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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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 Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 4:52 am
@akatski: lol cool I see ^^
@Sexy Lady Emo: Well Mary Sues are characters who are practically perfect and all ^^ Good at everything, really pretty, everyone likes her... etc. yours is only a little Mary Sue, not too ^^ But still. Lol about the tenses so do I D:
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 12:05 pm
Character's name is Sumi Raye.
Sunlight streamed through the window onto the blankets. At first glance you wouldn't see anything, and then a mop of brown hair peeked out from beneath the covers. Yawning, Sumi pushed the blankets back and sat up, rubbing the sleep out of her eyes. "Morning already?" she mumbled to herself, running a hand through her hair.
She climbed out of bed and opened the window all the way, smiling as she watched the people of the village go about their morning duties.
Turning away from the peaceful scene beneath her, Sumi quickly got dressed, pulling on her favourite pair of soft white pants that poofed out a bit at the bottom as well as a matching white longsleeved shirt, decorated with the Konoha symbol in green on the back. Completing the outfit with her shinobi sandals, kunai pouch, and heaband around her neck, she glanced at her reflection in the mirror before walked out the door. Humming an unknown tune, one thought stood out in her mind. Today will be a good day.
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 12:09 pm
[Waaiiii! It's my Fai-san! I have a sudden urge to call you fye-sempai! Stupid Tobi! lol. Kouri, you have to graduate her! I want to RP with my Fye-sempai.... Not to put pressure on you or anything! =D ]
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 3:15 am
Obvious passssssssssssssssssssss 3nodding
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 7:42 am
Here we go:
Sutorai sat up, lifting his arms as he rose stretching them. He rubbed his eyes, clearing his vision slightly. He smacked his lips a couple times, though it took some effort seeing his mouth was so dry. He grabbed the edge of his blanket and threw off of him swinging his legs to the side of the bed simotaniously. He squinted from the sunlight glarring in his eyes, "Forgot to close the curtains again." He grumbled to himself and stood arching his back. He slowly slumped over to the curtains closing them; he truely hated sunlight.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 8:38 am
"HEY! Tokkon where the hell have you been?" Bakuta hadn't seen Tokkon in the shop in awhile, Bakuta works in a Pet shop on Hennway St., the dump part of town but, hey works work. Tokkon was a old man that would come in and stand around for awhile before buying so fish food then me and him would talk about his life before here, more or less he did so he did have to work but it was intertaining. "Hey whats wrong Tokkon." but, Old man Tokkon kept walking, maybe even alittle faster than before, "What the hell is with him?" Bakuta had nothing else to do but go to work, so he walk on for work.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 11:18 am
((Here it goes...))
Miroku walked through the sunny day with a casual ease, hands in his pockets. The acoustic guitar held on his back by the strap across his chest shifted and bounced slightly with each step he took, and his dark-tinted glasses rode low on his nose.
"It's a beautiful day," he commented to himself, a smile twitching at the corners of his mouth.
He walked into a wooded area, his destination directly ahead. The sun filtered down through the trees around him, making patterns of black and brown and green and gold on his arms and face. He was looking at those patterns, turning his arm and making the light shift across them, when he got where he was going. It was a small clearing, with a low, overgrown stump in the middle.
Miroku unslung his guitar from his back and sat on this stump, sitting the instrument in a playing position across his chest. Then he reached into his pocket, and after feeling around for a bit in his pocket, pulled out a crumpled, bent, but mostly intact cigarette that he had taken from his father this morning. He stuck in the corner of his mouth, and after serching for a match as well, lit it, taking a long, slow drag.
His hands now went down to his guitar and gave an experimental strum, checking to see if it was in tune, which it was. He smiled again and ran a hand quickly up and down the fretboard, before his fingers made a chord and he began strumming something slow and moody.
"And maybe I
just set aside
the fact that you were broken-hearted,
in my own special selfish way," he sang, his voice rasping slightly and the cigarette bobbing up and down between his lips.
"And if I
hadn't set aside
the fact that you were broken-hearted,
who knows where your heart would be today?
Maybe with me..."
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 2:48 pm
Well here it is:
Kazumaru Inui, Inui as he was called by his friends, sat on a tree playing with a small shuriken. Quiet as always as he threw the shuriken up in the air and caught it on it's way down repeating this several times. His blue eyes were closed as he did this. He finally threw the shuriken into the tree and ran a hand through his light brown hair. "What now?" He asked, hearing kids run under him and calling his name. He jumped down from the limb and landed next to them and just listened to them laugh and talk as always.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 2:54 pm
Spike walked out of the academy after finnaly becoming a Genin. He had failed the test once, but this time he was sure he would pass. As a few of the other students left the academy they were suprised he actually passed. In class he was usualy sleeping or getting on the teachers nerves. As the sun shined downed from the cloude he grabbed his headband and put it on his forehead. He had an invincible feeling, he was finnaly a true ninja.
how did i do?
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 3:36 pm
((Well I was going to wait but seeing as someone posted after me whats the point.))
Rp sample:
Character name ~ Roulette Sqexs
Rain poured down in buckets. No more then buckets. Barrels perhaps. Maybe even a lake or two. The water doused the ground making footing slick, green moss covered the pave stone from the constant rain in the area. The sound of falling rain covered the sound of swift footfalls. A shadow ducked through the light, disturbing the steady rhythm of rain.
A small smirk spread across the mouth of the boy, for a boy it was. Silver hair stuck to his soaping skin . Piercing blue eyes hid behind silver rimmed spectacles perched atop a fair nose. He looked out into the night, for he knew what was on the scroll. "Boom." He smiled his voice raspy and his breath heavy. An explosion lit up the night with orange fire which was quickly doused by the falling rain.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 4:44 pm
~RP sample~
Character Name-Anjin DeKaza
The wind swept across the rolling dunes that scattered the landscape as a small boy pushed on up towards a red sun setting in the west. His torn clothes were swept back by the cutting breeze and his tired limbs clawed on up the large dune in front of him in a last effort to reach the top before nightfall.
As he finally broke the summit and collapsed from exhaustion, his haggard body and sun scarred skin was evident while the sky turned dull orange and grey. The first stars sparkled in the twilight while a sand filled breeze mingled with his sharp dry breaths.
His end was very near, yet he could not stop running...
In the distance along the now hazed horizon of the setting sun, a small group descended in his direction, but he could not have known for he had finally lost consciousness.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 12:07 am
Miroku Yukidaruna ((Here it goes...)) Miroku walked through the sunny day with a casual ease, hands in his pockets. The acoustic guitar held on his back by the strap across his chest shifted and bounced slightly with each step he took, and his dark-tinted glasses rode low on his nose. "It's a beautiful day," he commented to himself, a smile twitching at the corners of his mouth. He walked into a wooded area, his destination directly ahead. The sun filtered down through the trees around him, making patterns of black and brown and green and gold on his arms and face. He was looking at those patterns, turning his arm and making the light shift across them, when he got where he was going. It was a small clearing, with a low, overgrown stump in the middle. Miroku unslung his guitar from his back and sat on this stump, sitting the instrument in a playing position across his chest. Then he reached into his pocket, and after feeling around for a bit in his pocket, pulled out a crumpled, bent, but mostly intact cigarette that he had taken from his father this morning. He stuck in the corner of his mouth, and after serching for a match as well, lit it, taking a long, slow drag. His hands now went down to his guitar and gave an experimental strum, checking to see if it was in tune, which it was. He smiled again and ran a hand quickly up and down the fretboard, before his fingers made a chord and he began strumming something slow and moody. "And maybe I just set aside the fact that you were broken-hearted, in my own special selfish way," he sang, his voice rasping slightly and the cigarette bobbing up and down between his lips. "And if I hadn't set aside the fact that you were broken-hearted, who knows where your heart would be today? Maybe with me..." Autopass right away. I haven't forgotten your skills ^^
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 12:15 am
Vizard Uchiha Spike walked out of the academy after finnaly becoming a Genin. He had failed the test once, but this time he was sure he would pass. As a few of the other students left the academy they were suprised he actually passed. In class he was usualy sleeping or getting on the teachers nerves. As the sun shined downed from the cloude he grabbed his headband and put it on his forehead. He had an invincible feeling, he was finnaly a true ninja. how did i do? You did well. You have a few spelling errors but nothing spell check can't fix. But you pass.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 12:22 am
night_wraith ((Well I was going to wait but seeing as someone posted after me whats the point.)) Rp sample: Character name ~ Roulette Sqexs Rain poured down in buckets. No more then buckets. Barrels perhaps. Maybe even a lake or two. The water doused the ground making footing slick, green moss covered the pave stone from the constant rain in the area. The sound of falling rain covered the sound of swift footfalls. A shadow ducked through the light, disturbing the steady rhythm of rain. A small smirk spread across the mouth of the boy, for a boy it was. Silver hair stuck to his soaping skin . Piercing blue eyes hid behind silver rimmed spectacles perched atop a fair nose. He looked out into the night, for he knew what was on the scroll. "Boom." He smiled his voice raspy and his breath heavy. An explosion lit up the night with orange fire which was quickly doused by the falling rain. Pass. Thats was cool. I could feel and see the setting very clearly.
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Posted: Wed Aug 22, 2007 12:25 am
Nerokima ~RP sample~ Character Name-Anjin DeKaza The wind swept across the rolling dunes that scattered the landscape as a small boy pushed on up towards a red sun setting in the west. His torn clothes were swept back by the cutting breeze and his tired limbs clawed on up the large dune in front of him in a last effort to reach the top before nightfall. As he finally broke the summit and collapsed from exhaustion, his haggard body and sun scarred skin was evident while the sky turned dull orange and grey. The first stars sparkled in the twilight while a sand filled breeze mingled with his sharp dry breaths. His end was very near, yet he could not stop running... In the distance along the now hazed horizon of the setting sun, a small group descended in his direction, but he could not have known for he had finally lost consciousness. Pass. That was real cool as well.
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