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 Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 3:29 pm
edited
how do i flesh out the personality and behavior??
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 3:38 pm
By explaining what your character's personality is like, and how she behaves out of combat and within combat.
Personality: Who is your character at heart, what does she believe in? What makes her who she is.
Behavior: who someone is and how they act are two different things. How does she act around people she trusts?... around people she doesn't? In combat, or out of combat.
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 3:39 pm
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 3:41 pm
 Full Name:Rosarian Gatō
Nicknames:Rose, Rosey
Age:14
Birthdate:July,11
Gender:Female
Ethnicity:Russian
Nindo: "Live life the way you want it to be. Not the way someone tells you it's suppose to be."
Personality:sweet around friends and serious around enemies or people she dosen't know.
Behavior:shy around alot of people, but will open up to her friends that she trusts.
Biography: Rosey had a simple life in a poor family who prospered off the rice fields. She was a happy outgoing child loving the ways of healing she began to experiment on the rice her family grew. One day her experiment failed and ruined the entire crop! Her parents were so furious they beat her till she could barely breath, they put her in the hospital as when she healed she watched the nurses and docters use medical and knew she wanted to be a medical shinobi! She learned a way to made the crops big and prosperous so when she came back home she tried it on the new crops and they grew and grew! Her family became rich from it. She used the money she got and saved to buy a strange kimono with long sleeves past her hands and from waist down it was cut on the sides to allow her legs to move about even in a split position. She kept her old boots almost to the knee and wore armored gloves to allow her wrist to move, but protected at the same time. She always had her hair long and silky white getting it from her mom. After a while she told her parents she was leaving to learn medical training and Fire justu. They agreed after a long exhausting arguement she finally went and left to the hidden sound village to learn the ways of medical!
Village:Sound for medical training
Rank:Genin________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation
Summoning:N/A
Bloodline:N/A
Curse Mark:N/A
Weapon of Choice: Senbon
Ninja Class: Medical
Strengths:
●Chakra Control
●Intelligence
●Strength
Weaknesses:
●Weak Ninjutsu
●Weak Bodied
●Slow
Shinobi Skills:(Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark)
●Learning Medical Ninjutsu takes 2 less post than normal
●Can learn Ninjutsu 1 less post than normal
●Can break out of Genjutsu more easily than others due to enhanced chakra control.
Chakra Element(s): 1
- Primary: Fire
Chakra Color:White
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation
Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:
________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformationNon-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
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________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles
# Custom Weapons Allowed:1
Custom Weapon 1:
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color:
|Right Arm, tied mini sized, blue
Kunai Holster Location | Color:
|Pouch, white
Projectile Holster Location | Color:
|pouch,white
Scroll Holster Location | Color:
| none
Exploding Smoke Grenade:
Makibishi:0
Shuriken:10
Flash Bombs:4
Senbon: 15
________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation
Height:5.9
Weight:136 pounds
Body Build:frail, skinny
Eye Color:Sky blue
Hair Color:White
Family:Mother and Papa
Theme song:Bleeding Love- Leona Lewis
________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 3:54 pm
Minty: You didn't create a third Custom weakness for your character.
Once you do that...YOU ARE APPROVED!
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 3:57 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 6:36 am
 Full Name: Narkosa Brashugan
Nicknames:None
Age:13
Birthdate:10/10
Gender:Male
Ethnicity:Caucasian
Nindo:My mind is my greatest weapon
Personality:Shy
Behavior:Narkosa doesn't stay in crowds for too long. He generally likes the peace and quiet finding solitude anywhere he can.
Biography: (Back Story) The Brashugan family was founded in fire country but the night that Narkosa was suppose to head off for the ninja acdemy something happen. As Narkosa slept in his bed his mother was murder. Hearing the door open Narkosa saw the figure holding the kunai that was used to murder his mother thinking that he was going to be kkilled Narkosa hid under his covers like any other like the child he was after a few tense seconds the door shut.
Narkosa hid under his covers until dawn. Peaking out from under the blanket Narkosa sees that there is no one there. Grabbing his things Narkosa walks down the stairs to see his mother lying on the floor dead. Tears welled upp in the child's eyes. Walking out the door Narkosa walks off to somewhere far away from Konohanagakure.
Village:Cloud
Rank:Genin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformationSummoning: (Supply a link to the Summoning)
Bloodline: Brashugan
Curse Mark: (Supply a link to the Cursemark)
Weapon of Choice:Kunai/Shurikens
Ninja Class:Medical
Strengths:
●Intelligence
●Chakra control
●Strength
Weaknesses:
●Weak ninjutsu
●Weak body
●Water
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Shinobi Skills:(Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark)
• Intelligence (Brashugan clan members are extremely intelligent)
• Living Ink Jutsu do not require hand seals.
• Learning Medical Ninjutsu takes 2 less post than normal.
• Can break out of Genjutsu more easily than others due to chakra control.
• Can learn Ninjutsu 1 less post than normal.
Chakra Element(s): 1
- Primary:Fuuton
Chakra Color:Black________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformationSensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformationNon-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
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Medical Jutsu
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu Styles Known:
Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed: 0
Custom Weapon 1: _________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color:Neck
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Kunai Holster Location | Color:Left back hip
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Projectile Holster Location | Color:Right and left hip
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Scroll Holster Location | Color: Right shoulder.
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Exploding Smoke Grenade:4
Makibishi:1
Shuriken: 20
Flash Bombs:2 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformationHeight:5'6
Weight:130
Body Build:Athletic
Eye Color:Black
Hair Color:Brown
Family:none
Theme song:________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformationS Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:25 am
Revising how?
...I don't understand. What happened to the other one?
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:47 am
There was no back story for my character. Also there wasn't a medical class for me to use the strength or weaknesses.
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:30 am
Your Shinobi skills are off. Should be this:
• Intelligence (Brashugan clan members are exceedingly intelligent)
• Living Ink Jutsu do not require hand seals.
• Learning Medical Ninjutsu takes 2 less post than normal.
• Can break out of Genjutsu more easily than others due to chakra control.
• Can learn Ninjutsu 1 less post than normal.
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:41 am
Okay I edited it. Thhough I just copy and pasted it.
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:45 am
Alright, you're all set dude.
I updated a few other things within the profile, but as long as you use the profile above, you're all set.
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:53 am
Cool.
crying so I don't get the stamp of approval. Cobra you do know how to make someone feel bad. I am being sarcastic...... Or am I? xd
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 10:16 am
Narkosa: Stop whining. Because...YOU ARE APPROVED!
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