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Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 2:21 pm
just make them bleed not like cut off a limb XD but anyway I'll edit out those two then
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Posted: Mon May 30, 2011 4:30 pm
The picture is obviously going to exclude the whole bird thing. Mizax Kunizake ---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Character Name: Mizax Kero Kunizake Nicknames: Mii, Miz Title(s): N/A Rank: Genin Village: Sunagakure Physical Description Age: 12 Sex: Male Hair Color: White Natural Eye Color: White Body Type: Average Distinguishing Features: Numerous stitch markings on his body. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Bloodline, Clan, or Demon ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Bloodline: Tendril Bloodline/Clan Stage: N/A Abilities of the Bloodline/Clan:
1. Gain more elements by stealing hearts. 2. Using Tendrils allows the user more ways to attack, and can even fix up wounds with them. 3. Cannot be killed unless all hearts are destroyed. Transplant Info Bloodline/Clan Transplant: (name of the bloodline/clan transplanted; provide link to transplanting post) Transplant Stage: (current stage of transplant; provide link to achievement of current stage) Abilities of Transplant: (Provide basic info on your transplant)
1. 2. 3. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession Shinobi Profession: Assassin Profession Base Benefit: Shadow's Shroud: Assassin's are incredibly adept at moving unseen and unheard, learning to hide themselves from all but the most perceptive of individuals. (Cannot be found by shinobi of equal rank when hiding unless they have a Kekkai Genkai with extrasensory abilities; Shinobi of greater rank without an extrasensory Kekkai Genkai will be aware of the Assassin's presence, but not the exact location of the shinobi; Shinobi of lower rank with an extrasensory Kekkai Genkai will be aware of the presence of the Assassin, but not the exact location)
Stealth Focus: Assassin's are also highly skilled in the use of stealth based jutsu. Any stealth based jutsu is treated as if it were equal to the Assassin's rank in terms of effectiveness. Learning Information: N/A Weakness: Weak-Bodied: Assassin's focus on stealth and quickly ending battles leads to a lack of physical endurance. (When hit with a damaging jutsu of equal or greater rank to the Assassin, the Assassin treats the jutsu as if it were one rank higher in terms of damage done)
Rank Benefits
Genin Shadow's Sight: Assassin's spend so much time in the shadow's that many of them gain the ability to see clearly no matter how dark it is. In addition these Assassin's come to realize just how much the average shinobi relies on sight, and more importantly they realize the advantage of taking away that sense. ( Can see clearly no matter how dark it is, can still be affected by supernatural darkness; gain the Kurayami no Jutsu )
Kurayami no Jutsu (Darkness technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Variable (equal to Assassin's rank up to A) Cost: Variable (costs chakra equal to its rank up to B) Description: This genjutsu can be triggered any time the target's vision is hindered (through the use of a smoke or flash bomb for example). The Genjutsu causes the target to feel as if they have been stricken blind, the other senses are not affected. This effect lasts up to 3 posts or until the target breaks free.
Chuunin (place chosen chuunin rank benefit here)
Jounin (place chosen Jounin rank benefit here) Shinobi Type(s) Speed Shinobi: Like the name says these ninja are faster and more agile then normal ninja, allowing them to more easily avoid attacks, and to close distances equally fast. (Move, dodge, and attack speed is one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounin to even track these ninja)
Tactical Ninja: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. Being highly intelligent, learning jutsu comes quite easily to these shinobi, allowing them to acquire a vast array of jutsu for any situation. (-3 posts for learning jutsu, reaction speed is one rank higher) ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra and Jutsu ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra Information Chakra Level: Medium [3/10]
Chakra Point: 31
Chakra Control: N/A
Elemental Affinities: Fuuton Jutsu Information Ninjutsu Universal • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) • • • •
First Element: Fuuton • • • • • Genjutsu Universal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
First Element: Fuuton • • • • • Bloodline/Clan Jutsus Ninjutsu • Earth Grudge Fear [No Rank] • • • •
Genjutsus • • • • • Taijutsu • • • • • ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Type: (what type of animals do you summon, dog, snake, toad, etc.) Summons Known: (don't worry about filling this out just yet) ---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu/Weapon Styles ---------------------------------------------------------------- : Current stage:
Maneuvers
Abilities ---------------------------------------------------------------- Equipment ---------------------------------------------------------------- Weapons Type of Weapon: Name of Weapon: Base Range: Shinobi Tools Kunai: 15 Shuriken: 15 Makibishi: 0 Light bomb: 5 Smoke bomb: 3 Steel wire: 12m Apparel Head-Band Style: Belt Head-Band Location: Waist Head-Band Color: Blue
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Posted: Wed Jun 01, 2011 4:36 pm
Rei Hyuuga
---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ----------------------------------------------------------------
Main Info
Character Name:Rei Hyuuga Nicknames: Rei is too long? Title(s): N/A Rank: Genin Village: Sunagakure
Background Info
Physical Description
Age: 17 Sex: Female Hair Color: Black Natural Eye Color: Pale-white Body Type: Athletic, slim Distinguishing Features: Rei has a long Kanji tatoo running down her spine which says "I stain my hands red to purify the world."
---------------------------------------------------------------- Bloodline, Clan, or Demon ----------------------------------------------------------------
Main Info
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: Hyuuga/Byakugan Bloodline/Clan Stage: 1 Abilities of the Bloodline/Clan:
1. When activated, the Byakugan provides a nearly perfect 360 degree field of vision and can also see over vast distances 2. When activated, the Byakugan allows its possessor to see others Tenketsu, or chakra points 3. The Hyuuga clan has a secret Taijutsu style known as Juken, or Gentle Fist, which allows the practitioner to attack their opponents chakra points directly
Companion Info.
Companion Type: (dogs, bugs, etc...) Companion Name: (name of companion if applicable)
 Bug Evolutions: (Place Aburame Clan bug evolutions below with the effects of the evolution; provide link to the evolution post) 1. (ex: fire resistance- fire jutsus C rank and lower do not affect the bugs) 2. 3. 4.
Transplant Info
Bloodline/Clan Transplant: (name of the bloodline/clan transplanted; provide link to transplanting post) Transplant Stage: (current stage of transplant; provide link to achievement of current stage) Abilities of Transplant: (Provide basic info on your transplant) 1. 2. 3.
---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types ----------------------------------------------------------------
Shinobi Profession
Shinobi Profession: Assassin Profession Base Benefit: Shadow's Shroud Assassin's are incredibly adept at moving unseen and unheard, learning to hide themselves from all but the most perceptive of individuals. (cannot be found by shinobis of equal rank when hiding unless they have a Kekkai Genkai with extrasensory abilities; Shinobis of greater rank without an extrasensory Kekkai Genkai will be aware of the Assassin's presence, but not the exact location of the shinobi; Shinobis of lower rank with an extrasensory Kekkai Genkai will be aware of the presence of the Assassin, but not the exact location)
Stealth Focus Assassin's are also highly skilled in the use of stealth based jutsus. Any stealth based jutsu is treated as if it were equal to the Assassin's rank in terms of effectiveness. (stealth based jutsus treated as equal to the Assassin's rank)
Learning Information: N/A
Weakness: Weak-Bodied Assassin's focus on stealth and quickly ending battles leads to a lack of physical endurance. (When hit with a damaging jutsu of equal or greater rank to the Assassin, the Assassin treats the jutsu as if it were one rank higher in terms of damage done)
Rank Benefits
Genin Poisoner: Poison is often times associated with Assassins because of their effective and deadly use of this dreaded weapon. (The Assassin gains the ability to safely use poisons and can also create their own custom poisons, 2 at Genin, 3 at Chuunin, and 4 at Jounin)
Chuunin (place chosen chuunin rank benefit here)
Jounin (place chosen Jounin rank benefit here)
Shinobi Type(s)
Tactical Ninja: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. Being highly intelligent, learning jutsu comes quite easily to these shinobi, allowing them to acquire a vast array of jutsus for any situation. (-3 posts for learning jutsu, reaction speed is one rank higher)
Long Rang: This ninja is best at long range jutsu and weaker in the close combat type of fighting and jutsu. Because these shinobi focus so much on keeping distance between themselves and their opponent, they do not train there bodies to be as tough as most shinobi. (Jutsu are +1 rank stronger when used at long range, but they are more vulnerable to attack, treating any attack as if it were 1 rank higher in terms of damage done if they are hit)
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Chakra Information
Chakra Level: Medium +3/10
Chakra Point: 31
Chakra Control: -2 for all jutsus (bloodline)
Elemental Affinities: Fuuton
Jutsu Information
Ninjutsu
Universal • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) • • • •
First Element: Fuuton • • • • •
Genjutsu
Universal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
First Element: Fuuton • • • • •
Bloodline/Clan Jutsus
Ninjutsu • • • • •
Genjutsus • • • • •
Taijutsu • • • • •
---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ----------------------------------------------------------------
Summoning Type: (what type of animals do you summon, dog, snake, toad, etc.)
Summons Known: (don't worry about filling this out just yet)
---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu/Weapon Styles ----------------------------------------------------------------
: (brief description of the style) current stage:(current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
Maneuvers
Abilities
---------------------------------------------------------------- Equipment ----------------------------------------------------------------
Weapons
Type of Weapon: Yumi (Japanese Longbow) Name of Weapon: N/A Base Range: 200 yards (that's what I found on the internets, but I could be wrong)
Shinobi Tools
Kunai: Senbon: 20 Makibishi: 20 light bomb: 2 smoke bomb: 3 steel wire: 20 yds
Apparel
Head-Band Style: Standard Head-Band Location: Left Thigh Head-Band Color: Black Flak-Jacket style: N/A Flak-Jacket color:
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Posted: Wed Jun 01, 2011 9:31 pm
Gregar828 @Kano: Rank benefits are added when the appropriate rank is achieved. You ARE aware that, unless trained in a two-handed weapon style, two nearly five-foot katanas would be impossible to wield simultaneously, right? That, and as a puppet user, you would almost never use them. @Oxy: You start out with one element. Please include your primary element in your genjutsu section. No weapons? Its not required to have them, I'm just mentioning that there are none there in case it was missed. [ Edited ] and oh sorry I was unaware about the Katanas, i just deleted them and as for the rank benefits i thought I was supposed to just list them my bad, but I took it off.
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2011 8:37 pm
@Oxy: 75 feet of steel wire is too much for a Genin. @Unrelinquished: Ignoring that scrapping a character is highly frowned upon, a new character cannot be made in the same village as the character that was scrapped. @Lance: Excellent.  @Kano: As a genin, you DO have your genin rank benefit. @Everyone: Repost your profiles when finished, do not simply say "edited".
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Posted: Thu Jun 02, 2011 8:57 pm
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2011 12:22 pm
Caracter Name
---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ----------------------------------------------------------------
Main Info
Character Name:Togame Kishimaru Nicknames: Melody Title(s): --- Rank: Genin Village: Otogakure
Background Info
Physical Description
Age: 13 Sex: Female Hair Color: Silver Natural Eye Color: Red Body Type: Skinny, yet in shape Distinguishing Features: Her left eye has a cross like shape within it that was there when she was born.
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Shinobi Profession
Shinobi Profession: Genjutsu Specialist Profession Base Benefit: Kai Resistant Genjutsu: Opponents of lower rank than the Genjutsu Specialist cannot Kai out of Genjutsus cast by the Genjutsu Specialist. Opponents of equal rank can Kai out of Genjutsu at double the normal cost, Opponents of Higher rank follow the normal rules. Those with Kekkai Genkai that make them resistant to Genjutsu are treated as if they were one rank higher when determining how they are affected by the Genjutsu Specialists Genjutsus. Those with Immunity to Genjutsu (ie Konaga clan) are treated as if they were 3 ranks higher when determining how they are affected, if their effective rank is 2 or more ranks higher then they retain immunity. Learning Information: Genjutsu Specialists recieve a -1 post learning bonus when learning Genjutsus, but receive a + 1 post penalty for learning ninjutsu and a +2 post penalty for learning taijutsu/weapon techniques and styles. Weakness: 1) Fewer Taijutsu/Weapon Styles: [needs a description] (The Genjutsu Specialist can learn only 2 taijutsu/weapon styles, and can only learn up to 1 rank below them of their secondary style, their primary style can be mastered)
Rank Benefits
Genin 1) Extra Element: [need description] (The Genjutsu Specialist gains access to another element, but they can only learn Genjutsu for this element)
Chuunin ---
Jounin ---
Shinobi Type(s)
Support: Support type ninja are people who use jutsu to help other ninja in attacking, defense and any other type of need a fellow ninja would have. This ninjas is usually well rounded in jutsu knowing a wide range of jutsu from long range, short range and so on. These ninja are faster at learning jutsu and faster at using them too. (Jutsu -2 posts to learn jutsu, can perform jutsus that are below their without hand-seals, jutsus of equal rank can be performed with far fewer hand-seals, allowing the support shinobi to get off a quick jutsu in close quarters, jutsus of higher rank require the normal number of hand-seals.)
Combo User: The combo type is for ninja who use there jutsu in a chain to help deliver a devastating overall effect. Stringing multiple jutsu together, these ninja are dangerous, allowing them to overwhelm their opponents with the sheer number of jutsus they can perform. (Can use 2 jutsu per post, at Jounin can use 3 jutsu per post)
---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra and Jutsu ----------------------------------------------------------------
Chakra Information
Chakra Level: Low
Chakra Point: 25
Chakra Control: n/a
Elemental Affinities: Suiton
Jutsu Information
Ninjutsu
Universal • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) • • • •
First Element: Suiton • • • • •
Genjutsu
Universal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
First Element: Suiton • • • • •
Taijutsu • • • • •
---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ----------------------------------------------------------------
Summoning Type: N/A
Summons Known: N/A
---------------------------------------------------------------- Equipment ----------------------------------------------------------------
Weapons
Type of Weapon: Katana and Fan Name of Weapon: Sliver and Bloom Base Range:Close Range
Shinobi Tools
Kunai: 15 Shuriken: 10 Makibishi: 5 light bomb: 5 smoke bomb: 5 steel wire: 5 feet
Apparel
Head-Band Style: Charm Head-Band Location: Center Chest Head-Band Color: Silver Flak-Jacket style: N/A Flak-Jacket color: N/A
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2011 12:48 pm
You only take one weakness, and one rank benefit per rank.
Rank benefits may only be added when the appropriate rank is achieved.
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2011 1:03 pm
▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀ Scarlet Oni Sosay --------------♥-------------- ▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀
Edited. I hope I changed everything you asked of me.
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2011 5:22 pm
@Sosay: remove the chuunin and Jounin rank benefits, you add them once you actually achieve the rank
@Des: It would appear that I am actually one of the profile acceptance moderators, so since there were no issues beyond your village, I'm going to go ahead and say APPROVED!!! you may start rp-ing in Suna
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Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2011 5:31 pm
▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀ Scarlet Oni Sosay --------------♥-------------- ▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀
Edited again. Okay thanks Lance. Didn't get that at first.
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Posted: Mon Jun 06, 2011 10:25 pm
Mifune Uchiha
---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ----------------------------------------------------------------
Main Info
Character Name:Mifune Uchiha Nicknames: N/A Title(s): N/A Rank: Gennin Village:Konohagakure
Background Pending
Physical Description
Age: 19 Sex: Male Hair Color: Black Natural Eye Color: Green Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: Kanji symbol for fire on his right pectoral.
---------------------------------------------------------------- Bloodline, Clan, or Demon ----------------------------------------------------------------
Main Info
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: Uchiha/ Sharingan Approved Bloodline/Clan Stage: Inactive Abilities of the Bloodline/Clan: 1. See Listing 2. 3.
Companion Info.
Transplant Info
Bloodline/Clan Transplant: Transplant Stage: Abilities of Transplant: 1. 2. 3.
---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types ----------------------------------------------------------------
Shinobi Profession
Shinobi Profession:Weapon Master . Profession Base Benefit: 1) Increased Number of Weapon Styles: Because of their focus and training in the use of weapons, weapon masters are able to practice more weapon styles than others. (see below)
Academy Student: 1 weapon style Genin: 2 weapon styles, 1 Weapon or Taijutsu Style Chuunin: 3 weapon styles, 1 Weapon or Taijutsu Style Jounin: 4 weapon styles, 2 Weapon or Taijutsu Style
In addition Weapon Masters can learn one stage higher than normal for weapon styles(exceptions apply)
2.)Increased Number of Custom Weapons: Weapon Masters are allowed to have 4 custom weapons as opposed to just 3.
Learning Information: Weapon Masters receive a -1 post learning bonus when learning weapon style/techniques, but receive a +1 post penalty for learning taijutsu styles/techniques and a +2 post penalty for learning nin/genjutsus. Weakness: 1) Less Elements: [needs a description] (The weapon master can only have 2 elements, starting with 1 at academy student and acquiring the second at jounin; if the character has a combination release Kekkai genkai they get their two primary elements and their combination element at academy student, but never get another element; demons that give their hosts access to elements can still learn the jutsus for that element, but only up to their current rank, unless they are willing to take it as 1 of their two primary elements)
Rank Benefits
Genin Mighty Rush: [description here] (The weapon master forces chakra into their legs to move at great speeds, able to close the gap between the weapon master and their opponent in mere seconds to put themselves in the perfect position to attack. )
Chuunin
Jounin
Shinobi Type(s)
Speed Shinobi: Like the name says these ninja are faster and more agile then normal ninja, allowing them to more easily avoid attacks, and to close distances equally fast. (Move, dodge, and attack speed is one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounnin to even track these ninja)
Tactical Ninja: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. Being highly intelligent, learning jutsu comes quite easily to these shinobi, allowing them to acquire a vast array of jutsus for any situation. (-3 posts for learning jutsu, reaction speed is one rank higher)
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Chakra Information
Chakra Level: Medium
Chakra Point: 31 Chakra Color: Orange with traces of red Chakra Control: (Bloodline ) -1 chakra point cost on all Fire-type (Katon) jutsu.
Elemental Affinities: Katon.
Jutsu Information
Ninjutsu
Universal • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) • • • •
Katon: • • • • •
Genjutsu
Universal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
Katon: • • • • •
Bloodline/Clan Jutsus
Ninjutsu • • • • •
Genjutsus • • • • •
Taijutsu • • • • •
---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ----------------------------------------------------------------
Summoning Type:
Summons Known: ---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu/Weapon Styles ----------------------------------------------------------------
: current stage:
Maneuvers
Abilities
---------------------------------------------------------------- Equipment ----------------------------------------------------------------
Weapons
Type of Weapon: Fighting Knives X2 Name of Weapon: None Weapon Location: On his hips facing forward. Base Range:Arm stretch plus one [1] foot
Type of Weapon: Black Katana's X2 Name of Weapon: None Weapon Location: Strapped diagonally across his lower back. Base Range:Arm stretch plus one [2] foot
Shinobi Tools
Kunai:10 Shuriken:15 Makibishi:5 light bomb:5 smoke bomb:5 steel wire:50ft
Apparel
Head-Band Style:Standard Head-Band Location:Around his neck Head-Band Color:Black Flak-Jacket style:N/A Flak-Jacket color:N/A
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Posted: Wed Jun 08, 2011 10:51 am
@Sosay: A title is something granted to your shinobi for their famous (or infamous) deeds, and as such, genin are not possessed of titles.
Why would here eyes change in a serious battle?
@Azeiel: Please do not add the bloodline/clan until it has been approved.
150 ft. of steel wire is too much for a genin.
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