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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 5:48 pm
Actually if you saw this post forget it.I just remembered our Model U.N. club after school.
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:10 pm
Greetings, fellow members of my Order! I hope you will forgive your bishop's absense, for she was busy getting the nomad to make her a linkcard!
Isn't it lovely?
{Guys, what do you think? Not bad for my first Linkcard/mug, right?}
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:11 pm
It looks good. =D Only real problem I have is that she looks slightly crosseyed.
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:14 pm
Hey, that's not bad, Victoria! Though she does look a bit cross eyed, and the hair seems off, to me, at least. I like the bishop sprite. =]
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:15 pm
Can I call Victoria Vickie?
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:16 pm
Vicky, that's AMAZING! Only, yeah, the eyes look a little crossed. That, and the hair's shading is weird. You wanna keep the dark-purple border-thing that's there, and just recolor the rest of it. Other than that, no problems, except that she looks a little... old. Might be the eyes, though. XP
And the battle sprite is absolutely gorgeous, too~ :3
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:17 pm
{Yes, Ashnard.
@ Ninian: Hm, how do I fix that?
@ Amelia: Again... how do I fix?}
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:23 pm
Well, as for her hair, it looks like she's wearing a wig. It doesn't look--not attached--grounded. It looks out of place. There's the black around the clothing; maybe you could darken the hair a bit with at least an outline? It looks too . . . ethereal.
If that made any sense. I'm not any good at spriting myself, so . . . ^^;;
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:27 pm
{Yeah, I'm working on that right now. Any suggestions for the eyes? Oh, BTW, I'm in love with the battle sprite I made.}
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:29 pm
Lightbringer Victoria {Yeah, I'm working on that right now. Any suggestions for the eyes? Oh, BTW, I'm in love with the battle sprite I made.} I'd say to either: A) Throw out the current eyes by covering them with the main skin color, and putting a new pair on. or B) Take the right eye, and flip it horizontally. But, that might make it look weird. Edit: Oh, you might wanna widen the mouth a little. Looks a bit thin, horizontally. And knowing Vicky, I can see a slight smile on the mug, maybe.
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:31 pm
Look at other eyes for help. It looks almost like you took one eye, flipped it, and copied it. D:"
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:31 pm
The battle sprite does look pretty awesome
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:35 pm
Marshmallow Kitty Look at other eyes for help. It looks almost like you took one eye, flipped it, and copied it. D:" {Amelia: I did. I'm an amateur, you know? Rei: Gah, still outlining. This is very time-consuming. I don't think I'll finish tonight. D:}
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:41 pm
Lightbringer Victoria Marshmallow Kitty Look at other eyes for help. It looks almost like you took one eye, flipped it, and copied it. D:" {Amelia: I did. I'm an amateur, you know? Rei: Gah, still outlining. This is very time-consuming. I don't think I'll finish tonight. D:} Yeah, it takes ages. XD After you've done a few, though, you get a little faster, a little better, and so on. OTL I still tend to have massive issues with the eyes and shading. The clothes I make, though, are pretty good, like the Soren mug I made ages ago and stuff. XD But good luck with it, Sue! Don't give up~ :3
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Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 6:51 pm
Ah, I'm off for tonight. I spent waaaaaay too much time Photoshopping this thing.
I did darken the hair though. I think it looks better.
I guess I'll work on the eyes tomorrow. I like it personally, and it doesn't just look like another hideous character recolor either. <3
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