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 Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 7:43 pm
Yuri succesfully created the rock prison around Naruto but Naruto kept running straight. The prison had weakened the rasengan a bit due to it's rock walls and the chakra draining ability.
YUri smiled saying" Whew that was a clo...." Yuri then felt a powerful force on the wall right infront. Yuri said" Oh my gosh he could actually stay on a straight course and figure out where I was! Yuri said as the wall infront of broke and Yuri flew back.
Yuri said" Nice job you impressed me for once."
13/15
YUri then finsihed talking and looked up only to see that Naruto was too tired to keep fighting.
Yuri walkied forward and lifted Naruto up by the arm and placed him up against up a tree and said" Naruto you were a very good opponent but you messed up when you created all those clones. But.. Could you show me how to use that rasengan technique?"
Naruto nodded and said" It's the least I can do for giving me the best battle I've had in such a long time." Yuri smiled thinking he had great honor and good charcteristic of a shinobi.
14/15
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 7:51 pm
Naruto got and said" i have enough chakra to perform a good model or a weak form of the rasengan. Naruto held out his had while still sitting down on the floor he the ntouched several points on his hand creating different rotations then adding more and more chakra until it formed a rasengan also known as the great spiraling sphere. Yuri watched as Naruto did it and gave it a try himself Yuri then held out his hand and touched several points just as Naruto did and created a rasengan easily. naruto then said" If you're skilled wnough then you can dso it with out touching it." Yuri held out his hand while reabsorbing the previous rasengan. Yuri held out his hand and focused his chakra in circles creating different roations and creating a perfect rasnegan. Naruto smiled as Yuri said" Cool I got it!"
15/15 Rasengan
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 9:00 pm
Mitsuko entered konohagakure with a smile. She marveled at the strangely shaped buildings and the faces of the 4 Hokages carved into the stone face. It was good to visit a warm place once in a while. The only thing wrong with this village was that it was haunted by an infamous pervert named Jiraiya, who also happened to be a S-rank ninja of Konoha.
Mitsuko looked at the bustling metropolitan atmosphere and spooted a Ramen bar that wasn't so crowded. Going over, she some konoha style Ramen first. Someone was sitting there already, so she went over to start a conversation.
swamp of the underworld 1/10
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 9:14 pm
"Hi, I'm Mitsuko of hidden mist, and you are?" asked Mitsuko politely. The man turned his head. He had white hair and a headband with the word oil written on it. Below his eyes, there were painted streaks of red. The old man looked at Mitsuko and his face grew red. "I'm the guy that every girl will die for! I am the genius from konoha and one of the legendary Sanin, I am known as the invincible, handsome, Toad Hermit!!!!!!!!!!"
There was an eerie silence, and a crow cawed in the background. Mitsuko stared at the eccentric old man who probably wasn't taking his medication. To humor him, Mitsuko asked:"If you are such a powerful ninja, would you mind teaching me a konoha technique?"
The man's eyes flashed and he nodded his head.
"Sure I will, on one condition!!!"
Swamp of the underworld 2/10
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 9:29 pm
Mitsuko couldn't believe her ears. He wanted her to train with him in her underwear. Mitsuko stared at him to see whether he was serious or not. Who would just blurt out their pervertedness like that? He must be proud of it or something.
"Well? What is your answer?" asked the old man smugly. Mitsuko clenched her fist as a vein popped out of her forehead. Then, she got an idea all of a sudden. With a smile, she replied:"I think that if you don't teach me like a decent teacher, I will just do my henge no jutsu, transform into your likeness, and walk into the girl's washrooms all over konoha."
swamp of the underworld 3/10
The man's smile disappeared instantly. This girl was blackmailing him. Normally he goes to spy on girls anyways, but his transparent escape techinique always prevented him from being caught. If he actually was caught, then he would never be able to walk around the streets safely anymore.
The old man, who was obviously Jiraiya, clenched his jaw. How could he attract girls with his spectacular good looks, he thought, if he wouldn't be able to show his face? Now a vein started popping out of his forehead.
"Alright!" Jiraiya said, extremely annoyed. I shall teach you for a short period of time, but I have a very busy schedule!" Mitsuko nodded happily, even though she didn't take the old man's powers for granted. She will see for her self how strong this perverted shinobi was.
swamp of the underworld 4/10
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 1:48 pm
((Reverse Lotus trainning))
Neoshin walked around leaf village agian finally returning back from a hard days work he finds Lee sensei around the dojo as he is doing his daily routine of push ups Neoshin walks over to him and smiles at his success when Lee sees him above him he stops at 5010 and gets up off his hands and meets with me as Neoshin asked if he can learn the reverse lotus technuiqe Lee sensei gets kinda nervous but knowing that Neoshin has come so far he says yes and tells me to get ready for more trianning with this move being the last jutsu I can learn from him
1/18
As we both step back Lee gets his weights off with mine coming undone also we don't want to waste any time with struggling in movement so we decide to go al the way and once Neoshin get mine and Lee sensei finishes as well we both get into a gouken stance with our hands out at each other we look into each others eyes and start the trainning as Lee sensei moves to the right Neoshin goes to the left and we cirlce each other in hopes to make this a worthy but safe battle between student and sensei with the frist step now going on to start the battle
2/18
Lee then comes right at Neoshin with a konoha senpuu and Neoshin ducks it as Lee falls to the ground on one arm Neoshin sees it barely and blocks up with his open arm to put up a good defense lee power is still too great for him so he is launched across the ground on the smooth wood slideing into a wall Neoshin gets up slowly with Lee already up he runs back at me and once I look up Lee comes down at me with a punch as Neoshin does a battle roll to escape him he slides across the wood again getting some distance he looks back at Lee with his fist stuck in the wood he easily pulls it out
3/18
Lee stares into Neoshin eyes with no mercy and Neoshin looks into his as he has his sharingan off to not copy Lee for now sesne they have the same moves but once the reverse lotus is shown or even if Lee does it it would be easy for Neoshin to see him with his uchiha eyes giving him better sight and then suddenly in Neoshin train of thought Neoshin runs at Lee and Lee does to when they get to each other Lee throws his leg out at Neoshins face high as Neoshin goes back a bit dodge it in a flash he trys to trip Lee when he does a backflip and waits for him again to come at him
4/18
As Lee waits for Neoshin he stares at Lee's stance noticeing that he is perfectly lined up and no spots open to attack directly as he was taught he goes back at Lee this time straight ahead Lee is confused at his action and gets ready to block him as Neoshin jump at him forwardly Lee gets set to grab him getting in his coutner stance Neoshin sees his opening his plan suddenly came underway as Lee was falling for his strategy this time there would be no way for him to get with Neoshin now acting quickly
5/18
Neoeshin dissapearing in a blur of speed Lee is surpirsed and Neoshin is then behind him using the konoha Leaf Gale to trip Lee from the back of his shin he hits and Lee is hit perfectly as he spins with Neoshin his foot did not only trip him but sent out a invisible wind to take him forward some more in a sprial as Lee hit the ground hard and spun like a breakdancer he hit the wall hard as some wood from the dojo cracked a bit
6/18
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 2:06 pm
Once Lee got up with head and his right leg were a little damage as he could fel the muscle Neoshin hit directly it made a small briuse and soon the bruise would get bigger and larger in size making his muscle swell and make it hard for him to move maybe resulting in a cramp if he pushes too far Lee looked back at Neoshin as he continued to stand in the gouken stance style of Gai and Lee Neoshin looked compeletly serious with no dought we could learn this move and that he had the guts and the strength to endure it
7/18
Lee comes at Neoshin now running at him with his right arm behind his back and his left one out he jumped at Neoshin getting to his head Lee did not even see him flinch yet as he did a backspin and his roundhouse kick came out perfroming the konoha whirlwind Neoshin ducked it easily and used the leaf rising wind Lee did a backflip pulling his head away from his foot to connect he dodged his foot by only 2 inches as he landed infront Neoshin he had to get Neoshin off of his feet and fast with another counter attack that could not fail now that he is on real close combat
8/18
Lee got down to his postion and started doing a series of trips and kicks at his legs Neoshin battle rolled back and then stood up stepping away from each of Lee's trips Neoshin did a backflip in the air and landed away from him complelty looking at Lee not missing him for a second he stood up too to continue Lee was starting to lose the battle he was angry right now but rememebred what Gai sensei told him to stay calm and never panic he got rid of his nasty attitude and got the fight back into his head not worrying about a thing now he smiled as his eye had a quick shine Neoshin could believe Lee was up to somehting
9/18
Lee then got ready to run at Neoshin as he smiled he gave a slight grin as Neoshin noticed his stance Lee was getting ready to use his incredible speed to out do his opponent in taijutsu as he alwasy did he could almost never be caught but Neoshin was just as quick and just as agile not having a problem with it he got into the same stance and Lee kept on sileing knowing that he had a much better advantage and experience trainning and fighting this way then anyone else we then dashed off of our respected spots and went at each other with a strike that would start this crazy clash of speed and diligenece
10/18
Now me and Lee clashed punches in a quick amoutn of speed as we were seen for a second then we dissapeared and suddlenly got to each other as we appeared again clashing knuckles Lee broke from my attack and went to the wall bouncing off as I Neoshin stay where he was getting setup to counter Lee came off the wall and came down with a outward straight kick Neoshin got ready to block it as lee dissapeared again he came behind Neoshin in a flash he made another attack doing a outward spin kick aiming for Neoshin head
11/18
Neoshin could'nt see it coming but he could defintally feel him from the change of wind he ducked it at the last minute as he now dissapeared in a blur of speed him and Lee clashed around the dojo with kicks, punches, elbows to the face and body and knee strikes to the arm or abdomen they appeared now sideways from each other on the ceiling walls holding on to the support beams they both jumped off and leaped at each other once they touched the ground clashing fist and now punching kicking at each with great speed in a furry of a barrage
12/18
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 2:33 pm
They came at each other with much speed and power as they are still stuck in a up-close barrage hitting each other in the face and body they did not even think of stopping just constantly doing damage to each other with much determination and faith to know which one fot them would go down first they stopped with a final punche to each other face they clashed and both of them fell back and then faked each other out as they came in with a kick to there stomatch's they caught each other off gaurd being taught well by Gai sensei to know what each other is and can do before even doing it
13/18
They both fall back on the ground in pain and roll back to there first spots in the fight feeling every bruise and bashing blow on each of there strong bodies they get up and keep on looking at each other with a fire in there eyes they have still used ver little chakra and decide that maybe it's time to get serious and go all the way and just might use that jutsu now to finish this battle as it is already under way they smile at one another in very high hopes that they can fight like this against each other and both be impressed by the other skill without any delay
14/18
Now they both look into each others eyes seeing the fire brun with a eternal lust for power, skill and faith in their taijutsu they both put thier hands infront of each other and power up as they begin to go into the gates there chakra goes wild vuilding up at a great and excellerating rate thier bodies start to be surrounded by chakra as they let there hands up and slam them down both of thier eyes go all white with the third gate being activated instantly the skin on there flesh gets darker and darker in tone with the mucsles starting to grow they now go into the fouth gate the wound gate
15/18
Now the chakra on them both explodes with power as they keep their eyes on each other they power up even more yelling out loud for more confidence and to scare the other one with great force the wood under them in the dojo starts coming up and floating over them as they suddenly burst off the floor in a instant of great agility they clash first in the air and then around the ground and the walls as the battle for more power has begun they keep on going making the sonic booms occur with the dojo shaking greatly by there jutsu's being unleashed into a action-packed conclusion
16/18
Now Lee and Neoshin go up to each other without even being seen somehow they enetered the 5th gate secretly without even saying they did or giving any signs they were compeltly serious and prbly blinded by rage they had no care in the world but only about who was better in the celestrial gates they clashed with a even faster barrage of punches and kicks as thier chakra combine and then make a shpere around them as they battle it out this was true sight to behold in the art of taijustu with Neoshin looking into Lee's mind with his sharingan on he could see that Lee was now going to plan on using the reverse lotus and now was his chance to come back at him and finish it now once and for all
17/18
Noiw Lee has went back and then came back in an instant Noeshin could see it all coming and sidestepped in mid-air still and kneed Lee in the stomtach he stopped as Lee's punch went passed Neoshin's gut Lee went down on his knee as Neoshin made a powerfull strike using the explosion punch on Lee he went back and was about to hit the ground as Lee was about to hit the wood floor Neoshin pulled him back up and Lee could see that he had his bandages attached to him his spine was nearly broken when he pulled him up with great force to his body again Neoshin used the rising palm and hit Lee in the gut doing the reverse lotus perfectly Lee hit the wood floor as it destroyed the whole wood placement inside the dojo
18/18
Neoshin landed on a peice of wood stuck out of the ground as he looked into the middle he saw that all of the wood bent into one spot where Lee hit they both went out of the gates as Neoshin came up to him he put his hand out for him and Lee grabbed it as they smiled at each other with Lee proud of him for what he has down and Neoshin happy that he finally mastered all of Lee's moves now ready to move on and say he is just a great as Lee showing his respect
((Reverse lotus matered^^))
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 2:57 pm
Mitsuko met Jiraiya by a large waterfall. Jiraiya was up in a tree with a pair of binoculars and a notebook. He was red-faced and scribbling something. "Hey! Old man!"yelled Mitsuko since she didn't know his name yet. Jiraiya looked down and sighed, putting down his notebook.
"Oh, it's you. Well, we must as well get started." Jiraiya took a look at the ground beneath his feet and stomped on it while Mitsuko watched intently. "This first technique is called swamp of the underworld, using your chakra, you'll create a large swamp to submerge your opponent and trapping them."
Doing a string of handseals, Jiraiya pointed to the tree and shouted.
"Doton: Yomi Numa!!!"
swamp of the underworld 5/10
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 3:02 pm
The ground unerneath the tree turned immediately into a pile of sludge. Mitsuko watched as the tree sank out of sight in five seconds. Mitsuko felt uncertain. She has never ever done an earth style technique before. However, she wasn't about to give up to this old pervert, so she copied Jiraiya's handseals. "Doton: Yomi Numa!!!"
To her surprise a swamp appeared, a tiny porridge of mud started bubbling from the ground. Mitsuko was so surprised that she lost concentration and the swamp with it. Jiraiya groaned and said something about a waste of time.
swamp of the underworld 6/10
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 3:06 pm
This is so unsexy, thought Jiraiya as Mitsuko kept using her new found ability to manipulate earth. Taking his binoculars, he climbed into the tree and kept spying on the girls playing in the waterfall. Writing in his notebook on ideas about his manuscript, Jiraiya didn't notice a swamp forming at the root of his tree.
Mitsuko concentrated and gave the attack more chakra. If that old b*****d was gonna spread his perverted ways, then she was gonna have to do something about that. The tree started sinking slowly at first, then twice the speed.
swamp of the underworld 7/10
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 3:12 pm
Looking into his binoculars, Jiraiya could no longer see the girls. Then he noticed with horror that the tree was sinking into a chakra-constructed mire. Leaping off, Jiraiya pocketed his notes and asked what was going on.
Acting all innocent and flashing her cutest smile, Mitsuko said she didn't know that he was sitting in the tree. Jiraiya's heart melted and he commented on her improvement, but he knew that it wouldn't be wise to continue his boisterous activities at the present.
"Does anyone else know this technique?" asked Mitsuko out of curiosity. Sensing that it was time to brag, Jiraiya blurted out a half truth.
"I, um taught it to the fourth Hokage, who was my student."
swamp of the underworld 8/10
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 3:16 pm
Mitsuko was genuinely surprised. Not because Jiraiya was the teacher of the fourth, but that she finally found out who was teaching her. "You are....Jiraiya-sama, aren't you?" Jiraiya was pleased that his fame was so widespread.
"Yes, am I that famous, I mean, of course! If you want a date with me, don't hesitate, I'm right here!!!"
Mitsuko rolled her eyes and shuddered at the prospect that her sensei for the present was the biggest super-pervert in the shinobi world.
swamp of the underworld 9/10
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 3:17 pm
yoshi_mitsuko Looking into his binoculars, Jiraiya could no longer see the girls. Then he noticed with horror that the tree was sinking into a chakra-constructed mire. Leaping off, Jiraiya pocketed his notes and asked what was going on. Acting all innocent and flashing her cutest smile, Mitsuko said she didn't know that he was sitting in the tree. Jiraiya's heart melted and he commented on her improvement, but he knew that it wouldn't be wise to continue his boisterous activities at the present. "Does anyone else know this technique?" asked Mitsuko out of curiosity. Sensing that it was time to brag, Jiraiya blurted out a half truth. "I, um taught it to the fourth Hokage, who was my student." swamp of the underworld 8/10 ((I do hope your having Jiraiya lie to ya. mrgreen ))
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 3:21 pm
Knowing that she had better escape his control before it was too late, Mitsuko asked him to turn around for a second. Jiraiya, with all the ideas from his sick mind, immediately took it for something else and turned around. "Be gentle now!" said the pervert as he turned around. Oh, I'll be gentle alright, said Mitsuko as she made a string of handseals.
A large swamp appeared beneath Jiraiya and he sank up to his neck in mud. Mitsuko then ran away back to hidden leaf, leaving the unfortunate sanin stranded and longing.
Jiraiya sighed and knew that it was too good to be true. Getting out, he suddenly got an idea. Taking off his mud-encrusted clothes, he got into the river for a better view of the girls wink
swamp of the underworld 10/10
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