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 Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2013 5:53 pm
Winterwolf78
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Ice Crystal Breath
Rank: C
Type: Bloodline
Element: Hyouton
Description: James breathes a ball of wind rapidly at his opponent roughly 3 feet in diameter, the ball travels quickly and strikes with the impact of a strong man's punch. this ball however is only a distraction, as inside and traveling outside the diameter of the ball by another 3 feet are tiny hyouton ice crystals, that can be breathed in by nearby opponents. These crystals, once ingested, cause instant irritation of the throat and lungs, and on the next post begin to minutely shred the lining of the ingesting persons airways, this causes extreme pain, nasal bleeding, and constant coughing blood making concentration difficult. The third post without counter or treatment, the effects become extreme, and life threatening as blood fills the lungs. Death occurs normally in 5 post without treatment.
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Shattering Ice Counter
Rank: C for training
Type: Bloodline
Element: Hyouton
Description: James adds and extra 20 chakra to any of his ice structure abilities, upon destruction, the ice creating the structure forms crystals similar to shattered glass, and creates a swirling storm of shattered glass in proportional size to the technique in the direction that the force to break it came from.
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Organ Failure
Rank: A
Type: Eisijutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: Similar to and based on Lung Collapse, this takes the concept to the next level. Emitting a ray of chakra up to 32 feet this chakra is targeted to cease the functioning of a certain specified organ if the opponent is struck.
The Heart- 1 post- The targets heart is momentarily stopped, causing extreme chest pain and panic as the body ceases to circulate blood and lose conscientiousness
The Liver- 4 post- Targets liver shuts down, and suffers minute pain in the area. The second post nausea begins and discomfort. The third post causes pain and small hallucinations and the fourth post creates heavy hallucinations as the blood fails to be properly filtered.
Bladder-1 post- Causes the bladder to spasm and empty
Bowels-1 post- causes the valves and spincters of the intestinal system to open, triggering instant and violent defecation
Breath: Change to B rank. Death Occurs at 15 posts, but unconsciousness at 7 (requiring medic to revive) These numbers are reduced by one each additional post the victim breaths in the crystal. If out of combat, they receive an additional 3 posts to survive. Shattering: due to it being proportional in size, it will be proportional in cost. instead of 20 chakra, it will be half chakra (-1 rank) organ failure: still in debate
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Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2013 6:24 pm
Shattering: due to it being proportional in size, it will be proportional in cost. instead of 20 chakra, it will be half chakra (-1 rank) That's way too expensive, when this is a bloodline technique. Kanki Kyouka no Michi [ Frost Reinforce Method ]
Rank A
The user will surge additional chakra into one of their techniques- during or after formation-creating an interlaced coating on its frame, and throughout key structure points. By applying this coat, most techniques that would typically melt, shatter, or pierce the user's ice, are found worthless.
( Rather than costing [80] chakra to perform, each modified technique costs an additional [20] chakra. )What that reads to me is I can pay 20 chakra to increase the technique a rank in strength. So why would it cost so much to redirect the ice. Manipulation is free, and reinforcement is 20 chakra, and the technique is really just manipulation but it felt right to make it a technique.
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Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2013 8:56 pm
Character: Ken "Knives" Ookita
Technique Name: Shanky Shanky Stabby Stabby
Rank: C
Type: Bukijutsu
Element:
Description: UThis technique is designed to go for a specific location on the opponent and render them incapable of battle, the attack is meant to go after the legs and stab the opponent 36... 37 times as well as hamstringing their opponent. What this means is that by cutting the hamstring of the opponent they are no longer able to flex their ankles effectively removing them from combat. While awkward for other parts of the body, with additional training it can be done, but either attack must be used one handed.
Character: Ken "Knives" Ookita
Technique Name: Cannon Projectile
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Being from the village of the Sand, Knives has had to develop a means of somehow taking his opponents out from a distance. By forming together earth and depending upon the amount of chakra put into the shaping of it the cannon can vary in size from pistol in it's smallest form to the size of mortars used in siege warfare. Level also affects distance. This allows for knives to launch projectiles of various size across vast distances.
Limits: Must be loaded and fired in same post, and can not fire living beings and live. (Sorry Raccoon and kitty)
D- 100 yards max
C- 350 yards max
B- 750 yards max
A- 1 miles max
S- 2.5 miles max
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Posted: Mon Apr 29, 2013 10:35 am
Yetisarge
Character: Ken "Knives" Ookita
Technique Name: Shanky Shanky Stabby Stabby
Rank: C
Type: Bukijutsu
Element:
Description: UThis technique is designed to go for a specific location on the opponent and render them incapable of battle, the attack is meant to go after the legs and stab the opponent 36... 37 times as well as cutting the hamstring of the opponent so they are no longer able to flex their ankles effectively. While awkward for other parts of the body, with additional training it can be done, but either attack must be used one handed.
Character: Ken "Knives" Ookita
Technique Name: Cannon Projectile
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Being from the village of the Sand, Knives has had to develop a means of somehow taking his opponents out from a distance. By forming together earth and depending upon the amount of chakra put into the shaping of it the cannon can vary in size from pistol in it's smallest form to the size of mortars used in siege warfare. Level also affects distance. This allows for knives to launch projectiles of various size across vast distances.
Limits: Must be loaded and fired in same post, and can not fire living beings and live. (Sorry Raccoon and kitty)
D- 100 yards max
C- 350 yards max
B- 750 yards max
A- 1 miles max
S- 2.5 miles max
shanky approved Canon: If by maximum you mean almost no accuracy, and very little striking power left even if it does hit, then approved
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Posted: Mon Apr 29, 2013 11:38 am
Yo-ko Canon: If by maximum you mean almost no accuracy, and very little striking power left even if it does hit, then approved And now with additions because it should still have power as it's meant to be designed with the idea of basically a siege cannon. I lowered the range for the S rank and edited the description.
Character: Ken "Knives" Ookita
Technique Name: Cannon Projectile
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Being from the village of the Sand, Knives has had to develop a means of somehow taking his opponents out from a distance. By forming together earth and depending upon the amount of chakra put into the shaping of it the cannon can vary in size from pistol in it's smallest form to the size of mortars used in siege warfare. Level also affects distance. This allows for knives to launch projectiles of various size across vast distances.
The lower ranks work similar to pistols and rifles with it comes to trajectory. They are fired straight and lose power over the longer distances. At max distance they may not hit the target as intended and the striking power will not be as heavy compared to be hit from a closer range.
However, in order to achieve the greater distances needed at higher usage levels the accuracy is dropped off, with the cannon firing upward at an angle the projectile used comes down at an angle to strike the target, the higher ranks are best used for buildings and large targets.
Limits: Must be loaded and fired in same post, and can not fire living beings and live. (Sorry Raccoon and kitty)
D- 100 yards max
C- 350 yards max
B- 750 yards max
A- 1000 yards max, will not be pinpoint accurate
S- 1 mile max, and will not be pinpoint accurate
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Posted: Mon Apr 29, 2013 11:46 am
Yetisarge Yo-ko Canon: If by maximum you mean almost no accuracy, and very little striking power left even if it does hit, then approved And now with additions because it should still have power as it's meant to be designed with the idea of basically a siege cannon. I lowered the range for the S rank and edited the description.
Character: Ken "Knives" Ookita
Technique Name: Cannon Projectile
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: Being from the village of the Sand, Knives has had to develop a means of somehow taking his opponents out from a distance. By forming together earth and depending upon the amount of chakra put into the shaping of it the cannon can vary in size from pistol in it's smallest form to the size of mortars used in siege warfare. Level also affects distance. This allows for knives to launch projectiles of various size across vast distances.
The lower ranks work similar to pistols and rifles with it comes to trajectory. They are fired straight and lose power over the longer distances. At max distance they may not hit the target as intended and the striking power will not be as heavy compared to be hit from a closer range.
However, in order to achieve the greater distances needed at higher usage levels the accuracy is dropped off, with the cannon firing upward at an angle the projectile used comes down at an angle to strike the target, the higher ranks are best used for buildings and large targets.
Limits: Must be loaded and fired in same post, and can not fire living beings and live. (Sorry Raccoon and kitty)
D- 100 yards max
C- 350 yards max
B- 750 yards max
A- 1000 yards max, will not be pinpoint accurate
S- 1 mile max, and will not be pinpoint accurateapproved
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Posted: Wed May 01, 2013 1:00 pm
Winterwolf78
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Shattering Ice Counter
Rank: C for training
Type: Bloodline
Element: Hyouton
Description: James adds and extra 20 chakra to any of his ice structure abilities, upon destruction, the ice creating the structure forms crystals similar to shattered glass, and creates a swirling storm of shattered glass in proportional size to the technique in the direction that the force to break it came from.
-20 for the weakening and forming of the sharp ice shards, and -2 ranks cost for the storm creation (due to proportional size). Those edits, your good to go
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Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 6:06 pm
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Stamina Seal
Rank: A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: maruton
Description: James, as a skilled medical ninja, recognizes that many shinobi are not only limited by there ability to utilize chakra, but also physical stamina. James places a small seal on his hara (solar plexis) of himself and over (20) noncombat post, latent energy from movement and breathing is collected and placed in the seal, after the post, the seal can be activated to completely restore a James stamina pool or the Stamina pool of another person James touches. James can restore stamina equal to his pool with this technique, and those who have less, benefit from an overcharge of Stamina for [5] post, as the excess energy burns away.
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Heavy Water
Rank: A to learn
Type: Eisijutsu
Element: Water
Description: James with his highly trained knowledge of poisons and medicine adds in advanced negative medical chakra to his water ninjutsu, using a method similar to the poison mist technique to generate the toxins and for 1.5 times the cost of the water technique, James can lace the water with poison.
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Mr.Zero
Rank: A
Type: Hyouton
Element: Wind, Water
Description: James unleashes a torrent of unspeakable cold, arching out in a fast and straight line, and lasting for a few seconds. This attack, at it's low temperature is similar to liquid nitrogen, and can freeze even metal to a brittle state with a entire post exposure, those full struck by the ray (the physics term, not a actual laser) suffer terrible frostbite, and possibly deadly hypothermia, a full post of direct uninterrupted impact can freeze a man's torso solid. James can maintain the Mr.Zero for [3] post costing an A rank per post
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Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 6:21 pm
Character: Knives Ookita
Technique Name: Hold this for me
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire and Earth
Description: Knives being a user of earth and fire has devised a way to send flame in small packages meant to be used for assassinations and unexpected explosions. When the container breaks or user make a hand seal is it erupts and releases what is basically liquid gas, kinda like napalm. The only way to put it out is with a Water rank technique higher in rank than the container itself.
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Posted: Sat May 04, 2013 6:46 pm
Winterwolf78
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Stamina Seal
Rank: A
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: maruton
Description: James, as a skilled medical ninja, recognizes that many shinobi are not only limited by there ability to utilize chakra, but also physical stamina. James places a small seal on his hara (solar plexis) of himself and over (20) noncombat post, latent energy from movement and breathing is collected and placed in the seal, after the post, the seal can be activated to completely restore a James stamina pool or the Stamina pool of another person James touches. James can restore stamina equal to his pool with this technique, and those who have less, benefit from an overcharge of Stamina for [5] post, as the excess energy burns away.
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Heavy Water
Rank: A to learn
Type: Eisijutsu
Element: Water
Description: James with his highly trained knowledge of poisons and medicine adds in advanced negative medical chakra to his water ninjutsu, using a method similar to the poison mist technique to generate the toxins and for 1.5 times the cost of the water technique, James can lace the water with poison.
Character: James Cameron Poe
Technique Name: Mr.Zero
Rank: A
Type: Hyouton
Element: Wind, Water
Description: James unleashes a torrent of unspeakable cold, arching out in a fast and straight line, and lasting for a few seconds. This attack, at it's low temperature is similar to liquid nitrogen, and can freeze even metal to a brittle state with a entire post exposure, those full struck by the ray (the physics term, not a actual laser) suffer terrible frostbite, and possibly deadly hypothermia, a full post of direct uninterrupted impact can freeze a man's torso solid. James can maintain the Mr.Zero for [3] post costing an A rank per post
Seal: Approved Heavy Water, approved, but counts as 2 offensive activations the post it is used, even if it is a defensive technique. Mr Zero: instead, by hlding a single hand seal, all the existing ice formed gets significantly colder, so long as the single hand seal is held.
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Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 12:35 pm
Character: Ayame Noriko Hatake
Technique Name: Astrape's Grace
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:Ayame is able to cover her hands in lightning chakra giving them the appearance of large chidori claws. With her increased grip strength, due to her bond with Daichi, she is able to rip and even tear limbs off a person. The claw is chidori stregnth, and the grip to remove limbs condenses the claws into a blade. Thus after removing a limb the claws are gone. The technique lasts 5 posts a usage, and has a cool down of 2 posts after the claws are dissipated for limb removal.
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Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 5:16 pm
XAyame_HatakeX
Character: Ayame Noriko Hatake
Technique Name: Astrape's Grace
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:Ayame is able to cover her hands in lightning chakra giving them the appearance of large chidori claws. With her increased grip strength, due to her bond with Daichi, she is able to rip and even tear limbs off a person. The claw is chidori stregnth, and the grip to remove limbs condenses the claws into a blade. Thus after removing a limb the claws are gone.
the technique lasts 5 posts a usage, and has a cool down of 2 posts after the claws are dissipated for limb removal. Yetisarge
Character: Knives Ookita
Technique Name: Hold this for me
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire and Earth
Description: Knives being a user of earth and fire has devised a way to send flame in small packages meant to be used for assassinations and unexpected explosions. When the container breaks or user make a hand seal is it erupts and releases what is basically liquid gas, kinda like napalm. The only way to put it out is with a Water rank technique higher in rank than the container itself.
the water technique follows the elemental weakness chart, and that a water technique 1 rank lesser, even, or one rank greater defeats the fire. The technqiue requires 1 post to set the vessel up. also, what is the radius of the technqiue?
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Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 5:21 pm
Yo-ko XAyame_HatakeX
Character: Ayame Noriko Hatake
Technique Name: Astrape's Grace
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:Ayame is able to cover her hands in lightning chakra giving them the appearance of large chidori claws. With her increased grip strength, due to her bond with Daichi, she is able to rip and even tear limbs off a person. The claw is chidori stregnth, and the grip to remove limbs condenses the claws into a blade. Thus after removing a limb the claws are gone.
the technique lasts 5 posts a usage, and has a cool down of 2 posts after the claws are dissipated for limb removal. Yetisarge
Character: Knives Ookita
Technique Name: Hold this for me
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire and Earth
Description: Knives being a user of earth and fire has devised a way to send flame in small packages meant to be used for assassinations and unexpected explosions. When the container breaks or user make a hand seal is it erupts and releases what is basically liquid gas, kinda like napalm. The only way to put it out is with a Water rank technique higher in rank than the container itself.
the water technique follows the elemental weakness chart, and that a water technique 1 rank lesser, even, or one rank greater defeats the fire. The technqiue requires 1 post to set the vessel up. also, what is the radius of the technqiue? up to 10 feet for severe burns, 15 for minor burns, heat can be felt though up to 20.
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Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 5:29 pm
Yetisarge Yo-ko XAyame_HatakeX
Character: Ayame Noriko Hatake
Technique Name: Astrape's Grace
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:Ayame is able to cover her hands in lightning chakra giving them the appearance of large chidori claws. With her increased grip strength, due to her bond with Daichi, she is able to rip and even tear limbs off a person. The claw is chidori stregnth, and the grip to remove limbs condenses the claws into a blade. Thus after removing a limb the claws are gone.
the technique lasts 5 posts a usage, and has a cool down of 2 posts after the claws are dissipated for limb removal. Yetisarge
Character: Knives Ookita
Technique Name: Hold this for me
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire and Earth
Description: Knives being a user of earth and fire has devised a way to send flame in small packages meant to be used for assassinations and unexpected explosions. When the container breaks or user make a hand seal is it erupts and releases what is basically liquid gas, kinda like napalm. The only way to put it out is with a Water rank technique higher in rank than the container itself.
the water technique follows the elemental weakness chart, and that a water technique 1 rank lesser, even, or one rank greater defeats the fire. The technqiue requires 1 post to set the vessel up. also, what is the radius of the technqiue? up to 10 feet for severe burns, 15 for minor burns, heat can be felt though up to 20. make all the edits, resubmit, and i shall approve once the final productt is viewed
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Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 5:37 pm
the resubmission!!
Character: Knives Ookita
Technique Name: Hold this for me
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire and Earth
Description: Knives being a user of earth and fire has devised a way to send flame in small packages meant to be used for assassinations and unexpected explosions. When the container breaks or user make a hand seal is it erupts and releases what is basically liquid gas, kinda like napalm.
Limitations:
Following the jutsu weakness, fire can be put out with C or Higher water techniques.
Takes one post to put the vessel up, Or to create if it is going to be thrown.
Enemies within 10 feet suffer severe burns, those within 10-15 suffer minor burns, those in the 15-20 foot radius are able to feel the heat. Worse thing for them is maybe a few hairs on their arms/eyebrows/legs singed off.
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