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 Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 9:24 pm
Devilish. xD.
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He had just passed by a rocky outcrop, and his right foot had loosened a hold of rocks, which clattered - creating a tumbling cascade of noise. Later pausing for what was only a brief moment, to take in the noise that he had heard above the rocks tumbling. He was sure of what he had heard - a person's voice. Peering with squinting eyes over to where the voice had come from, he took a couple steps forward. With a composure that came fluently to him for the ages he had been here, he gave off the impression of someone who got his way, and as he came upon a frightened looking girl - before him, he also had the impression she was as scared of him as someone falling to their deaths. Which is ironic, because everyone here was dead, and there is nothing to fear about being dead.
As his eyes took in the impressionable youth, he stopped in front of her, and stared down through bleak eyes. Letting out a rattling breath, he hauntingly whispered "Welcome!" What else was there to say he thought, but after a moment's grace whispered more sincerely, "Welcome to Hell." Grinning broadly, he revealed a set of perfectly set teeth, a rather pointy set too.
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 7:02 am
Okamimaru is asleep on the couch, way past time to get up. Today was supposed to be his first day at the academy, which started at 9:00AM. Here he is, still sleeping, at 10:35AM. His cat, Koi, sits on his chest licking his face trying to wake him up. Finally, when it works he gets up and feeds him. Realizing the time, he quickens his pace; getting dressed in a hurry, eating, grabing his sword and kunai, and finaly leaving the house. Hopefully, he hasn't missed out on his second chance, the last time he did the same thing.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 6:44 am
@Dark Lune: eek Pass D: Scary...
@Okamimaru: Lol this reminds me of Pokemon o.o XD Anyway it looks ok, it could be better and definitely could be in the past tense, but it's just enough to pass.
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Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2007 8:10 am
((OOC: I only had a few minutes to cook this up before my virus scan needed me to restart, so here it is.))
A feeling of melancholy shrouded the throne room. The fuedal lord, Gin was in a state of dismay. His castle was underseige and it took most of his men to guard the doors. "Lord Gin-sama..., I- I don't really know how to say this, but..., it seems the castle guards have, um- dissappeared...--" the messenger said nervously, already knowing of Gin's reputation for killing the bringers of bad news.
"Dissappeared!? You imbecil! Dispatch the ninja we hired! I'm not paying them to sit around and get fat!" Gin spat at the messenger.
"My lord..., you didn't let me finish. The ninja cell you hired has already been eliminated."
"Ergh... Erg..." The fuedal lord muttered in frustration. His entire body began to shake. "Y-yo-YOU FHOOL!!!" Gin roared at the messenger, before standing up and stabbing the messenger in the chest with his katana. The crimson red blood of the messenger began to create a puddle at the lord's feet. The messenger with his last breth mumbled for god, but Gin wasn't concerned with the powers of divinity. "This is the punishment for failure!" Gin shouted ripping the katana upward, leaving a giant gash in the messenger's body.
"Hmph... When you've been asleep for too long, it seems hard to tell when your awake. There is an undefined line sketched out between reality and a fabricated world which we mold for ourselves. After so much time away, these lines become skewed..." Jinroku said softly. His black robe already soaked with rain and blood. He stood with his head bowed at the center of the castle's main hallway. At his feet lay four men, three of which already dead, While the fourth sat upright against the railing as blood poured out of his abdomin. Jinroku grinned recalling the words of his master. "You will destroy all who oppose us, human, Demon, or otherwise."
Jinroku's eyes remained closed as usual, not wanting to reveal the demonic nature of his blood red eyes. Then without any warning Jinroku spoke. "Jinchuriki ... Your very existance plauges this world ... You must die ... This is the will of The Shinsei Kougi ..." Jinroku explained unsheathing his Akuma Urami sword. "Kuwashii okuyuki, Akuma Urami." he said softly pointing his sword at the heart of the wounded Jinchuriki, when suddenly the blade began to radiate a white glow then grew to a length of seven feet impaling the man killing him instantly. "The last guard fell to easily..." He said walking towards the end of the hallway with his seven foot sword over his shoulder. Jinroku had finally reached the throne room.
The sight of blood awoke the fuedal lord's smile. His heart began to beat more swiftly than it had ever done before. "H-hello s-swordsman... I-id like to make y-you an offer... if you spare me, and join my army, I will give you unimaginable riches! Anything you desire! It will be yours! All you must do is bow down before me!"
Jinroku smiled. "As tempting as that offer is... I'm sure id find much more pleasure in killing you."
Gin frowned "Then I guess it's time for you to die swordsman..." With that, Gin snapped his fingers "Come out! My warrior!"
... ... ... Complete silence covered the room... ... ...
"W-whats going on!? COME OUT!!! COME OUT NOW!!!" The lord shouted, but alas he was only answered by the chirping of crickets. "W-what, what did you do!?" He shouted in dismay.
"Simple... I killed him..." Jinroku said, as he began to walk forward. "Your pain... will be legendary..." He said with confidence.
"Fool! Do you really think it's over!? I still have my sword!" The lord said as he bull-rushed Jinroku with his sword drawn.
"Why do people in power always feel it is neccasary to call their enemies fools? How... annoying." Jinroku said before jumping in the air, landing on the fuedal lord's head and pushing off it causing the lord to land face first into the ground. Jinroku turned his back on Gin... "Look how far you have fallen... Id feel bad if I forced my blade to taste such disgusting blood..."
Jinroku took a step forwar, as if he was about to leave, this made the lord furious, his eyes glowed with murderous intent. "Don't take me lightly! b*****d!" He shouted, swiftly running towards Jinroku with his katana drawn. From the oposite direction you could see Jinroku smiling, but for the grey-haired old man, it was too late. The man swung the kunai down, ripping a giant gash into Jinroku's back, but instead of being embraced by the warm splatter of blood upon his face, the grey-haired man was atonsihed when no blood came out, only a puff of dark grey smoke swallowing him. The Lord was terror-stricken, his body began to shiver, and his bones began to rattle, and large beads of sweat began to form on his panicked fore-head. "It's over Gin-sama..." a voice rang from behind him.
Gin's eyes widened, he knew it was over. Jinroku had won. He saw his world begin to crumble in front of him, He saw Jinroku swing his katana down severing off Gin's right arm. A spray of blood shot out painting Jinroku's white kimono red. Gin fell to his knees instantly and let out a horrendous scream, the suffering must have been tremendous. The world around them went silent, and Gin began to regain his composure and he lifted his head to the skies panting and breating violently. "P-please..." he said pausing for a moment and turning to Jinroku. "S-swordsman-kun... p-please, if you could grant me one-last wish? Would you please spare my life?"
Jinroku smiled. "I will spare you..." He said as he began to walk away once more.
"Fool! I've got you now!" Gin screemed, rushing Jinroku from behind. Unsheathing a small kodachi he had hidden in his robe. "DIE!!!"
Jinroku laughed, as he lifted the katana in the air once more, before striking it down and cutting off Gin's other arm. Gin writhed in pain, screaming out to the sky, as he fell to the floor, with tears and blood running down his face panting and screaming loudly as his body began to convulse.
"RAGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!" The lord screeched. "I-it can't end this way!!!!! I AM SAITO GIN!!!! I AM A FUEDAL LORD!!!! I AM THE ONE WHO IS SUPOSE TO RULE THIS WORLD!!!! I AM INVINCIBLE!!!! THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING!!!! I AM A GOD!!!!" The pathetic disfigured pile of what once may have been called a human lamented his final thoughts. It always seems that the moment before someone dies, is the moment when he is most truthful with himself.
"Gin-sama... Don't you know...?" Jinroku asked.
"W-what? KNOW WHAT!?" the rambling mad-man asked confused.
"Don't you know..., that whenever someone says that..., their death always follows." Jinroku asked stabbing his sword into the knee of Gin. Gin let out a cry. "Hmph.. You follow the mold of the classic cliche villian. Normally the hero is suposed to have some sort of 'I don't wanna go down to his level.' change of heart and let the villan live..." Jinroku said. Which brought a smile to Gin's face. "Don't worry though... I'm not a hero..."
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 10:40 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 8:03 pm
Ok, here i go. My name is Inuzuka Gumize haven't picked a village yet.
Rp sample
Inuzuka Gumize was starring at the ground looking at his fox partner Digame jumping around at some flies trying to eat them. As he stood in a tree thinking about what he should do when he got home, unsuspectedly his partner jumped up and tackled him out of the tree because he saw a bug on his shoulder. Gumize patted his clothes to get the dirt off, fixed his shirt, picked up digame and began walking home. When Digame and Guzime got home they emediatly fell asleep for the next mission they had tomorrow which forced them to leave the village for a few days. Gumize woke up in the middle of the night wondering about a noise he had heard from a distance. He didn't bother to wake up digame because he didn't think that he would need him, so Gumize ran out side and about half way to the village heard another noise. He stopped dead in his tracks becuase he was afraid to see what it was. He finally got the courage to look behind him to see that his house was blown up. Gumize quickly ran to his house to expecting to find his partner dead, but instead he was sitting in a tree frozen with fear. Guzime tried to help him, but it didn't work. They were now homless with no knoledge of who did this. They have spent the last year and a half to find out who did it, but with no luck. So the ninja and his faithful fox spent another year during and around missions,
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 9:49 am
O: If you are an Inuzuka only Konoha and SUna are open for you.
Umm.. about your thing, the last sentence is sort of not completed and all.
But this is like a background, not an RP post... in an RP you usually are in the same place doing something, so try to make another post where you're doing one action in one place ne?
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 6:42 pm
ok i can do that but i think i might change my name a bit though. It will be Kuupo Rique. That ok?
Rp sample 2
Kuupo Rique was sitting up in a tree watching the clouds go by the sun. As he got up his leg started to twinge a little bit. He looked down to see his mission walking around in circles around the fire as if mesmerized. Kuupo jumped down from the tree to see what was wrong.
"Why do i have to play with this kid? How is it a mission!?" he thought.
The kid then began crying because unknowing he said it out loud. Kuupo tried stopping the kid from crying but with no pravail. The kid began to laugh when he saw kuupo trip and fall over a rock. "Worst mission ever," he quietly said so the kid could not here him.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 5:50 am
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 8:58 pm
Beware the soul catcher, who comes in a flash a light;
Trust Not a word, Meet not her eye.
RP Sample:
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Kinaku walked the deserted, dirt road along the forest wall. Wind blew hair towards the forest, as if it was calling her to it. She stopped once she heard a high pitched voice calling her name. She clenched her hears, kneeling to the ground as the ringing in her ears started because of that calling. With her hands clenched to her ears, she looked up at the forest wall, wondering where the hell that dreadful voice came from.
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Sorry for the shortness, I'm a bit tired.
sweatdrop
Least she catch your soul, right before your eyes.
Trapping it forever and all eternity, in her little black box.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 9:36 pm
Don't worry about it, that passed ^^
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 9:44 pm
Roleplay Sample:
(I'm not sure if I was suppose to do anything else before this... XD)
Kyo ran quickly through the forest, jumping from tree branch to tree branch. He was sweating heavily and his heart was pounding more than ever. All of a sudden a kunai went flying right towards him. Kyo quickly parried it with his own and jumped down from the branch. 'Damn, there was one infront of me two? It seems i gotta fight now!' Kyo closed his eyes and took a deep breath. He then opened them quickly and found another kunai flying right towards him. He parried it again and realized where it came from. He threw his Kunai back in the position from where the other was thrown and it hit one of the men who was chasing him. The man 'poofed' and disappeared. Then the one he was running from originally pounced from behind. "You gotta be faster than that!" Kyo yelled spinning around and kicking the man in the face. This man also 'poofed'. "I did it!" Kyo said with an exhausted tone then dropping to his knees. Thats when his sensai appeared from the bushes clapping. "You took out all fifty, I'm proud" his sensai said with a smile. Kyo laid back on the ground and sighed, "Whatever...". He then closed his eyes with a smirk on his face. "Next time, could ya give me more than one kunai at the start?"
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 10:49 pm
Dylan crept silently through the tall grass. Small brambles lodged themselves into his body. He ignored the small pains and trekked forward. He could see his target in plain view, but it was too early to strike.He crawled a bit further, the humidity was killing him, coupled with the wetness of the grass, it made him nearly nauseated.
He spent about an hour carefully moving towards the target, until it was the time to strike. He raised himself and quickly put a kunai to the neck of the target, until, without warning, the target vanished. Dylans momentum jerked him forward and he nearly tripped. Dylan suddenly felt a blade up to his neck. "Dylan... you really take too long..." Said his teacher as he lowered the kunai. "Until you are ready to try again.... Vegetable picking duties for three weeks! No breaks, until you learn your lesson!" Dylan retaliated, "How does that help???" "Don't question my ways..." yelled his sensei, before running away.
(Sorry about the crawling thing.... I was watching a metal gear trailer as I was typing, heh...)
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 11:39 pm
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 12:31 am
After hearing his name called for the next round of the graduation battle, Shennong steps into the arena. He did not want to do this, he knew his opponent, Fuxi, too well. Shennong had eat with Fuxi, he had trained with him, he had called him friend. Now, due to the traditions of the academy, Shennong must deny his friend his third graduation.
Why couldn't the academy allow us all to graduate?, Shennong thought to himself. Why do they have to have the 'two students enter, one exits a graduate'? Why?
"My friend," Shennong said adjusting his right glove which never seemed to fit correctly after he had broken his hand, "I hope that you know that I harbor no ill will towards you. I am sorry that I have to do this and send you through the academy a forth time. This could not have been a worst match up. I know everything that you do and more. I just wish that there was some way for us both to graduate."
Fuxi opened his mouth to retort, but as he did, the signal bell rang. With out a second thought, Shennong charged, burying his fist in his friends rib cage. The unquestionable sound of cracking ribs filled his ears. Maybe I hit him too hard., Shennong thought as he felt the sharp pain of a kunai dig into his back.
At this point, Shennong's eye sight goes white. He enters a state of nothingness. When he emerges he finds himself hovering over the mangled body of his friend and covered in his blood.
"What have I done? WHAT HAVE I DOOOOONE!?!?!?!" He screams. Shennong had inadvertently activated his bloodline limit. He had become a monster with complete disregard for the life of his companion.
Good new and bad news had come from this incident. Shennong was promoted straight to Jonin for his display of pure power, but the cost was the Fuxi will not be attending his forth year at the academy.
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