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Golden Spider of Kumo

PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 4:30 pm


Edits have been made ^.^
PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 5:09 pm


Akura:

Flail: Approved.

Light: Approved.

Kumo:
You didn't make a single one of the edits I asked for. Number one, I said the water could not be taken from you air. You'll have to have some sort of viable source.

I'm not going to let the ice be utterly unbreakable like that. It's a complete god mod. If you want it even close to that, it'll have to have an extremely short time limit.

This jutsu is firmly DENIED. If you want it, I recommend you recreate it from scratch, and nothing like this version.

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Golden Spider of Kumo

PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 5:14 pm


Yes I did. If the air is already saturated with water, Then why wouldn't you be able to use ALL of the mist/fog to create this?

Umm... If The Ice isn't like that, Then it isn't Hyouton... Just saying...

And how is it supposed to have a time limit? I mean honestly, is the Ice supposed to just melt? Because if it did, Then I'd be able to do such worse things afterwards, and if that were the case, then all they have to do is use jutsu to keep me away and I can't touch them, then the flower melts and I wasted a C Rank's worth of chakra. Granted at later ranks that isn't much, but at Genin that is a crap load.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 5:46 pm


Well.. pardon my interuption, but there is a Suiton jutsu that allows you to draw moisture from the air and turn it into water.. .so if he used that jutsu he could then continue to use this one...

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 5:46 pm


So I just decided to check the bloodline, because I really couldn't believe it would be possible to create unbreakable ice. Turns out, it's not! How about that? Who would have guessed? The rules of the bloodline very clearly state that it is in fact easily broken. In fact, even the second stage ice says nothing about being strong against breakage. Just that fire can't easily melt it.

Which really, probably should have been obvious, considering Haku fought his hardest to keep them from hitting his mirrors with anything but fire jutsu, and when naruto finally smacked it, it shattered like glass. Sure, he was Kyuubi enhanced, but still.

Quote:
Stage 1- Is the Ablity to create and Control Snow/Ice! There are many ways in which one can use these techinques. Yet it is easily broken, and can be melted only by a jutsu of a higher rank.


Now, basically where I'm going with this is, no, you can't have an unbreakable trap in which you can kill people. or just leave them there to die, considering the only apparent weakness is your own death. The jutsu remains denied until the requirements I stated are met.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 5:50 pm


Huh... How the HELL did I misread that so easily? ... Man, that sucks, That means that my Hyouton jutsu suck a**... I mean seriously, I can make freaking icecicles that would just shatter upon contact with EVERYTHING, and not to mention the whole " It spreads accross your opponent on contact " Bit doesn't help, all they have to do is flex and I'm screwed...

Well, Kenji oficially isn't as good as I ever hoped he would be. In fact, He Sucks horribly, because ALL of my jutsu require someone flicking them to break them.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 5:54 pm


Now you're underrating the clan just as badly as you were overrating them. It's ice, not frozen tissue paper. Also not that really thin ice that forms over puddles when it flash freezes, and the water escapes, leaving paper thin ice. It's not some ungodly though stuff, but the jutsu are still insanely powerful. Just like anything else in the guild.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:04 pm


I can punch Four feet of ice and break it... Ice is weak. And Icecicles? I can break those with my pinky. and ONLY my pinky, nothing else. Even ones as big as my head.

Anything less than Five feet of Solid ice would be far too easy to break.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:11 pm


Never, ever, EVER come near me in real life. Don't even let me see pictures of you. I DO NOT WANT to see the kind of bulging muscles on a human being that would be required to smash four feet of ice in a single punch. Anyways, this isn't the place for that discussion.
PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:12 pm


Your Rank: (this question is mostly irrelevant)... but Chuunin.

Name of Jutsu: Bakuyaku Iwa Kabe (Explosive Rock Wall)
Rank of Jutsu: B - (Personal Jutsu for Konaga Shinji)
Range of Jutsu: 15 feet, with a 15 foot wide debris spread
Jutsu's Element: Doton


Description: Charging at the enemy with seemingly reckless abandon, the user flashes the hand seals of the jutsu, announcing it's name before picking up speed. As the user runs, the chakra coming off of the user acts as a sort of plow, ripping up the dirt and rock from the ground in front of him as it builds up into a solid wall of rock in front of the user, about 7 feet high and 5 feet wide, save for a slit of open rock for the user to see through. Though the charge starts in a straight line, the user is still able to turn and maneuver normally, bringing the collected rock wall with him as he moves. (running around in circles does not add indefinitely more rocks to form larger and larger walls... it caps out, after an extended running period, at about 8 feet high and 8 feet wide (excepting the case of absorbed Doton ninjutsu).

As the user charges, more and more debris is dislodged from the ground in bigger and bigger chunks, ripping up the earth and adding it to the wall's sides and front until the user is in range of their intended target. During this stage, any B-rank or lower Doton jutsu used will be absorbed by the encroaching rock wall on contact, adding it's mass and weight to the wall as it moves. At the users will, he forces the chakra forward into the rock wall, shattering the wall, which explodes out against the foe in a 15 foot wide spread of the large rock chunks and debris collected, making an incredibly dangerous attack capable of seriously battering anyone/anything in it's path and crushing the opponent.


Rp Sample

Standing across the training grounds, Shinji had had just enough of hearing the supposed future Ice Sannin of Iwagakure's boasting. "Permafrost the ground my a**... I'll show him how a ninja of the Iwagakure deals with that." Barely even registering the Kenji's inane taunts from across the field, Shinji finally yelled over at him... "ARE YOU READY YET?!!?"

"NO! Wait!...not yet! I'm still freezing the ground... just another couple of minutes!" Looking up, Kenji was likely to begin wetting his pants as Shinji was no longer standing across the field, but barreling towards him with reckless abandon. Flashing hand seals as he went, he watched Kenji panic as he began to try to form an ice shield in time to stop the oncoming attack. By now it was too late however as Shinji had finished his seals and his speed had quickened, rushing as his body leaned forward, leading with his right shoulder. "Doton: Bakuyaku Iwa Kabe!", the ground suddenly erupted in front of Shinji, being torn up like tilled soil as he barreled towards the frantic Genin who was still constructing his ice wall.

Pushing through the earth, the soil continued to be torn up, larger and larger chunks of rock adding to the already amassing structure of stone and debris forming in front of Shinji and growing by the second. Shinji watched in sadistic glee through the narrow slit in the wall as Kenji's look of pure fear only strengthened Shinji's resolve. Within 15 feet now, even the permafrosted earth was torn asunder and added to the rock wall's strength and size before Shinji suddenly screamed, his chakra bursting forth, exploding the enormous wall of rock directly into the crystalline structure, crashing into it like boulders shattering through glass as the hardened rock chunks and frozen earth crashed through the ice shield and pummeled Kenji senseless, bruising and battering his body from nearly all angles.

His sprint suddenly slowing to a jog and then a full stop, Shinji looked at the wake of his newly formed technique and smiled, looking down over Kenji's bruised and bloodied body as he laid battered on the ground, swirls circling in his eyes and stars hovering above his head. "Damn Right!... that's how Iwa Ninja do it. MEDIC!"
 

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Hinote Tosatsu
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:36 pm


Cobra, that was insanely fun to read. You honestly had me at the name, but I did seriously read through it. APPROVED! Also, I'd put it at B, seeing as you still need a ranking for it... >.>
PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:40 pm


DONE and DONE! B-rank it is. Glad you enjoyed.

...now just to sit back and wait for Kumo's reaction. *leans back with a grin*

Cobra_X
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 6:53 am


Hinote Tosatsu
Cobra, that was insanely fun to read. You honestly had me at the name, but I did seriously read through it. APPROVED! Also, I'd put it at B, seeing as you still need a ranking for it... >.>

I realized I never mentioned its temporary Defensive capabilities... should I add that while forming, the Rock wall works as if it were B-ranked wall?... or do you think that's really something that should be assumed?
PostPosted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 8:31 am


It's assumable really. If it absorbs enemy doton attacks, that should be mentioned though. Does it? Cause that would be cool.

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Cobra_X
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 8:38 am


Hinote Tosatsu
It's assumable really. If it absorbs enemy doton attacks, that should be mentioned though. Does it? Cause that would be cool.

I can see no reason why it wouldn't. it's already absorbing all of the displaced earth around it, so it would stand to reason it should. WILL ADD TO JUTSU!

(As a B-rank, I don't think it's unreasonable to do so, since it was originally written as C-rank in my mind.)

...what will be hilarious is when Shinji learns it.

Offensive Ninja + This Jutsu = Iwagakure PAIN TRAIN

...the rock mass around Shinji would literally look like a giant stone train flying towards the enemy. It's gonna be AWESOME!
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