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Lee slowly walked back to the inn and went to his room. This was going to be much harder. How long would this take him? He must try. This was all power, that was the second stage. He took out the ball and concentrated on it. Come on you dambed thing, pop. It did not pop. OKay how about this come on, chackra moving, power! now. pooooooooooooof. Uhhh it only deflated. Oh well, he took out the other ball and started practicing on that . Eventually he got tired and went to bed, this would have to wait untill tommorow. he got in bed and went to bed.


rasengan 11/15

Lee woke up the next morning. It was time to continue training. He got out te rubber ball and started. concentrrate! move chackra. hold it! arhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! this really hurts, i hust hold it! Almost, yes yes. POP!!!! yes i have done it yes!!! Man that took up a bunch of chackra, and energy. I got to get somthing to eat other wise i might faint lets see what do we have here, hello chocolate bar. Come to pappa. Ummmmmm that was good well any way time to master the whole thing.

13/15

"good bye naruto! I'm leaving to go to hidden wind. I want to learn more stuff with my sword, hpefully I can see you agian soon. " said lee as he left the hidden leaf for the docks. From there he would go to hiddebn wind.

" I hope so" replied naruto as he waved to lee.

They had become very good friends over that small period of time. Both had lost it all but had found friends. Rasengan was lees newest and best attack.

rasengan 15/15

((Your Post need to be about 3-5 lines longer..they are too short-Drago))

Ryo was leaping from Tree to Tree in Konohagakure after leaving Gai and Lee and saw Gekkou Hayate standing next to the Ramen shop. Ryo quickly flickered down to him and bowed. Hayate looked at Ryo and smiled.

"So, what do you want kid?" Hayate asked.

"I want you to teach me the Dance of the Crescent Moon" Ryo said flatly.

"Very well, even thought I dno't think a Genin ncould handle it" Hayate said.



Ryo and Hayate flew from tree to tree until they got to an open field which was surrounded by tree's and a rock in the middle.

"Wait a second" Ryo said. "This is the Memorial Stone. What're we doing here?"

"Training" Hayate said.

Gekkou pulled out his sword, as did Ryo, and discovered he and Hayate stood the same way with their weapons, which would make the move much easier.



"Here we go" Hayate said as he started to jog.

He then turned it into a run and ran straight towards Ryo. Ryo watched closely as Hayate split into to and came at him from the sides. Then Ryo looked up and saw Hayate above him, downslashing with the sword. Ryo held his horizontal above him to block the blow.

"Now you try, Ryo" Hayate said as he flipped into a standing position.

"Okay then" Ryo said as he charged.



Ryo went as fast as he could and split himself into 3 clones. 2 infront, 1 above. He himself was in the air, and his clones were surrounding Hayate. Ryo was heading for Hayate when his clones disappeared. Ryo continued his attack, but Hayate waved him off.

"That was good for a first try" Hayate commented. "Just focus more."

"Okay, Hayate-sama" Ryo said formaly.



Ryo got into stance again, but made some hand seals first. He then gripped his sword and ran towards Hayate. He split into 2 bushins, and one above. Th two clones actually attacked this time, sending Hayate into the air, letting the bushins crash and turn into water.

"I got you this time!" Ryo shouted.

Before he could React, Hayate replaced himself with a log and kicked Ryo down to the ground.



Ryo sepd towards the ground, flipped over and landed skidding on a hand and feet, holding his sword up with the other hand. He stood straight up and stared at Hayate as he landed.

"What'd I do wrong?" Ryo asked.

"You didn't put in enough effort with your bushins" Hayate said. "Make them act more real and you need to be more quiet."

"Yes, Hayate" Ryo replied with a slight frown.

"Try again and I'm sure you'll have it" Hayate said as he got ready.



Ryo stood for a minute, regaining his chakra, until he was ready. Ryo lifted his sword and looked at Hayate. Ryo had a plan that would be perfect. Ryo made one-handed hand seals and ran towards Hayate. Ryo split into three bushins again and charged. Hayate jumped again, letting the bushins crash, and then he looked up. Ryo wasn't there. Instead, Ryo flew towards Hayate from the side and spun kicked him in the rib cage. Hayate flew to the ground and Ryo landed.

"Are you okay, Hayate-sama?" Ryo asked.

"Yeah, nice job kid. You did it" Hayate said with a smile.



((your Post need to be longer too...they are okay but they are border line bad..add some more meat to it...-Drago))

As the fire raged threw the building he thought to himself that no one would be in there thinking they must be dead or it is the end of him with no way out of the building soon ashe could hear the other nin coming around the building to use water jutsu but not much progress as the windows that he heard them from now were taken over by burning broken wood he could hear the flames growing larger and there was'nt much time left as he yelled out again to hear who was there "IS ANYONE AROUND!!!!????"

6/21

He now heard one voice sounding like a older women not older than 30 in the firey blaze of danger Neoshin heard her cry and ran to the last door in the hallway in the middle he heard the wood behind him on the roof burning away knowing that he did'nt have much time now and soon enough the cieling would fall and he would be stuck with the lady in a big blaze of death "Where are you??!!!!" Neoshin yelled as the women said she was near the closet Neoshin looked and saw the closet covered in fire seeing her crys and feeling her pain her took out his sword and held in near his face looking at it having one chance to save her

7/21

Neoshin took out his blade and held it in his eyes and looked at the closet on a blaze taking it over his head he swung it down and made a large amount of wind that blew the flames away and the closet to open as the women came out and hugged him quick to get help he put his sword back in his sheef and looked around and then at her speaking very carefully but quickly "Look we have to find a way out but first, is there anyone else in here?" The women said she heard one girl going up her window to the roof thinking she could get away but she heard her fall and then nothing as she thought she was knocked out Neoshin looked out her window seeing it covered in melted wood he decided to risk it

8/21

Now he took out his blade again told the women to stand back as he used the hiten mitsurugi technuiqe to make a blow of wind to hit the wood and blow it away in a blade of wind to cut it as he stepped out the window and looked around he signaled the women to get on his back as she did so he made her grab on tight climbing up the roof now like a monkey but using a kunai to stick to the wall he got up to the roof again bieng up a 4o ft of height he looked around to find the missing girl

9/21

Seeing a body in the flames he looked closer hopeing it was not a dead body seeing he in the middle of the flames she was knocked out and helpless as he saw flames getting closer to her body he quickly ran at them and jumped as high as he could over the flames and got to her and used the konoha leaf gale to make a circle with his leg and body to create a whirlwind to knock the wind away he picked the girl up and looked for a way out but soon saw that the whole roof was now in flames sexcept for his one spot he cleared he knew he was in trouble now "s**t.... this is bad!!!"

10/21

Now that the explanation was over Rock lee sensei and Gai sensei could now teach it to him as they set up neoshin already to go Neoshin was outside seeing them hold a heavy looking target explaining that it was a 200 pound dummy that was heavy enough to keep him ocupied when learning this great technuiqe it would be his target to destroy in the practice if he would do the move correctly they said that the ultimate reverse lotus is nothing like the normal reverse lotus but much diffrent

16/21

Gai and lee Sensei explained that it would have to be done after the reverse lotus or in the air directly to pull off the technuiqe right he had to go over and over through it and strike the target in his chakra areas so quickly that it would literatly break it and smash his oppoent into the ground violently saying that one time Gai sensei did it over 56 times hitting a target as such a high speed Neoshin was quit impressed he thought of what he could do with such a jutsu during the exams he knew he could pull it off and easilty beat every opponent he faced but the risks were quit high for his taste

17/21

Now that the time was all set it was time for the test to see if he could do it only having one shot at it he would only have enough durability to ithstand only one try on such a jutsu as he put his hands across his face and got ready to go for it Lee and Gai signaled him to do it as he started the gate channeling he easily got to the first gate and kept on going getting father to the gaol of the second he could feel his hair and body increase in every attribute as he went into the first gate rocks and dust flew up around him as he could feel his skin start to overheat and change into it's darker color he

18/21

Now neoshin knew he could skip the gates after that to the 5th automatically but he didn't want to go too far so fast so he went to the fourth gate as much as he could uncrossing his arms his eyes turned all white and his skin went all dark as his white hair stood up he looked at them and nearly smiled but his frown was what he had to do at such a intensity he looked at the target as they signaled him to go Lee threw up a bunch of other dummies that were much lower in wieght Neoshin flew up and destroyed them all in a heatbeat going threw them one by one for a warm-up he could feel his body grow even more heavy as Gai sensei threw up the 200 pounder Neoshin was now ready for it

19/21

Now going at a supersonic speed he used his last bit of strength to shout out the 5th gate the cruelty gate as his face and body started to stretch out he speed off into a great amount of speed he few out at the bag and hit it over and over again with quick sude strikes as it started to move left and right around his attacks force Gai and Lee screamed out to go even fasterand make the bag not move at all and break the speed barrier at mack 2 Neoshin was signaled on it and yelled out "Hai!!!" as he was now going at it head on with all his might

20/21

Neoshin now went off at the target head first using all his speed a giagantic burst of wind blasted threw him as he sped off at the target at mack 2 breaking the sound barrier he hit the target and came at it again and again with impressive speed over the limit Lee and Gai could see that he had the speed alomst not being able to see him Neoshin landed on the ground and panted hard falling to his knees getting to the ground in a heatbeat he hit and made a mini crater as the 200 pound bag was shattered into peices and the sand started to fall from the sky Lee and Gai gave Neoshin a thumbs up as he stood up also breathing hard but put one out himself he finally mastered a final lotus technuiqe for himself to use

21/21

Coming at lee now with a barrage of attacks left and right, he clashed with him and made a great impact with Lee attacks as they both struggled to catch one another off guard Neoshin broke from him as he could see Gai sensei coming out of nowhere from under them he moved back as Lee moved in forward Gai sensei kicked him in the chin and made him fall off the tree as he stood now on top of the tree with Neoshin he dropped into the branches that were open as Gai sensei followed he saw him down by him as they stared as each other

6/22

Gai sensei got serious and came at him with as triple kick combo almost like a hurricane kick Neoshin dodged them all ducking one and going backward on the rest of them as Gai fell to his feet he came with a trip as Neoshin flipped back up on his feet and kicked Gai in the face as he fell back on the tree bark Neoshin came with a konoha senpu hitting the bark with a backward roundhouse he smashed it into the bark breaking most of it Gai sensei caught his foot and grabbed it bringing him down to the ground

7/22

He held him in place as Neoshin spun around like a breakdancer and threw him off as he came up fancy like Gai fell out of the tree and outside of it as Neoshin looked around he moved to the right as a punch suddenly came from behind him he grabbed the arm and threw Lee who threw it infront of him as he all fired up by the fight he instantly came back at Neoshin as they clashed attacks agian Neoshin matched Lee move for move seeing him come at him with his sharingan his movements were still too slow seeing many open spots he took one immiedatly

8/22

As a high speed fight came out again Neoshin tripped Lee suddenly with great speed and made him spin many times on the side horizontally as he hit him with knee strike to his side and sent Lee flying to a tree branch away from him gai sensei came again with dropkick as Neoshin dodged it but he broke the branch off and he and Gai fell to the ground landing on their feet hard stareing back at each other with much intensity in their eyes from the hardcore taijutsu bieng used

9/22

Gai sensei then came at Neoshin with extremely fast kicks to take his head off nut Neoshin ducked two and then gai sensei slammed his foot down where Neoshins body was suppose to be as he dissapeared Gai sensei moved to his right side and quickly elbowed the air hitting neoshin in the chin hard suddenly nealy being able to follow him Neoshin hit a another tree and sunk into the bark as Rock Lee came out of the tree near it and jumped off the branch directly and came at him with a dynamic entry Neoshin quickly flipped up and ran up the tree as Lee hit nearly having his body he watched him dissappear into the tree following him

10/22