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The characters name is Arekio Ninshi.

The moon was bright on that cold, summer night. Ninshi was hidding in the woods near the Village as the young Academy students were having a night session of hide and seek. "As long as the Senseis don't find me," Ninshi thought, "the delicius prize is mine! A cup of hot ramen for staying hidden all night. Hmmm, ramen." Moonlight shone over the young ninja. She had short blone hair with a pair of green coloured eyes under them. He wasn't the tallest but she wasn't small either.

The pair of mimetic pants she was wearing tonight, should help her stay hidden in the bushes. At least that she hoped.

Her thoughts were broken by a sudden movement she saw only a few meters away from her hideout. She quickly pressed herself against the ground and hastly crawled under some bushes.

"I'm hope that wasn't a Sensei, and I hope he didn't see me." Were her thoughts.

Wind was slowly picking up, making this already cold night freezing. Nishi rubbed her fingers together trying to warm herself up. "Ah, ramen! A bowl of that deliciouness is worth a few hours of cold." She thought as the moon slowly danced over the sky in the wait for a new day to arrive.

RP sample:

Fourteen-year-old Kio Shinoda held both hands together in the sign of the boar. Sweat rolled down his cheek as he glared at the block of wood that would do for this morning's training. Try as he might, he could not specifically remember his father's instruction on this jutsu, nor his mother's teaching on which parts of the body is most vulnerable to attack when using Taijutsu.

He had been here two hours ago. The block of wood bore kunai scratch marks and shuriken, most of which were at least a fingernail's length away from the target. Kio redid the sign of the boar, monkey and bird to an attempt the jutsu once again before he heard a small chirp.

"Wha-?" he looked around frantically. Were his friends about to surprise attack him again?

Kio warily took out a kunai. But the movement was too small for a human being- perhaps it was an animal?

Kio approached cautiously. Upon arriving, though, a dead newborn chick lied before him.

It looked nothing like a bird. It was like a hairless reddish-pink rat the size of his thumb. The head was the size of its body. Its beak opened slightly, but its eyes were completely closed, never once opened. The wing arms hung useless at its side.

Kio backed away in disgust and fear. He had never before seen something like this. He wanted to run away and tell his father and mother.

Frantic chirping exploded above him.
Could it be? Its parents were looking for it? He lowered his kunai.
But... it's dead... what can they do?
If he placed it back in the nest, it would stay there until it rotted to a skeleton.
Instead, he approached the lifeless body and picked it up. Kio placed it in a strip of bandage and wrapped it around one, two, three times. Cutting the bandage, he dug a small hole with his foot. Kio gingerly placed the bird into the hole, then covered it up with dirt. He took a nearby smooth stone and placed it on top. Saying a small prayer, he stood up.

"I'm sorry about your child," he shouted up at the trees. Even if he couldn't see the birds, he knew its parents were there.

Then he turned and ran to tell his mother, who, he was sure, was waiting for some udon father was making for them.

Let's do This!

RP example

Nami slipped off her kimono and placed it on the rocks to dry, flipping her black almost blue hair back she glared at the slipppery rocks below the surface of the river. Damn I can balance on a wire 50 feet in the air! How does a few rocks with a bit of water on them topple me?? She shook her head and proceed to pull off her sandles and socks as they were as soaked as her kimono.

((Here we go!))

RP Sample:

Heru walked through the forest, wondering what to do. His tail came out from under his coat. It started to twitch wildly and Heru stopped. "Something is wrong." He said looking around the forest trees. He saw several kunin in a rouge ninja. The ninja had probably been there ever since Orochimaru's days. The skin was cracking off and his hair was gone. His skull was showing and Heru shuddered in disgust. "Just what i needed to see." Heru said sarcastcally. He continued to walk through the forest.

Name: Alannah Kaichiin

Village: Undecided

Alannah Kaichiin walked aimlessly around her village. Her long waist length pink hair flowing behind her as she walked. Her small round face held high as she walked with her usual elgance. She has small full lips, a little button nose, big eyes of a deep green color, and a very pale complexion. She was wearing her usual skin tight black shirt that goes to her waist and has the leaf symbol on its back. Under her shirt is a black fishnet top that goes from her fingers to her collar bone and from her collar bone to her hips. She is also wearing her short black cargo shorts that go from her hips to her thighs and under them her usual skin tight spandex that goes to her thighs as well. Wrapped 2 inchs above her knee is a little pack wrapped around her leg of her kunai's. On her small feet are boots that go to her ankel and add an inch to her height. (tundra boots)

As she walked her hips swaying naturaly and her full bossom slightly bouncing with every step. She yawned her hand at her mouth covoring the yawn. "This is so boreing!" She said to herself in her soft melodic voice. "What I wouldnt give to see any cute boys or someone to talk to, besides these old people." She rolled her eyes and continued to walk forword towrds the training ground.

Thank you! ^^

Mary Sue??

I always get marked down in essays about my tenses... *sighs* It always confusses me.