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 Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 7:59 pm
akuyoko Nice chapter, though LF's killing of that guy seemed a bit anti-climactic. That it did, but overall, not bad.
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 8:13 pm
A bit short, and not much plot to it.
But then again, every story has it's ups and downs. Decent chapter, in any case.
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 7:37 am
Well written though as has been said short than normal . I loved it cause i was in it I'm a star 4laugh ~preens.
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 8:18 am
biggrin sweet. I liked how Godstone and BC convinced them to become their allies. that was pretty awesome
and LF turning into a fox? AWESOME!
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 12:28 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 12:40 pm
@Aku - Indeed this chapter more or less sucked in my opinion.
@LF - Glad you liked it.
@Fish - Thanks.
@Tatsu - Yeah, I agree.
@Godstone - Yeah, thanks. rofl
@SapphireFox - Thanks.
@Masamune - Yeah, a laguz of the beast tribe -FE10 referance-.
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 1:22 pm
I know what a laguz is. When I said beast, I meant it figuratively. Though it also happens to be literally.
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 4:05 pm
Lol! I know the land, but in real life I suck at geography! xd
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 8:47 pm
Meta Fish akuyoko Nice chapter, though LF's killing of that guy seemed a bit anti-climactic. That it did, but overall, not bad.
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Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 9:03 pm
Whoa, I actually made it into one of the stories for once, sweet.
I have a lot of reading to do ^^;
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 5:43 am
@Masa - Ah, my bad wasnt thinking.
@DDude - Wha?
@Betman - I agree.
@Yofu - Yeah, I hope that you like it. You have been there since something like the first or second chapter.
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 2:59 pm
Hey if you are interested in the title send me a PM and I will tell you what I am asking for.
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 11:58 am
Just saying with the title saying nothing new it looks as if you havent done anything in awhile, I am assuming that is why you have lost so many readers.
Anyway I guess I will say this in his place. He has been very busy and hasn't worked to much on the novel lately because of a new interest of his. Any way as far as I know two of the chapters before the end are called, Shotgun Wedding and The True War.
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 5:50 pm
Echo1178 Just saying with the title saying nothing new it looks as if you havent done anything in awhile, I am assuming that is why you have lost so many readers.
Anyway I guess I will say this in his place. He has been very busy and hasn't worked to much on the novel lately because of a new interest of his. Any way as far as I know two of the chapters before the end are called, Shotgun Wedding and The True War. Kudos for the Panic! at the Disco reference, Seaphron xd
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 5:55 pm
Tatsuman Echo1178 Just saying with the title saying nothing new it looks as if you havent done anything in awhile, I am assuming that is why you have lost so many readers.
Anyway I guess I will say this in his place. He has been very busy and hasn't worked to much on the novel lately because of a new interest of his. Any way as far as I know two of the chapters before the end are called, Shotgun Wedding and The True War. Kudos for the Panic! at the Disco reference, Seaphron xd
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