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NoMetal Desu

PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 5:48 pm


Actually if you saw this post forget it.I just remembered our Model U.N. club after school.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:10 pm


Greetings, fellow members of my Order! I hope you will forgive your bishop's absense, for she was busy getting the nomad to make her a linkcard!

Isn't it lovely?


{Guys, what do you think? Not bad for my first Linkcard/mug, right?}

Sister Victoria


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:11 pm


It looks good. =D Only real problem I have is that she looks slightly crosseyed.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:14 pm


Hey, that's not bad, Victoria! Though she does look a bit cross eyed, and the hair seems off, to me, at least. I like the bishop sprite. =]

Suisho Tomoe
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:15 pm


Can I call Victoria Vickie?
PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:16 pm


Vicky, that's AMAZING!
Only, yeah, the eyes look a little crossed. That, and the hair's shading is weird. You wanna keep the dark-purple border-thing that's there, and just recolor the rest of it. Other than that, no problems, except that she looks a little... old. Might be the eyes, though. XP

And the battle sprite is absolutely gorgeous, too~ :3

Phith Leico


Sister Victoria

PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:17 pm


{Yes, Ashnard.

@ Ninian: Hm, how do I fix that?

@ Amelia: Again... how do I fix?}
PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:23 pm


Well, as for her hair, it looks like she's wearing a wig. It doesn't look--not attached--grounded. It looks out of place. There's the black around the clothing; maybe you could darken the hair a bit with at least an outline? It looks too . . . ethereal.

If that made any sense. I'm not any good at spriting myself, so . . . ^^;;

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Sister Victoria

PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:27 pm


{Yeah, I'm working on that right now. Any suggestions for the eyes? Oh, BTW, I'm in love with the battle sprite I made.}
PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:29 pm


Lightbringer Victoria
{Yeah, I'm working on that right now. Any suggestions for the eyes? Oh, BTW, I'm in love with the battle sprite I made.}


I'd say to either:

A) Throw out the current eyes by covering them with the main skin color, and putting a new pair on.
or
B) Take the right eye, and flip it horizontally. But, that might make it look weird.

Edit: Oh, you might wanna widen the mouth a little. Looks a bit thin, horizontally. And knowing Vicky, I can see a slight smile on the mug, maybe.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:31 pm


Look at other eyes for help. It looks almost like you took one eye, flipped it, and copied it. D:"
PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:31 pm


The battle sprite does look pretty awesome

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Sister Victoria

PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:35 pm


Marshmallow Kitty
Look at other eyes for help. It looks almost like you took one eye, flipped it, and copied it. D:"

{Amelia: I did. I'm an amateur, you know?
Rei: Gah, still outlining. This is very time-consuming. I don't think I'll finish tonight. D:}
PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:41 pm


Lightbringer Victoria
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Look at other eyes for help. It looks almost like you took one eye, flipped it, and copied it. D:"

{Amelia: I did. I'm an amateur, you know?
Rei: Gah, still outlining. This is very time-consuming. I don't think I'll finish tonight. D:}

Yeah, it takes ages. XD After you've done a few, though, you get a little faster, a little better, and so on.
OTL I still tend to have massive issues with the eyes and shading. The clothes I make, though, are pretty good, like the Soren mug I made ages ago and stuff. XD

But good luck with it, Sue! Don't give up~ :3

Phith Leico


Sister Victoria

PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:51 pm


Ah, I'm off for tonight. I spent waaaaaay too much time Photoshopping this thing.

I did darken the hair though. I think it looks better.

I guess I'll work on the eyes tomorrow. I like it personally, and it doesn't just look like another hideous character recolor either. <3
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