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 Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 1:01 pm
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 10:20 pm
I'll tell her that you said so (is Penden). xd I like torturing characters and I need you captured for the plot. I promise. twisted
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School Of Dedicated RPers Captain
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 9:57 am
Well Arril getting captured is inevitable.
The separation of sih and Arril may make him extremely uncooperative, to the point of violence if he feels she is being harmed.
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 11:01 am
Draconian23 Well Arril getting captured is inevitable. The separation of sih and Arril may make him extremely uncooperative, to the point of violence if he feels she is being harmed. Sih is like his crutch xd
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 12:17 pm
How so?
Arril doesn't -really- need her to survive. Sih is Arril's best friend. There were plenty of times in his journeys where they could have parted, but they didn't.
She's more of a sibling than a crutch or material friend.
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 7:05 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 8:42 am
((I hope this is ok right? I did follow the right profile?))
Name: Theron
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Magic?: Silver: He liked to fool with people minds, by projecting fake illusions into their heads, causing them to go into a panic. He will also heal others when it is needed.
Appearance: About five foot nine. His eyes are a deep dark blue, with a scar over his left eye. His upper right arms has a star on it. On his right leg in the back it has scar running all the way down from the top to the bottom of it. Very long blond hair. He wears a brown robe, that covers his face, and runs all the way down to the ground.
Personality: Very cold at times, but is sympathetic when he needs to be. He hates authority, and will play with the peoples minds that tell him what to do, but he will still do what he is told to do.
History: He does not know anything about his heritage, as he was sold to the slave keepers as soon as he was born. He has tried to run away a few times, but never succeeded. He has been beaten many times because of his hatred of authority.
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 5:30 pm
How did he get his Magic? I have a feeling that will be one of Penden's questions. Thought I'd give you a heads up.
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 6:31 pm
So, my current thread's only occupant is currently me. Would it be possible for Gale to join up with one of the Tok threads or with the Roka/Phantom thread since they're conveniently in a clearing in the woods?
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 9:22 pm
Ronyo: I think he means that he has a silver dragon.
veinkiller: sorry that I haven't gotten to critique your profile yet. I should be able to do it this coming week since it is thanksgiving break
hm103: Roka isn't really posting. I've been thinking about who I can get your character involved with. Since we have the whole unicorns and tiny people living in the woods, I could bring you under their care perhaps?
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Posted: Sun Nov 18, 2007 9:29 pm
Ok, Thank you Penden, and be as harsh as you like on my profile.
And, yea I did mean silver dragon, should I have made it say "Silver Dragon"?
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Posted: Wed Nov 21, 2007 12:01 pm
Penden: Sure, why not. Where should I go, captain?
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 8:33 am
Random fact: it took me a whole day to enter in the data for an experiment I'm running for class. Still have yet to analyze it and write the paper. FUN! domokun I updated the Story so Far section on the first page, so that all of the new threads/finished threads are included/updated. hm103 Penden: Sure, why not. Where should I go, captain? Woohoo! Moral ambiguity ensues!
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 8:58 am
As a basic profile, it's fine, but as always, the devil is in the details. wink I have a few concerns and suggestions for how to fill out your profile more so that we can get you started. After my critique, I'll have three ways that we might fit you into the RP, so you can consider these when you edit your profile. And sorry that I'm long-winded mrgreen veinkiller Name: Theron Gender: Male Age: 12 Magic?: Silver: He liked to fool with people minds, by projecting fake illusions into their heads, causing them to go into a panic. He will also heal others when it is needed. Appearance: About five foot nine. His eyes are a deep dark blue, with a scar over his left eye. His upper right arms has a star on it. On his right leg in the back it has scar running all the way down from the top to the bottom of it. Very long blond hair. He wears a brown robe, that covers his face, and runs all the way down to the ground. Personality: Very cold at times, but is sympathetic when he needs to be. He hates authority, and will play with the peoples minds that tell him what to do, but he will still do what he is told to do. History: He does not know anything about his heritage, as he was sold to the slave keepers as soon as he was born. He has tried to run away a few times, but never succeeded. He has been beaten many times because of his hatred of authority.
Magic:I would like for you to chose one main magic type, healing or illusions. I think that illusion would be fun for you, and I know off the top of my head that we already have some healers. I know it's not stated any where on the first page that you can only have 1 magic type, and I can tell you've read the blurb on dragon magic, but I find that most people play better if they can focus on one type of magic, because it forces them to be more creative with it.
Age + Magic: he's too young to really be able to use his magic much. That doesn't mean that he won't be able to use it at all, but that he won't be an expert. Also, when you're playing, keep in mind that it's actually his dragon that uses the magic through him, and that using the bond is dangerous to his mental health or humanness at such a young age. His dragon would probably only help him out if it's really an emergency or a very emotional time, so I'd like for you to add something to his history about a time when his dragon did help him out and why/how.
Appearance: can a 12 year old be five foot nine? I'm not good at that sort of thing and I'm very short myself. xd And did you mean to say star, or is that a typo? The robe is fine, but you need to link it to his occupation as a slave, which you haven't mentioned. Maybe you'll get some ideas for that after I give you the 3 ways that you might join in.
Personality: your personality is fine, just keep this in mind when you add to his history.
History: It's fine that he's got Tok blood, but most of the slave characters like that were born into slavery, not sold into it. If he's going to be sold into slavery, I want an explanation as to how that happened, even if he doesn't know how himself.
History, More: I'd like a little more about his history, such as already mentioned, his occupation and a time when he used his magic. This should be easier for you to add once you see the different ways you can fit your character into the current story.
Ways we might fit your character in:
You can be part of a group that was just banished from Feretris [Here]. You'd have to catch up on what's happened to get them banished, but there are several characters that you can meet (although some of them haven't posted in a while), and you'd no longer be a slave. This group is likely to run into more trouble soon, but help is also on the way.
You can be the slave of Viecada and possibly befriend Kal and Shelah [Here]. I'm a little worried that Fenrir hasn't posted in a while, but I have some ideas for how to get this thread tied in more with the main plot by bringing them to the capital and we can auto his character along a bit if we have to.
Or, you can already be in the capital, but we/you'd have to figure out why. There, you'd meet Arril, who is being taken there because of his strange appearance and magical abilities [Here]. Arril is aggressive and will probably try to escape. Perhaps you could help him.
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Posted: Sat Nov 24, 2007 10:53 am
... I meant scar, not star lol. I don't know how that got passed me XD. Also, I meant to change the height of him. I had him at the age of 17 before I change it to 12, and I didn't change the height. I wasn't sure how to put in the robe to make it fit, but I just put it in there in the description lol. I hope that is good enough. If you need me to elaborate more, just tell me. I am not the best character maker there is. I like the third scenario. And I am used to long winded people. Sorry if this paragraph seems to have no order. I just kept adding to it, as I thought of stuff XD
Also, he has a dragon? I must have missed something...
Name: Theron
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Magic?: Silver: When he needs to use his magic he does, but at the cost of exhaustion. He will put fake illusions into people heads to help him get out of trouble.
Appearance: About four foot, seven. His eyes are a deep dark blue, with a scar over his left eye. His upper right arms has a star on it. On his right leg in the back it has scar running all the way down from the top to the bottom of it. Very long blond hair. He wears a brown robe, that covers his face, and runs all the way down to the ground, which he can keep cleaning supplies in, and possibly other things.
Personality: Very cold at times, but is sympathetic when he needs to be. He hates authority, and will play with the peoples minds that tell him what to do, but he will still do what he is told to do.
History: He does not know anything about his heritage, as he was sold to the slave keepers as soon as he was born. His family needed the money to support their own family, as they could not support themselves. He has tried to run away a few times, but never succeeded. He has been beaten many times because of his hatred of authority. His dragon has helped him out a few times, when he has needed it. He was in a hole in the ground, and no one would help him as he was a slave. The dragon had projected an illusion into a person's head, making them think that he was just a boy, that had fallen down a hole, making the person help him out. He has to take clean up after the people that own the city.
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