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 Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 12:34 pm
Now that Shinson had sen the move for himself he had just enough experience seeing it for himself to try it out so once Neji came back to him to ask him if he wanted a go at it he was already setting the heavy dummy back up and ready to give it a shot as Neji looked at him and raised one eyebrow "He's a real gogetter, I've never seen someone who really wanted to learn these moves fast, but when he unlocks his real strength, I have no idea what to expect from him then." Neji started to sweat thinking about it to himself in more wonder about Shinson's real power
6/10
Now that Shinson was ready he looked back at Neji and got into the stance as he lowered his body and put out his arms with his hands open he had on infront of him and the other behind his back but in the air he shower style like Neji and hoped it work as he turned his byakugan on he activated the eight trigrams feild as Neji could see the symbol that he did durning his he was highly impressed that he could do it like a natural but with his real strength yet to be inleashed Neji wondered how he would do the first time performing it
7/10
Shinson was now in the eight trigrams as the dummy as now stuck in it on the 6th trigram Neji was about to freak out by how good he was doing it already for the first time seeing it and now doing nearly better then him Shinson now launched his body at the dummy now doing the backwards spin he got to it within 3 seconds being almost faster than Neji by one Shinson hit the dummy in the two points of his choice hitting it in the top right and the lower left with his hands Neji could see some chakra bieng used as Shinson was doing the move for real he watched to see if he complete it in more worry of his great skill and gifts even though he did'nt know who he really was
8/10
Now Shinson started attacking the dummy with his two fingers attacking the points of the dummy he saw in his mind and not with his eyes he attacked it again with two more strikes going for 4 doubling it he did it again and doubled it going for sixteen and now doing it in high speed he hit the dummy again and again with amazing strength hitting it now 16 times doubleing the eight and going still on and hitting it more and more sending it back he finally got to the thirty two palms as Neji was amazed by his great strength against the dummy he was not keeping it leveled like Neji but he was knocking it up high and high then him bieng tough to do when hitting a weighted object with oinly two fingers
9/10
Now Shinson attacked it with such great speed and strength that Neji was now freaking out by his great ability in learneing the hyugga style, he and never seen such a student with such upper class skill Neji was sweating hard now seeing his abiites as a hyuuga his skill was unmatched so far to him, and he watched the rest of the move knowing he would now complete his first shot at it Shinson had goten to the sixty four and on his last hit at 64 palms Shinson thursted it with full force sending it back and high into the air going over the plains it exploded and rained down with sand as Neji came up to him smiled but had a frown in his mind he told Shinson softly that he passed and walked off angry out of his mind to know that maybe that kid is better then him in every way and that he was only compressed doing it
10/10
((64 strikes of Devination matered ^^))
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Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 1:10 pm
"Sweet! My ears are all yours Naruto!" Art was very impressed by the move. "Good now that we're in the forest I guess we can start here. First I'll teach you the hand signs." Art watched as Naruto slowly demonstrated the hand signs. He saw that it was similiar to a normal Bunshin but a few extra movements. "Alright you got that? By the way what's your name?" Naruto realized that he still didn't know. "Yeah I remember it and my name is Art Akasun." "Cool, now lets learn this jutsu dattebayo!" "Yeah! This will be done in no time!" [Kage Bunshin 3/12]
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Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 5:22 pm
"Okay you know how to make a normal bunshin right?""Yeah, I know," Art said. He couldn't wait to find out how he did that jutsu. A clone that could attack for you? That would be awesome."Alright it's kind of like that but a lot more chakra and you have to be more... precise I guess.""Okay so I make those hand signs and try to make a clone but charge it with about twice as much chakra?""No more than that. The best way to do it would be to charge it with about half of your chakra. Atleast for this one."Art stared at him, "Half of my chakra? Will I need to do that everytime?" "No just this one time. No just this time to make sure you get it down."[Kage Bunshin 4/10]
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Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 6:58 pm
The battle was over and I was victorious. But I didn't feel the need to kill Jedah. After everything that he took away from me...I had a change of heart. Athena gave me a strange look. Her eyes were saying, "What are you waiting for? Kill him!" I couldn't do it...I was nothing like Epsilon.
Avalon helped Jedah to his feet. "Athena, use Heaven's Fang," Avalon said. She was reluctant to heal him, but she did. The technique worked instantly and Jedah came to his senses. "Get off me, you peasent!" said Jedah as he snatched away from Athena's hands. "Well, Avalon," Jedah continued, "I guess we know who's stronger, don't we? I'm sorry I ever doubted you." "No hard feelings, right?" asked Avalon. Jedah nodded. "Ya' know...If you ever get tired of livin' the life of luxury, I got a spot for you in my team. You can join me and Athena! We get dirty and sleep in crappy hotels...but it's real fun!" Avalon suggested."No thanks...See you around?" "Yeah...okay!" They shook hands and went their seperate ways.
Later...
"Avalon! You got a letter!" said Nano. Avalon opened the letter. It was from someone Avalon had never heard of. Aburame Jasuko. "NO WAY!" yelled Avalon. "What's goin' on!?" asked Athena. "This guy...he challenged me to a fight!" "You just finished a fight...are you gonna accept?" "Of course! I never back down!" "Well if you're in a new fight, you need a new technique!" said Rock Lee.
Dynamic Entry 1 of 3
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Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 7:14 pm
Even though I excepted the challenge, I still didn't know if I could win. I never even met the guy! I haven't seen his techniques or his style...I was totally clueless. Not to mention I wasn't exactly in tip-top shape. But I didn't want anyone to know that!
"This is called Dynamic Entry! All you have to do is throw a shuriken and see how the person reacts. If he dodges it, you might have a chance to swoop in and kick 'em right in the face!" Lee explained. "But...there's one small problem," said Avalon. "What is it?" asked Lee. "I don't have any shuriken..." "You're a ninja and you don't have any shuriken? That doesn't make much sense to me!" "Do you maybe have some to spare?" asked Avalon. Rock Lee gave Avalon 20 shuriken. "Now can we get on with the demonstration?" Avalon gave it a try. Rock Lee dodged the shuriken, but Avalon was too slow to react in time. "Faster...just think "I need to go faster" Avalon!" said Lee. He tried again. But this time Rock Lee dodged both the shuriken and the kick. "You weren't supposed to dodge the kick!" Avalon complained. "You have to be prepared for even the fastest and smartest opponents."
Dynamic Entry 2 of 3
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Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 7:27 pm
Dynamic Entry was a pretty easy technique. I just hope that Jasuko falls for it. And even if he was...I had a pretty smart strategy planned. But it's a secret...I can't tell you yet!
"So we're going all the way to the leaf village just to fight some guy? And then what will you do?" asked Athena. "I'll probably learn some techniques and be on my way. And sooner or later, the chunin exams will be here!" "I thought you had a job to do!" "I do, but Drago isn't gonna want to battle a lousy genin, is he?" Avalon replied. "And after this job...I'm retiring from the assassin business and becoming a full time ninja!" "After this job...where will I be?" asked Athena. Avalon had nothing to say, he didn't know either. ".......I don't know. You could become a ninja too!" "Nah...I'll just go home," she said softly. Just to be sure of his Dynamic Entry mastery, he practiced on Rock Lee some more. But this time, Lee wasn't expecting it. "Whoa!" Lee exclaimed when he saw the shuriken fly pass. He turned to Avalon and was kicked square in the face. "Ow.....nice"
Dynamic Entry 3 of 3
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Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 11:00 am
"Okay I'll build up my chakra first." Art sat down and started to build up his chakra. Naruto nodded it was probably the best way to get ready for the jutsu. He leaned against the tree as he waited for Art to build his chakra. Even when he was done it would be awhile untill he mastered the jutsu. WHen Naruto realized this he frowned.Art again, could feel the chakra rushing through him. He spread it through out his body and stood up. He quickly made the hand signs and when he looked over he saw a clone but when he touched it his hand went right through it.[Kage Bunshin 5/12] "What happened? Why is it a normal clone?" He saw that Naruto was giving him a tired look and asked, "What? What went wrong?"Naruto then said, "I thought you said you memorized the handsigns?""I did... what did I do it wrong?" Art was starting to understand what had gone wrong."Yes you did the hand signs for a normal bunshin. Here let me show you again. Naruto did the hand signs a couple of time to get it drilled into Art's memory. "Alright you got it?""Yeah I have it. I'll get it right next time.""Good then keep doing it untill you get it right."[Kage Bunshin 6/12]
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Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 12:01 pm
"Okay but first let me show it to you one more time. Art watched as Naruto made the hand signs and in a poof of smoke two clones werwe next to him. Then Naruto said, "Okay try and fight my clone." Art ran at the clone but it dodged him and elbowed him in the back. Art fell to the floor but he got back up and kicked the clone. The clone then dissappeared in another poof of smoke. Naruto then got rid of the other clone and said, "Now I'll give you a little mroe motivation. If you learn kage bunshin then eventually you will be able to do this too. All of the sudden a hundred clones appeared around Naruto."Woah this jutsu is awesome lets get back to work!"[Kage Bunshin 7/12] Art attempted the jutsu again but nothing happened. "What am I doing wrong?""You're not putting anywhere near enough chakra. I told you for this one put in half of your chakra. After you make your first it will be a lot easier.""Fine, I'll put in more chakra." Art attempted the jutsu again. He still couldn't get it "There must be something I'm doing wrong!"Naruto looked at him and said, "No, this is a jutsu that you will only get with practice."Art sighed and started practicing again but asked, "Isn't there anyway for this to go faster?"Naruto simply looked at him and said, "Nope."[Kage Bunshin 8/12] Art kept practicing for the next hour. Eventually he had to sit down and rest.Naruto said, "Alright I guess we can take a break for a minute."Art couldn't believe that this jutsu was so hard to learn. It was only a clone as far as he knew clones were supposed to be easy. "Are you sure I'm not just slow at this?"Naruto said, "No, this isn't a jutsu most ninja at Genin level get a chance to learn. Untill I found out about it, it was a secret for our village and I was only able to understand the jutsu because I have more stamina than most people."Art thought about this for a moment and then said, "Alright lets keep trying. I know I will get it eventually."Naruto said, "That's the way to think dattebayo!"[Kage Bunshin 9/12] Art got up and started to practice the jutsu. He could feel that he was getting closer to mastering it. Apparently Naruto could too."Good job you've almost got the start of it down. After that you will be able to master the jutsu in no time!"Art smiled and kept practicing. He knew that Naruto was right with both things. He was getting closer to the destination and he would definitely master it in no time at all."Okay wait a minute." Art stopped practicing."Your hand signs are starting to get sloppy. You won't ever get it right if the hand signs aren't right. You clould have already done it correctly but not have known!Art realized that he was right and said, "Alright its just that I'm getting hungry."[Kage Bunshin 10/12] "Oh thats it?" Naruto thought for a moment, "Okay well how's this for motivation when you master the kage bunshin we'll go get some ramen!"Art yelled, "Alright! I'll show you we'll be eating that ramen before you can even say the word!" Art began practicing the jutsu again with perfect hand signs. On his third try a poof of smoke appeared. When the smoke cleared out he had a clone next to him but it was missing an arm.Naruto looked at the clone and said, "Keep going. If you keep this up then you'll have it done within the next ten mintues.Art had a new gleam and his eyes and began practicing it again. More clones with missing limbs appeared but not a single perfect clone had appeared.[Kage Bunshin 11/12] Art was starting to lose hope again. None of the clones were perfect. He decided that this next one would be the last and he would either give up or get it right. He charged it with exactly half of his chakra and did the handsigns. Suddenly a perfect clone was standing next to him."Good job! Now come on lets go eat some ramen.""Wait just let me make sure. Art stared at the clone. He poked it and nothing happened he kept poking it afraid that the next time his hand would go straight through but nothing happened he then ordered it to punch a tree and it did without passing through the tree. "Woohoo! I made a clone that can fight! Alright lets go eat that ramen!"Naruto did his own cheer. He couldn't wait to have some ramen he could just picture the noodles and could taste slurping it into his mouth.[kage bunshin completed ^_^]
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Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 1:51 pm
Komen was jumping about outside as he was excited that he had attained the rank of Genin. "I finally did it. WHOOO!!" he siad as he jumped his way toward the main street. As he was about to turn, Ten Ten was walking to the academy to get some scrolls for her training. "BAM!" Was all that was heard when Komen ran straight into her.
"owww...HEY! what's your problem." Ten Ten Said as she was plowed toward the ground and laid flat on her butt.
"Ahhsorry sorry. Hey why do you have so many of these." Komen asked as he picked up a scroll.
1/8 Tobidougu
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Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 3:28 pm
While they ate ramen Art asked, "Hey how did you make so many clones that one time?""Hmmm?" Naruto said. He was too concentrated on his ramen to remember what he ment."You know, when you were trying to motivate me and you made a hundred clones.""Oh! Yeah it's a technique called tajuu kage bunshin. Why, what do you want to know anout it?""Well I was wondering if maybe you could teach me?"Naruto thought for a moment, "Well... yeah I guess but wait until tommorrow. I'm wiped and still have stuff to do."'Ha, and you think you're wiped,' Art thought on his way home. As soon as he got inside he fell onto his bed and passed out.[Tajuu Kage Bunshin 1/10]
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Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 6:54 pm
The next day Art went to the ramen stand to wait for Naruto, but when he got there he saw that Naruto was already there... eating ramen, of course. "Hey are you ready to learn that jutsu?"Naruto finished his ramen and said, "You bet, come on lets go to the forest again!"Art followed Naruto to the forest. He couldn't wait to be able to make tons of clones at once. When they were a decent way to into the forest Naruto signaled to him to stop. "Okay before I teach you this jutsu I need to see how well you have mastered the kage bunshin. I want you to have a short spar with me for a minute to see if you can do the jutsu. Also don't use those puppets of yours."[Tajuu Kage Bunshin 2/10]
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Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 7:06 pm
Fenrir396 The next day Art went to the ramen stand to wait for Naruto, but when he got there he saw that Naruto was already there... eating ramen, of course. "Hey are you ready to learn that jutsu?"Naruto finished his ramen and said, "You bet, come on lets go to the forest again!"Art followed Naruto to the forest. He couldn't wait to be able to make tons of clones at once. When they were a decent way to into the forest Naruto signaled to him to stop. "Okay before I teach you this jutsu I need to see how well you have mastered the kage bunshin. I want you to have a short spar with me for a minute to see if you can do the jutsu. Also don't use those puppets of yours."[Tajuu Kage Bunshin 2/10] Walks in in the middle of your sparr
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Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 7:16 pm
Art realized that someone had found them, "What do we do Naruto?" Naruto thought for a moment, "I don't feel like getting my hands dirty so why don't you fight him? THe only way you will learn the tajuu kage bunshin is by practicing the normal kage bunshin"Okay Naruto!" Art jumped down to confront the stranger but then realized that he knew him from the academy. His name was Hido Nara. "Hey Hido Naruto has told me that I must fight you so are you ready?" He couldn't wait to see how much Hido had improved since he had met him in the academy.[Tajuu Kage Bunshin 3/10]
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Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 7:19 pm
Fenrir396 Art realized that someone had found them, "What do we do Naruto?" Naruto thought for a moment, "I don't feel like getting my hands dirty so why don't you fight him? THe only way you will learn the tajuu kage bunshin is by practicing the normal kage bunshin "Okay Naruto!" Art jumped down to confront the stranger but then realized that he knew him from the academy. His name was Hido Nara. "Hey Hido Naruto has told me that I must fight you so are you ready?" Hido leans against a nearby treethinking for a moment."Sure why not" He says getting into stance "But dont expect me to hold back". Hido sits there thinking the battle through before it starts and forming a strategy."Im ready when you are"he says getting ready to put his plan into action.
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