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 Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 5:05 pm
++++[B a s i c ] i l i n k z e l d i[ I n f o ]xxxxx  F u l l - N a m e : Haru Glory
A g e : Seventeen [17]
B i r t h - D a t e: September 9th
G e n d e r : Male
V i l l a g e : Village Hidden in the Clouds
R a c e : Japanese
R a n k : Gennin
N i n j a - P r o f f e s s i o n : Weapon Master
N i n j a - T y p e : Ability Control
N i n d o : "Screwing destiny around every corner...."
H e i g h t : 6’1"
W e i g h t : 85 Kilograms
O r i g i n a l - E y e C o l o r : Blue xxxxx I m p o r t a n t - I n f o [ R e m e m b e r ]
C l a n :
Dragonil
B l o o d l i n e - S t a g e : Stage One
C h a k r a - C o l o r : Blue-tinted Purple
C h a k r a - E l e m e n t : Katon
B a t t l e - S t r e n g t h : Fast and Tactical in a fight
B a t t l e - W e a k n e s s : Easily fooled by Genjutsu
F i g h t s - W o n : Unknown [?]
F i g h t s - L o s t : Zero [ 0 ]
P e r s o n a l i t y : An overconfident swordsman who dreams of one day clashing swords with the mist seven. Though he never intended to become a shinobi, he is rather skilled in offensive combat. Haru can identify with others well, though he prefers they do not spend time worrying about him. A rather naive shinobi who has difficulty taking anything seriously. Haru’s unusually upbeat attitude causes most to suspect he is hiding something under it all. However despite the tragic occurences in his life, Haru tries to move forward the best he can without holding on too much to the past.
B a c k g r o u n d : Haru was raised in a small island town a brief distance away from the mist village. His life was simple, but he enjoyed it like that. Haru’s father would constantly regale him with tales of the mist seven, an elite group of swordsmen who were all respected within the village. The tales seemed exaggerated even to Haru himself, until one day he learned his father had been a Mist seven at one time as well. The boy was too fearful to tell his father what he had discovered though and spent most of that weak avoiding his family. It was because of that, Haru was in the hidden mist village when their island was raided by a band of theives. By the time the news had spread to Haru it was too late, the entire island burned to the ground with no trace of his parents or his sister. The only thing he could recover was a rather large and old looking broadsword. He dragged the sword back to Cloud and swore to one day become one of the mist seven, and fulfill the dream his father had left for him. - C o m p l e t e d - M i s s i o n s - S Rank -- Unknown [ X ]A Rank -- Unknown [ X B Rank -- Unknown [ X C Rank -- Unknown [X] D Rank -- Unkown [X]xxxxx E q u i p m e n t - I n f o [ F i g h t ]
H e a d b a n d - L o c a t i o n : Tied around Neck
H e a d b a n d - C o l o r : Black Leather with Silver Plate
F l a c k - J a c k e t - S t y l e : A black leather jacket with white cross shapes extending down each shoulder.
W e a p o n - C l a s s : BroadSword
W e a p o n - N a m e : Eisenmeteor
W e a p o n - R a n g e : Close Range
S p e c i a l - A b i l i t i e s : An unusually large iron sword,which is useful in fights due to its weight and size. It recognizes Haru’s chakra making it significantly lighter for him to carry, allowing him to swing around the sword with ease. It also reacts to Haru’s flames, which allows him to use the two abilities in combination.
W e a p o n - L o c a t i o n : Strapped to Haru’s Backxxxxx T e c h n i q u e - L i s t [ M a s t e r ]xxxxx[ X ] - C l a n - [ X ]xxxxx Techniques of the Dragonil____
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• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Jutsu]-Rank E
• Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Jutsu]-Rank E
• Henge no jutsu [Tranformation Jutsu] -Rank E
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[size=9][color=Silver]Haru Glory/||/ Gennin - D - Rank /||/ Mist Village /||/ IyokuClan[IC][/color]
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[color=gray]“You will never get your wings until you seek the sky”[/color][/size]
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 5:19 pm
Greg: I got this one XD
Link:
1. though your format looks cool you gotta use ours
2. We have a seperate thread called "Stories of our Lives: Shinobi Backgrounds" where we post our background information. The reason for this is to promote story building in the guild
3.You can have two shinobi types
4. You have to apply for a bloodline/clan so that we know that you have a good comprehension of the bloodline/clan you apply for
and yeah...I can help you out as much as you need me to ^_^
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 7:52 pm
A few other things.
If a weapon has any special abilities, it must be submitted as a custom weapon.
We do not use the Kawarimi no Jutsu.
Our strengths and weaknesses are determined by our Shinobi Types and Shinobi Profession, not by our own definitions.
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 7:54 pm
Gregar828 Amazing! What a beautiful profile!  Nice try, but you can't approve your own stuff, so... APPROVED!!! looks good to me blaugh
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 7:58 pm
Lance Fulgurant Gregar828 Amazing! What a beautiful profile! Nice try, but you can't approve your own stuff, so... APPROVED!!! looks good to me blaugh Oh yea? Which one has the approval banner, ehh?
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:01 pm
Gregar828 Lance Fulgurant Gregar828 Amazing! What a beautiful profile! Nice try, but you can't approve your own stuff, so... APPROVED!!! looks good to me blaugh Oh yea? Which one has the approval banner, ehh? MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! blaugh
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 8:04 pm
Lance Fulgurant Gregar828 Lance Fulgurant Gregar828 Amazing! What a beautiful profile! Nice try, but you can't approve your own stuff, so... APPROVED!!! looks good to me blaugh Oh yea? Which one has the approval banner, ehh? MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! blaugh ........Touche.
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 4:12 pm
Haru Glory ----------------------------------------------------------------
Character Info
---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Character Name: Haru Glory
Nicknames: The Silver Blade
Title(s): N/A
Rank: Genin
Village:Kumogakure Background Info Physical Description Age: Fourteen
Sex: Male
Hair Color: Silver
Natural Eye Color: Green
Body Type: Athletic
Distinguishing Features: A scar on the back of his neck ----------------------------------------------------------------
Clan One of the Dragonkin
---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Clan: Dragonkin [Pending]
Clan Stage: Stage One
Abilities of the Clan:
1. Katon stronger by 1 Rank
2. Heightened Senses
3. -1 Chakra Point off of Katon Techniques Companion Info. ----------------------------------------------------------------
Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types
---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession Shinobi Profession: Weapon Master
Profession Base Benefit: 1) Increased Number of Weapon Styles: Because of their focus and training in the use of weapons, weapon masters are able to practice more weapon styles than others. (see below)
Academy Student: 1 weapon style
Genin: 2 weapon styles, 1 Weapon or Taijutsu Style
Chuunin: 3 weapon styles, 1 Weapon or Taijutsu Style
Jounin: 4 weapon styles, 2 Weapon or Taijutsu Style
In addition Weapon Masters can learn one stage higher than normal for weapon styles(exceptions apply)
2.)Increased Number of Custom Weapons: Weapon Masters are allowed to have 4 custom weapons as opposed to just 3.
Learning Information: Weapon Masters receive a -1 post learning bonus when learning weapon style/techniques, but receive a +1 post penalty for learning taijutsu styles/techniques and a +2 post penalty for learning nin/genjutsus.
Weakness:
1) Weaker Genjutsus--all jutsus of that type used by the weapon master are counted as if one rank lower in power to a minimum of Academy Student)
Rank Benefits
Genin
2) Mighty Rush:
The weapon master forces chakra into their legs to move at great speeds, able to close the gap between the weapon master and their opponent in mere seconds to put themselves in the perfect position to attack.
Chuunin
Not Acquired Yet
Jounin
Not Acquired Yet Shinobi Type(s) These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. Being highly intelligent, learning jutsu comes quite easily to these shinobi, allowing them to acquire a vast array of jutsus for any situation. (-3 posts for learning jutsu, reaction speed is one rank higher) Tactical Shinobi:
Elemental Control(Katon): These ninja are masters of there elements allowing them to learn elemental jutsu with a easier time and make there elemental jutsu stronger. These ninja also get stronger jutsu when in extreme environments with there element. However when they are trying to learn jutsus of other elements they have a much more difficult time, and if they are in an extreme environment with the opposite of their element their jutsus are weaker.
(-3 posts learning of jutsu of their element, +1 rank to jutsu used normally, +2 ranks around the elemental ninjas element, +1 post when learning jutsus not of the shinobis chosen element, -1 rank to power of jutsu when used in an extreme environment near their elements weakness)
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Chakra and Jutsu
---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra Information Chakra Level: Medium
Chakra Point: 31
Chakra Control: -1 point to all Katon jutsu
Elemental Affinities: Katon Jutsu Information Ninjutsu Universal
• Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)
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• Genjutsu Universal
• Bunshin no Jutsu
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First Element: Katon
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Summoning Information
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Taijutsu/Weapon Styles
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current stage:N/A
Maneuvers
Abilities ----------------------------------------------------------------
Equipment
---------------------------------------------------------------- Weapons Type of Weapon: Greatsword
Name of Weapon: Eisenmeteor
Base Range: Short Range Shinobi Tools Kunai:
Shuriken: 9
Makibishi: 9
light bomb: 9
smoke bomb: 9
steel wire: One Roll-21 feet of wire Apparel Head-Band Style: Standard
Head-Band Location: Around Jacket Sleeve
Head-Band Color: Black
Flak-Jacket style: Standard
Flak-Jacket color: Black
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 6:50 pm
Everything looks good to me, welcome to POTS!
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 6:56 pm
Actually, no. Until your clan is approved, please change your chakra points to low.
Provide a description for your Weakness.
Please provide a length for your wire.
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 7:34 pm
I actually approved his clan...so yeah... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 7:40 pm
Then it shouldn't say "Pending"
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Posted: Sat Jun 18, 2011 8:27 pm
no lol, I approved it like within the past hour xp I was just informing you that his chakra is now fine wink
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 7:41 am
ilinkzeldi Haru Glory ----------------------------------------------------------------
Character Info
---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Character Name: Haru Glory
Nicknames: The Silver Blade
Title(s): N/A
Rank: Genin
Village:Kumogakure Background Info Physical Description Age: Fourteen
Sex: Male
Hair Color: Silver
Natural Eye Color: Green
Body Type: Athletic
Distinguishing Features: A scar on the back of his neck ----------------------------------------------------------------
Clan One of the Dragonnil
---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Clan: Dragonnil
Clan Stage: Stage One
Abilities of the Clan:
1. Katon stronger by 1 Rank
2. Heightened Senses
3. -1 Chakra Point off of Katon Techniques Companion Info. ----------------------------------------------------------------
Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types
---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession Shinobi Profession: Weapon Master
Profession Base Benefit: 1) Increased Number of Weapon Styles: Because of their focus and training in the use of weapons, weapon masters are able to practice more weapon styles than others. (see below)
Academy Student: 1 weapon style
Genin: 2 weapon styles, 1 Weapon or Taijutsu Style
Chuunin: 3 weapon styles, 1 Weapon or Taijutsu Style
Jounin: 4 weapon styles, 2 Weapon or Taijutsu Style
In addition Weapon Masters can learn one stage higher than normal for weapon styles(exceptions apply)
2.)Increased Number of Custom Weapons: Weapon Masters are allowed to have 4 custom weapons as opposed to just 3.
Learning Information: Weapon Masters receive a -1 post learning bonus when learning weapon style/techniques, but receive a +1 post penalty for learning taijutsu styles/techniques and a +2 post penalty for learning nin/genjutsus.
Weakness:
1) Weaker Genjutsus--all jutsus of that type used by the weapon master are counted as if one rank lower in power to a minimum of Academy Student)
Rank Benefits
Genin
2) Mighty Rush:
The weapon master forces chakra into their legs to move at great speeds, able to close the gap between the weapon master and their opponent in mere seconds to put themselves in the perfect position to attack.
Chuunin
Not Acquired Yet
Jounin
Not Acquired Yet Shinobi Type(s) These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. Being highly intelligent, learning jutsu comes quite easily to these shinobi, allowing them to acquire a vast array of jutsus for any situation. (-3 posts for learning jutsu, reaction speed is one rank higher) Tactical Shinobi:
Elemental Control(Katon): These ninja are masters of there elements allowing them to learn elemental jutsu with a easier time and make there elemental jutsu stronger. These ninja also get stronger jutsu when in extreme environments with there element. However when they are trying to learn jutsus of other elements they have a much more difficult time, and if they are in an extreme environment with the opposite of their element their jutsus are weaker.
(-3 posts learning of jutsu of their element, +1 rank to jutsu used normally, +2 ranks around the elemental ninjas element, +1 post when learning jutsus not of the shinobis chosen element, -1 rank to power of jutsu when used in an extreme environment near their elements weakness)
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Chakra and Jutsu
---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra Information Chakra Level: Medium
Chakra Point: 31
Chakra Control: -1 point to all Katon jutsu
Elemental Affinities: Katon Jutsu Information Ninjutsu Universal
• Henge no Jutsu (Transformation)
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First Element: Katon
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• Genjutsu Universal
• Bunshin no Jutsu
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First Element: Katon
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Summoning Information
---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Type: N/A Summons Known: N/A ----------------------------------------------------------------
Taijutsu/Weapon Styles
---------------------------------------------------------------- : N/A
current stage:N/A
Maneuvers
Abilities ----------------------------------------------------------------
Equipment
---------------------------------------------------------------- Weapons Type of Weapon: Greatsword
Name of Weapon: Eisenmeteor
Base Range: Short Range Shinobi Tools Kunai:
Shuriken: 9
Makibishi: 9
light bomb: 9
smoke bomb: 9
steel wire: One Roll-21 feet of wire Apparel Head-Band Style: Standard
Head-Band Location: Around Jacket Sleeve
Head-Band Color: Black
Flak-Jacket style: Standard
Flak-Jacket color: Black Edited.
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2011 8:48 am
Before I say yes to this, you ARE aware that your Dragonil and Elemental Control Bonuses will not stack, and will not give you +2 ranks to all katon jutsu, right?
Please take the pending sign off your clan.
The clan name is incorrect.
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