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Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 4:50 pm
_CioccolatoRaggaza_ @iOath- Kumogakure is closed. Pick another village. Other than that, approved unless stated otherwise by another mod.
@X-TMT-X- Approved.
And since I can't approve myself, I'm waiting for someone else to get on approve him. And whoever does...ignore the techniques striked out. Just....ignore them. Approved. Lol. Jk. But thanks.
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Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 5:47 pm
_CioccolatoRaggaza_ @iOath- Kumogakure is closed. Pick another village. Other than that, approved unless stated otherwise by another mod.
@X-TMT-X- Approved.
And since I can't approve myself, I'm waiting for someone else to get on approve him. And whoever does...ignore the techniques striked out. Just....ignore them. I got ya sweets. Approved
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Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 6:03 pm
Azeiel The Fallen _CioccolatoRaggaza_ @iOath- Kumogakure is closed. Pick another village. Other than that, approved unless stated otherwise by another mod.
@X-TMT-X- Approved.
And since I can't approve myself, I'm waiting for someone else to get on approve him. And whoever does...ignore the techniques striked out. Just....ignore them. I got ya sweets. Approved heart
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Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 6:07 pm
_CioccolatoRaggaza_ Azeiel The Fallen _CioccolatoRaggaza_ @iOath- Kumogakure is closed. Pick another village. Other than that, approved unless stated otherwise by another mod.
@X-TMT-X- Approved.
And since I can't approve myself, I'm waiting for someone else to get on approve him. And whoever does...ignore the techniques striked out. Just....ignore them. I got ya sweets. Approved heart Aww I love ya to mushi XD cool
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Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 6:37 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Roatsu Nigiri Nickname: Crazy Fingers
Age: 15 Birthdate: 8/31 Gender: Male
Height: 6'0 Weight: 165 Pounds
Nindo: "Try Hard,Give It Your all,I'll Still Win Personality: Roatsu is as ever changing as the wind. Dont like his mood? Wait five minutes
Village: Konoha Rank: Gennin Class: Puppet ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: N/A
Chakra Pool: 220 Chakra Color: Purple Chakra Element: Fuuton,Raiton
Strengths: • Stealth • Genjutsu Weaknesses: • Close Combat • Speed Fears: • Coma's • Drowning
Attributes: • Can Cast Genjutsu Through Skin Contact • Stregnth Half A Rank Higher,due to carrying around puppet Class Attribute: • Bunraku: Able to use one hand for D and lower ranked techniques ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 AC:
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Puppet Weapon Range: Over 100 Meters At Mac Weapon Weight: 76 Pounds Weapon Location: Around Back or In Scroll
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Puppet Arsenal [ All Tools In Puppet ] • 5 Carried Flash Bombs
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Fuuton •
Raiton •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ He remembers nothing of his past life. Only that he is now a Konoha ninja and he has a brother somewhere.He relized he was quiet proficiant with a puppet one day and now strives to master that art form
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Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:08 pm
[ Anyone gonna accept this? ]
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Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2011 5:34 pm
Your first attribute is far too powerful, and your latter should read something like; "Luggage: Strength moderately increased from constantly carrying puppet." Or... something like that...
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Posted: Sun Jun 12, 2011 6:33 pm
Fall_Of_The_Damned ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Roatsu Nigiri Nickname: Crazy Fingers
Age: 15 Birthdate: 8/31 Gender: Male
Height: 6'0 Weight: 165 Pounds
Nindo: "Try Hard,Give It Your all,I'll Still Win Personality: Roatsu is as ever changing as the wind. Dont like his mood? Wait five minutes
Village: Konoha Rank: Gennin Class: Puppet ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: N/A
Chakra Pool: 220 Chakra Color: Purple Chakra Element: Fuuton,Raiton
Strengths: • Stealth • Genjutsu Weaknesses: • Close Combat • Speed Fears: • Coma's • Drowning
Attributes: • Intense Training: Puppet Reactions Slightly Increased • Luggage:Stregnth Half A Rank Higher,due to carrying around puppet Class Attribute: • Bunraku: Able to use one hand for D and lower ranked techniques ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 AC:
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Puppet Weapon Range: Over 100 Meters At Mac Weapon Weight: 76 Pounds Weapon Location: Around Back or In Scroll
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Puppet Arsenal [ All Tools In Puppet ] • 5 Carried Flash Bombs
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Fuuton •
Raiton •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ He remembers nothing of his past life. Only that he is now a Konoha ninja and he has a brother somewhere.He relized he was quiet proficiant with a puppet one day and now strives to master that art form
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Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2011 11:15 am
Don't use the term "Half a rank higher"! xD We don't use rank increments because it causes complications when dealing with later levels and opponents with mirrored abilities.
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Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2011 11:35 am
Fall_Of_The_Damned Fall_Of_The_Damned ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Roatsu Nigiri Nickname: Crazy Fingers
Age: 15 Birthdate: 8/31 Gender: Male
Height: 6'0 Weight: 165 Pounds
Nindo: "Try Hard,Give It Your all,I'll Still Win Personality: Roatsu is as ever changing as the wind. Dont like his mood? Wait five minutes
Village: Konoha Rank: Gennin Class: Puppet ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: N/A
Chakra Pool: 220 Chakra Color: Purple Chakra Element: Fuuton,Raiton
Strengths: • Stealth • Genjutsu Weaknesses: • Close Combat • Speed Fears: • Coma's • Drowning
Attributes: • Intense Training: Puppet Reactions Slightly Increased • Luggage:Stregnth moderatly increased from carrying a heavy a** puppet Class Attribute: • Bunraku: Able to use one hand for D and lower ranked techniques ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 AC:
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Puppet Weapon Range: Over 100 Meters At Mac Weapon Weight: 76 Pounds Weapon Location: Around Back or In Scroll
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Puppet Arsenal [ All Tools In Puppet ] • 5 Carried Flash Bombs
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Fuuton •
Raiton •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ He remembers nothing of his past life. Only that he is now a Konoha ninja and he has a brother somewhere.He relized he was quiet proficiant with a puppet one day and now strives to master that art form
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Posted: Mon Jun 13, 2011 12:20 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 6:58 pm
 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Aki,Takigakure Nickname: El Gigante Age: 17 Birthdate: 11/21 Gender: male
Height: 7 feet usually Weight: 175 pounds
Nindo: squeeze it till it dies Personality: unfailingly obedient to the leader.
Village: cloud Rank: gennin Class: ninjutsu ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: J i o n g u
Chakra Pool: 250 Chakra Color: bright blue Chakra Element: Doton Hearts Katon.
Strengths: • CQB. (close quarters battle) • Doton Ninjutsu Weaknesses: • Long Range Combat • being ganged up on by three or more ninja Fears: • Dieing From Mutilation • Dieing Alone
Attributes: • can learn wither one tai or bukijutsu • Elemental Ninja: Can perform Doton ninjutsu with less handsigns than normal. Class Attribute: • C. Attribute - Quick Hands: Jutsu performance speed slightly increased ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 AC: Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: A Three Part Segmented Spear Weapon Range: 8 feet Weapon Weight:1.5 pounds Weapon Location: across his back and sometimes wrapped around his waist • a three part spear the with a blade on both end and a hidden blade in the middle when it comes apart. ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 5 kunai 5 smoke pellets 5 packs of spiked balls that explode after a post 5 posion pellets that paralyze in 8 eight post after infection. 5 chakra pellets that restore 20 chakra 5 chakra restriction pellets that hamper chakra control and make the user add 15 chakra to every use. • ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Heart 1 Doton •
Heart 2 Katon •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Aki has spent his child hood outside the village as a wild child. although why his body is composed of mostly tendrils is unknown he never questioned it. Aki was taken in by an Anbu that spotted him one day and taught Aki basic up close fighting from a young age. since Aki wasn't born into the village papers were forged and he started out as an academy student. taught by the now long dead anbu Aki is fiercely loyal to his village and would kill in a heart beat to protect his kage. he would never question an order no matter how horrendous the task. he would go at it with glee.
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Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2011 8:04 pm
Put a one paragraph history in the history spot and then your approved. But don't post in the village until manny gets the closed s**t straightened out.
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Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2011 10:01 am
Bleh, also watch out with that picture, as it is a canon photo of young Kakuzu.
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Posted: Wed Jun 15, 2011 2:13 pm
is it really. well you know me i have my own style for this sort of thing.
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