do you think for my first time making an RP i did good? |
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it is to advanced for my little mind......... |
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its the best RP eva! |
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i cannot comprehend this question or my answer....... |
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 9:31 am
"gaurd, make sure to it that this girl gets takin out by the hell hounds. make sure everyday, if she still live, to manover the hell hounds twards and around her."
"yes sir!" the gaurd replyed.
"we shall see who stares at who." the cpt said as he now focused his atention at the chess game.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 9:36 am
she looked down at Riane as if to say "run!" but she didn't say anything. she looked back at the captain... "i have met her, but that is about it... my name is Aubry Rosewater... former terrorist, and bomb professional..." she stood up, and took a bow.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 9:37 am
Riane pushed her messy purple hair out of her face. She could guess that the captain now also wanted her dead with the way he had stared back earlier. This might be interresting after all. She smiled up as though she thought that he was going to let her out not try and kill her. She knew that most of the guards were blood-thirsty and vicious, so it didn't surprise her much that they all wanted the prisoners dead.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 9:41 am
"hmmm...nice to meet you. i am Captian Durand Hailfire, of the third legion."he now stood up and took a bow, while thinking of the best time to relese the hounds tomarrow, not for lucian, but for the girl.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 9:46 am
"before we start, i wanted to ask you something... actually, i want to ask several things, but i have question... how did your wife die? and why do you hate kucien and Riane so much?"
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:05 am
he was takin back by her forwardness. "first of all i have to ask you a question, how did you know i was married? and how did you know my wife died? and how do you know i hate the girl, and lucian?
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:09 am
Riane couldn't stay sitting up for much longer. She was too tired. She couldn't tell what time it was, but it was probably late considering there were barely any other inmates out. She lay back, her knees propped up, her hands keeping her head off the ground. She was still staring up at the captain and her inmate. She smiled again from being so relaxed, not worrying about all the other inmates.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:12 am
"because im observant, and happened to have known your wife before you married her... so, how did she die, and why do you hate them so much?..." she looked straight into the captain's eyes.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:12 am
lucian slowly crept to the hot spring, looking around, to make sure no one looking. he had a bucket, somthing hard to come by in the prizon, he filled it up with waater, then slowly crept back to his hidden cell, behind some rocks.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:20 am
he was takin back by her answer yet again.
the only reson he didnt cap her right there was because she said she knew his wife.
the cpt stood up, and started to walk away. then he stoped, "gaurd, escort miss Rosewater back out the gates. "he said, the gaurd walked over to aubry, standing her up. they headed to the gates. "she was killed by one of lucians komakazi teem mates."durand finished. "i hate the other girl because she reminds me of leila."
then the gaurd led her out of the gates, the gaurd troded back in, the command center above, with the gates closing behind him.
the cpt went back to his room, he slowly sank into his bed, looking at the picture. tears came slowly streaming down his face. he kept looking at the picture, the whole night.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:24 am
Aubry was pushed over and down the ramp. she was bruised all over. her aching body walked all the way back to the cell that Riane was in. now that she thought about it, the more that she realzed that she was like leila. she sat down by the girl. she winced when she sat down.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:27 am
Riane finally moved again. She needed to get out of the way of anything that they could send down at her. She wouldn't let them kill her! She walked back to a cell, and stayed in there until all of the other inmates woke up.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:29 am
Aubry looked at Riane when she walked in. "Riane!" she whispered, trying not to wake everybody up. she ushered her over.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:32 am
"What?" Riane asked in a whisper also. She didn't want to wake the other inmates either.
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Posted: Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:35 am
before she answered, she felt something drip down her face. she felt her forehead, only to feel a rush of pain. she brought her hand back, to see it covered in blood. she wiped it on her shirt. "Riane, i want you to do something for me... do you know how to play chess?" her mind was wizzing like it used to when she was making bomb routes so that she didn't get caught.
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