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 Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 12:57 pm
W-w-well, the you... started the sad-Emmma, trembling under the real Emmma's gaze.
There is always me, the you that deals with the robots. said a shadow.
"Which is...?" Emmma said, trying to take in all this. Was she really like that?
Which is me. a woman appeared.
She was...in short, pretty damn badass.
She wore a longcoat that billowed after her, her plush lips with black lipstic, and her tophat exactly like Emmma's.
She was very very VERY well armed, guns in hands, guns holstered, sword stuck in a black belt.
If she was a Mary Sue she would be dressed stunningly, fighting bad guys in sexy dresses, but no, her clothes were form-fitting but practical.
There's also the you that accompanies your friends. said that Emmma, and pointed at another shadow, which cleared immedieately.
To reveal a gray wolf-dog. With a tophat.
"...ta hell?" said Emmma, now bewildered. A wolfdog? Why a wolf-dog?
Figure it out, idiot. said Sarcastiemmma.
"...does this mean I'm loyal or something?" she said, since that was what dogs were.
Dingdingding, we have a win-ar! said the Sarcastiemmma, chewing bubblegum.
Emmma rolled her eyes. "So, you, which is the part of me that gets me out of here?" she said, now getting used to this weirdness.
~la la la~
"Zip it!"
The Sarcastiemma grinned.
The one that deals with the robots smiled and prodded Emmma with her finger. That one, that one would be only you.
Translated to, you're on your own kid. said Sarcastiemma and blew a bubble.
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 3:49 pm
I was Special...I was... crying
Raine kept flying, slipping out a pair of crimson night vision googles. Very helpful to the hybrid. She narrowed her wings and kept flying. She may not have known these people well. But it was like destiny had entertwined all of their fates.
Funny, Destiny. Very Funny.
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 3:50 pm
Right, Special I have to steal your color for RPing for a little bit  I'm just borrowing it! Upon reaching what looked like a run down military base in the middle of a desert, Elle had to question what it was she was looking for. "Just what is in this place?" she asked placing her palm on the door. "It feels all to familiar. What is here?" she pondered but had to cut her thoughts short because of a sand storm quickly approaching.
She kicked the large metal door open and slammed it shut just in time. "Well...that was...right it would be dark in here!" she complained feeling the walls for a light switch. Elle found one and flipped it lighting the whole...whatever this place was. There was everything ANYONE could want. Guns, ATV's, laboratories, you name it, this place probably had it.
"Ok! Now I'm impressed." Elle stated looking around. But she still thought of what could be so important here that she HAD to be here looking around. "I guess looking information would be a good start. Hehe, although all these weapons and such are nice looking! But where is the information?" she joked looking for a filing cabinet.
She looked around for anything with her and Tina's name but not finding anything. She flipped though anything but found nothing. "What was it that Ace and that one psycho called Tina? Unit 80?" She pondered leaning back in a seat. She looked under 'Unit 80' but found nothing. Elle sat back and pondered some more, staring at the one filing cabinet in front of her. "Huh? Wha-" Elle got up and opened the drawer that had only one file with a huge 'Classified' stamp in deep red. ......  I wrote alot more than usual
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 5:56 pm
Finding new color code xD
Raine quickly found herself deep into the pipes, even with the goggles she quickly became lost. "Damn." She murmured.
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 5:59 pm
^0^ I like it Tina, keep it up!
Across the half of his vision focused on the grim, dingy tunnel ahead, maps and coordinates scroll left to right at alarming rates only his higher artificial intellegence could process.
Right. Right. Left. Right. Left.
The methane content in the surrounding air was lowering, and the oxygen level rising. They were close.
As the wind roared past through the ear-holes in her helmet, Ace smelt the distinct change in the air. The smell of ancient raw sewage was fading, giving way to the smell of fresh air stained with a hind of harsh metals. They were close.
Light was up ahead, illuminating a gigiantic door, obviously added to the tunnels far after it's construction.
As if anticipating their arrival, the steel contraption lurched outward and disappeared with alarming speed into the wall, allowing them to pass through before shutting quickly behind them.
Trapped.
I've felt like my writting hasn't been so good as of late. I tried a little harder, and attempted to get some of my old use of imagry back. Hope it worked. sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:02 pm
redface Thank you! So who's trapped?
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:04 pm
tina138 redface Thank you! So who's trapped? Ace. Its' kind of sinking in now that she's trapped, alone with Daemon. wink
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:08 pm
Raine heard the click and reared the corner. "D'arvit." She swore once again and fumbled around in her pocket, where was that laser.....
My writing stinks...I think the only good thing I wrote was when I wrote a Poem called Rush...I hate my writing xD
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:11 pm
wink Got it!
Charging head on to the large metal door I proceed to ram it at full speed. "Owwwwwk! That didn't hurt!" I said with slight pain in my voice. I got my saber ready and send electricity to it forming plasma energy. "Panzer Barrage!" I shouted lunging forward and starting my quick slashes but they didn't do anything.
"Psh, ok. Now I know where you are at." I mumbled starting to make my way back to Ace's lab to wait for Elle.
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:14 pm
Raine cursed, "I must've dropped it." She sighed. "Great. Just Great."
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:15 pm
@ Raine: You have alot of potential, but there's so much more to be said about your character. We only really get the bare-bones of what she's doing and very little of what she's feeling. Don't be afraid of getting descriptive!
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:18 pm
AceXIII @ Raine: You have alot of potential, but there's so much more to be said about your character. We only really get the bare-bones of what she's doing and very little of what she's feeling. Don't be afraid of getting descriptive! For good examples read some Edgar Allan Poe short stories. He was really descriptive. stare I mean that guy could write about a pen and make it 80 pages long, just about a pen!
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:22 pm
tina138 AceXIII @ Raine: You have alot of potential, but there's so much more to be said about your character. We only really get the bare-bones of what she's doing and very little of what she's feeling. Don't be afraid of getting descriptive! For good examples read some Edgar Allan Poe short stories. He was really descriptive. stare I mean that guy could write about a pen and make it 80 pages long, just about a pen! William Faulkner too. Light in August starts off with a two page description of a building. The description itself was rather elequent, but I'm afraid I can't say much about the book itself. I got bored after said two-page disertation on the physical appearance of a building.
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:24 pm
eek But it was a magnificent building!
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2010 6:25 pm
Let's have some fun! This beat is sick!
That's not my colour Tina, although it is very close. 3nodding
A voice sounded in Laura's head. Not only was she forced to relive memories, but now she was hearing voices. "Go away! Leave me alone!" cried Laura. She clutched at her head as a piercing pain spread throughout it. She screamed in agony as blood slowly began to dribble from her ears. The room began to flicker in and out of existence again, this time doing it so rapidly that Laura's eyes felt strained from looking at it. Laura then shouted, "Why is this happening to me?!?"
I wanna take a ride on your disco stick!
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