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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 6:22 pm
kk I hope you feel better
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 6:40 pm
@Kage Shinoha: Denied, It dose not seem that you understand the bloodline. I wish I could help you more but I told you what you could read that would help you. Another Crew member agreed with my calling on this.
@Fenrir Graveheart: Accepted, I know you know the clan fully cause well you created it, Just wanted to see a better rp sample from you is all. ^^
@Yamamura Ryori: Denied, It dosnt not seem that you understand the bloodline fully. Also you did not show the bloodline's weaknesses or any of the bloodline jutsus in your rp sample.
@Azure Jaguar: Repost it
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Posted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:38 pm
Rpc Name: Kyoko Inuzuka Village: Leaf or Mist(If the clan compound is in the Mist, wold I need to stay there as well?) Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Inuzuka What you know about the clan/bl:A clan that can base its heritage primarily from the Hidden Village of Konoha. The Inuzuka clan are known for their severely close ties to the canine species. Many members have a canine familiar who acts as a partner to the clan member. Both canine and human are encouraged heavily to grow as one entity so as to better support each other through life. Members of the clan also have the unique ability kept secret within their ties to take on canine-like abilities. The family has strict do's and don'ts when it comes to living needs and such. The companion of an Inuzuka is not picked, but the companion actually picks their partner at the puppy stage. Inuzuka can infuse chakra into their bites, and they have strict rituals they must stick to. They can also change into their companions and vice versa.
Rp Sample:Kyoko growled at her opponent, who currently had the upper hand. Kyoko performed handsigns and said, "Jūjin Bunshin : Man Beast Doppelgangers!!" Kyoko's dog, Nagamaru, turned into a replica of Kyoko. Kyoko threw a smokebomb at her opponent, and while the opponent was coughing and the smoke was clearing, Kyoko and Nagamaru performed their signature move, Gatsūga. The opponent was struck dead on, but he still got up. Kyoko then threw shuriken at her opponent to distract him. It worked. While the opponent was distracted, Kyoko and Nagamaru struck again with Gatsūga. This time, Kyoko's opponent went down for good. Not long after Nagamaru picked up another scent east of them, and began barking viscously in that direction. Kyoko quickly followed and her fangs showed with a fierce glower in her eyes. She performed a few more handsigns and let a simple Fireball jutsu toward the scent; quickly following behind it, the shady character easily dodged the ball of fire by leaping high in the air, but what she didn't notice was Kyoko behind the fireball and now right in front this girl. "Tsuuga!" she yelled as she spun into a vortex aimed straight for the girls chest. The enemy girl used a substitution jutsu and landed on the ground where Kyoko once was. She thought she was safe until she heard a growl from behind her. The moment she turned around Nagamaru was already in a mid air leap toward the girls face, but using her arm she let the puppy bite it. She flinched for a short second only to grab the Nagamaru in a hostage like position, holding a kunai to his neck. "Well Well miss Dog-nin... Now that your partner is unable to move how are you going to stop me now?" the Bandit yelled hoping that Kyoko heard every word; and to make sure she did, she slammed Nagamaru into the ground forcing him to cry in pain for his master. "Hn... What to do now... I'm not used to fighting without Nagamaru! Oh. Think Kyoko, think!" the young ninja clinched her fist to the point of her claws almost drew blood from her palms. She thought about the talks she had with her father, and how no matter how far apart her and Naga were, they would always be one. She could feel the pain the bandit girl was causing Nagamaru, and she couldn't take it anymore! "Nagamaru! Bakuretsu Koinu!!" Kyoko screamed and left her position fast, while Nagamaru's eyes showed a look of confusion as he tried to pinpoint her moving location. He barked to show an understanding on his command, then the pup exploding in a cloud of white smoke. The bandit coughed and swayed the smoke away with her hand, until she saw a small dog figure. "Got you!" she reached for the shadow, bringing it closer to get a better look at the animal's face she noticed it had two x's for eyes. Confused and looking around for an explanation she quickly realized it was a fake, but by then it was too late. The fake Naga exploded in her face, but instead of releasing kunai it released a large amount of piss over the girls face.
"Ah!! Dammit, my eyes!!" the bandit cried out standing in a defenseless and open position.
"Now Nagamaru, Juujin Bunshin!" Nagamaru's chakra began to surge all over his body swirling around him faster and faster until he completely transformed into a replica of his Master Kyoko. The two dashed forward toward their opponent screaming "Gatsūga!" Jumping in midair Kyoko and Nagamaru began to spin at an incredible speed going straight for the bandit. They hit her in every direction, both on opposite sides. When the two beast were finished with their assault the bandit girl barely stood her ground with her knees wobbling. Kyoko stood in front of the girl while Nagamaru growled on all fours from behind. Ready to launch another attack Kyoko took one step closer, then noticed the girls hand raise in a forfeiting manner. She fell to her knees, then passed out on the ground breathing very faintly.
Kyoko grabbed Naga as soon as she was in arms reach; hugging him tightly and checking to if his injuries were severe. He let out a small warning growl, but noticing that wasn't working he snapped at the girl... or at least tried to. Kyoko used one of her hands to keep the pups mouth shut, then popped him on the nose as some sort of punishment. "Tsk Tsk. Bad Naga! You should know better... growling at me like that, hmph." She turned around to see the girl was still knocked out, then began to talk to Nagamaru in a worried tone.
"Naga... we should train more, y'know? I was really scared when the mean lady caught you. I didn't know what to do, but I thought about what dad said and he told me 'No matter how far apart we are, we'll always be one', me and you Naga. So! from now on, we'll train three times as hard so nothing like that ever happens again, got it?!" Kyoko looked Nagamaru in the eyes with a flame burning in hers. The dog simply barked and scurried it's way atop her head as they walked toward the bandit.
[REPOSTED] I hope this one is better.
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Posted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 2:33 pm
RPC Name: Sayuri Hyuuga Village: Kirigakure no Sato Rank: Academy Student Bloodline: The Byakugan doujutsu of the Hyuuga clan Current Knowledge: The Byakugan provides the user an almost-360 degree field of vision, the exception being the back of the neck where the third vertebra is located. It also provides a degree of telescopic vision, which varies from person to person. The Byakugan can sometimes see underground when the second stage is reached. The greatest ability that comes with the Byakugan is the ability to see both chakra and the chakra circulation system within the body. Using Gentle Fist, the user can close or open an opponent’s chakra points, giving them control over a person’s ability to use jutsu. (In order to do this, a significant amount of points must be closed.) RP Sample: (*Note: Any and all references to any persons is purely due to the fact that I do not have enough of an imagination to create characters to provide interaction with my future RPC. These interactions are fictitious and did not actually occur ^^) I should have just ignored him and I wouldn’t be here. Sayuri grumbles to herself as her body effortlessly moves into the Juken stance. She activates her Byakugan before she attacks, standing with her weight back on her right leg, right hand outstretched palm-up, left hand cocked back behind her palm-up. Her mind, with its sick sense of humor, plays back the moment in her head as she readies to perform her taijutsu. “Sayuri, Lord Mizukage requests your presence in his office immediately.” A level voice had spoken across the training field to the petite kunoichi. Sayuri turned her head, but Yamatano was already gone, moving faster than anyone she’d ever seen. That boy. I swear, he never stops moving, she mused silently, watching Yamatano depart as she continued to stand in her fighting stance. She eventually sighed and picked up her things, shoving her hands into her gloves with an almost angry vigor. If I had just ignored him, I wouldn’t be here. I would be speed training and practicing chakra control to my hands, not here being displayed like a show dog to the Mizukage, she gripes as her vision changes to a sweeping nearly-360-degree, telescopic view. Her pale lavender eyes focus on the internal threads of chakra running through her sensei’s body, on the 361 Tenketsu, little pinpricks within the chakra system. She flexes her hands quickly before focusing her chakra into the tips of her index and middle fingers. His face lights up with a wicked smile behind his mask as he feints forward, Sayuri shadowing him. She keeps a straight face effortlessly, showing the older man that she isn’t laughing. “So, little Say-chan, how would you like this done? Taijutsu against taijutsu?” He teases, dodging as she lashes forward, aiming for the main Tenketsu in his right shoulder joint and the one in his left wrist simultaneously. She curses and grumbles something about closing the Tenketsu in his brain, before pivoting quickly and lunging at him again. Her sensei’s laugh dies in his throat as her chakra-infused fingertips painfully force the Tenketsu in the crease of his left elbow and on the vein of his left forearm to shut. The light green eyes narrow at Sayuri as she returns to her stance. “Eight Trigrams, Two Palms.” Her usually shy, gentle voice snaps with uncharacteristic fierceness as her eyes, enhanced by her family doujutsu, focus back on the chakra pathways in his body. The older man’s left hand itches towards his katana, resisting the urge to draw his sword and run his student through with it. Sayuri’s eyebrows rise up in mocking disbelief. “How’s it feel when your student gets the best of you?” She taunts, feinting to the left and lunging at him again, aiming for the Tenketsu in her sensei’s right shoulder and the one in the joint of his thumb. He pulls his hand back, trying to wrench it out of her reach futilely. Her sharp eyes, enhanced by the Byakugan, watch as the chakra points close, stopping the flow of chakra to his thumb and slowing the flow to the rest of his right arm. In the same movement, she forces the Tenketsu in the right side of his neck and on his left knee closed. His leg begins to shake as she murmurs, “Eight Trigrams, Four Palms,” and he swears a blue streak. “Watch her closely. Her attacks are becoming reckless.” A voice mutters behind her. Her nearly 360-degree vision shows her that a man she’s never seen before is standing next to the Lord Mizukage, scrutinizing her shrewdly. Her movements increase in speed as she lashes at her sensei again and again, increasing the number of closed Tenketsu from two, then to four, then to eight, then sixteen, and thirty-two. She falls back, panting slightly, so she can catch her breath and give her sensei a chance to strike back. His fist catches the side of her face, sending her sprawling before she jumps agilely to her feet. “Sayuri. Enough. End it now.” The Lord Mizukage’s voice sounds form behind her and she barely notices Kaizen and Kanzuki watching her. She dives at the older man, striking sixty-four of his chakra points and stopping the flow to his hands entirely. A hand on her shoulder snaps her out of her rage and she blinks, confused. The Lord Mizukage directs one of the medical ninja to her sensei and they begin healing him, re-opening his Tenketsu. Sayuri stares at the leader of Kirigakure as he shakes his head, staring into her eyes. She bows quickly, still confused. “When you cannot control your rage, you lose touch with your body.” He murmurs softly, watching the medics tending to her sensei. Sayuri places her fingertips against her cheek, nodding. “I know… I don’t like being teased.” She mutters, shrugging off Luo’s hand and bowing to both him and the strange man before she walks away, heading home to the Hyuuga complex for more meditation and speed training. The things I do for power, she muses on the walk back.
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Posted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 5:55 pm
@Azure Jaguar: Could you describe your jutsus better? Ill let you work on them before I make me ruling.
@iShayera: Save it for when the bloodline opens Okies? ^^
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Posted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 7:18 pm
I wasn’t sure if the Hyuuga clan is still closed, and I already had this application written up in a word file, because I have no life. If it’s still closed, I’ll just wait.
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Posted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 8:13 pm
Editing?.. I'm confused.. sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 8:49 pm
Editing means im working on it... Iv got a busy life >.>
Yes its still closed sorry...
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Posted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 9:02 pm
Oi... Gomen, Gomen Orchid-sama. I didn't intend imply rushing or anything..
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 12:16 am
Orchid Moon @Lord Jiminy: Denied, Your rp sample was lacking quite a bit. You did not preform hand seals or speak the Jutsu when casting it which is a requirement due to the ninja types we have. Quote: A match, a flaming letter bomb (which is unstable), or anything type of fire and chakra is enough to create one of these That is the requirements for Katon: Niji no Tatsu no Gijutsu~ Fire Style: Rainbow Dragon Jutsu. Please show that you know more about the bloodline and add more to your rp sample. Mind if I step in? This is my clan, after all... About your knowledge of the clan, it's just a little bit off. I'd recommend reading the history a little bit more closely because what I wrote in the history is different from what you wrote in the knowledge area of the application. And I agree with Orchid, your RP sample is lacking greatly.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 9:43 am
Rpc Name: Kyoko Inuzuka Village: Leaf or Mist(If the clan compound is in the Mist, wold I need to stay there as well?) Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Inuzuka What you know about the clan/bl:A clan that can base its heritage primarily from the Hidden Village of Konoha. The Inuzuka clan are known for their severely close ties to the canine species. Many members have a canine familiar who acts as a partner to the clan member. Both canine and human are encouraged heavily to grow as one entity so as to better support each other through life. Members of the clan also have the unique ability kept secret within their ties to take on canine-like abilities. The family has strict do's and don'ts when it comes to living needs and such. The companion of an Inuzuka is not picked, but the companion actually picks their partner at the puppy stage. Inuzuka can infuse chakra into their bites, and they have strict rituals they must stick to. They can also change into their companions and vice versa.
Rp Sample:Kyoko growled at her opponent, who currently had the upper hand. Kyoko performed handsigns and said, "Jūjin Bunshin : Man Beast Doppelgangers!!" Kyoko's dog, Nagamaru, turned into a replica of Kyoko exactly; from the hair that was raised in a mid ponytail to the girls Tabi firmly fit on her feet. Kyoko threw a smokebomb at her opponent, and while the opponent was coughing and the smoke was clearing, Kyoko and Nagamaru performed their signature move, Gatsūga. Spinning at an extreme velocity, nearly ripping the air round them The opponent was struck dead on, but he still stood. Kyoko then threw shuriken at her opponent to distract him. It worked. While the opponent was distracted, Kyoko and Nagamaru struck again with Gatsūga, but instead of attacking straight foward the two decided to mix it up by spinning Gatsūga into a vortex of its own. It started with a very open gap the opponent could have tried to jump through ,but at the speed the Inuzuka were spinning he would still get scratched as if it were a full impact. The closer they got to the enemy the more narrow they made their Gatsūga vortex, and actually tore apart the rogue ninja's left arm and leg.This time, Kyoko's opponent fell to the ground and began to immediately pour out blood, so in her mind she thought "If the impact didn't kill him, then his immediate loss of blood would."
Not long after Nagamaru picked up another scent east of them, and began barking viscously in that direction. Kyoko quickly followed and her fangs showed with a fierce glower in her eyes. She performed a few more handsigns and let a simple Fireball jutsu toward the scent; quickly following behind it, the shady character easily dodged the ball of fire by leaping high in the air, but what she didn't notice was Kyoko behind the fireball and now right in front of this girl. "Tsuuga!" she yelled as she spun into a whirling tornado aimed straight for the girls chest. The enemy girl used a substitution jutsu and landed on the ground where Kyoko once was. She thought she was safe until she heard a growl from behind her. The moment she turned around Nagamaru was already in a mid air leap toward the girls face, but using her arm she forced the dog to change targets, causing the dog to bite into her arm deeply. She flinched for a short second only to grab the Nagamaru in a hostage like position, holding a kunai to his neck. "Well Well miss Dog-nin... Now that your partner is unable to move how are you going to stop me now?" the Bandit yelled hoping that Kyoko heard every word; and to make sure she did, she slammed Nagamaru into the ground forcing him to cry in pain for his master.
"Hn... What to do now... I'm not used to fighting without Nagamaru! Ooh. Think Kyoko, think!" the young ninja clinched her fist to the point of her claws almost drew blood from her palms. She thought about the talks she had with her father, and how no matter how far apart her and Naga were, they would always be one. She could feel the pain the bandit girl was causing Nagamaru, and she couldn't take it anymore! "Nagamaru! Bakuretsu Koinu!!" Kyoko screamed and left her position fast, while Nagamaru's eyes showed a look of confusion as he tried to pinpoint her moving location. He barked to show an understanding of his command, then the pup exploding in a cloud of white smoke. The bandit coughed and swayed the smoke away with her hand, until she saw a small dog figure. "Got you!" she reached for the shadow, bringing it closer to get a better look at the animal's face she noticed it had two x's for eyes. Confused and looking around for an explanation she quickly realized it was a fake, but by then it was too late. The fake Naga exploded in her face, but instead of releasing kunai it released a large amount of piss over the girls face. Nagamaru quickly scurried to meet up with Kyoko behind a few bushes near the area of the fight.
"Ah!! Dammit, my eyes!!" the bandit cried out standing in a defenseless and open position.
"Now Nagamaru, Juujin Bunshin!" Nagamaru's chakra began to surge all over his body swirling around him faster and faster until he completely transformed into a replica of his Master Kyoko. The two dashed forward toward their opponent screaming "Tsūga!" Jumping in midair Kyoko and Nagamaru began to spin at an incredible speed going straight for the bandit. They hit her in every direction, Kyoko would strike the lower right, while Nagamaru would attack the higher left. the two continued this technique, each switching the location oftheir attack without messing up the predictable pattern.
The older girl noticed this pattern then, when the two beast both were away from her preparing to turnaround for another assault, she dashed straight forward keeping low to the ground, knowing that only one of them would be able to come after her while still using their Tsuuga. The rogue ninja was right as Kyoko ended her Tsuuga, but Nagamaru continued his; hitting her directly in the lower spine he caused paralysis and tons of open wounds forcing the girl to fall to her knees.
Ready to launch another attack Kyoko took one step closer, then noticed the girl fall to her knees, barely breathing at all.
Kyoko grabbed Naga as soon as she was in arms reach; hugging him tightly and checking to if his injuries were severe. He let out a small warning growl, but noticing that wasn't working he snapped at the girl... or at least tried to. Kyoko used one of her hands to keep the pups mouth shut, then popped him on the nose as some sort of punishment. "Tsk Tsk. Bad Naga! You should know better... growling at me like that, hmph." She turned around to see the girl was still knocked out, then began to talk to Nagamaru in a worried tone.
"Naga... we should train more, y'know? I was really scared when the mean lady caught you. I didn't know what to do, but I thought about what dad said and he told me 'No matter how far apart we are, we'll always be one', me and you Naga. So! from now on, we'll train three times as hard so nothing like that ever happens again, got it?!" Kyoko looked Nagamaru in the eyes with a flame burning in hers. The dog simply barked and scurried it's way atop her head as they walked toward the bandit with a relieved look on her face.
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Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2010 10:22 am
@Azure Jaguar: Accepted!, Looks like you know the clan good enough ^^ and im happy that we have a Inuzuka now!
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