed Jinchuuriki.
"hmm..." he said. he looked out over everything with his Rin'nengan.
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 11:31 am
(Holy crap... i did not count on Sea Boss being able to do that.)
The water vapor floting in the barrier condenced and resolidifyed to form kuro without the curse mark. "Damn..." Kuro fell to a knee panting. "Even with the large amount of chackra i have... i cant go any more..." Kuro looked over and right next to him was the titanium bar. "Well... i always fight to the end." Kuro grabed the bar and stood up, his entire bodie shaking with the effort. "Great...now not only do i gots to fight Saketsu... but i have to fight the water creature of yours..." Kuro raised his hand and tryed to form chackra into the bar. "Heheh...not even enough chackra left to make a decent blade... atleast i get to go out like a warrior." Kuro raised the bar and slowly advanced on Saketsu, a smile plastered on his lips. "Looks like this is the end."
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 11:35 am
"K-Kuro!" Doku yelled out from his position on the ground, "Don't...you dare... die on me!" Doku had no strength left but remained strong on the grip to his sword ~father...why does it have to ....be like this?! i just...wanted to fulfill...your last...wish...~ tears gently poured down Doku's cheek as he continued to watch kuro struggle...
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 11:53 am
Kuro stoped directly infront of Saketsu, the bar in his hands draging in the ground. "I hope Saketsu... that one day... you truly find what you have been searching for... because thanks to you... i have found what i have been loking for my entire life..." Kuro doped the bar, leting it hit the ground with a clanking sound. "I have never feared dying Saketsu, you know this. Good-by Doku, become strong, stronger then me." He closed his eyes and wated for the final strike that would end his life, that calm smile still on his face, even thow death was moments away.
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 12:05 pm
the tears started to stream down his face even faster and now Doku fought against the poison trying to sit up, "K-Kuro!! Y-you Idiot! How can you even g-give up like THAT?!" Though Doku knew there was nothing left any one of them could do, he finally got up and kneeled in front of his teacher ,"Saketsu-dono...if there is going to be death then...PLEASE SPARE KURO AND KARI, TAKE MY LIFE! I've failed everyone's trust and failed in keeping my promises! please...i beg of you..." now his face gone a dark red, he threw up even more blood and continued to beg with his head down," please...spare them...kari's...only begun the rest of her life as a shinobi a couple days ago...and kuro-senpai...he's got ambitions...he needs to live until the day...he can find himself satisfactory as a member of his shendai clan...i am...willing to die...by your hands...this is my last wish of you..."
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 12:59 pm
Deidara suddenly appears behind Kuro.
"If death is what you want, then death is what you get. Un."
The gentle breeze blows at Deidara's hair as he raises his hand and hits Doku right in the lungs, death comes to the Mist shinobi.
"What a foolish boy, in situations like these, learn to save yourself before saving others. Un."
With that Deidara retreated and allowed Saketsu to have his kill of the day.
(I'm kind of teary-eyed as I type this, even though my character has no emotion, I do! To die such horrible deaths, you two dumb kids. I kill-stealed Saketsu and he wanted his kill so I'm giving it to him, Lol.)
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 1:03 pm
"Boy, do you have any idea who you are speaking to? I am Merciless, I am Saketsu Toshirou, the master of Puppetry and assasinating, I tamed the Three-Tailed beast, and now use it's power as my own. I'm famous to all of the Chikamatsu clan in the Hidden Sand village! I'm not going to become as Merciless as that, and kill you alone. Kuro and that nasty vampire came along, they can die. Well, unless Kari can escape, I'll let her. She isn't worth my time. But I'm not going to let Kuro live, after using all of the Energy, and you, you will die eventually, due to the lack of ability to move. Kaoru is done by now, you won't be protected by the demon. Now, to end it all."Saketsu said as he Made a set of handsigns. "Human Puppet Technique!"Saketsu yelled at Kuro, launching his attack, and turning him into one of Saketsu's puppets.
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 1:20 pm
(whew...man this was fun and so sad, i didn't want doku to die so quickly right after i finally got into playing on the guild but now...T-T what a cruel world shinobi's have created, i feel bad for kari though...so what now?)
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 1:31 pm
((Uh, make a new character? XD Your fault for being so heroic and trying to save your fellow 'teammates' who probably wouldn't have changed your life lol. DX))
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 1:38 pm
The Black Shinobi Takumi ((Uh, make a new character? XD Your fault for being so heroic and trying to save your fellow 'teammates' who probably wouldn't have changed your life lol. DX)) (i didn't know we were allowed to create more characters, but it just wouldn't feel as cool as the original...and don't say that, no matter how well you know them or even if you've just met them once, everyone has a huge impact on your life *sigh* unless a miracle's gonna happen guess i'll go start on my new character then)
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 1:42 pm
(I believe you casn make a new character, or it would be pretty stupid.... And yah, it wouldn't have the same spark as your original character. Impact is only if they're a demon in the Shinobi world, you know a Jinchuuriki the Akatsuki will eat your butt out to find out who it is. >D)
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 2:03 pm
(Well Yesterday, this is the price you and I pay for being so soft on our posts. But now I'm learning from them really fast, so you all will see some 'surprising' results.)
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 2:07 pm
The Black Shinobi Takumi (I believe you casn make a new character, or it would be pretty stupid.... And yah, it wouldn't have the same spark as your original character. Impact is only if they're a demon in the Shinobi world, you know a Jinchuuriki the Akatsuki will eat your butt out to find out who it is. >D) (lol about demons, are they just naturally there? or is something like bleach if you die and don't pass on you become hollow? haha i was thinking it would be cool if my dead character came back as demon but owell, let's start again shinken!)
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Posted: Sun Nov 11, 2007 2:20 pm
((Eh, Shinken isn't starting over, he is gonna make this storyline twisted, he's just waiting for his moment. XD))
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